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UndeadZombieMachine
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Dec 30, 07 at 05:15AM
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Here is a little picture-story I created.





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Chapter 75: Guardian Angel


The machines eventually reached the end of the tunnel, where there was a huge wall with many tiny holes in it, and the strong wind was blowing out of the holes on that wall like an air conditioner! At the end of the tunnel, there was also a small ramp to the left. "This way!" said Liquidman, and then he led the machines up the ramp. Eventually, they arrived inside another large chamber with much grassland. In this chamber, there were also many grass-covered hills on the ground. At the end of the chamber, there was also a large, stone gate which was closed, and there was a large cross built on top of the gate. Many pictures were also carved on the gate's surface. There was a large dragon carved near the top of the gate, resembling the statue built on top of Ryuumaru's castle in Heaven. Carved under the dragon statue was a picture of Ryuumaru, which had angel wings attached to his back. Under those two pictures, there were six other beings. Two of them were Dragonaurus and Magmegalosaurus, while the other four were a large sea serpent, a large nine-tailed fox with sharp fangs and claws, a three-headed bird-like creature and a girl who looks exactly like the statue outside of the Wind Temple, which Liquidman had visited before. Under those figures, there were ten other figures carved on various places of the gates below, and they were of each of the Ten Holy Elites. Some purple energy were also constantly flowing along some lines carved near the gate's perimeter. "So this is the dimensional gate which that old man spoke of..." said Liquidman, looking amazed at the huge gate which stood before him. "Well, for a gate which no one's meant to enter in the first place, it's sure well-designed..." said ChaosPiedmon. "Well originally it served a purpose. Otherwise, it wouldn't have been built in the first place" said Liquidman. "Wow, that was so dam' tiring... So we're finally here... before the Gates of Heaven..." said a ChaosGallantmon as he looked at the gate. "So, is everyone ready? Because once we enter Heaven, there shall be no turning back until Heaven meets its utter destruction" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. "Ofcourse we're ready!" said SkullGreymon. "So the main event is just about to start..." said Phantomon. "Guardomon..." said Andromon as he looked into the gate. "Mag..." said Mega-Emperor, as he also looked into the gate. "So since everyone is ready, then we should move on" said ChaosMetalSeadramon, and then all the machines approached the gate. But just as the machines were about to reach the gate, three huge explosions of dust happened before them! As the dusts faded away, the machines all looked and saw that three huge creatures had just dug their way out of the ground! From left to right, they were an enormous emperor scorpion, an equally large green praying mantis and an equally large tarantula! Each of the three Arthropods were also the size of a Steelix, and they were all looking at the machines, with an obvious intention to fight! "Huh? What the hell are these?" said Deathknight as he looked at three Arthropods. "So these are the guardians for this dungeon... Since the dungeon itself was so difficult and tiring compared to the other six, it makes sense to think that the guardians of this dungeon are also much more difficult to defeat... And this seems true... these three beasts look even tougher than that dragon from the Holy Temple or the two beasts from the Earth Temple..." said Liquidman. "However, I'm not alone this time. With the help of the other machines with me, this shouldn't be too difficult at all..." he continued. "These beasts seem a little tougher than the ones we encountered before... Well then, that's not too big a problem. We'll personally deal with them" said ChaosPiedmon as he looked at the emperor scorpion, while ChaosMetalSeadramon looked at the praying mantis, and ChaosBlackWarGreymon stepped forward and looked at the tarantula. Then suddenly, the scorpion lunged at ChaosPiedmon and tried to grab him with his claws, but ChaosPiedmon pulled out two of his swords and used one of them to block each claw! Then the scorpion tried to sting ChaosPiedmon with its highly poisonous tail, but ChaosPiedmon used his psychic powers to make one of his swords float out of his sheath and block the scorpion's attack! Then the scorpion continued pushing its claws and tail against ChaosPiedmon's three swords, as much sparks were flying between them. "Here I go!" said ChaosPiedmon then as he did a 360 spin and floated backwards, while letting his psychic powers control his three swords to occupy the scorpion's claws and stinger, and then he got into a fighting pose while gathering some energy between his hands. "Final Spell!" he continued as he pointed both his hands at the scorpion, unleashing an incredibly huge sonic blast at it, hitting it at point-blank range, cracking its exoskeleton to pieces and sending it flying straight into a wall, cratering it! Much wind also radiated from the scorpion the moment the sonic blast hit it, and after that, the scorpion fell upside down on the ground! "Trump Sword!" said ChaosPiedmon then as he made his three swords float above the scorpion, with their tips pointing downward, and then the three swords dropped down at huge speed and stabbed the scorpion, killing it!

At the same time, the praying mantis suddenly lunged at ChaosMetalSeadramon at huge speed and grabbed him with its claws! Then the mantis tried to crush him with its claws, while trying to eat him with its fangs at the same time, but none of that could penetrate through ChaosMetalSeadramon's incredibly tough metal body! "It's useless!" said ChaosMetalSeadramon as he suddenly started absorbing all the thermal energy within a small area next to the mantis, making the area suddenly becoming extremely cold! This coldness made the mantis freeze solid in ice, and then ChaosMetalSeadramon whipped the mantis hard with his tail, shattering the mantis to many tiny pieces of ice!

Meanwhile, the tarantula tried to slam both of its front legs down hard at ChaosBlackWarGreymon with huge force simultaneously, but ChaosBlackWarGreymon reacted instantly and deflected both legs with the back of his hands. Then the tarantula tried to Body Slam ChaosBlackWarGreymon, while trying to crush his head with its powerful fangs at the same time, but ChaosBlackWarGreymon formed an "x" with his arms, blocking the attack, although it had so much force that the ground below ChaosBlackWarGreymon's feet was cratered! Then the tarantula continued trying to crush ChaosBlackWarGreymon's arms with his fangs as hard as possible, but they could not penetrate through though. Then ChaosBlackWarGreymon suddenly spread his arms out and punched the air, unleashing a huge explosion of dark energy from his body which sent the tarantula flying away, and it crashed back-first into a wall! Then the tarantula started sliding down the wall, but before it could fall back to the ground, ChaosBlackWarGreymon suddenly jumped at it, stabbed it once in the stomach with his left claw, stabbed it again with his right claw, spilling much blood with both stabs, and then he suddenly delivered an extremely powerful kick at the tarantula with unimaginable force, smashing it into the wall it was against with such huge power that the wall exploded and a huge hole was created through it!

Meanwhile, a huge explosion of dust was seen happening near the top of Yggdrasil's surface from outside, and then the giant tarantula was seen falling out of the explosion and towards the ground outside of Yggdrasil, while much blood was spouting out of its body!

Meanwhile, back inside Yggdrasil, ChaosBlackWarGreymon stood as he looked at the direction where he had kicked the tarantula before, and he saw much dust covering the place. When the dust faded away, he and all the other machines saw a huge hole in the wall caused by the tarantula before, and the hole led directly outside of Yggdrasil! The machines looked out the hole, and they saw the clear-blue sky, while they also saw some clouds below the hole, as all the machines were now currently above the clouds, since they were near the top of Yggdrasil. ChaosPiedmon also pulled his three swords out of the scorpion he had defeated before and sheathed them with his psychic powers. "Amazing... these three beasts were certainly much more powerful than the guardians of the six temples I visited before... and yet the Chaos Generals managed to defeat them effortlessly like that?" said Liquidman, looking surprised. "Liquidman, please open the gate" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon as he looked at Liquidman. "Yes" said Liquidman, and then he started approaching the gate with the purple energy flowing around its perimeter, but then suddenly, a large wooden gate appeared just above the gate Liquidman was approaching, and then the wooden gate suddenly opened, and much holy light radiated out of the gate! "Hargh! Wh-What the... What the hell's goin' on?!" said Liquidman as he closed his eyes and guarded his face with his arms, while all the machines closed their eyes as the incredibly bright light shined in their faces! Then, while the machines had their eyes closed, an insanely strong spirit pressure suddenly struck them, bringing many Automatons and other weaker machines down to their knees! "Gahhh! What's with this crazy spirit energy?" said MetalDitto as he and the other machines all still had their eyes closed. Then they suddenly heard Seigi's voice. "I can't believe what I'm seeing... I thought that humans were bad at learning... But it seems you machines are just as bad as they are!" said the voice, and then all the machines opened their eyes and saw Seigi standing inside the wooden gate which had just opened, and the holy light were still coming from behind him! Seigi also had two other angels standing next to him. To his right, there was a male angel with messy black hair, green eyes, wore black clothes, white shoes, had white wings and wore two gauntlets with metal claws attached to them on his arms, while to Seigi's left, there was a female angel with long, pink hair, large blue eyes, wore red clothes, blue shoes and held a double-sided blade. Both angels also had white wings. Some powerful spirit energy was also radiating from Seigi's body, and the spirit energy was so powerful that much dust was raised from the ground, all the grass in the chamber were shaking as if they were being blown by some strong wind, the entire atmosphere was shaking, and some machines were even being pushed back on their feet! "God had already warned you twice, so why are you still coming back?" Seigi continued, and his voice also ecoed a few times within his own atmosphere-shaking spirit energy! "A being... of Heaven..." said Alphamon as he looked at Seigi and the other two angels with him. "You're referring to that Ryuumaru as "God"? How ridiculous..." said ChaosMetalSeadramon. Then ChaosBlackWarGreymon looked at Seigi and said "In nature, the weak submit to the strong. This is why in almost every group, whether they are humans, animals, machines, or even beings of Heaven, there is a leader...", and then he looked at Alphamon. After that, he briefly looked at the other horse-riding machines, before looking at the other two Chaos Generals besides himself. "The ideals, needs and wants of the leader may sometimes clash with those of the weak, but even in such cases, the weak would refuse to fight for their own ideals, needs and wants... simply due to a difference in power. That's the way it is. Whenever there is a clash, things will always go the way the strongest desires. In nature, your ability to have things your way is based on how much power you have. That is a basic law which had existed for as long as life had existed. However, it seems that you beings of Heaven are oblivious to that law. As such, you are expecting everything to go your way. Stopping our tradition of destroying stars every fifteen months... Stopping ChaosLord from reigning as Earth's New God... You do not realize that to achieve such goals... requires an amount of power that is beyond the reach of anything in this universe" he continued. "Wow, that was a nice speech... congratulations! But if I'm not mistaken, God beat up your ChaosLord, the strongest of you lot pretty badly the last time he went to your planet, didn't he?" said Seigi. "You are a fool if you earnestly believe that what ChaosLord had shown in that little fight was his true power" said ChaosPiedmon. "And who are you anyway?" he continued. "None of your business. People need not introduce themselves to a dog" said Seigi. "What did you say, little brat?" said ChaosPiedmon, looking a little annoyed as he raised his right hand, and then a small black sword came out of his sleeve, and then he caught the sword's hilt with his right hand. "Fine. I shall tell you my name, wretched machine. I am Seigi, one of the Ten Holy Elites of Heaven, and... one of Heaven's Four Seraphim" said Seigi. "Hah! This must be a joke! A cute little boy like you is a Holy Elite?! I've lost all of what little respect I had for you beings of Heaven!" said ChaosPiedmon as he threw the black sword he was holding before at Seigi, who moved his body to the side and avoided the sword, which went into the gate which Seigi and the other two angels were in. Then Seigi spread his arms outward, and a huge explosion of white spirit energy radiated from his body, which pushed some of the machines back a bit! After the spirit energy faded away, all the machines looked and saw that Seigi now had some transparent red, purple, blue and green angel wings on his back! The spirit energy that was constantly radiating from Seigi's body was also now considerably stronger than before, and some of the machines could now barely stand under the huge spirit pressure! "I cannot allow the continuing existance of anyone who opposes God!" said Seigi as he and the two angels next to him floated forward with their angel wings, so that they were now out of the gate. After that, the gates behind them closed and dissapeared. "For what purpose are you machines coming here for?" asked Seigi. "Since you see us climbing Yggdrasil and standing before the Gates of Heaven, wouldn't the answer be obvious enough? We are here to annihilate Heaven utterly" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon, and then Seigi gasped as he heard that. "Annihilate Heaven?" he then asked. "That is exactly what ChaosLord asked us to do" said ChaosPiedmon. "If you can get past me, that is" said Seigi. "If I'm not mistaken, you're the one who gathered the six fragments of the Key To Heaven..." he continued as he looked at Liquidman. "Hmph! I see the beings of Heaven notice things quite quickly..." said Liquidman. "In that case, I'll eradicate you first and take the key back! All your efforts will be futile!" said Seigi, and then he pointed his palm at Liquidman's direction and blasted a powerful beam of angelic energy at him! Liquidman widened his eyes and gasped as the beam was just about to hit him, when suddenly, ChaosBlackWarGreymon dissapeared in a cloud of darkness and reappeared in front of Liquidman, and then he grabbed the shield on his back and used it to guard from Seigi's attack, and a huge explosion of angelic light happened upon contact! "Hmph. We are just about to reach the main event of this little mission... But dealing with this brat for any longer would only be delaying the time when we finally enter Heaven... So that we can all move on, I'll take care of him immediately!" said ChaosMetalSeadramon, and then he suddenly blasted a powerful Hyper Beam at Seigi, and the Hyper Beam was thick enough so that it could hit Seigi as well as the two angels next to him in one shot, but the three angels all used Instant Movement and avoided the Hyper Beam, which hit a wall in the chamber, blasting a huge hole through it, and then the Hyper Beam kept going past the wall, extended outside of Yggdrasil and flew across the sky into space! Seigi and the other two angels then reappeared behind the huge crowd of machines. "Everyone, go on ahead" said ChaosMetalSeadramon, as he still had his back turned to Seigi. "I'll deal with this kid!" he continued as he suddenly flew high up in the air, did a 180 spin in the air and landed hard on the ground behind the crowd of machines, cratering the ground with his huge weight, and he was also facing Seigi as he landed. "So you're going to take care of this boy? Too bad... I was thinking of slicing up his sweet little body nice for warmup... If his slim and fragile build would be able to satisfy me..." said ChaosPiedmon, smiling sadistically as he turned his head just enough so his left eye could see ChaosMetalSeadramon, while Seigi looked a little annoyed at ChaosPiedmon. "Don't be ridiculous. If I left it to you, you'd only make us all wait since you take too long playing around with your foes" said ChaosMetalSeadramon. "Not to help him, but to be honest, he's right..." said WaruMonzaemon as he looked at ChaosPiedmon. "Fine, fine, you be sure to take good care of him" said ChaosPiedmon, still smiling sadistically. Then suddenly, GigaSeadramon and MegaSeadramon flew next to ChaosMetalSeadramon. "Hey, while you take care of that Holy Elite, we will deal with the other two!" said MegaSeadramon as he looked at the two angels next to Seigi. "Fine, do as you wish. But if you get in my way, I'll blast them through you!" said ChaosMetalSeadramon. At the same time, all the other machines were still watching Seigi and the other two angels, who were facing ChaosMetalSeadramon and his two right-hand machines, ready for battle. "Quit gawking at me and move it. You're in the way!" said ChaosMetalSeadramon, without even turning back to look at the other machines. "Hm, that's true... Alright, we're going on ahead" said ChaosPiedmon, and then he and the other machines all continued walking towards the stone gate. "Wait!" said Seigi as he looked at the machines walking away, and then he quickly formed a few hand seals. After that, a gigantic sword covered in made of ice appeared in the air behind and above him, and then the sword started descending diagonally from the air towards the machines at huge speed, while spinning like a vertical shuriken! The sword flew straight past ChaosMetalSeadramon, who followed the sword with his eyes without even moving his head at all! Then suddenly, with a quick move, ChaosMetalSeadramon swung his tail and caught the ice sword in the air with his tail, stopping the sword cold in the air! Seigi then gasped as he saw ChaosMetalSeadramon stopping his attack so easily, and he watched stunned at ChaosMetalSeadramon's tail, which was wrapped around the ice sword Seigi summoned before! "I don't like waiting for people and I don't like making them wait" said ChaosMetalSeadramon, and then he squeezed the ice sword hard with his tail, crushing the sword into many tiny pieces of ice, before slamming his tail hard onto the ground, shaking it a bit! "This ends right now!" he continued as he looked Seigi in the eyes.

To be continued


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Dec 31, 07 at 10:05AM
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Just a few notes:

-I edited Part 1 of this story to give a bit more emphasis on why the dragons were hated even on Atlantis, despite the fact that the people of Atlantis had not experienced the dragon invasion of Earth (since Atlantis was created during that time, and living organisms did not exist on Atlantis then, so normally they would not know even about the attack of the dragons). Basically I just mention that travellers from Pokeia influenced the people of Atlantis to hate the dragons.
-I edited the last paragraph of Part 3 a bit, to make a scene with the beginning of the attack of Dragonaurus and Acclaim against the orcs.

The Dragon Master, Part 4: The Orc Massacre

Acclaim looked at the orcs with an angry expression in his face. The orcs, also looking angry, were standing all over their camp, with much smoke in its center after the golden comet crashed there, and three orcish warlords waiting in the back, ready to give their orders. Acclaim looked at the orcish warlords and said "Since the very founding of As'ral you have hounded humans every turn. You have raided my home at every opportunity. You have trampled our fields, slaughtered our livestock. You have brought war to a place of peace, and death to a place of life. You have killed without remorse, and despoiled that which was once beautiful. You have murdered my father and caused endless trouble to me. Now I shall have my revenge on you. Expect no mercy from me, because you have long since lost the right to it. I will crush you into the dust. The attacks on As'ral will stop here and now. When I bring word of your demise the town will cheer my triumphant return". "Stop your silly talk, foul human. You have caused enough trouble. It is time for you to die" said an orcish warlord then. Many orcs started roaring while raising their weapons in the air, and then an orcish warlord said "Slaughter them!" as he pointed his sword at Acclaim and Dragonaurus, and then hundreds of orcs and some goblins started charging at them with their weapons! Some large, muscular trolls with iron hammers and big wooden clubs had also allied with the orcs, and they started moving towards Acclaim to attack him! "How naive... Those orcs do not imagine they are living their last day. Let's slay them all and cleanse this land of their filthy kind!" said Acclaim, as he pointed his sword at the orcs. "Right" said Dragonaurus. "Dragonaurus, let's do the usual" said Acclaim. "Okay" said Dragonaurus then, and then he flew up to the sky, while Acclaim remained down to the ground and watched the orcs charging at him. "Hyper Beam!" said Acclaim then, as he pointed his sword at the orcs, and shot out a large beam of yellow energy, hitting many orcs and destroying them. But the orcs Acclaim hit were very few compared to the total amount of orcs in the area, and many of these orcs ran at Acclaim and tried to slash him with their swords! "Heh!" laughed Acclaim confidently as he saw the orcs getting close, and then he hid under his cape! The orcs then started slashing him, but their attacks were having no effect because of Acclaim's cape, which was protecting him! "Hm. As long as I am under this cape, nothing can harm me!" thought Acclaim, as he was hiding under his cape. But suddenly, some orcs grabbed his cape and started pulling it! "What!" said Acclaim, as the orcs pulled his cape and exposed his body from the front, leaving him exposed to attacks! "Kill him!!" screamed an orcish warlord as he saw that, and then a big, muscular troll swung his huge iron hammer straight at Acclaim's chest, slamming him with enormous force that sent him flying! "Graaaaargh!!" screamed Acclaim in pain as much blood came out of his mouth after the devastating attack, and then he was sent flying for some distance until he fell to the ground and rolled for some time before hitting a tree and stopping! "Acclaim!" said Dragonaurus, as he turned his head and looked at Acclaim worried. "Shi-Shit..." said Acclaim, and then he coughed out some blood as he slowly got up from the ground. "Another attack like that and I'm done for... Those orcs are more cunning than I thought... I underestimated them... I hadn't imagined that they'd actually try to remove my cape..." thought Acclaim, as he looked at the orcs, who were also looking at him. "Wot'cha waitin' for! Gut him!!" said an orcish warlord, and then the orcs roared loudly and started charging at Acclaim wildly. "I guess I'll have to be more careful from now on" thought Acclaim, and then he looked at Dragonaurus. "Dragonaurus, get ready!" said Acclaim as he looked at the dragon, and then he looked at the orcs charging at him. "Alright" said Dragonaurus, who was flying in the air and also watched the charging orcs. The orcs were getting closer and closer to Acclaim, but before they could get too close, Acclaim hid under his cape and said "Now!". Dragonaurus then charged up a gigantic fire ball into his mouth, and then he shot it straight at Acclaim! Acclaim was also surrounded by many orcs who were charging at him, and as the fire ball crashed on him, it exploded in a huge explosion of super hot flames that burnt all orcs around Acclaim to crisps! However, Acclaim himself was not damaged, as he was under his cape! "Waaargh!" screamed many orcs who had been charging at Acclaim, as they caught on fire and started running away and rolling to the ground, trying to put out the fire, while others who were closer to the fire ball's explosion had been burned instantly to ashes! "They're taking advantage of his invincibility!" thought an orcish warlord as he saw that and watched many orcish warriors running around broken. "Great!" said Acclaim, as he went out of his cover and ran at some surviving orcs and trolls, finishing them off with his sword! "Archers! Now!" said an orcish warlord then, as he looked at many orcish archers, who then aimed their bows in position to fire at Acclaim and Dragonaurus! Then they fired a huge barrage of arrows at them, and Acclaim was busy fighting at the moment! "What!" said Acclaim as he noticed the arrows flying at him, and then immediately he hid under his cape. "Now! get him!" said an orcish warlord as he saw that, and then some orcs started running at Acclaim! "No! They're trying to keep both me and Dragonaurus busy with arrows so we can't work together! And they're trying to get close to me to grab my cape again, and I can't fight back since I have to hide under my cape in order to not get hit by these arrows! Those bastards have me pinned down! I never expected something like that from the orcs..." thought Acclaim, as he looked at the orcs charging at him from a very slight opening he kept as he was holding his cape. But just then, he heard a sound of wings flapping, followed by a powerful wind that blew away all the arrows, and then he saw a huge ice beam descending from the sky, freezing many of the orcs and trolls who were charging at him solid! "Gagh!" said some other orcs then, as they stopped charging. "Dragonaurus!" said Acclaim then, as he looked at Dragonaurus while still hiding under his cape. "Sorry, but you can't beat us with such weak tricks" said Dragonaurus, as he looked at the orcish archers, whose arrows he had deflected previously by creating a strong wind by flapping his powerful wings! Then he leaned back his head as he created a huge ball of compressed water in his mouth, which he then blasted at those orcs! The orcish archers ran away as they saw the ball of water flying down at them, and then the ball hit the ground with huge force, cratering it and exploding in an explosion of bullet-like water drops, which flew at bullet speed towards all directions and killed many orcs around! "Acclaim, I'll take care of the archers. You deal with the rest" said Dragonaurus, as he looked at the orcish archers. "Alright!" said Acclaim, as he went out his protection under the Dragon Cape, and started charging at some orcs! "Haaaa!" screamed Acclaim his battle cry, as he started slashing up some orcs, trolls, and goblins with the Dragon Sword, while he was protected from the arrows by Dragonaurus, who was hunting down the orcish archers with Flamethrower, Ice Beam and Thunderbolt attacks! "Orcs, attack! The one who brings me his skull gets a bag of gold!" said an orcish warlord then, and then all of the orcs, goblins and trolls in the camp charged into the battle in an all-out attack! Acclaim found himself surrounded by a huge amount of enemies, who were trying to attack him from every side! "Spin Attack!" said Acclaim then, as he started spinning around with his sword, slaying everyone around him! Even without using his cape as protection, Acclaim still was receiving no damage from the orcish attacks, as he was slaying them with the Dragon Sword before they could even land a hit! Acclaim then started slaughtering a path of blood towards one of the three orcish warlords! "Kill him!!" screamed that orcish warlord as he saw that, as he sent more and more men into the battle, but they just fell dead to single slashed from Acclaim's legendary blade. After slaying a huge amount of orcs, some remaining ones started cowering and running away, and the orcish warlowd was now left on his own! "Get back, cowards!" screamed the orcish warlord as he saw his men running away, and then he turned his head and looked at Acclaim, who was pointing his sword at him. "You bastard... Why are you doing this?!" said the orcish warlord. "Your kind is an abomination. I am here to see that you inflict no more harm on other living beings" said Acclaim, as he looked at the orcish warlord with a serious expression on his face. "The only thing you'll see will be my blades cutting off ya head, humie!!!" screamed the orcish warlord then, as he charged at Acclaim and tried to slash him with two great swords he was holding! But Acclaim swung his own sword horizontally, slicing both swords of the orcish warlord to half, and also inflicting a huge wound on his chest at the same time! "Graaaargh!!" screamed the orcish warlord then as he let go of his broken swords, and much blood spouted out from his wound. "It's over, orc" said Acclaim, as he started approaching the orcish warlord slowly. "You...!!! Die!!" screamed the orcish warlord then, as he grabbed a crossbow from his back and shot two arrows at Acclaim! But Acclaim immediately moves hir right arm, with which he was holding his cape, and protected himself. "It's you who is going to die" said Acclaim, as he kept walking at the orc. "Wraaargh!!!" screamed the orcish warlord then, as he charged at Acclaim to attack him bare-handed, but then Acclaim pointed his sword at him and said "Hyper Beam", and then he blasted a huge Hyper Beam at the orc from a close range! "Graaaaaargh!!!" screamed the orc as he was hit by the beam, and got obliterated into its powerful energy!

Meanwhile, Dragonaurus was fighting against some orcish archers, led by another orcish warlord. "Use fire!" said that warlord, and then the orcish archers under his command started setting their arrows on fire before shooting them at Dragonaurus! "How ridiculous..." said Dragonaurus then as he saw the arrows flying at him, and then he flapped his wings powerfully, blowing all the arrows away! "Those little arrows will never reach me" said Dragonaurus. "Crossbowmen!" said the orcish warlord then, as he looked at some orcish crossbowmen! "Shoot him down!" he continued. Then the orcish crossbowmen started shooting many powerful arrows at Dragonaurus! Dragonaurus then flapped his wings to deflect the attack, but the arrows fired by the crossbows were much more powerful than the arrows which he had been deflecting previously, that had been fired by normal bows. As a result, they were not stopped completely by his wind attack, and Dragonaurus was sliced up a bit by the arrows! "Argh!" said Dragonaurus, as the arrows caused some small scratches on his body, even though he had very hard skin! "That's it! Destroy him!" said the orcish warlord then as he saw that, and then the orcish crossbowmen started shooting a huge barrage of powerful arrows at Dragonaurus. But then Dragonaurus looked at the barrage of arrows angrily and then he took a deep breath before unleashing a gigantic Fire Blast attack! The Fire Blast immediately destroyed all of the arrows and kept going until it hit the ground, causing a huge explosion that caught many orcish archers and crossbowmen in its range! "Aaaargh!!" screamed the orcs as they were getting hurt by the attack of Dragonaurus. "To think that trash like you even have a little hope of defeating me just because they managed to scratch my skin... This is beyond frustrating..." said Dragonaurus, as he looked down at the orcs with a furious look on his face! "Die!" said Dragonaurus then, as he breathed out a huge stream of flames down at the orcs, torching them to ashes! "Aaaaaargh!!" screamed the orcs, as they were getting burned by Dragonaurus's attack! "Die!" said the orcish warlord leading them then, as he grabbed his crossbow and shot a powerful arrow straight at Dragonaurus's face! "An arrow!" thought Dragonaurus as he barely noticed the arrow in the last second, and then he closed his right eye as the arrow hit the right side of his head and scratched against it before it kept going! "Even that didn't work?!!" said the orcish warlord who had fired the arrow then, as he looked surprised at Dragonaurus, who was almost completely unharmed after his attack! "You bastard..." said Dragonaurus, and then he charged a huge ball of electricity in his mouth, and then he shot it at the orcish warlord and killed him in a huge explosion of electricity.

Acclaim and Dragonaurus then kept fighting the remaining orcs, trolls and goblins, and in a matter of minutes they had annihilated most of them. The few remaining orcs started to flee into the forest, and amongst them was the third and last orcish warlord who was leading them! Acclaim and Dragonaurus, who were fighting some orcd at that time, noticed him running away. "The last chieftain... he's escaping! The coward!" said Acclaim. "He could gather survivors from the battle and cause trouble again. We should follw him and finish him off after we're done with the remaining orcs here" said Dragonaurus. "Right" said Acclaim, and then he and Dragonaurus kept killing some few remaining orcs in the area. The entire place was devastated by the battle, mostly by Dragonaurus's powerful attacks, which had frozen large areas solid and set fires everywhere. The few remaining orcs started to flee away in terror, but Acclaim and Dragonaurus disposed of them quickly and mercilessly. After they were done, they started travelling after the orcish warlord who had escaped, leaving behind a destroyed orc camp full of corpses and burning in huge flames.



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Chapter 76: Heaven Invasion


Seigi pointed his right palm at the machines who were walking away from him, and then he shot a ball of lightning out of his palm straight at Liquidman's back, but ChaosMetalSeadramon whipped the ball with his tail, stopping it, and then the electricity sparkled over ChaosMetalSeadramon's body, without harming him though. "Didn't I say I was your opponent?" said ChaosMetalSeadramon as he waved his tail around in the air. "So I'll have to take out this big snake no matter what... This would mean that the other machines would make it to Heaven... But atleast God's already prepared for something like that to happen..." Seigi thought as he watched the machines walking away. "Liquidman, the Key To Heaven" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon as the machines reached the gate. "Yes" Liquidman answered, and then he pulled the Key To Heaven out of his pocket. After that, he put the key into a key hole next to the gate. After that, much purple light radiated from the entire gate, and the purple light engulfed the entire place temporarily! Two rays of purple light also shot out of the holes inside Yggdrasil, one of which was caused by ChaosBlackWarGreymon's kick before, while the other was caused by ChaosMetalSeadramon's Hyper Beam before, and the rays of purple light extended outside of Yggdrasil! After that, the entire place started to shake, as the stone gate started to slide apart by itself! Many Paras and Parasect from the tunnel where the machines walked along before in order to reach this chamber also started running away as the whole place was shaking! Some unbelievably bright golden light were also coming from within the gates as they opened!

Meanwhile, many wild Pokémon living in the forest surrounding Yggdrasil started running away as they felt much shaking radiating from the gigantic tree, and many Pidgey, Spearow and other bird-like Pokémon were flying away.

Meanwhile, the stone gate finally opened completely. "It seems we'd need the Key To Heaven in order to open the gate when we come back out too. So, in case the gates somehow close once we get inside, you should pull the key back out, Liquidman. Otherwise, if the gates close once we are inside and we don't have the key with us, we may be trapped inside Heaven forever" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon as he looked at Liquidman. "Alright" said Liquidman, and then he pulled the key back out of the keyhole. "I think it'll be best if you let me hold onto that" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon, and then Liquidman gave the Key To Heaven to him."Let's get going" said ChaosPiedmon, and then the machines all entered the gate. "Hmhmhmhmhmhmhm... The next time you enter Heaven again, little Holy Elite, you'll see nothing but ruins before you! If there is a next time you'll enter it again, that is..." said ChaosMetalSeadramon as he looked at Seigi arrogantly.

Meanwhile, all the machines went through the dimensional gate, and they found themselves in a chamber which looked almost exactly like the one they were in before! The gate they came out of also looked exactly the same as the gate they entered! "Whew... that was difficult to bear... the spirit pressure radiating from that kid was insanely painful to stand under... I felt like I'd die..." said MetalDitto as he breathed heavily. "Gah... we're finally out of that place..." said Liquidman, who also looked a bit worn out by Seigi's spirit energy from before. "So... this is Heaven?" asked MetalMamemon as he looked around. "It doesn't look like it... It seems we're still inside that tree we were always in!" said an Electabot, looking impatient. Then a Silverduck looked at that Electabot and said "Didn't you remember what Liquidman said? There are three Yggdrasil which exists. One on Earth, one in Heaven, and one in Hell. And the dimensional gates within each Yggdrasil leads from the interior of one tree in one world to another. So basically, we should be inside the Yggdrasil of Heaven right now". "But how can you be sure that this is really Heaven?" asked a Magmabot. "Actually, I'm sure" said ChaosPiedmon. "Hm?" said the Magmabot, as he and all the other machines looked at ChaosPiedmon. "Can't you tell? The entire atmosphere of this place is filled with particles that we've never seen before in the world we came from... They weren't even present in the atmopshere until we entered the gate..." said ChaosPiedmon. "Now that you mention it, you're right..." said D-Fence. "These particles... they give a strange sensation..." said Andromon. "It feels quite good with these particles in the air... They're almost like the dark energy which radiates from our planet, although I'm sure these are different..." said Flareizamon. "So, aren't we meant to start Heaven's destruction right now?" said Alphamon. "Damn, so that means we need to climb all the way down this tree in order to get out? And we need to climb up it again and then go back down the tree we climbed up before when we leave?" said Giganium. "There's no need to do that" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. "We know that this tree is located within Heaven. Therefore, if I can just create an exit out of the tree here, we can get out of here immediately" he continued, and then he started forming a huge sphere of dark red energy between his hands. "Terra Destroyer!" he then shouted as he threw the energy sphere straight into a wall in the chamber, blowing an enormous hole through it!

Meanwhile, three Shinigami were standing on top of the white circular wall which surrounded Ryuumaru's castle. One of the Shinigami had short blonde hair and black eyes, another had short black hair and black eyes and the third was bald and had green eyes. The three Shinigami were standing on the circular wall at the South side of the castle, guarding it, while the black-haired Shinigami was also drinking some saké. Suddenly, the three Shinigami heard a huge explosion, and then they all looked towards the South and saw a huge explosion of dust happening on the surface of Yggdrasil, which was far away in the distance! "Huh? What was that?" asked the blonde-haired Shinigami. "An explosion on Yggdrasil's surface?" said the bald Shinigami. Suddenly, they all saw a huge sphere of dark energy coming out of the dust towards them! "What! A projectile attack? What's going on?" said the blonde Shinigami.

Meanwhile, ChaosBlackWarGreymon had just blasted a gigantic hole which led outside of Yggdrasil. Then he and the other machines looked outside the hole, and they saw the outside of Yggdrasil. It was Heaven! They saw a gigantic forest below them, similar to the one that surrounds the Yggdrasil on Earth. "This way. It leads outside" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon, and then he flew outside the hole he just created before, while the other machines were following him. The machines felt the wind as they were flying, while they were also looking around and saw a beautiful forest below them, while a river of crystal-clear was also flowing through it. The sky above the machines was also clear-blue, although there were some dark clouds in the distance. "So this is Heaven... It looks almost exactly like Earth..." said MetalGreymon as he was flying. "It looks a lot better though... unlike Earth, this place seems a lot less polluted, and there's just a good sensation here due to the particles that flow through the atmosphere..." said Liquidman. "Man, when I was climbing up Yggdrasil, I was expecting that Heaven would be a place completely guarded by the beings of Heaven and it'll be extremely dangerous, but it looks like there's only flora around here..." said a Boltmon as he looked down at the trees. "Such a place... is it even worth destroying?" said Mechanikat. "Hey, it looks like there may be people over there..." said WarGreymon as he pointed at a direction where there was a huge lake, where the flowing river led to, and in the middle of the lake, there was an island, which was also covered by forests, but there seemed to be some treehouses there. "Alright, let's get there!" said MetalEtemon, and then all the machines started diving down fast towards that place.

Meanwhile, the three Shinigami from before were watching as the sphere of dark red energy was heading towards them! "Dammit! We need to stop that thing immediately!" said the black-haired Shinigami as he threw his bottle of saké away. "Let's go!" said the bald Shinigami, and then he jumped up and landed with his left foot on the black-haired Shinigami's right shoulder, while his right foot landed on the blonde Shinigami's left shoulder. Now, the three Shinigami were standing and forming a triangle. "The Holy Tri Shield!" said the three Shinigami together as they all formed some hand seals at the same time, and then much spirit energy radiated from their bodies! While that was happening, a gigantic triangle-shaped shield of blue energy appeared before the three Shinigami, and the sphere of dark red energy crashed straight into the shield, creating an enormous explosion of dark red energy upon contact which imediately blasted the three Shinigami flying away! The three Shinigami fell off the top of the white wall they were standing on before, and they did several backflips in the air before landing on their feet on some grass inside the circular wall. After that, the three Shinigami jumped back to the top of the wall again and looked at Yggdrasil's direction, and they saw a huge hole on its surface! Then they looked to the side and saw the machines diving down somewhere into a forest surrounding Yggdrasil! "Intruders?" said the black-haired Shinigami as he saw that. "They look like... machines..." said the bald Shinigami. "So they've invaded Heaven... damn, this is happening way earlier than I expected..." said the blonde Shinigami. "I'll report this to Lord Ryuumaru immediately!" said the bald Shinigami, and then he dissapeared with Instant Movement.

Meanwhile, the machines landed in the middle of an island within a lake, which was surrounded by a huge, seemingly endless forest. The island was covered in dirt and grass, and there were also many large trees sticking out of the surface of the water surrounding the island. There were many treehouses built on the trees, and some wooden ramps connected between each of the treehouses. Basically, the whole place resembled a village built above a lake. Many children were also running around on the wooden ramps above the lake and playing happily, while some elders were sitting within the treehouses and watching the children. "What is this place?" asked a CyMamenchisaurus. "These guys... are beings of Heaven? I don't know if I should laugh or not..." said Mega-Emperor as he looked around. "Wh-What are these things...?" said a man, looking scared as he was just walking along a wooden ramp and noticed the machines. "Hey, guy over there! You're sure this is Heaven, right?" asked Robosaurus as he looked at the man. "Wh-What are you talking about? Ofcourse this is Heaven! But what are you guys? I've never seen anything like you around here before..." said the man. "We are... machines from Chaos Planet" said WarGreymon. "M-Machines from Chaos Planet? So you're the ones the Shinigami, angels and Holy Creatures dealt with before..." said a woman, looking scared. "What exactly do you mean by "Dealt with"?" asked WaruMonzaemon. "D-Didn't Lord Ryuumaru already warn you guys just a day ago?" asked the man. "Warnings only change people if they are issued from one who is stronger than those who are warned" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. "So these are ChaosLord's machines... where's ChaosLord?" asked the man as he looked around. "ChaosLord has no reason to come here, as we alone are more than enough to bring this world to utter destruction" said Alphamon. "U-Utter destruction?" asked the woman, looking scared. "Just what exactly are you guys up to anyway?" said the man. "Exactly what you think" said ChaosPiedmon. "What?!" said the man. "These guys... they look more like the beings of Earth than they do like beings of Heaven..." Liquidman thought as he looked at the people. Then he looked at the woman who was talking to the machines and said "Hey woman, you mentioned something about Shinigami, angels and Holy Creatures". "Uhh... yes I did..." said the woman as she stepped back. "Are you guys any of those three?" asked Liquidman. "Well, no... we're just normal inhabitants of Heaven..." said the woman. "Normal inhabitants of Heaven... I see, so there's a difference between you guys and the ones who've been attacking us before..." said Liquidman. "Yeah, the ones who Lord Ryuumaru sent to attack you machines were the Shinigami, angels and Holy Creatures! We live in Heaven, but we have nothing to do with them! The Shinigami, angels, Holy Creatures, the Ten Holy Elites and Lord Ryuumaru have authority over us, but we have no say in anything to do with you machines! Now, will you please leave us alone?" said the man. "We certainly have no intentions to stay here forever... But, we would like you to tell us exactly where Ryuumaru and his subordinates are" said ChaosPiedmon. "Wait, you're going to attack, them, aren't-" said the man, but before he could finish, ChaosPiedmon teleported one of his swords right next to the man's throat, and the man gasped as he looked down at the sword! "Hey hey hey, I didn't ask you to answer my question with more questions... I asked you a question so that you'll give an answer to it!" said ChaosPiedmon as he used his psychic powers to push his sword closer towards the man's throat! "F-Fine... Well... th-they're... there..." said the man as he pointed towards the North. "Hm?" said ChaosPiedmon as he and the other machines looked towards the North. "The Shinigami, angels and Holy Creatures reside within a large, indestructible circular white wall at the very North pole of this planet... you'll recognize that place immediately when you get close, as you'll see an extremely large golden dragon statue built on top of a castle at the center of the area surrounded by the white circular wall. That statue can be seen from very far away" said the man. "A golden dragon statue, eh?" said Mega-Emperor as he looked at the North with a big smile on his face. "Is that so... alright then" said ChaosPiedmon with a slight sadistic smile as he used his psychic powers to make his sword slit the man's throat, and then the man fell dead! "Aaaaaahhhh!" the woman screamed as she ran away, while ChaosPiedmon teleported his sword back into his sheath. At the same time, the machines had caught the attention of all the villagers, and the villagers were now all standing on the wooden ramps surrounding the machines and watching them, and some of them gasped and covered their mouths as they saw ChaosPiedmon killing the man before! "So, should we get to there?" asked Giant Soldier of Steel as he looked at the North. "What about the weaklings here? Should we crush them too?" said Deathknight as he looked at the people in the village. "Well, Ryuumaru and his subordinates are really the only ones in this world who are our enemies..." said SkullGreymon. "These machines... they're after the Shinigami, angels and Holy Creatures after all..." said a girl. "So, what should we do?" asked MetalGreymon as he looked at ChaosBlackWarGreymon, who was standing next to him. "No... The orders we received from ChaosLord... is that we are to annihilate Heaven completely" ChaosBlackWarGreymon replied, and then the villagers all gasped as they heard that! "We did not come here to make judgments about who to destroy... but rather to destroy everyone and everything we see in this world, just as ChaosLord had commanded us to. The exact wording of ChaosLord's orders were "Launch an all-out attack on Heaven, and make sure that not a single soul in that world survives". He explicitly stated that all souls we see within this world must be destroyed. Therefore, that is exactly what we are going to do. And since we are inside this village right now, there is no reason not to kill the ones living here first" ChaosBlackWarGreymon continued. "I figured as much..." said ChaosPiedmon as he unsheathed his four swords while looking at the villagers with an evil smile on his face! "Dammit! How did the machines get to this world?" asked a man as he looked at the machines. "Hmph. The only thing that matter is... we're going to turn Heaven upside down!" said Alphamon loudly as he raised his sword high in the air! "Let's go!" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon as he stood and waved his right arm, and immediately after that, the machines all started spreading out throughout the village, charging at the villagers and ready to slaughter them!

Meanwhile, Ryuumaru was in his room with Rika, while the bald Shinigami who was standing on top of the white circular wall before was standing in front of Ryuumaru's desk. "I see... The fact that the machines have obtained the Key To Heaven and were invading Yggdrasil and ultimately Heaven... Seigi reported this to me a while ago. I've already sent him to deal with the machines, but it seems even he was not able to stop them all..." said Ryuumaru as he was looking into his computer screen, which was displaying the place where the machines were flying in Heaven. "So ChaosLord's not among them..." he continued. "So... What happened to Seigi?" asked Rika. Then Ryuumaru typed "Yggdrasil [Earth] - Room 576" into his WorldMap program on his computer, and then he saw his computer screen displaying the chamber inside Yggdrasil where the machines were in just before entering Heaven! He saw that the stone gate Liquidman opened before was still opened, and Seigi and the two angels with him were facing ChaosMetalSeadramon, GigaSeadramon and MegaSeadramon, ready to battle! The three machines had their backs facing the gate leading to Heaven, while the three angels were on the opposite side of the room and facing them. "Don't worry. Nothing's happened to him... although he and his subordinates are about to face off against three machines... so those three machines decided to stay behind to fight while the others moved on ahead..." said Ryuumaru as he looked at his computer screen. "Those three seadragons? Do you think Seigi can deal with them?" asked Rika as she also looked at the screen. "He should be able to... Although that red-haired one in the middle... may be a bit troublesome" said Ryuumaru. "What are we going to do, sir?" asked the bald Shinigami. "Inform all the Holy Elites other than Rance and Seigi to get to the meeting room" said Ryuumaru. "Other than Lord Rance and Lord Seigi?" asked the bald Shinigami. "Yes. Seigi is fighting right now, while there is something else I'd like Rance to do" said Ryuumaru. "Yes sir" said the bald Shinigami, and then he dissapeared with Instant Movement. "This will be settled rather quickly" said Ryuumaru as he turned his head to look at Rika, and then he picked up a phone on his desk and started calling a number.

To be continued


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The Dragon Master, Part 5: Judgement

Two days travel after their previous battle, Acclaim and Dragonaurus lose the trail of the regrouped orcish warriors, but soon pick it up again. The trail moves unfailingly south for several days. As soon as it crosses a great river it immediately turns west. Within a few days, Acclaim recognizes some familiar surroundings. He had ended up back in As'ral! He saw all the people of the village, who all looked at him and Dragonaurus walking next to him. Acclaim walked proudly into the village, feeling like a hero after he had defeated the orcs. Then he saw Kuduros, the very man who had expelled him from his home village, standing somewhere with some guards. Kuduros looked at him with a serious, untrusting look on his face. "I bring word of a great victory against the orcs, Kuduros" said Acclaim to Kuduros. "I had hoped you would never return, Acclaim. You have been banished, and now return. You give me no choice but to order my soldiers to attack you" said Kuduros. "What?" said Acclaim as he heard that. "Acclaim, do not listen to the lies he tells. There is always a choice, and he chooses to attack you. He jeopardizes the safety of As'ral!" said Dragonaurus, as he looked at Acclaim. "I have eliminated two orc chieftains. I doubt we will see any orc raids this summer. The beasts will be too busy trying to regroup" said Acclaim. Then suddenly, he heard a familiar female voice. "You are mistaken, brother. Even now the orcs camp north of the river" said the voice, and Acclaim turned his head and saw it was his sister who had just talked! Then he turned his head again and looked across the river, and noticed an orcish camp across the river! "I have been tracking that band ever since they fled the field at my great victory! But how did they get north of the river? Let me and Dragonaurus deal with them" said Acclaim. But then Kuduros said "A nice story. I find it more likely that you brought your orcish allies here with you to take revenge upon the city. If we stand down your dragon will no doubt kill us where we stand. Watching you grow up, I never could have believed you would turn into a traitor". "Acclaim, he threatens the safety of the city by standing in our way" said Dragonaurus to Acclaim as he heard that. "Then you are the traitor, Kuduros, for preventing me from protecting the city. I will defend As'ral, and if you stand in my way I will cut you down for the treason you commit" said Acclaim then, looking at Kuduros with a serious look on his face. Then he looked at Dragonaurus and said "Ready, Dragonaurus?". But just then, Kuduros said "Guards! Kill them!". Then six guards who were standing close to Kuduros started charging at Acclaim with their swords! "Acclaim, what do we do now?" said Dragonaurus as he saw that. "Leave it to me. I will teach this traitorous piece of trash a lesson..." said Acclaim, as he pulled out his sword. "Haaaa!!" said the guards as they charged at Acclaim, but then Acclaim swung his sword horizontally upwards, cutting off the right arm of a guard! "Graaaaargh!!" screamed that guard in pain then, as much blood started spouting from his wound! Acclaim then continued by doing a back spinning slash, chopping two other guards clean in half! The three remaining guards widened their eyes as they saw that, and then Acclaim stabbed one of them through the heart with his sword, killing him! Then one of the two remaining guards tried to cut Acclaim's head off with his sword, but Acclaim ducked and avoided the attack, and then he pulled out his sword from the body of the guard he had just killed previously, and then he sliced off the legs of the guard who had just tried to attack him! The brutal attack left the guard fallen to the ground, crying loudly in excruciating pain as he had just lost his legs from the knees down! Then Acclaim did a final huge upward vertical slash at the remaining guard, chopping him in two in a huge explosion of blood! Many peasants of the village gasped and some cried loudly as they saw Acclaim slaughtering the guards in such a merciless, atrocious way! "This is the fate that awaits traitorous scum such as you!" shouted Acclaim with an angry look on his face, which was also covered in the blood of the people he had just killed, as the rest of his body! Kuduros then widened his eyes as he saw Acclaim charging at him with his sword! "Ugh!" said Kuduros as he tried to block a slash by Acclaim's sword with his own sword, but Acclaim effortlessly slashed Kuduros's sword and then sliced his chest deeply! "Aaaaargh!!" screamed Kuduros on pain, as some blood erupted from the huge wound on his chest, and then he fell down and breathed heavily. Then he watched as Acclaim walked at him and looked down at him, and then he grabbed the Dragon Sword with both hands before raising it and then planting it straight into Kuduros's heart! Much blood came out of Kuduros's left chest then in a bloody red eruption! "See what your traitorous ways have won you, Kuduros?" said Acclaim then, as he pulled out his sword from Kuduros's corpse. "You will pay for Kururos's death. Now that I have seen the true evil to which you have come, I will commit every guardsman to your demise. It pains me to think you were once my brother" said Acclaim's sister then, and then Acclaim looked and saw her leading a huge group of guardsmen, which was also getting bigger and bigger as more guardsmen were joining the battle every second! "Shit! The whole town's going against us!" said Acclaim as he saw that and widened his eyes! "Should I destroy them?" said Dragonaurus, as he took a step forward and looked at the guards. "Tch. No. Damn. Let's flee..." said Acclaim, and then he jumped onto Dragonaurus's back. "Let's go!" said Acclaim, and then Dragonaurus flew up and started flying away. "After them!" said Acclaim's sister, and then hundreds of guards started running after Acclaim and Dragonaurus! Dragonaurus flew to the other side of the river to the north, and the guards followed him through a wooden bridge, but soon they found themselves fighting with the orcs who were on that side of the river! Acclaim's sister then watched as Acclaim flew away on his Dragonaurus and they went into the forest, and then she said "While our forces must stay here to fight off your pet orcs, when we are done I shall come after you. You are my brother no longer". Then she watched as Dragonaurus flew into the forest, and disappeared from her sight.

After fleeing from the city of his birth, Acclaim started walking in a huge forest with the only friend he had left, Dragonaurus. Acclaim had a sad and angry look of disappointment on his face, as he was walking and looking down at the ground. "I'm sorry about what happened back there. It seems like your countrymen misunderstood your intentions..." said Dragonaurus. "They are no longer countrymen of mine, since they have rejected me twice now. Curse them all! I'll have my revenge on those who wronged me..." said Acclaim looking angry. Dragonaurus then looked at Acclaim, but suddenly he saw an arrow flying fast just above Acclaim's head, missing it just for a few milimeters! "What!" said Dragonaurus as he saw that, and then Acclaim immediately his under his cape. "What was that?" said Acclaim under his cape. "An arrow... Who is there?" said Dragonaurus, as he looked at some trees and saw a shadow moving fast! "You're not getting away!" said Dragonaurus, as he took a deep breath and then shot out a huge fire ball, which burned and destroyed many trees at the location where he had seen the shadow! The trees fell down in flames, and Dragonaurus and Acclaim looked and saw some elves who had been hiding behind the trees! The elves all had bows, and some of them also had swords. "Elves?" said Acclaim as he saw them. "They found us! Quickly, attack!" said an elf, and then he and the other elves aimed their bows at Acclaim and Dragonaurus and started shooting a huge barrage of arrows at them! "Shit!" said Acclaim as he kept being behind his cape, protecting himself from the attack, while Dragonaurus flapped his wings and deflected most of the arrows, but some actually reached him and scratched his skin a bit. "What!" said Dragonaurus, surprised as that happened! "Dragonaurus, be careful! Elves are much better at marksmanship than any other beings on Atlantis!" said Acclaim, as he noticed Dragonaurus had been scratched by the elvish arrows. "But why are they attakcing us?" said Dragonaurus. "Because you set our forest on fire!" said an elf. "What?" said Dragonaurus as he heard that. "They must mean when we had this big last battle with the orcs! We set their camp on fire, maybe it spread to their forest!" said Acclaim. "Exactly. Other battles of yours against orcs also set fires. You may be fighting the orcs, but you're no better than them. Both of you only cause destruction wherever you go. You're no good to this world. That's why we must stop you here and now, before this continues and destroys the whole Atlantis!" said an elf. "Wait, you don't understand!" said Acclaim. But the elf ignored him and said "Attack!". Then many elves started shooting arrows at Acclaim and Dragonaurus, while others charged at them with their swords! "Tch! They won't listen to reason!" said Acclaim, as he saw the elves charging. "What now?" said Dragonaurus, as he slammed some elvish swordsmen away with his tail. "The elves fight too well in the forest! Let's run!" said Acclaim, and then he started running away. "Right!" said Dragonaurus, and then he started running away too. "Don't let them get away!" said an elf then, and then some elves riding horses started chasing Acclaim and Dragonaurus! "Shit!" said Acclaim as he turned his head while running and saw the elves closing in on him and Dragonaurus! "I'll delay them!" said Dragonaurus, and then he turned his head back and spat out a huge stream of cold water and ice, which froze the ground behind him and Acclaim! The horses which were ridden by elves stepped on the ice and slipped, falling down and sliding on the ice. the elvish horse riders then were fallen to the ground and watched as Acclaim and Dragonaurus were running away. "You can run, but you can't hide! We know these forests too well! Even if you run away now, we will surely find you later!" said an elf, as he watched Acclaim and Dragonaurus disappearing behind some large trees.

Acclaim and Dragonaurus were chased into the forest by the elves for several days. The forest also seemed to be very huge and hard to get out from, and Dragonaurus also could not fly well because there were too many trees, so he had to run on his feet. The boy and the dragon kept running away, but they did not seem to be able to lose the elves, who were chasing them persistently and did not leave them much time to rest. Eventually, Acclaim and Dragonaurus found the entrance to the cave. Following Acclaim's advice, Dragonaurus entered the cave with Acclaim to rest there.

"Phew... We were lucky to find this cave. The elves are more used to the forest and can not fight as well in caves, so they probably will not chase us here" said Acclaim, sitting on a rock and relaxing after being chased for so long by the elves. "Yeah, I hope so..." said Dragonaurus, as he sat down and calmed down a bit. But just then, a shadow appeared at the cave's entrance! Acclaim and Dragonaurus looked and saw the figure of a short person. Then, more short persons started to gather at the cave's entrance! "Are these the elves?" said Dragonaurus, as he looked at the short people, although they were standing outside the cave, so they could not be seen clearly. "No, these are not elves... They are the dwarves!" said Acclaim, as some light shone upon the short people and revealed them to be elves! Acclaim also noticed that some of the dwarves looked familiar to him, as if he had seen them before! Then a dwarf widened his eyes as he looked at Acclaim and said "It's them! The guys who attacked us and stole the Dragon Sword! Get them!". "Shit!" said Acclaim as he heard that, and then he quickly got up from the rock he was standing on. "Tch" said Dragonaurus in discomfort as he also got up from the ground. "Damn, it's those guys again! And this time it looks like they are far more than before!" said Acclaim, as he looked and saw hundreds of elves running into the cave with their axes raised, charging at him and Dragonaurus! "They're too many!" said Dragonaurus. "The dwarves fight well in caves as they are their home, and they are too many in this case, too. We have to run away! Quick, follow me!" said Acclaim, as he started to run away in the cave. Dragonaurus then started running after Acclaim, and both of them were getting deep into the cave. "After them! Chase them and cut them down until there's nothing left!" said a dwarf, and then he and hundreds of other dwarves started chasing Acclaim and Dragonaurus, and their hundreds of footsteps were causing the ground to tremble as they were running! And so, the dwarves started hunting down Acclaim and Dragonaurus, who kept going deeper and deeper into the cave.

Acclaim and Dragonaurus were running into the cave chased by the dwarves and they got lost inside it. They wandered in there for weeks, feeding on the little they could find in the caves, mostly a few tree roots. On their way, they also had to battle various trolls and ogres that happened to live in the cave, and those chased them along with the dwarves. Eventually, they reached an exit to the cave, and they found themselves at a beach! There were also many mermans and mermaids swimming in the waters of that beach, although they were mostly staying in underwater caves and only a few were currently in the sea's surface. Acclaim felt a little relief as he looked at the clear blue sky, in which some Wingull and Pelipper flying. Also, various sea Pokemon were happily splashing into the waters of the sea, and some Krabby and Shellder were on the sands of the beach. "Ah, finally we're out of this cave! What a relief!" said Acclaim, with a relieved expression on his face. "This isn't the time to relax, Acclaim, the dwarves are still after us!" said Dragonaurus, as he looked at the cave and saw hundreds of dwarves still chasing them! "Still after us? Even after so many weeks? Don't they ever stop?!" said Acclaim, looking angrily at the dwarves. "Get them!" said the dwarves, as they were charging at Acclaim and Dragonaurus with their axes raised in the air! "But they made a mistake in coming out of their cave. Dragonaurus, let's go!" said Acclaim, as he jumped on Dragonaurus's back, and then Dragonaurus flew up in the sky and looked down at the hundreds of dwarves. "Thunderbolt!" said Acclaim then, and then Dragonaurus charged up a huge ball of electricity in his mouth and shot it at the dwarves! The Thunderbolt attack flew down and hit many dwarves, zapping them, but at the same time it also touched the water of the beack and zapped many creatures living inside the water even worse! Dragonaurus then flew down and landed on the ground, and Acclaim got off his back. "How d'ya like that?" said Acclaim, as he looked at the zapped dwarves. "You bastard, what's your problem?" he heard a voice coming from the water then. Then he and Dragonaurus turned their heads and saw many mermans, mermaids, as well as sea Pokemon looking at them angrily! "Oops... Sorry guys, this was intended for the dwarves, not you" said Acclaim. "Get them!" said a merman then, and them some merman warriors threw some tridents at Acclaim and Dragonaurus! "Shit!" said Acclaim, as he barely avoided a trident in the last second, while Dragonaurus slamed some tridents flying at him with his powerful tail. Then the mermans got out of the water and started crawling on the sand of the beach, going after Acclaim and Dragonaurus, while at the same time the dwarves also charged at them again! "Here we go again..." said Acclaim. "Let's go to those plains over there, I think that's the best battlefield for us" said Dragonaurus, as he looked at some plains some distance away from the beach. "Right, let's go!" said Acclaim, and then he and Dragonaurus ran at the plains. After about five minutes of running fast, they reached there, stood still to rest a bit, and looked at the dwarves and mermans and mermaids coming at them. Also, along with the mermans amd mermaids were some of the Pokemon living at the sea. "So, are you ready, Dragonaurus? It's time to finish this..." said Acclaim. But suddenly, he heard a voice "There they are!". Acclaim and Dragonaurus then turned their heads and looked at a forest, out of which hundreds of elves started to come out! Also, many wild Pokemon were with the elves, looking at Acclaim and Dragonaurus angrily! "What! What are the elves doing here?" said Acclaim, looking surprised. "We knew you'd end up here from the moment we saw you entering this cave!" said an elf, looking at Acclaim angrily. "That's right" Acclaim heard another voice then. Then he and Dragonaurus turned their heads and saw some knights riding on horses, as well as other human soldiers! "Your travels in this region have not gone unnoticed, foul thief! We have been tracking you for weeks, and thanks to the helpful information we received from our elf allies, we will finally be able to crush you and retrieve this sword and cape that rightfully belong to King Haldric III. Do not even think of running away - my horsemen can easily catch you, especially in your current state. Yes, on this day you shall have to answer for your innumerable crimes" said a knight riding a horse. "We'll see how well your pompous words protect you from the Dragon Sword once I have finished this upstart" said Acclaim, as he looked at the knight with despise. "No. This is over, Acclaim" Acclaim heard a female voice then, and then he and Dragonaurus turned their heads and saw Acclaim's sister at another place, leading another army of humans! "S-Sister?" said Acclaim, as he looked at his sister surprised. "I told you, Acclaim, that I would find you again, and I have kept my word. I will not suffer you to bring any further harm to my people, and so you will not live to see another sunset" said Acclaim's sister, as she looked at him with an unforgiving look in her eyes! "You wrong me, sister. I only tried to help. Have you not seen fewer orcs this past summer?" said Acclaim. "I will not listen to any more of your lies. Men, attack!" said Acclaim's sister then, and Acclaim gasped as he heard that! Then suddenly, everyone heard a loud noise coming from a forest, and then they looked and saw a huge army of orcs, trolls and goblins coming out angrily! "The orcs again?!!" said Acclaim, surprised. "I've finally found you, humie. It's time to pay for all the tribes of ours you destroyed!!" said an orcish warlord loudly and angrily, a he looked at Acclaim. "He's made quite a lot of enemies..." said a soldier standing next to Acclaim's sister. "Acclaim has been weird ever since he was a child... Making enemies was all he could ever do, and nobody ever liked him... But to reach to this level... Even I never imagined this could happen... He always looked so innocent..." said Acclaim's sister, as she looked at her brother, who was, at the moment, facing the orcs, and he had a look of total surprise in his eyes. He also had an expression of being betrayed on his face. "Well, this is it for him. He has turned everyone against him with his actions, and now he will face the consequenses. It is time to put an end to his evil ways" said the soldier who had talked to Acclaim's sister before. "You are right... Men! Attack!" said Acclaim's sister then. "Yes ma'am!" said the human soldiers under her command then, and they started charging at Acclaim! At the same time, the other human army which was leaded by a knight riding a horse also started charging at Acclaim! The elves and the Pokemon which were with then also attacked, and so did the mermaids, mermans, and sea Pokemon with them! "Massacre!!" screamed the orcish warlord, sending his orc, troll, and goblin warriors against Acclaim! And the dwarves, along with some ogres and trolls who had chased Acclaim from the cave, also started running at him and Dragonaurus to attack! Dragonaurus then watched as thousands of humans, elves, dwarves, orcs, trolls, ogres, goblins, mermans, mermaids, and Pokemon charged at them to attack from all directions! "Acclaim, what do we do?!" said Dragonaurus, looking like he was in a bit of panic. But he received no reply. "...Acclaim?" said Dragonaurus then, as he looked at Acclaim. Acclaim was looking down at the ground, with an expression of emptiness, desperation, loss of faith, sadness, and a bit of anger in his eyes. "Everyone hates me for no reason..." said Acclaim in a quiet voice. "Come on Acclaim, this isn't time for that!! We have to do something, now!!" said Dragonaurus, looking a bit upset. "If that is so... Then I will render divine judgement upon all those that have wronged me, all those who turned their backs on me and betrayed me like I was nothing!!" said Acclaim, as he suddenly raised his head and looked at the sky with a look of insanity in his eyes! "Great, but what do we do now?" said Dragonaurus. "Let's go! Into the sky!" said Acclaim, as he jumped onto Dragonaurus's back, and then Dragonaurus flew up. "Don't let them get away!" said a human soldiers, and then everyone who had bows or crossbows started shooting arrows at Dragonaurus and Acclaim! But Dragonaurus quickly flew very high and avoided them all. "Whew. We've escaped..." said Dragonaurus, as he looked down at the army of their enemies. "Blast it all! Everyone hates me for no good reason, and I can't get back to the island to eliminate the orcs without the others hunting me down like the idiots they are! Going down there would be the same as begging for death. At this point, we're only left with one option" said Acclaim. "And what is that?" asked Dragonaurus. "To destroy... the entire island of Atlantis!!" said Acclaim in a loud voice, and Dragonaurus widened his eyes a bit as he heard that! "Destroy the whole island? Are you sure? Those are your family and your people down there..." said Dragonaurus. "Those trash are no longer my people. They never were... None of them... Let's obliterate them! Dragonaurus! Remember that move you talked to me about the other time? The one you said could destroy entire cities with ease?" said Acclaim. "You mean my ultimate attack, Golden Blast?" said Dragonaurus. "Yes, that attack... Can you do it and destroy the entire Atlantis?" said Acclaim excitedly. "Yes, but are you really sure about that?" said Dragonaurus. "Of course. In fact, wasn't that our very purpose from the start? To eliminate the orcs. I have heard that they only exist in Atlantis, and they have not moved to other parts of the world yet. If we destroy the whole island now, we'll get rid of them, once and for all! Together with all the rest bastards who made my life a living hell... I know that maybe there are a few decent people at that place, but even still, revolution demands sacrifice. So, Dragonaurus, let's do it! Golden Blast!!" said Acclaim. "Okay!" said Dragonaurus then, and then he started charging up a gigantic sphere of compressed golden energy in his mouth! The golden energy ball grew bigger and bigger, until it became as huge as the entire Atlantis itself! The energy ball was also extremely bright, blinding the entire population of Atlantis in its bright gold light! "Wha-What is this?!" said a human soldier as he closed his eyes to the extremely bright light. "Dragonaurus!! Golden Blast!!" said Acclaim then in a loud, excited voice, and then Dragonaurus blasted his huge golden energy ball straight down at Atlantis, blasting it all in an insanely enormous explosion of gold energy! Huge tidal waves were also created in the ocean and flew towards all direction outwards from the explosion, and the gold explosion itself was so huge and bright that it could be seen from very far away! The explosion also created an insanely enormous crater in the water! "Fwahahahahahahahaha!!" laughed Acclaim evily as he looked at the huge explosion, which lasted for a few seconds, before ending, and then the crater in the ocean was filled again with water. The entire Atlantis had been obliterated to nothing, and in its place was nothing but sea! Acclaim stood proudly on Dragonaurus's back, with some wind blowing his cape and hair, as he looked down at the raging water and huge tidal waves after the huge explosion. "Judgement delivered" said Acclaim then, with an evil smile of satisfaction on his face.



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Chapter 77: Battles Above The Clouds


The machines all stood within the village in Heaven they invaded before, and all the trees and tree houses in the entire village was burning in flames, while the machines had just finished slaughtering everyone in the entire village. "Heh! What a joke! These guys are even less challenging than the beings on Earth! Atleast the beings on Earth managed to put up a fight... But these guys are way too nice for their own good, and here they lie defeated!" said Liquidman as he stood and looked down at the corpse of a man next to him. "...As long as you know that the Shinigami, angels and Holy Creatures would be completely different from these guys" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. "In any case, let's head off" said ChaosPiedmon, and then all the machines flew up in the air and started flying towards the North.

Meanwhile, inside Yggdrasil on Earth, ChaosMetalSeadramon, MegaSeadramon and GigaSeadramon were facing Seigi and the two angels next to him, ready to battle. The whole chamber where they were in was also shaking much due to the huge spirit pressure which was still radiating from Seigi's body. ChaosMetalSeadramon was swinging his tail violently around the air while looking at Seigi, while MegaSeadramon was facing the female angel and GigaSeadramon was facing the male angel with the clawed gauntlets. "Hey, chick" said MegaSeadramon as he looked at the female angel. "How about we change locations? I don't want to be blasted by ChaosMetalSeadramon, you know" he continued. "Sure" said the female angel, and then MegaSeadramon flew high up in the air, tackling the ceiling at huge speed and creating a hole through it, and then MegaSeadramon ended up in the sky above the outside of Yggdrasil! The female angel then flew through that hole and ended up in the sky as well, and she and MegaSeadramon were facing each other.

Meanwhile, ChaosMetalSeadramon, GigaSeadramon, Seigi and the angel with the clawed gauntlets were still inside Yggdrasil. "I'd say the same. I'll also change the location. You won't mind, right?" said GigaSeadramon as he looked at the angel with the clawed gauntlets, who shook his head. "Hmph" said GigaSeadramon then, as he also flew high up at the ceiling, creating a hole through it and ended up in the sky outside, while the angel followed him. "So it's finally calmed down a bit..." said ChaosMetalSeadramon as he looked at Seigi. "So this is ChaosMetalSeadramon... the Chaos General who Vaiknite warned me about before... A sea serpent... Red hair and a black, silver and blue body... there's no mistaking it..." Seigi thought as he looked at ChaosMetalSeadramon. "You..." said Seigi. "Hm?" said ChaosMetalSeadramon. "You're Chaos General ChaosMetalSeadramon, aren't you?" Seigi continued. "Heh... So even a whelp like you know my name? I'm honored" said ChaosMetalSeadramon. "So it's him... according to Vaiknite, his greatest advantage in battle is his defense... therefore, using weak attacks like that last one would be pointless... I'd need to finish him off with a powerful spell" Seigi thought.

Meanwhile, in the sky directly above Yggdrasil on Earth, MegaSeadramon and GigaSeadramon were floating in the air, above the clouds and facing the two angels who were with Seigi before. "Hagh... We're finally out of that closed up room... to be honest, the only reason why I asked to change locations was to get out of that place... I felt like I was suffocating under that kid's abnormally huge spirit energy..." said MegaSeadramon. "Well then, I'm guessing it's time for us to introduce ourselves. I am GigaSeadramon, one of the right-hand machines of ChaosMetalSeadramon, the great Chaos General" said GigaSeadramon. "And I am ChaosMetalSeadramon's other right-hand machine... MegaSeadramon" said MegaSeadramon. "I am Tiffany, an angel of Heaven" said the female angel. "I am Jack... another angel of Heaven" said the male angel. "Tiffany... and Jack, eh? With us two in the way, it seems you two have no choice but to fight against us... Judging from your faces, you two seem quite confident... But should you be?" said MegaSeadramon. "What do you mean?" asked the female angel, known as Tiffany. "For the record, ChaosMetalSeadramon is by far the toughest of the three Chaos Generals. Despite the intimidating spirit pressure of that kid inside, do you really think that he would be enough to stand up against ChaosMetalSeadramon, mm?" said GigaSeadramon. "Don't worry about what's going on down there! Your opponents are us! We are the only ones you should be focusing on right now!" said the male angel, known as Jack, and then he suddenly flew at GigaSeadramon at extreme speed! While flying, he raised his clawed gauntlets and tried to slash GigaSeadramon with them! "Hmph" said GigaSeadramon then as he raised his metal tail and blocked the attack with it, and much sparks flew as the two beings were pushing against each other! "Take this! Fire Blast!" said GigaSeadramon as he suddenly shot a huge Fire Blast out of his mouth at Jack, who flew back and avoided the attack, which kept going diagonally downwards and crashed into the forest surrounding Yggdrasil, setting a large part of it on fire! "Sacred Claws!" said Jack then as he suddenly did a Cross Chop at the air at GigaSeadramon's direction, and then two gigantic slashes of holy energy appeared in the air and formed an "x", which hit GigaSeadramon hard, sending him tumbling down in the air! Then Jack dived down through the air at extreme speed towards GigaSeadramon's direction, but then GigaSeadramon said "Fiery Solar Beam!" as he shot a huge Solar Beam covered in thick flames at Jack while flying, and then Jack stopped flying as he pointed his claws towards the Fiery Solar Beam's direction! After that, he shouted "Spirit Defense!" as he created a circular-shaped shield of compressed white spirit energy in front of his hands, and he used the shield to protect himself from the Fiery Solar Beam, although the beam was slowly pushing him back diagonally upward through the air. Also, much flames were exploding in front of the shield as GigaSeadramon's Fiery Solar Beam was pushing against it at huge pressure! "Haaa!" Jack then shouted as he unleashed a huge amount of concentrated spirit energy forward, creating a huge explosion of spirit energy which terminated GigaSeadramon's attack! "Sacred Claws!" Jack then shouted again as he did a Cross Chop at GigaSeadramon's direction, sending two huge slashes made of holy energy forming an "x" towards GigaSeadramon, who flew to the side and avoided the attack, which kept going and chopped off three large branches of Yggdrasil, and then the three branches, which were all enormous, fell off Yggdrasil and landed hard on the ground below, crushing hundreds of trees in the forest down there, creating a huge explosion of dust and a huge crater, and many Pidgey, Spearow and other birds flew away from the forest as the branches landed! Then GigaSeadramon started flying within the huge branches and leaves of Yggdrasil, trying to lose Jack! "You're not getting away!" said Jack as he dived after GigaSeadramon! The two beings flew straight past the branches and leaves of Yggdrasil, and now, they were flying diagonally downward away from Yggdrasil's direction! They kept flying, and Jack eventually caught up to GigaSeadramon, but then GigaSeadramon suddenly lashed his tail violently at Jack, who formed an "x" with his clawed gauntlets and blocked the attack, although he was pushed back a bit. Then GigaSeadramon suddenly turned around and blasted a Hyper Beam at Jack, hitting him at point-blank range and sending him tumbling downward through the sky! Then GigaSeadramon started diving downward at Jack and chased him, while Jack kept diving down away from GigaSeadramon. "Giga Sea Destroyer!" said GigaSeadramon as he started launching many strong energy torpedos from his mouth at Jack, but Jack flew around in zigzags rapidly, dodging all the torpedos, which all crashed into the forest below and created huge craters and explosions of dust! Then Jack, while diving downward, suddenly turned around and swung his right claw at GigaSeadramon's direction, sending a huge slash of holy energy towards his direction, but GigaSeadramon flew high up above Jack, avoiding the attack, and then GigaSeadramon flew up so that he covered the Sun from Jack's perspective! "Too slow!" said GigaSeadramon as he blasted a Hyper Beam downward at Jack, who slashed at GigaSeadramon with his left claw, sending another slash of holy energy towards him! Then the slash collided with the Hyper Beam, creating an enormous explosion in the sky! Then the two beings both dived into the explosion, and Jack tried to slash GigaSeadramon with his claws, while GigaSeadramon tried to whip Jack with his metal tail! The attacks of the two beings collided inside the explosion, creating a metallic sound on contact! Then the two beings started flying around in the sky at extreme speed, colliding with each other every once in a while and creating a metallic sound as well as an explosion of sparks.

Meanwhile, MegaSeadramon was facing Tiffany. "Thunder Javelin!" said MegaSeadramon as he gathered some electricity in his horn and then fired an electrical stream at Tiffany's direction! "Angel Lightning!" said Tiffany as she swung her double-sided blade above her head like a helicopter's propeller a few times, and then some powerful electricity gathered in her weapon! After that, she pointed it at MegaSeadramon's direction, and then a steam of lightning came out of her weapon at MegaSeadramon! Then the two streams of electricity collided together, creating a huge explosion of electricity in the sky! Then Tiffany dived through the explosion and towards MegaSeadramon, trying to slash him in the head with her blade, but MegaSeadramon blocked the attack with the sword-like horn on his head! Then the two beings pushed their blades hard against each other, and some sparks were flying! "Dissapear!" said MegaSeadramon then, as he gathered some electricity in his horn, but Tiffany infused much spirit energy into her weapon, and then the two beings pushed their weapons extremely hard against each other, creating an explosion of lavender-colored spirit energy and yellow electricity which pushed both beings flying back! Then MegaSeadramon tried to fire a Hyper Beam through the explosion at Tiffany, but Tiffany flew up, avoiding the beam, which kept going and hit a large branch of Yggdrasil's, snapping it and making the branch collapse! After that, Tiffany dived down at MegaSeadramon and tried to behead him with her blade, but MegaSeadramon once again blocked the attack with his horn! Then Tiffany kept whacking her weapon at MegaSeadramon's head repeatedly, but MegaSeadramon was moving his horn around rapidly and blocking all the attacks, and some sparks flew with each collision! "You bitch! Take this!" said MegaSeadramon then as he tried to whip Tiffany with his tail, but Tiffany blocked the attack with the flat side of her sword, although MegaSeadramon's attack had enough force to push her back a bit. "Mega Ice Blast!" said MegaSeadramon then as he shot a freezing cold blast from his mouth at Tifanny, who flew to the side and avoided the blast, but then MegaSeadramon turned his head while firing the blast, following Tiffany! Then Tiffany kept flying around unpredictably to dodge the ice blast, while MegaSeadramon was following her with the ice blast! "Resistant, eh? In that case..." said MegaSeadramon, and then he stopped firing his ice blast. "Ice Storm!" he continued, and then suddenly, many huge ice needles rained down from the sky! "Die!" said MegaSeadramon as he looked at the ice needles raining down at Tiffany! But then Tiffany spun her weapon above her head like a propeller at high speed, protecting herself from the rain of ice needles! Some of the ice needles also hit MegaSeadramon and GigaSeadramon, although they were not harmed by them.

Meanwhile, Jack was flying backwards through the air as he was using his clawed gauntlets to block the many ice needles raining down at him! Eventually, he flew under Yggdrasil, and he hid under one of its large branches in order to cover himself from the rain of ice needles. "Hmph. You shouldn't be worth fighting if this is all it takes!" said GigaSeadramon as he looked at the branch which Jack was hiding under, and then he took in a deep breath before shooting a devastating Fire Blast from his mouth, which hit that branch and burnt it off Yggdrasil! Jack then flew back after that, while blocking many ice needles raining down on him with his claws.

Meanwhile, Tiffany was still spinning her weapon around and blocking the rain of ice needles. "This is the end, angel!" said MegaSeadramon as he shot another freezing cold blast from his mouth at Tiffany! "Angel Fire!" said Tiffany then, as she started spinning her weapon around much faster than before, and then suddenly, many huge rings of flames radiated out of her spinning weapon, melting MegaSeadramon's attack, and then some of the radiating flames hit MegaSeadramon, and then the rain of ice needles stopped. "Haaa!" Tiffany then screamed as she pointed her weapon at MegaSeadramon, shooting a powerful blast of flames straight at his face and engulfing him in fire! "Aaaaaaarrrghhh!" MegaSeadramon screamed as he was engulfed in flames while being sent flying away! "It's over, MegaSeadramon!" said Tiffany as she infused much spirit energy into her blade, and then she dived down at MegaSeadramon at extreme speed, trying to slash him! "Don't underestimate me!" said MegaSeadramon then as he smashed his horn hard against Tiffany's blade while infusing much electricity into it, creating another enormous explosion on impact! Then the two beings kept flying around the air at extreme speed, and huge explosions of electricity and spirit energy were happening every time they collided with each other!

Meanwhile, somewhere in Heaven, there was a large lake with many dragon-like Holy Creatures swimming in it or flying in the air above it. On the lake, there was also a pirate ship, which was exactly the same as the one which Rance had brought with him when he and Dragonaurus went to Earth to fight ChaosLord, Skizor, RoboAlakazam and the dinosaur-like machines much earlier. The lake was surrounded by many large mountains, and on top of one of the mountains, there was a large, golden shrine-like place. Within the shrine, there was a golden chair, and Rance was sitting on that chair, watching the dragons while speaking on a golden mobile phone. "They've invaded Heaven through Yggdrasil, right? So they should be coming from the South..." said Rance through the mobile phone as he looked across the lake, towards the South, where Yggdrasil was. "Alright, I understand" he continued, and then he hang up and put his phone away. Then he looked down at the dragons in the lake and said "Everyone, listen to me". Then all the dragons stopped what they were doing and looked up at Rance. "We have intruders here to Heaven. They are the machines. They invaded Heaven through Yggdrasil's dimensional gate to the South of here. You have been ordered by Lord Ryuumaru to eradicate them" said Rance, and then all the dragons nodded and started flying towards the South.

Meanwhile, Seigi and ChaosMetalSeadramon were still inside Yggdrasil, facing each other. "Hmph. It looks like they've already begun..." said ChaosMetalSeadramon as he looked up at the two holes in the ceiling caused by GigaSeadramon and MegaSeadramon before, and he heard much noise coming from up there. "It's about time we should begin too!" he continued as he looked at Seigi.

To be continued



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Here is Part 6 of my story. To get a better idea of what the platform on which Acclaim and Magmegalosaurus battle, remember the arenas where Mario fights Bowser in in Super Mario 64 (well, they battle three times, but the arenas look similar if I remember correctly). The platform where Acclaim and Magmegalosaurus battle is similar to the arenas where Mario and Bowser battle (here is a picture, although it does not show the arena completely. The arena is round), and it is made of rock. Also, it doesn't float in the air, but it is mostly into the lava. Anyway, here it goes:

The Dragon Master, Part 6: 1/2 Dragon Master

"Hmph!" said Acclaim, as he looked down at the sea with despise, after having destroyed Atlantis entirely with Dragonaurus's powerful Golden Blast! Nothing was left from the island, and the ocean water took the place of what was once land! All life on Atlantis was also erased by the explosion of the Golden Blast attack. Acclaim stood on Dragonaurus's back, with some whid blowing his cape and hair, as he was looking down at what he had just done. "It's over..." said Dragonaurus, who was flying up in the sky with Acclaim on his back. "Yeah. The orcs are no more. And neither is this island. I won't miss it. In that place, getting out of your house was the same as begging for death after all... It was only righteous to devastate it entirely to nothing" said Acclaim. "So, what now?" said Dragonaurus. "I dunno. How about going to this planet you told me about the other time? The Dragon Planet, was it?" said Acclaim. "Yes, that was the name of my home planet. Well, we could go there I suppose, but there is one thing I did not tell you..." said Dragonaurus. "Hm? And what is that?" said Acclaim. "Currently, there is a civil war going on on the entire planet. The dragons are divided in two sides, each lead by an extremely powerful dragon. One side is lead by Magmegalosaurus, a large brown dragon specializing in ground and fire techniques. The dragons on his side are mostly dragons using the fire and ground elements too. The other side is that of Kylorados, a powerful dragon using water and ice techniques. Similarly, his followers also use water and ice attacks usually. There are also many other various kinds of dragons that use other elements, like electricity or solar energy. All of the dragons on Dragon Planet, without a single exception, are either on the side of Magmegalosaurus or on the side of Kylorados, but never on both, obviously. A few dragons who wished to stay away from this war, like me, fled away to your planet, Earth, which was recently discovered by us" said Dragonaurus. "So you fled away because you didn't like that war, eh?" said Acclaim. "That's right" said Dragonaurus. "But Dragonaurus, this isn't an effective way of dealing with your problems!" said Acclaim. "What do you mean?" said Dragonaurus. "All this time now, I have been doing the exact same thing... People teased me all the time about stuff, and all I ever did was run away, like you did in this war. I thought this was the smart thing to do. However, now that I finally found the courage to take matters into my own hands, and obliterated all those that caused me trouble, my worries have all disappeared!" said Acclaim. "Where are you getting at?" said Dragonaurus. "What I'm saying is, running away from your problems won't solve them! Didn't you feel it just now? When we destroyed Atlantis, every bad thing about it was gone! The orcs are an extinct species now, so no one will have to suffer their presence anymore, never again! This was a good thing! And you know why this happened? Because we did what was the logical thing to do, instead of cowering away in the face of a great challenge. Had we done nothing, the orcish menace would probably go on forever. But now it's all over, and all that was needed was some effort and courage. The things that caused me problems for years now were solved in a single day of courage and effort, and will never ever again annoy me again!" said Acclaim. "I still don't understand what you mean..." said Dragonaurus. "Dragonaurus, let's go to Dragon Planet and defeat both Magmegalosaurus and Kylorados and end the civil war!" said Acclaim excitedly. "What?" said Dragonaurus. "Don't you see it? The only way to change things you don't like is to do something yourself! If you just stand there watching and cowering away, you'll only suffer more and more! Isn't it only logical to take power into your hands and end those things which you do not like?" said Acclaim. "Yes, but..." said Dragonaurus. "I know it's hard. I had been running away from trouble for years myself as well. How foolish I was, letting myself get hurt by evil, when the solution was that simple..." said Acclaim. "Things sound good in theory, but reality is another thing..." said Dragonaurus. "It definitely is not easy to face those things you fear. But it's the only way to end them once and for all and prevent them from causing you any further harm. Now that I have power, I have finally awoken from my previous cowardly state. I now know that, with effort, faith, determination and courage, I can right those things that are wrong. I know we can do the same about your planet too, Dragonaurus!" said Acclaim. "The dragons on Dragon Planet are not as easy to defeat as the beings of Earth... It will take a lot of power to defeat them" said Dragonaurus. "Well then, let's do our best! Let's put all of our effort, all our faith and all our powers into ending this war! Let's devote our very beings to this cause! I'm sure we can do it! It doesn't matter if things seem against us! I'm sure that if we have enough willpower and determination, we can achieve anything! And justice will always prevail! Believe in justice, Dragonaurus! Have faith in the things you believe are right, and you'll achieve anything!" said Acclaim, and Dragonaurus was inspired a bit by his words! "You are right. It is time we put an end to this pointless civil war! That is the right thing to do, right?" said Dragonaurus. "That's the spirit! Let's go then! To Dragon Planet!" said Acclaim. "Alright!" said Dragonaurus, and then he flew away from Earth with Acclaim, heading towards another planet in space.

Acclaim flew on Dragonaurus and they reached a planet which looked like Earth, and was also enlightened by a star similar to the Sun. It was Dragon Planet. It was full of beautiful natural places, without pollution, and with many different dragons living at various places. However, many of the dragons were fighting each other! Dragonaurus was flting with Acclaim in the usually clear blue sky of Dragon Planet, although now it had been darkened by smokes caused by fires that were produced as the result of the dragons' fighting, which had set various places on fire! "Here we are... Dragon Planet" said Dragonaurus, as he and Acclaim looked down at the dragons. "Wow... So this is Dragon Planet... So many dragons... They all look so cool... Such awesome beings of power... We must stop them from fighting each