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Thank you. Chapter 96: The Fight For Control The Electabots, Magmabots, Cythers and Silverducks were still fighting with the Holy Creatures in the ice cavern, although the majority of all the Holy Creatures had already been killed by the machines in the huge battle that took place in the cave, while half of the machines were also destroyed in that battle. While the remainders of them continued fighting, much blood of the Holy Creatures were being spilt all over the cave, making the whole cave almost flooded with much blood, while some dark energy were also coming out of the bodies of many destroyed machines, and the dark energies filled the cave's atmosphere! Many ice bats were screeching some extremely loud cries while flying at some Electabots while flapping their wings rapidly and leaking much dry ice from their bodies! "Haaaa!" the Electabots screamed their battle cries as they unleashed some huge Thunderbolts from their bodies, zapping all the ice bats and taking them out! At the same time, a mammoth-like Holy Creature shot a beam of thick, compressed wind, snow and spirit energy from his mouth at a Magmabot, who took in a deep breath before shooting an equally huge Fire Blast at the Holy Creature, and then the Fire Blast overpowered that Holy Creature's attack and engulfed him, setting him on fire! After that, the Magmabot jumped at the Holy Creature, Fire Punched him five times in a row, and then delivered a heavy spin kick straight at his head, sending him flying until he hit a wall, cratering it and shaking the whole cave! "Rrrrargh!" a white leopard-like Holy Creature roared as he leaped fast at a Cyther, did a frontflip and then tried to catch the Cyther in his paws, but the Cyther flew back, avoiding the attack, and then the Holy Creature's claws hit the ground with so much force that he created two small craters there! Then, while the Holy Creature's guard was down, the Cyther said "Take this!" as he Cross Chopped the Holy Creature straight in the face with his two bladed arms, creating an "x" mark on the Holy Creature's head! "Rooooaaarrghh!" the Holy Creature loudly as much blood spouted from the "x", and then he rolled over and died. Then a large polar bear-like Holy Creature charged at at a Silverduck on all four legs while roaring loudly and showing his sharp teeth, and each of his steps trembled the ground! As the Silverduck watched that, he formed a hand seal and held on to it, while focusing on the polar bear-like Holy Creature. After that, some circular hypnotic waves started radiating out of the red gem on the Silverduck's forehead towards the Holy Creature, who soon got put to sleep by the hypnotic waves, and then he rolled over and was fast asleep. "Hmph" said the Silverduck then, as he took in a deep breath and then blasted an insane amount of water out of his mouth at the Holy Creature at huge pressure, causing huge damage to the Holy Creature and also cratering the ground below him, and many frozen rocks flew out of that part of the ground towards all directions! The machines had now managed to defeat all the Holy Creatures who had attacked them, although the machines' numbers had also been cut in half from the battle. The remaining machines all stood, smiling victoriously as they watched all the water created by the Silverduck before flowing out of the cave like a tidal wave, while also washing away all the blood that flooded the ground before. "Heh, what pushovers!" said a Cyther. "Well, they were tougher than I thought, but still too easy!" said a Magmabot. But then suddenly, the whole cave started shaking again! "Huh? What's happening this time, eh?" said a Silverduck, looking around while smiling confidently, as his hands were also covered in the blood of some Holy Creatures he slaughtered before. Suddenly, a huge explosion of dust happened at the ceiling of the cave, creating a large hole in the ceiling! Then, three more Holy Creatures fell down from the hole and landed on the floor at the center of the chamber, while one more Holy Creature slowly descended from the hole and hovered in the air before the machines with his wings! The Holy Creature who hovered in the air was a gigantic black moth-like Holy Creature with a single round yellow eye, a black body, six black legs, some sharp fangs like those of a spider, and had green wings with some red, orange and purple patterns on them! Some highly poisonous yellow, purple and red powders were also falling from the moth's wings as he was flapping them in order to hover in the air! As for the other three Holy Creatures who had entered the place, one of them was a tall, strong knight-like creature wearing white armor with some dark blue patterns on them, wore white helms with bull horns on them, held a round, black and white shield with his left hand and an extremely long, thick and jagged sword, which was as long as the knight was tall with his right hand! Another was a muscular creature with red skin, a pig's head, carried a large, black guandao in his right hand, leaning the weapon over his right shoulder, and carried a lantern with his left hand! And the last Holy Creature was a tall, skeleton-like creature with some red hair coming out of the back of his skull and carried a heavy, gray spiky mace! "More Holy Creatures, eh?" said a Cyther. "Only four? How dissapointing! Let's destroy 'em!" said a Magmabot, and then he took in a deep breath before blasting a huge, blazing bolt of devastatingly hot flames from his mouth at the moth-like Holy Creature! "Iiiiaaa!" the moth-like Holy Creature then made a loud noise as he flew higher and avoided the attack, which crashed onto a wall in the cave and melted much ice covering that wall! After that, the moth-like Holy Creature leaned back a bit, before divebombing at the Magmabot's direction, while blasting much flames out of the end of his abdomen at huge pressure like a rocket, blasting himself towards the Magmabot like a missile! "What the..." said the Magmabot, and then the moth-like Holy Creature crashed straight into him, sending him flying away! The moth-like Holy Creature flew with huge speed and force close to the surface of the ground, while still blasting much flames behind him to launch himself forward like a missile, and he crashed into many machines standing in a straight line behind the Magmabot, knocking them all away as well! "Argh!" the machines screamed as they got struck with much force by the moth's divebomb attack! After that, the moth was about to crash into a wall, but then he quickly turned 90 degrees upward, so that he flew parallel to the wall a bit before stopping, and then he made a 180 turn, so that his head was now facing downwards, while he was standing upside down on the wall, while showing the patterns on his wings to the machines. At the same time, many Electabots jumped at the knight-like Holy Creature from all directions! "Haaaaa!" they all screamed their battle cries as they jumped at him and Cross Choped, Thunder Punched and Mega Kicked him, but all of those attacks simply created a metallic noise as they collided with the knight's armor, while the knight was completely unaffected! "What!" said one of the Electabots as they all widened their eyes upon seeing that! "Iiiroigh!" the knight then screamed his battle cry as he pushed his round shield against an Electabot, knocking him away, before doing two horizontal slashes with his huge sword slicing many Electabots across the chest, spouting much dark energy from their wounds and sending them flying away! "Gahhh!" they screamed upon being cut. "Eat this!" said a Cyther then, as he started doing many frontflips in the air rapidly while jumping towards the muscular Holy Creature, while having his two bladed arms drawn out, so that he was flying like a vertical shuriken! "Mm?" said the Holy Creature as he noticed the Cyther flying at him, and then he immediately held his guandao horizontally and blocked the attack! "Heh!" said the Cyther, smiling confidently as he felt his blades pushing downward hard against the muscular Holy Creature's guandao, cratering the ground below the Holy Creature! "Uuuu!" said the Holy Creature then, as he leaned back the right side of his body before throwing his lantern at the Cyther! "Argh shit!" said the Cyther as the lantern hit him and sent his body on fire! "Uuuuuuuuah!" the muscular Holy Creature then screamed his battle cry as he reared back his left fist, before delivering an insanely strong punch infused with much compressed spirit energy straight at the Cyther, who widened his eyes and formed an "x" with his bladed arms, trying to block the punch, but the punch was so incredibly powerful that it instantly shattered the Cyther's two blades, before hitting him straight in the chest, creating a powerful shockwave of spirit energy on impact! "Guh!" said the Cyther in pain, as his exoskeleton cracked badly by the huge punch, while he also coughed out much dark energy, before being sent flying at a wall in the cave so hard that he created a hole through the wall and he ended up outside the cave, and then he finally hit a tree, destroying it before stopping dead. Back inside the cave, many more Cythers flew at the muscular Holy Creature. "Uuuuuuurraargh!" the Holy Creature screamed his battle cry as he leaned back a bit, before doing a huge horizontal swipe with his guandao, smashing the Cythers all away! While this was happening, a Silverduck blasted a huge Hydro Pump at the skeleton-like Holy Creature, but the Holy Creature was unaffected by the attack, as the water just went through the gaps in his thin body! After that, the skeleton-like Holy Creature raised his mace briefly, before he started spinning around extremely fast with his mace drawn out! While still spinning, he rammed himself into many Silverducks, smashing them up and causing mortal injuries to their bodies, and much dark energy leaked from their cracked bodies after getting smashed by the skeleton's heavy mace! A Cyther then jumped back away from the action, as he stood and watched as the four Holy Creatures were taking out the machines almost effortlessly! "What the hell's going on? There's only four of them... Why are they beating us all up so badly when we managed to take out all the other Holy Creatures from before?" he said as he was watching. "These guys... They're tough..." thought an Electabot as he backflipped away from the knight-like Holy Creature to dodge a horizontal slash from him, although the Electabot's chest got cut slightly. Meanwhile, the Massacrer and Senme were standing, facing each other. "Iiiioooouuuu" ("That right leg of yours... HAS ALEADY BECOME MINE!") said Senme loudly and insanely. "What..." said the Massacrer as he looked at his right leg and saw the red eye-like symbol on it! "...is this?" he continued. "Iiiiioooouuurrraaaaa" said Senme ("Everything has a certain "sovereignty" to it! Underlings are controlled by their leaders! Citizens are controlled by their Kings! Clouds are controlled by the wind! Moonlight is controlled by the Sun!"), as Yamix was standing at the peak of his mountain and watching what was happening at that very moment, while Ryuumaru was also in his office, watching his computer screen, which was displaying the fight between the Massacrer and Senme, which was taking place right now. At the same time, a strong wind came by, and the Massacrer's cloak and Senme's feathers were blowing in the wind, which also rapidly blew some clouds covering the sky away, and then a large cloud got blown right in front of the half-Moon in the sky, covering it. "Iiiioooouuuuu" ("The fifty eyes on my feathers are not just the same eyes as those of any ordinary peacock! The ability of these eyes... called "Armor"... allows them to steal the "sovereignty" of whatever they see! Now that that right leg is no longer under your control, you can no longer even walk or stand in your own will!") Senme continued, and then the Massacrer's right leg moved forward against his will! Then each of the fourty nine eyes on Senme's feathers other than the one which had glowed red before each looked at a piece of large rock on the ground, each of which was broken off the mountain where Yamix was on by the lanslide caused by the earthquake and explosion of lightning which happened before, and then a red eye-like symbol appeared on each of those rocks! "Iioooo" ("You're finished!") said Senme then, smirking sinisterly as each of the fourty nine rocks with the red eye-like symbol on them all got lifted from the ground! After that, the rocks all went flying towards the Massacrer from all directions at huge speed! But then the Massacrer extended his metal scorpion tail out of his back, and then he swung his tail around himself at blinding speed, smashing up all the rocks flying at him to pieces! "Iiiioouu" ("That tail is annoying...") said Senme, as the red eye-like symbol on all the rocks dissapeared after they got destroyed, and then one of the eyes on Senme's feathers glowed red! After that, a red eye-like symbol appeared on the Massacrer's tail, and the Massacrer gasped upon noticing that! "Iuuu" ("Die!") Senme shouted excitedly and insanely as the Massacrer's tail got extended in front of the Massacrer himself, and then the sharp tip of the tail turned around and lunged at the Massacrer's fast, but the Massacrer quickly reacted and grabbed the tail with both hands, stopping the tail cold, although the tail was slowly overpowering the Massacrer's hands and was getting closer and closer to his face! "This ability... so it's what you used to take control of my dark energy on two instances before..." said the Massacrer as he was trying to overpower his own tail, and prevent it from stabbing his face! "Iooouuu" ("That is correct") said Senme, and then he looked at the Massacrer's tail. After that, the Massacrer felt his tail pushing much harder against him than before! "You hurled fourty nine rocks at me before. On your feathers, there are a total of fifty eyes, and one of them was used to take control of my left leg. So it's just as I thought... each of those fifty eyes... can take control of no more than a single target at a time" said the Massacrer. "Iiiiiooou" ("Hehehehehehe... Excellent analyzation skills... But too bad, in this situation they ain't gonna be of any use!") said Senme as he made the Massacrer's tail push even harder towards the Massacrer's face, and now the tip of the tail was less than five centimeters from the Massacrer's face! "So your ability is to steal the sovereignty of other objects..." said the Massacrer, as the cloud covering the Moon faded away, and now the moonlight shined upon the land again. Very well. Then I shall personally take the sovereignty... of your entire being" said the Massacrer, and then his own shadow, created by the moonlight, changed shape and extended fast towards Senme! "Iuu" ("What!") said Senme, widening his eyes as he saw that! Soon, the Massacrer's shadow connected to Senme's shadow, and then Senme found himself immobolized! "Iiiiiooouuu" ("I can't move... what the hell did you just do?") said Senme as he looked at the Massacrer angrily, while the Massacrer's tail stopped pushing against his head and dropped to the ground. Then the Massacrer turned his head to look at his left, and then Senme involuntarily did the same! Then the Massacrer turned his head to look at his right, and Senme also did the same against his own will! "Iuu" ("What!") said Senme, looking surprised. Then the Massacrer and Senme both turned their heads to face each other. "Shadow Bond. By manipulating the shape of my own shadow and connecting it to yours, a dark bond is created between you and I" said the Massacrer calmly. "Iuuuooo" ("A dark bond? What the hell?") said Senme. "With this dark bond being made, every single movement of mine shall also be performed by you" said the Massacrer as he struggled forward with his left leg, while dragging along his right leg, which he no longer had control of, and then Senme did exactly the same, and he gasped as that happened against his will! "Iiiiooouuu" ("Dammit! I have no control whatsoever over anything now... not even his right leg and tail, which I stole the sovereignty of before...") Senme thought desperately. "Basically, I now have absolute control over your entire body. The sovereignty of every part of you... your head, your feathers and your legs... now belong to none of than me" said the Massacrer, and Senme was gasping desperately. "Also, starting from the point when our shadows met, the dark bond that was created is not as simple as this. An additional effect of this bond... is that any pain or damage that I suffer are also experienced to their fullest effects by the victim of the bond" the Massacrer continued as he pulled a sharp stick out of his black cloak with his right hand, and Senme gasped loudly and widened his eyes as he looked at the stick, which the Massacrer then held upside down before him, pointing the sharp end of the stick straight at the part of his body where a person's heart would normally be found! "Iiiiiiooooooouuu!!!" ("You... You bastard! Don't tell me you're planning to kill yourself along with me! Exactly what honor would you have to need to resort to killing yourself in order to take me out?! Stop it! You're going to sacrifice yourself just to take out a Holy Creature who's not even of the Holy Elite rank?!") said Senme in fear and despair as he watched what the Massacrer was about to do! "Kill myself... in order to take you out... you say? For what reason do you come up with such conclusion?" said the Massacrer calmly, and then Senme widened his eyes a bit. "You are right that committing such act would be foolish on my part, for only the worst of all idiots would give up their dream which they had spent their entire life pursuing, when it is just about to be complete" the Massacrer continued, and then Senme gasped as he heard that! "Iuu" ("What?!") he said. "As a machine, I do not possess a heart like ordinary biological creatures. Basically, after my own body is impaled while one or more enemies are trapped in my Shadow Bond, only the victim... shall die" said the Massacrer. "Iooouuuu!!!" ("No! Stop! STOP!!") said Senme, looking shocked and desperate. The Massacrer then thrusted his sharp stick straight towards his own chest! To be continued ------------------- | |
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Chapter 97: To Terminate The Thievery of Sovereignty "Iiiiiooooaaarrrr!!!" Senme roared extremely loudly just as the Massacrer's sharp stick was less than a centimeter away from his chest, and immediately, Senme released a huge explosion of white spirit energy from his body, which was about the same size as the explosion of lightning he created earlier, although this explosion was far less destructive as it was not densely compressed with lightning like before. "What..." said the Massacrer then, as he stopped his stick before it stabbed into him, and then he lowered his stick, which he held with his left hand as he raised his head and looked at Senme, as a huge shockwave of white spirit energy radiated outward from him, shaking the whole atmosphere, enlightening a large area, cratering the ground below Senme's feet, and the spirit energy also blew straight into the Massacrer's face like an extremely strong wind! The Massacrer then guarded his face with his right arm, while his black cloak was blowing in the strong wind-like spirit energy. The energy then radiated straight outward, shaking much tall grass at the surrounding area. After a while, the explosion stopped, and much white spirit energy filled the atmosphere. The Massacrer then lowered his right arm, and he looked at where Senme was standing before. As the white spirit energy faded away, the Massacrer saw Senme. However, he also saw that his own shadow, which was connected to Senme's before, had now retreated back to him and reformed back to its original shape! "Iiiiiooouuuaaaaa" said Senme ("Hhhahahahahahaha! That was close! You almost got me with that! But it's no more now! The sovereignty of this body... had completely returned back to me! Hahahahahahaaha!") loudly and insanely. "I see. So you used your spirit energy to cancel out the dark bond I created" said the Massacrer calmly. "Iiiiiooouuuu" said Senme ("That's right... You told me that you were going to kill me and absorb my powers! But too bad you now failed! The one who's dyin' is you! The Massacrer of ChaosGraveyard!"). "Is that so..." said the Massacrer as he lowered his head to look at his own right leg, and he saw that the red eye-like symbol was no longer on his leg as before! "According to your words, I can no longer kill you. How ironic considering that in saving yourself, you've just returned back to me... my ability to kill you" said the Massacrer as he slowly raised his head to look at Senme again, while he took one step forward towards Senme, while he raised his metal scorpion tail, which also no longer had a red eye-like symbol on it anymore and swung it around in the air at the same time, before pointing the tip of the tail at Senme! "Iiiiiooooouuuuu uuuuu" said Senme ("So you noticed it immediately... you're not as stupid as I thought! That's right... each of the fifty eyes on my feathers must be infused with a certain amount of my own spirit energy in order for them to be able to steal the sovereignty of other objects and maintain control of them. That dark bond you created... it took all the spirit energy I had in my body just to break free from it. Basically, in order to escape from your bond, I needed all of my spirit energy, including the ones infused in the eyes on my feathers. As soon as those spirit particles were detached from my eyes, they no longer maintained their sovereignty over your right leg and tail. Just as the sovereignty of this body returned back to me, the sovereignty of your leg and tail returned back to you. But in the end, your plan to kill me with that technique failed! Although it would've resulted in only my own death in the end otherwise, I'm glad that your intention with that technique wasn't to commit suicide…"). "What?" said the Massacrer. "Iiiioooouuu" ("If you did actually intend to attempt to take down a Holy Creature of my level by going to such lengths, then with such attitude, you cannot be acknowledged as a truly virtuous warrior. And if that is so, you'll only greatly disappoint the only one who’s truly interested in fighting you…") said Senme. The Massacrer then stood calmly and remained silent for a few seconds. "And... who is that?" he then said. Then Senme turned his head to look to the right, and then he looked upward, at the top of the mountain with the huge waterfall coming down from it, although Senme could not see very high up that mountain, as some thick dark clouds were covering the mountain's summit and spinning around it, as if a huge storm was happening up there! "Iiiiiiooouuuuuuhhhh" Senme then said ("My boss... the one who reigns over all bird-type Holy Creatures in Heaven… He is the one who lies ahead… at that very top of this seemingly infinite mountain… Just like you apparently in your planet, he is widely feared amongst the beings of Heaven"). After that, he turned his head to face the Massacrer again. "Iiiiooouuu" he continued ("He is… the cruelest… the most sadistic… the most ruthless… and definitely one of the strongest of Heaven’s Ten Holy Elites… The Great Legendary Phoenix of the Mugen Mountain… Lord Yamix"). "Yamix, a Holy Elite, is it?" said the Massacrer, as he slowly turned his head and raised it to look at the top of the same mountain which Senme had looked at before. "Very well then. He’s just signed his death contract" he continued as he looked back at Senme. "Iiiiiooouuuuuu ruuuhhhhh" said Senme ("Don’t get overconfident. Should I inform you that my power… is but an insignificant amount compared to that of Lord Yamix? Even if you do defeat me, there is no hope for you to escape your inevitable death! For you… are the very prey who Lord Yamix had set his eyes on! Ever since you entered Heaven and defeated those Holy Creatures you first encountered, your destiny had been decided within the power and presence of Lord Yamix in this world! Even if you do defeat me and absorb each and every single one of my abilities, you won’t even stand a one in a billion chance before Lord Yamix!"). Immediately after that, the Massacrer quickly pointed his right hand at Senme! Right after that, the Massacrer's shadow changed shape again, and then the shadow changed into the shape of a hand and extended along the ground towards Senme at extreme speed! "Iiiiuu" ("Heh!") said Senme, smiling confidently as he jumped back and avoided the shadow hand, which then grabbed onto large rock on the ground! "Such a ridiculous exagerration... Well, even if his power level is as high as you claim, that matters not. For in the end, all of his powers will simply lie within my hands" said the Massacrer, and then he clenched his right fist! As that happened, the shadow hand grabbing onto the rock also clenched its fist, and then the rock got crushed in an explosion of dust and smaller rocks! "Iiiiooouuhhh" ("If your hands can reach far enough to even touch Lord Yamix, then maybe") said Senme, as he watched as the dust from the explosion before faded away. Then the shadow hand extending from the Massacrer's shadow started retreating back towards the Massacrer. "Iiiiioooouughhh" ("So you realized it, eh? You can only extend your shadow at a certain speed... a speed that is lower than mine! As long as that holds true, that hand cannot even reach me, let alone Lord Yamix!") said Senme loudly, as he watched the shadow hand retreat back to the Massacrer, who's shadow then reformed back to its original shape! "Iiiiiiioooouuuuu" he continued ("As such, you can no longer steal the sovereignty of this body! However!!!"), and then he quickly spread his feathers outwards violently, showing his fifty eyes to the Massacrer again! "Iiiiiiooouuuhhh" he then said ("My "Amor" does not require any speed whatsoever to take control of its targets, for sight is instantaneous!"), and then he raised his head and looked up at the stars of the night sky! "Iiiiioooouuuuuu" ("The stars above us may be light years away, but that ain't changing the fact that it takes no time for them to be reached by our lines of vision!") he then continued, and then he looked at the Massacrer again with an insane look in his eyes! "Iiiiiooouuhhh" he then said ("You're finished! Your shadow is far too slow for me, while the sight of these eyes are beyond the dimensions of slow and fast! This fight for control is already over!") as he looked at the Massacrer with all fifty of the eyes on his feathers! "Iioo" he then said ("I stand victorious!") as all fifty of the eyes on his feathers glowed red temporarily, but just as that happened, the Massacrer calmly said "Veil of Darkness" as he surrounded himself with some special dark energy! As that happened, the Massacrer suddenly made himself invisible, and then fifty red eye-like symbols appeared not on the Massacrer's body, but on a large rock behind the Massacrer! "Iuu" ("What!") said Senme, widenening his eyes as he saw that! "The one who is finished is you, Senme. Even though you had escaped from the grasp of my shadow, you shall not escape the death that I had intended for you" said the Massacrer, who was invisible, and then he moved at blinding speed with Sonido! Just as Senme saw a small cloud of dust appear at where the Massacrer was standing before, he immediately radiated much spirit energy from his body, and the spirit energy filled the whole atmosphere, shaking it and also lifting some small rocks from the ground! Then the Massacrer reappeared right in front of Senme, although his body was still invisible, and then he tried to stab Senme straight through the heart with the sharp stick he held with his left hand, with which he tried to stab himself with before! However, Senme used Instant Movement and moved backwards a huge distance in less than a second, avoiding the attack! The Massacrer then lowered his stick and looked at Senme. "You managed to dodge an attack from me while I was invisible and using Sonido at the same time? Quite an impressive feat of reaction speed" said the Massacrer. "Iiiiiooooouuuhhhhh ioooooouuuuu!" said Senme ("We beings of Heaven have the ability to radiate spirit energy from our bodies. As long as we can do that, we can easily detect any invisible enemies within the range of our spirit energy as we can sense any empty spaces within the energy. And as long as that holds true, invisibility techniques are generally useless against us. In this situation, however, you're quite clever. Although my spirit energy allows me to tell exactly where you are, my eyes still cannot physically see you. As such, my Amor can no longer steal your sovereignty, as their lines of sight will simply pass straight through you... This battle of control... it seems that I couldn't win it in the end... But! The same also holds true for you, am I right? After all, the reason why invisible beings cannot be seen by the eye is simply because they allow light waves to pass through their bodies! And since light waves pass straight through you, you no longer have a shadow to extend! Basically, because you've made yourself invisible, you've just effectively shut down both of our abilities to steal the sovereignty of each other!"). "I see. In that case, this ridiculous battle for control had just come to an end" said the Massacrer. "Iiiiioooouuu" said Senme ("Heh! That's fine with me... I'm gettin' sick of this as well. Now then, how 'bout we give up on gaining control of each other's bodies, and we'll just fight 'til the death head-on?!"), and then the Massacrer simply stood still silently, as his black cloak and Senme's feathers were blowing in some gentle breeze passing by, although the wind felt as if it was getting stronger and stronger, and it was eventually shaking some nearby tall grass! "Iiiiooouuu" ("Not gonna bother reply? Then I'll simply take that as a "yes"!") said Senme, and then the large rock which Senme's fifty eyes gained control of before suddenly got lifted up from the ground, and then it floated high up in the air, before it came crashing down straight towards the Massacrer with huge speed and force! But the Massacrer extended his metal scorpion tail out of his back and wrapped the tail all around the rock, containing it and stopping it cold in the air, although the huge downward force of the rock created a massive crater below the Massacrer's feet, and a huge amount of wind radiated from the crater as that happened, blowing the feathers of Senme, who was watching that! "Now that we can no longer take control of each other, you decide to challenge me to a direct battle? If that's the case..." said the Massacrer, and then he squeezed the large rock hard with his tail, shattering the rock to many tiny pieces, and then all the fifty red eye-like symbols which were on the rock before dissapeared after it got destroyed! After that, the Massacrer slammed his tail hard on the ground, creating a small earthquake before retreating it back into his body! "...I'll just kill you... with my full power" he then continued as he threw the sharp stick he was holding straight at Senme's head, but Senme moved his head to the side, avoiding the stick, before grabbing it as it was flying past him with his beak! However, while Senme was busy dealing with the sharp stick, the Massacrer quickly raised both his hands and pointed both his palms directly up at the sky! After that, a tiny cannon appeared on each of his palms, and right as that happened, the Massacrer with a fast move, pointed both his palms straight at Senme and shot out a huge stream of extremely hot flames travelling with huge pressure out of each cannon at him! "Iiiioouuhhh!" Senme then roared as he shot out some small streams of flames out of each eye on his feathers towards the Massacrer! Each stream of fire blasted from Senme was much weaker than the streams of flames blasted by the Massacrer, but Senme had blasted fifty streams of flames in total, and each of those small streams created one large stream, which had a power that was equal to that of the Massacrer's flames! Senme's flames and the Massacrer's flames then collided together and started pushing against each with huge pressure, and the huge fire lit up a large surrounding area! "Iiiiooo" ("Hehehe...") Senme laughed as he looked into the flames while still blasting much flames from his feathers, and at the same time much orange light was radiating from the flames and shining on Senme's face. "Now, what will you do?" said the Massacrer, while still blasting two huge streams of devastating flames forward, as he looked directly into the flames. To be continued ------------------- | |
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Chapter 98: The Holy Creatures' Powers The Electabots, Magmabots, Cythers and Silverducks were still in the ice cave, fighting with the knight, the moth, the muscular creature and the skeleton. "Haaaaa!" a Silverduck screamed his battle cry as he charged at the skeleton and tried to Ice Punch him, but the skeleton did a horizontal smash with his huge, spiky mace, crushing the Silverduck's head, and then much dark energy spouted from the Silverduck's neck as he fell dead! "Mega Kick!" shouted another Silverduck, and then he jumped at the skeleton from behind and kicked him hard straight in the back, shattering him into many pieces of bones, and the skeleton also dropped his mace onto the ground after he got shattered to pieces of bones! "That's one down... now for the rest..." said the Silverduck who kicked the skeleton, as he took some deep breaths while turning his head to look at the knight, the moth and the muscular creature. "That knight seems to be have good defense. Then I'll take him down with a stronger offense!" said another Silverduck, as he picked up the skeleton's mace and charged at the knight with it! "Haaaaa!" he shouted as he jumped at the knight and tried to slam him with the mace! "Hmm?" said the knight as he turned to look at the Silverduck, and then he effortlessly blocked the Silverduck's mace attack with his sword! "What...!" said the Silverduck, widening his eyes before the knight kicked him hard straight in the stomach! "Ugh!" screamed the Silverduck as he coughed out some dark energy, and then he got sent flying straight into a wall, cratering it! At the same time, many Magmabots took in some deep breaths before blasting huge bursts of flames at the moth from all directions, surrounding him completely in flames, which melted much of the cave! But, when the flames faded, the moth was still seen hovering in the air, unharmed! "Impossible! How could that moth be completely unharmed by fire?!" said a Magmabot, as they all had their eyes widened! "This moth... his entire body... especially his wings seems to be infused with much compressed spirit energy... and on top of that, it seems that his wings are vibrating at an unbelievably high rate..." said another Magmabot. "So he used his spirit energy to protect himself from the fire? That's impossible!" said another Magmabot. Then the moth suddenly opened his mouth wide, while his yellow eye turned red temporarily! "What..." said the Magmabots, and then the moth sprayed a huge amount of purple acid out of his mouth, hitting many Magmabots, who screamed loudly as their body got melted by the purple acid, which were extremely corrossive, to the point where even the ground was melting when the acid fell on it! "Wh...What the hell is this??!" said a Magmabot in fear and shock as he looked and saw many other Magmabots melting in the purple acid! Then another Magmabot suddenly lunged at the moth from behind! "Take this!" said the Magmabot as he Cross Chopped the moth from behind, chopping off both his wings, and then the wingless moth landed feet-first on the ground, while the Magmabot landed in front of the moth, with his back turned to him! "How's that?!" said the Magmabot, smiling. "B-Behind you!" said another Magmabot as he pointed behind the Magmabot who just de-winged the moth. "Hm?" said that Magmabot, as he turned around and looked at the moth, who's eyes turned red temporarily again, with his mouth wide open, before crunching the Magmabot in half with his black fangs! "Aaaarrghhh!" the Magmabot screamed in pain as his body got cut clean in half by the moth's fangs! "Dammit!" said another Magmabot. "He's lost his wings. He's on the ground! Finish him!" said another Magmabot, and then he and some other remaining Magmabots blasted some hot streams of flames out of their mouths at the moth, trying to finish him while he was on the ground! However, the moth ran away fast with his six quick legs and avoided the flames, which set a large area of the cave on fire and melting much ice! "What the..." said a Magmabot, turning his head to follow the moth who was running! "Fast!" said another Magmabot as he stopped breathing flames. Then the moth ran a circle around the group of Magmabots, before running fast into the group and tackling many Magmabots hard, knocking them to the ground! "Gah!" the Magmabots screamed. At the same time, five Cythers flew at the muscular creature and they all tried to slash him vertically with both of their bladed arms, but the muscular creature blocked the attack horizontally with his guandao, although the huge force of all the Cythers' attacks created a deep crater below the muscular creature's feet! "Uuuur!" said the muscular creature then, as he pushed his guandao extremely hard against the machines, pushing them back a bit, before doing a 360 spin with his guandao drawn out, smashing all but one of the Cythers horizontally with his guandao with huge force, knocking them away, while one of the Cythers backflipped away from the muscular creature just in time to dodge the attack! But after completing his 360 spin, the muscular creature then started thrusting his guandao at the Cyther repeatedly and rapidly! The Cyther blocked each thrust one by one with his two bladed arms, and each thrust created a spark as it collided with the one of that Cyther's blades. However, the Cyther was getting pushed back on his feet with each thrust he blocked, while the muscular creature was walking forward as he was pushing the Cyther backwards, until the Cyther was backed against a wall! "Rargh!" the muscular creature then screamed his battle cry, as he elbow smashed the Cyther in the face, destroying him instantly and smashing him through the wall he was back against, smashing a hole through that wall and then the remains of the Cyther ended up at the other side of the wall, outside the cave! While this was happening, the knight was slowly approaching a large group of Electabots. "Haa!" the Electabots all screamed as they all used Thunderbolt, unleashing insane amount of electricities out of their bodies towards the knight, and the electricity surrounded him completely and zapped him with much power, while the knight stopped walking as that happened! But after being shocked for a few seconds, the Electabots stopped, and the knight just continued walking towards the Electabots as before, while some electricity harmlessly around his body! "What?! No effect?!" said an Electabot, looking surprised. "Die! Zap Cannon!" shouted another, and then he shaped a ball of compressed electricity in his hands and fired it at the knight, who simply used his shield and deflected the blast, sending it at another Electabot and knocking him down. "Haa!" the Electabot who fired the Zap Cannon before then charged at the knight. "Hm!" said the knight, as he raised his great blade and slammed it down at the Electabot who charged close to him, but the Electabot rolled to the side and avoided the attack, which split the ground open and created a small fissure! "Hm?" said the knight then, as he watched the Electabot rolling to the side and just avoided his vertical sword slam, and then the Electabot rolled in a semi-circle line, ending up behind the knight! From there, the Electabot jumped up and Cross Chopped the knight in the back! The knight was unharmed by the attack, but the Electabot's Cross Chop hit some red ropes at the back of the knight's armor, which held the knight's armor together, and after the Electabot Cross Chopped those ropes, they were destroyed, and then the knight's white armor fell off his body after the ropes were destroyed, revealing that the knight had a gorilla-like body with light brown fur under the armor! "Hm...?!" said the knight as he looked around and saw that his armor just fell off his body! "Good job! You removed his armor! Now we can kill him!" said another Electabot, and then they all screamed their battle cries as they lunged at the knight! "Urrugh!" said the knight then, sounding a bit annoyed as he quickly chopped five Electabots in half with his sword! "What the..." said the other Electabots, as they jumped away from the knight, who then started running fast towards the Electabots and started slaughtering them with extreme ease with his sword, which he was now swinging around much faster than before! "Impossible!" said an Electabot then as he jumped up and dodged a horizontal slash from the knight, and he also gave the knight an uppercut to the chin as he jumped up, removing the knight's helm and revealing that the knight had a head resembling that of a kangaroo's! The Electabot then jumped over the knight and landed behind him. "Now that his armor's removed... he's significantly faster than before..." said the Electabot as he took some deep breaths, while turning his head to look at the knight standing behind him with the corner of his right eye. Meanwhile, a Magmabot was standing back and watching the huge battle which was taking place inside the cave, and he looked nervous. "Dammit... We may have been able to take out that skeleton, but that's 'cause he's slow. The other three are so much faster than him that we can't take them out the same way... what can we do...?" the Magmabot thought as he watched as the muscular creature was skillfully blocking many Cythers' slash attacks with his guandao, while the knight was running around fast and slaughtering many Electabots with his sword, and the wingless moth was running around fast and avoiding many fire attacks from the Magmabots, while tackling them occasionally. Then suddenly, he noticed a small whirlwind happening at a location! Then he looked there, and he saw that the whirlwind was happening at the location where the pieces of the skeleton was after he got destroyed by a Silverduck before! The many pieces of bones on the ground got lifted into the air by the whirlwind, and then all the pieces of bones reconnected together, and the skeleton was reformed! "What! He reformed?" said the Magmabot, unable to believe his eyes, while many Silverducks were also looking at the reformed skeleton with their eyes widened! However, when the skeleton reformed, he was not holding his spiky mace, as the mace was too far away from him when he reformed. Without a weapon, the skeleton then pulled some bones out of his own body and used them as a nunchaku, smashing up many Silverducks with it as he swung the nunchaku-like bones around! "Dammit! So it's not gonna be so easy after all..." said the Magmabot. Then sudenly, he heard many loud shouts coming from behind him. "Fire Blast!" the voices all shouted, and then the Magmabot turned around and saw many other Magmabots blasting some powerful shots of flames out of their mouths at the moth, who ran away and avoided all the attacks, which created a large crater in the ground and filling it with fire. After running away from the flames, the moth then suddenly spouted some wings out of his back, which looked exactly the same as the wings of his which a Magmabot had Cross Chopped off his back before, and the Magmabots all gasped as they saw that!"He can regenerate his wings...?" said a Magmabot, looking surprised with his eyes widened, and then the moth jumped off the ground and took off into the air again with his regrown wings! "Iiia!" the moth then made a loud noise, as his round yellow eye turned red temporarily, before he dived at a Cyther and tried to crush his head with his fangs, but the Cyther quickly flew back and avoided the attack. "Shit! So that moth's wings returned, while the skeleton's also reformed... Ever since we began fighting these four, we've been getting slaughtered rapidly, while the only thing we managed to do was remove that knight's armor!" said the Cyther as he landed back on his feet and slid back a bit, while he placed his right bladed arm onto the ground to scrape against it to create more friction in order to stop his slide faster. But just as he stopped sliding, he widened his eyes and gasped as he heard the sound of a footstep right behind him! Then he turned around and saw the knight standing right behind him! "Iiiour!" screamed the knight his battle cry, as he raised his huge blade and swung it at the Cyther, who immediately turned around and formed an "x" with his two bladed arms, blocking the attack, which created a huge explosion of sparks on impact! "Arrgh!" the Cyther screamed as he felt the knight's attack's impact on his arms, which was so powerful that the Cyther got sent flying for a huge distance across the cave before falling to the ground and slid on his body a bit before stopping. The other machines all stood all over the room, with their eyes widened in fear and disbelief at the power of the knight, the moth, the skeleton and the muscular creature, who were many times stronger than the machines! At the same time, the Cyther, who was on the ground, looked up and saw the knight charging fast at him! "Shit!" said the Cyther as he closed his eyes, thinking this was his end. "Urugh!" screamed the knight's battle cry as he ran up to the Cyther, raised his sword and slammed it straight down at him with huge force, but instead of hitting the Cyther, the knight saw that his sword collided with another sword, which was held by a gigantic metal hand, and an explosion of sparks happened just as the knight's sword collided with the other sword! "Hm?" said the knight, as he raised his head and looked up at something which was creating a huge shadow over him! At the same time, the Cyther had heard a metallic sound caused by the two swords, colliding together, and then he slowly opened his eyes and saw the knight's sword being blocked by another blade, while some fading sparks were raining from where the two swords had collided! "Y-You're..." said the Cyther then, as he raised his head and saw a gigantic steel soldier standing behind him, and he was leaning forward and stretching his right arm forward, which was holding the sword which he had used to guard the Cyther from the knight's attack! "...Giant Soldier of Steel..." the Cyther continued. To be continued ------------------- | |
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Chapter 99: Giant to The Rescue! Giant Soldier of Steel was standing behind a Cyther, and with his sword he was blocking an attack from the knight's sword, which would have otherwise hit the Cyther. "Mmm?" said the muscular creature, as he turned his head to look at Giant Soldier of Steel, while all the machines, the moth and the skeleton also turned to face him. "Giant Soldier of Steel!" said an Electabot excitedly as he looked at Giant Soldier of Steel. "Hey everyone! I sensed some strong spirit energy radiating from this cave, so I came and decided to check out what was going on in here! You guys seem to be losing badly to these creatures, eh?" said Giant Soldier of Steel. "These enemies are tough... We managed to slaughter dozens of Holy Creatures in this cave with relative ease, but that was up until these four came in and we could barely do anything to them!" said a Magmabot. "I see... Well then, you weaklings don't need to worry... for I, the great Giant Soldier of Steel, will make up for it by crushing them myself!" said Giant Soldier of Steel as he pushed his sword hard against the knight, sending the knight sliding back on his feet for a huge distance before stopping. "Good... we were starting to lose hope in this battle, but then you reminded us that we're not the only ones here! In times of danger, we'll be saved by the more powerful machines who came here to Heaven with us, such as you!" said a Silverduck. "Be careful, Giant Soldier of Steel! These guys are incredibly tough!" said a Cyther. "Heh! Hahahahahaha! In front of my power... I wonder just how tough they could possibly be!!!" Giant Soldier of Steel shouted loudly as he suddenly jumped high up in the air, over the Cyther who was on the ground in front of him, and then as he landed he thrusted his sword diagonally downward at the knight, trying to crush him with it, but the knight sidestepped and barely avoided the attack, which hit the ground and raised a huge cloud of dust, and also sent many rocks flying out of the ground towards all directions! "Heh!" Giant Soldier of Steel then laughed as he looked the knight in the eyes. "Behind you!" shouted a Magmabot then as he pointed behind Giant Soldier of Steel! "Hm?" said Giant Soldier of Steel as he turned around and saw the moth flying in the air right before his face, and the moth had his fangs wide open, while his single eye was red, and he was about to bite Giant Soldier of Steel! "Get lost!" said Giant Soldier of Steel as he swung his left fist horizontally at the moth, who flew higher and avoided the attack. Just then, the muscular creature ran up to Giant Soldier of Steel from the side! "Huuuuiiyah!" screamed the muscular creature his battle cry as he raised his guandao high and tried to slam Giant Soldier of Steel's left foot with it, but Giant Soldier of Steel noticed it in the last second and stepped to the side and avoided the attack, which cratered the ground and raised a cloud of dust! "You ant!" said Giant Soldier of Steel as he slammed his sword down hard at the muscular creature, who blocked with his guandao! "Giant Soldier of Steel! Be careful! That guy's got incredible strength!" said a Cyther as he looked at Giant Soldier of Steel. "He's got muscles indeed..." said Giant Soldier of Steel, as he felt the muscular creature pushing against his sword with considerable force with his guandao! "But I wonder just how useful they would be... AFTER I REMOVE HIS ARM!" Giant Soldier of Steel continued as he pushed his sword extremely hard down at the muscular creature's guandao, chopping it in half, and then the muscular creature widened his eyes as Giant Soldier of Steel's sword kept going and sliced him deeply in the right shoulder, chopping off his right arm in the process! "Graaaargh!" screamed the muscular creature in pain, as a huge volcanic eruption of blood spouted from his right shoulder, and then he immediately dropped his guandao and placed his left hand on his right shoulder, while he fell on the ground and started screaming loudly, while much tears also spouted from his eyes as he was screaming and crying! As that was happening, much blood was leaking out of his right shoulder, and then the muscular creature was eventually surrounded by a pool of his own blood! While that was happening, the skeleton had picked up his mace again, and then he inserted his nunchaku-like bones back into his body, and then faced Giant Soldier of Steel's direction and started spinning around with his mace drawn out while heading towards the giant! "Hagh!" screamed Giant Soldier of Steel his battle cry then as he did an upward diagonally slash at the skeleton with his sword, shattering the skeleton into pieces of bones! "Giant Soldier of Steel! That skeleton's not dead yet! He's gonna reform!" said a Silverduck. "Is that so... In that case I'll see how he'll reform AFTER I CRUSH HIS HEAD!" said Giant Soldier of Steel, and then he stomped on the skeleton's skull, which was on the ground and crushed it to pieces! "Uuuraarghh!" an inhuman cry was then heard coming from the skeleton's pieces, as an explosion of powerful ghostly green spirit energy radiated from the skeleton's skull, and then Giant Soldier of Steel stepped back as that happened, and after the explosion faded away, all the pieces of bones which were lying all over the ground disintigrated into some purple energy! "Ha!" shouted Giant Soldier of Steel, and then he suddenly heard some loud noises sounding like a missile coming from behind him! Then he quickly turned around and saw the moth divebombing at him at huge speed, blasting much flames out of the end of his abdomen and launching himself fast at Giant Soldier of Steel like a missile! "Guh...!" said Giant Soldier of Steel as he quickly raised his blade and blocked the moth's attack with the flat side of his sword! However, the moth's divebomb had so huge force, which was made even more powerful due to the flames he was using to launch himself forward, that Giant Soldier of Steel was getting pushed back on his feet by the moth, who kept flying forward, pushing Giant Soldier of Steel back, and Giant Soldier of Steel was carving two small trails on the ground with his feet as he slid along the cave until he crashed back-first hard into a wall, cracking it, and then many huge rocks started falling from the ceiling as the whole cave shook! "Watch out!" said a Silverduck then, as he and many other machines ran around the cave to avoid getting hit by the falling rocks. "Goddammit! You're pissing me off!" said Giant Soldier of Steel as he still had his sword raised and blocking the moth, who was still blasting much flames out of the end of his abdomen and pushing against Giant Soldier of Steel's sword with huge force! After a while, the moth pointed his abdomen at Giant Soldier of Steel and blasted much flames which engulfed him at point-blank range! "Gahgh!" Giant Soldier of Steel screamed as much intense flames engulfed his entire body, while the moth also launched himself backwards away from Giant Soldier of Steel with his flames! "Die!" Giant Soldier of Steel then shouted as he raised his sword high before charging at the moth and chopped his left wing off with a downward hack, while Giant Soldier of Steel's entire body was still being in engulfed in flames! "Gargh!" he continued as he then did an upward slash and chopped off the moth's right wing, and then the moth fell to the ground, on his feet, while his two wings which were chopped off by Giant Soldier of Steel before fell slowly to the ground on both sides of the moth as they were engulfed in flames, since they were caught on fire when Giant Soldier of Steel's sword, which was on fire made contact with them before. "A-Amazing..." said a Magmabot as he was watching. Then the moth made a screeching noise as he ran fast at Giant Soldier of Steel's right foot and tried to bite him with his fangs, while his single round eye glowed red temporarily! "Hah!" shouted Giant Soldier of Steel then as he raised his right foot before the moth could bite it, and then he stomped on the moth with that foot, squashing him! "Hmhahahahahaha!" Giant Soldier of Steel then laughed quietly as he turned his head just enough to see the knight, who was standing behind him with the corner of his right eye, while he had a smile of insanity on his face! As he did that, the knight stood and looked at him, while at that moment, a cold breeze also came in from the entrance of the cave, blowing out all the fire surrounding Giant Soldier of Steel's body, while Giant Soldier of Steel continued his laughter, smile and pose as the flames on his body were gradually being blown out! "Iiioourgh!" the knight then screamed his battle cry, as he swung his sword horizontally at Giant Soldier of Steel's direction once, before charging at him fast! The knight, who only reached up to Giant Soldier of Steel's stomach charged at the huge machine standing before him, and then he jumped high up in the air and tried to slam his sword down at Giant Soldier of Steel's head, but Giant Soldier of Steel blocked the attack with his sword horizontally! "Heh!" Giant Soldier of Steel laughed as he looked the knight in the eyes, while the ground below his feet was also cratered by the force of the knight's attack! Then Giant Soldier of Steel, who was holding his sword with his right hand, delivered a huge and heavy punch at the knight with his huge left fist, which immediately sent the knight flying away fast until he hit a wall, creating a hole through it, and then he ended up in another chamber of the cave on the other side of the wall! The knight also dropped his sword immediately as he got hit by the punch. Then the knight fell on the ground and started sliding fast on his body, while raising a huge cloud of snow as he slid through the ice and snow covered floor of the cave! The knight slid at huge speed, and he was not being slowed down much, as the icy ground did not have much friction! The knight slid and crashed into a wall at the back of the chamber where he was in, creating a hole through it, and then he ended up in another icy chamber behind that wall! He then continued sliding and finally crashed into a large, ice-covered rock in that chamber, shattering it and then he stopped sliding. The knight then lied down on the ground for a few seconds, before he got back up and started charging at Giant Soldier of Steel again! While that was happening, Giant Soldier of Steel looked and saw a huge cloud of snow before him, and when they faded away, he saw the knight charging at him bare-handed! "Haha!" Giant Soldier of Steel then laughed as he bent down and picked up the knight's sword, which the knight dropped when he got punched before, and then he did a low horizontal sword sweep at the knight with the knight's sword as the knight drew close. "Ioh!" the knight then screamed his battle cry as he jumped back and avoided the attack, and then he raised his arms and straightened his fingers, as if he was doing kung-fu, while he also started bouncing on his feet, as his if he was boxing! "You're tough, I'll give ya that!" Giant Soldier of Steel then said, as he slammed his own sword at the knight, who jumped to the side and avoided the attack, which caused a huge crack in the ground! Then, while Giant Soldier of Steel was left open, the knight jumped at the huge machine and karate chopped him in the face! "Argh!" screamed Giant Soldier of Steel as he fell over by the attack, shaking the whole cave as his heavy body slammed hard onto the ground, and many rocks fell from the ceiling as that happened, shattering as they fell on the ground! Then Giant Soldier of Steel did a backward roll and quickly got up from the ground, and he also slid back a bit after he got up due to the low friction of the icy ground. "You bastard! I'll kill you!" shouted Giant Soldier of Steel angrily then, as he did a low horizontal sweep at the knight with his own sword, but the knight jumped up and avoided the attack, and then he tried to deliver a Hi Jump Kick at Giant Soldier of Steel's head while in mid-air, but Giant Soldier of Steel blocked the attack with the flat side of the knight's sword, and then the knight used to recoil of the kick to launch himself back, and then he landed on his feet and slid back a bit. Then Giant Soldier of Steel did a huge diagonally downward stab at the knight with his own sword, but the knight did three backflips in a row away and avoided the attack, which smashed a massive crater in the ground! "Begone!" shouted Giant Soldier of Steel as he threw the knight's sword straight at the knight like a kunai, but the knight, who was still bouncing on his feet deflected the sword away with his bare hand! However, while the knight was busy doing that, Giant Soldier of Steel did a huge horizontal slash at the knight with his own sword, cutting the knight deeply in the chest! "Aaaaaaarrrghhhh!" the knight then screamed as he got sent flying by the slash, while a huge amount of blood erupted from his chest! The knight then crashed back-first onto a wall with such huge force that the entire wall collapsed and buried the knight alive under its rubbles, and rasing a huge cloud of dust! "You did it, Giant Soldier of Steel!" said a Silverduck then, as he looked at Giant Soldier of Steel in amazement! "He actually killed all four of those Holy Creatures, who all of us together had so much trouble dealing with?" said a Cyther in amazement as well. "Let's go" said Giant Soldier of Steel then, as he placed his sword over his shoulder and started walking towards one of the many tunnels connecting to the chamber of the cave where he was in, and he was approaching the tunnel at the center. "Giant Soldier of Steel? Where are you going?" asked an Electabot. Then Giant Soldier of Steel turned his head to look at the Electabot with his right eye and said "Our goal is to kill everyone here in Heaven. And haven't you noticed that deep inside this cave, there's an insanely strong spirit energy? Someone extremely powerful is at the depths of this cave. He'll need to be taken care of sooner or later". "Now that you mention it, I do feel a powerful presence deep within that tunnel..." said a Magmabot. Then suddenly, the whole cave started shaking again! "Hm?" said Giant Soldier of Steel, and then suddenly many loud familiar roars were heard, and then more Holy Creatures came out of the four tunnels in the cave other than the one Giant Soldier of Steel was approaching! These Holy Creatures were more of the leopard-like creatures, ice bats, polar bears and woolly mammoths who the Electabots, Magmabots, Silverducks and Cythers had been battling before the knight, the moth, the muscular creature and the skeleton had showed up! "More Holy Creatures?" said Giant Soldier of Steel as he turned around to look at the Holy Creatures, looking eager to fight them. "Don't worry, Giant Soldier of Steel! We'll take care of these guys! After all, we killed dozens of them before! They're way weaker than those four you took care of!" said a Magmabot, as he and all the other machines looked at the Holy Creatures, ready to fight them. "Alright, in that case I'll leave these weaklings to you, while I'll get that guy at the depths of this cave!" said Giant Soldier of Steel, and then he turned around and walked into the tunnel he was heading at before, while the other machines all screamed some battle cries as they charged at the Holy Creatures, who all roared and screeched loudly as they charged fiercely at the machines! While the machines were fighting with the Holy Creatures, Giant Soldier of Steel was walking within a dark tunnel, and then he eventually reached a point where the tunnel split into five paths! Then Giant Soldier of Steel looked at the end of each of those tunnels, and he saw that one of them was a dead end, while the other four split into many different paths as well! "Tch. So this is a maze or something? How annoying! But I guess there's no choice but to try out each path to see which one eventually gets me to where I want!" said Giant Soldier of Steel, and then he took the very right path and walked there, while he created many large footprints on the snow that covered the ground of the tunnel. To be continued This message was edited by Dragon Swordsman on Apr 05 2008. ------------------- | |
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Chapter 100: Senme vs. The Massacrer! The Last Phase of The Long Battle! Senme and the Massacrer were still blasting much flames at each other, and the flames were travelling rapidly with huge pressure before colliding with each other and cancelling each other out. While this was happening, the Massacrer was also still invisible. The two beings continued spraying flames at each other for a while. After that, the Massacre said "It seems you don't have any intentions to make a stop to this anytime soon. In that case...", and then he stopped blasting flames from the cannons on his palms, while he immediately used Sonido and moved backwards at blinding speed to gain some distance from Senme's flames, which now was faced with no resistance and was travelling towards the Massacrer at huge speed! Also, the wind which was blowing through the place before had now become much stronger, blowing the flames and making them bigger, creating a huge bushfire which set the surrounding environment in flames! Senme's flames travelled fast towards the Massacrer, who still had his cannons pointed at the flames, and then he blasted two huge, thick shots of water out of his cannons at the flames! "Iiiiu" ("Water?!") said Senme, gasping as he saw that, and then the Massacrer's water blasts kept going towards Senme while putting out his flames, but Senme used Instant Movement and avoided the water just as they were about to hit him, and then the water blasts kept going and hit a large rock behind Senme, blowing it to pieces! Then Senme reappeared to the right of the Massacrer, who immediately swung his right arm to his right, while rotating his wrist and compressing the water being blasted out of his cannons so much that the blasts became extremely compressed and thin like water lasers, and they were being blasted with an insane amount of pressure! The Massacrer swung his right arm horizontally at Senme's direction while still blasting the water lasers, trying to cut Senme in half with the high-pressured water laser, but Senme did a backflip just as he reappeared with Instant Movement, and he just barely avoided the laser, although some of his feathers got cut off! After missing Senme, the water laser then kept going and eventually cut down hundreds of trees in a forest far away, as well as a large, steep rock effortlessly, and then those objects which got chopped in half started sliding apart diagonally! "Die..." said the Massacrer as he did a Cross Chop at Senme's direction, and then the two water lasers blasting out of his arms fo | |