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Dragon Swordsman Shin sekai no Kami forum raider total posts: 2569 since: Jan 2005	Apr 13, 08 at 05:59AM re: Make Your Own Story Thread
	Chapter 101: Dark Side of Senme "Can you overcome yourself?" said the Massacrer, as he and the black Senme both looked at the real Senme, who still had his eyes widened in shock and fear! "I...iii....io..." said Senme ("Wh....t is th... is...?") said Senme as he moved his eyes with all his effort just to look at his black clone! "This is a clone of you created out of pure dark energy, and possesses the same power and abilities as you do. However, the power of this clone always remains constant, unlike you. Do you know what this means? The battle is already over. Even a warrior in their strongest state will be at a disadvantage against their clone, as like all organisms, they will tire after prolonged battles. The energy of their clones, however, remain constant, as I've said before. In other words, they do not lose energy. This is the true frightening power of Black Cloning. If that is the level of difficulty faced even by those with their full power, then there is simply no hope for one in such a crippled state that you find yourself in. If you still think that you stand a chance of achieving victory, then you are underestimating no one but yourself" said the Massacrer, and then he slowly raised his left arm and pointed his left index finger at Senme. After that, the dark clone of Senme took in a deep breath, while charging some extremely hot white and blue flames in his mouth, out of which radiated much white and blue light which enlightened a huge area! "You shall meet your end at one of your own techniques... Starfire Blast" said the Massacer, and then the black Senme clone blasted a beam of extremely hot white and blue flames from his mouth straight at the real Senme! Much strong heat radiated from the beam of fire, which melted the ground below the beam, and much blue and white light reflected on Senme's widened eyes just before he got hit directly by the beam, which disintigrated his entire body into nothingness immediately, and Senme was completely obliterated before he could roar or scream, since he was still shocked by the Massacrer's Soul Shock attack before! Then the beam kept travelling until it eventually hit the side of the mountain on top of which Yamix was standing, creating an extremely hot, bright and huge explosion of blue and white flames and cratering the mountain on impact, and a second after that explosion happened, a huge amount of lava erupted out of the crater caused by the beam, as the beam was so hot that a part of the mountain immediately melted into lava as the beam crashed into it! So much lava erupted out of the crater that a huge, fast-flowing river of lava came down from the mountain and flowed straight past the left side of the Massacrer and the black Senme fast, while the Massacrer calmly stood still as his black cloak was blowing in the wind, while some bright orange light were also shining on the Massacrer's cloak. At the same time, the black Senme also dispersed into a cloud of dark energy, while some energy particles floated from where the real Senme was before towards the Massacrer, and then they got absorbed into him! Meanwhile, Primero, Segundo and Tercero were standing on a cliff somewhere on the side of the mountain where Yamix was on. The three bird-like Holy Creatures were standing on the cliff, which was just a few meters below the part of that mountain which was covered in some swirling dark clouds, and they were all watching the Massacrer from there. Just then, a bolt of lightning sparked within the swirling dark clouds, and an extremely loud thunder was heard at almost the exact same time as when the lightning bolt was seen, as the bolt of lightning happened extremely close to the three Holy Creatures. "Ooowwargh!" ("Let's go!") said Segundo, and then Primero and Tercero both nodded, before the three Holy Creatures flew up and dissapeared from sight as they ascended into the dark cloud. Meanwhile, the Massacrer was still standing calmly as the river of lava was rapidly flowing past him. Suddenly, he heard the sound of many birds coming from within a forest somewhere! Then he turned to look at where the noises were coming from, and then he saw fifty bird-like Holy Creatures flying out of a forest, and then they all flapped their wings as they hovered in the air all around the Massacrer and looked at him, while thousands of feathers were being sent flying all over the place as the Holy Creatures flapped their wings! "Aaaaaa... aaaaa..." ("Impossible... Just what is this machine?! He actually managed to defeat Senme, the second strongest bird-type Holy Creature in all of Heaven?!") said a bird-like Holy Creature. "Oooouuuuuiiiii" ("Unbelievable! He must be incredibly strong!") said another bird-like Holy Creature. "Hmph" said the Massacrer then, as he raised his head to look at all the Holy Creatures surrounding him, and then the Holy Creatures gasped and widened their eyes as they saw that! After that, fifty blue and green circular eyes, which looked exactly the same as the eyes on Senme's feathers appeared all over the Massacrer's body! All fifty of those eyes then glowed red as they each looked at the head of a bird-like Holy Creature, and immediately after that, a red eye-like symbol appeared on the heads of all fifty Holy Creatures! The Holy Creatures then all stopped making their loud noises, while their eyes now all had an empty, soulless look on them, as if they were possessed! The Holy Creatures were still flapping their wings and hovering in the air, although they were now flapping slightly slower than before. "I see. Although each of these eyes can only take control of a single target, my control can extend to the entire body if I take control of the target's head" said the Massacrer, and then he turned his head to look at the very top of the mountain with the swirling dark clouds around its summit. Just as he looked there, two bolts of lightning sparked within the dark clouds, and then the lightning bolts were each followed by a loud thunder! After that, the Massacrer started slowly walking towards the mountain. Meanwhile, Giant Soldier of Steel was still walking in a huge maze of tunnels somewhere inside an icy cavern. "Damn! Just how big is this place? There's so many paths that leads nowhere or leads back to an earlier point in this fuckin' maze! Judging from this spirit energy I'm sensing, it's getting stronger and stronger, so I think I'm getting there, but how much longer will this take dammit?!" said Giant Soldier of Steel, looking frustrated and impatient as he looked around, and then he advanced further into the tunnels. Meanwhile, Fuu, Rai, Mizu and fifty Shinigami wearing black ninja-like masks were running fast across some forests in Heaven, jumping from tree branch to tree branch towards the East in a dark forest of the night. "Stop!" said Rai suddenly, as the group of Shinigami reached a place in the forest where the trees were more spaced out, and then all the Shinigami moved at blinding speed, landed on the ground of the forest and stopped. "What's wrong, Rai?" said Mizu as she looked at Rai. "Come out, wherever you are!" said Rai in a loud voice then. "So we're here already?" said a Shinigami. "No, this isn't the machine Mizu spoke of earlier. He's further ahead. But since we're heading past this place, we might as well take care of the three machines here" said Rai. "Three machines?" said Fuu. Then suddenly, a loud noise was heard coming from behind Fuu, Mizu and Rai, who all turned their heads just enough to look behind them with their right eyes! Fuu saw a Solar Beam being fired at him, while Mizu saw a Fire Blast coming at her, and Rai saw a Hydro Pump flying at him! The three Shinigami immediately used Instant Movement and avoided the attacks, which crashed into a large rock in the forest and shattered it to pieces! Then Fuu, Mizu and Rai reappeared and looked at the direction where the attacks came from before, and they saw some thick bushes. "So you noticed us..." a voice was heard coming from those bushes, and then the Shinigami all looked and saw Flarerizamon, D-Fence and Giganium walking out of the bushes towards them! "Everyone, stand back! Let me, Mizu and Rai take care of them!" said Fuu as he looked at Giganium, while Mizu looked at Flarerizamon and Rai looked at D-Fence, ready for battle. Fuu and Giganium looked at each other for a few seconds, and then Fuu suddenly grabbed the light green hilt of his katana, ready to draw it out! "Vine Whip!" said Giganium suddenly, and then he sent two long vines out of his body towards Fuu at extreme speed, but Fuu jumped high up in the air and avoided the two vines, each of which wrapped around a tree and grabbed onto them! "Razor Leaf!" said Giganium then, as he blasted thousands of razor-sharp leaves out of his body and sent them all up at Fuu, who was in mid-air and covering the Moon from Giganium's perspective! The razor-sharp leaves surrounded the air around Fuu, and then they all started closing in on him from all directions! But then Fuu pulled out his sword, surrounded its blade with some gentle wind and then he slashed the air around himself a few times at extreme speed, creating a powerful explosion of wind around himself which blew all the leaves away, and the explosion was so powerful and large that it could even be felt by the fifty black-masked Shinigami standing on the ground, and their clothes were blowing in the strong wind radiating from Fuu as they were watching! "Oh? So you managed to deflect them all?" said Giganium, as he looked up and saw Fuu floated high up in the air, with his sword raised and doing a pose just as he had finished deflectiing all the razor-sharp leaves away, while all the razor-sharp leaves were slowly falling from the air around him! "Impressive indeed!" Giganium continued, and then his two vines, which were each grabbing onto a tree, pulled the tree they were grabbing onto out of the ground and threw them straight up at Fuu, but Fuu easily chopped those two trees in half with his katana while he was still in mid-air, before he dived straight down at Giganium and tried to slash him horizontally with his extremely sharp sword, but Giganium stood up on only his hindlegs and leaned back, just barely avoiding the slash, and then he delivered an extremely powerful kick at Fuu with his frontlegs! Fuu blocked the kick with the flat side of his sword, but the kick had such huge force that Fuu was sent sliding back on his feet at huge speed, raising much dust as he flew, and he also destroyed many trees as he crashed into them! "Bullet Seed!" said Giganium, as he started firing many seeds out of his mouth towards Fuu rapidly, and each seed was travelling at the speed of a bullet! Fuu kept sliding backwards, until he crashed onto a rock, cracking it! Then the seeds flew fast at him, but he was blocking all the seeds with his sword! Fuu moved his arms around so fast that he created afterimages as he blocked the bullet-like seeds, which fell on the ground around Fuu after he blocked them. Giganium continued blasting seeds at Fuu, who continued blocking the seeds, and while he was doing that, some vines grew out of the seeds on the ground surrounding Fuu, which had fallen to the ground after Fuu had blocked them before, and then those vines started wrapping around Fuu's legs and absorbing his energy, while immobolizing his legs! As that happened, Fuu gasped as he looked down at the vines, which kept crawling up his body until they reached his chest! "It's pointless to continue now. As you may have noticed, those seeds can absorb the energy of my foes. Soon, you'll be left completely powerless!" said Giganium as he stopped firing his seeds while watching as the vines surrounded Fuu's entire lower body! "Wind Dance!" said Fuu as he did a horizontal karate chop at Giganium's direction with his left hand, and then a huge explosion of wind happened from his body, destroying all the vines wrapping around him! As that happened, some powerful wind was also summoned, and then four mini-cyclones appeared around Giganium and started closing in on him from all sides! "What is this...?!" said Giganium as he looked around. "Die!" said Fuu as he pointed his right hand at Giganium, and then the four mini-cyclones completely closed in on Giganium and tossed him high up in the air, while he was still surrounded by some powerful spinning wind! "It's over, isn't it" said Fuu as he closed his eyes and started walking away, towards the direction where the fifty Shinigami wearing black ninja-like masks were. But then suddenly, he heard a voice coming from the sky. "Solar Beam!" said the voice, and then Fuu looked up and saw Giganium blasting a Solar Beam out of his mouth, dispersing all the wind surrounding him in an explosion of wind and solar energy! "So you actually survived that attack?" said Fuu, as some golden light radiating from the solar energy shined in his eyes. "You actually thought I wouldn't?!" said Giganium as he dived down at Fuu from the air and tried to slam him with his huge metal body, but Fuu did several backflips away and avoided the attack, which created a massive crater in the ground due to Giganium's huge weight, and the attack also created a small earthquake! "Take this!" said Giganium then, as he sent his two vine whips towards Fuu at huge speed again! The two vines reached Fuu just as he landed back on the ground, but Fuu used Instant Movement and dissapeared just before the whips could reach him, and then the whips hit the ground and raised some dust. Then Fuu reappeared at another location, but Giganium sent his whips at Fuu again, but Fuu dissapeared with Instant Movement again! "Running is pointless!" said Giganium as he sent his vines at a ranbdom location, trying to predict where Fuu would reappear next! Fuu reappeared near the area where Giganium sent his vines, and then Giganium said "Got you!" as his vines wrapped around the air surrounding Fuu, and then they started closing in on him while spinning at extreme speed, and some dust was raised by some wind caused by the spinning vines! However, Fuu jumped high up in the air at the speed of a rocket and escaped, but then Giganium sent his two whips after Fuu in the air! Soon, the whips caught up to Fuu, and then Giganium started whipping at Fuu with his vines, but Fuu blocked the whipping attacks with the flat side of his sword. However, Giganium was whipping at Fuu's sword repeatedly at an extremely fast rate, pushing Fuu through the air! "Tch" said Fuu as he grabbed one of the vines with his left hand, stopping it from moving, and then he pushed the flat side of his sword, which he was holding with his right hand hard against Giganium's other whip, pushing it away! "Air Blade!" he then shouted as he swung his sword hard towards Giganium's direction, sending a crescent-shaped blade of wind towards him! The wind blade chopped both of Giganium's whips in half as it travelled through the air, and then it crashed onto Giganium with huge force! "Grarghh!" Giganium screamed as the wind blade crashed into him, creating a huge explosion of wind and raising much dust around him! While Giganium was flinching from the previous attack, Fuu quickly dived down right next to him, and then he gathered some powerful, compressed wind into his sword! "Hurricane Thrust!" Fuu then shouted as he thrusted his sword straight into Giganium's body! "Aaaarrghh!" Giganium screamed loudly as his entire body blew up in a huge explosion of wind, dark energy and pieces of metal as Fuu's blade went right into him! A huge explosion of wind also radiated from Fuu's sword as it finished Giganium off, and the clothes of the fifty black-masked Shinigami and many nearby trees were being blown in the powerful wind! "One down" said Fuu then, as he raised his head and smiled after he had just defeated Giganium. To be continued -------------------
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OverLord of Chaos Chaos Cannon! true seeker (2K Remix) total posts: 2134 since: May 2007	Apr 13, 08 at 01:01PM ...
	The Dragon Master, Part 25: The End of A Long Battle The PokeKage kept fighting Acclaim with his bone blades, Dragonaurus with his tentacles, and Acclaim's replications with his machine puppets in a huge struggle that lasted for ten minutes. After that, all of Acclaim's replications had been defeated, and the PokeKage's puppets were standing victorious on the battlefield, without any casualties amongst them at all, since each had the power of two Kage-level ninja and they survived the battle without much trouble! The PokeKage, who was controlling them, was still holding his ground against Dragonaurus and Acclaim at the same time, and still fought evenly against them, although he had now lost the bone blade he had been holding in his left hand as it had broken by Acclaim's Dragon Sword. "Finally, it's over. I couldn't hold on for much longer" thought the PokeKage, and then he stopped using his psychic powers to control his puppets. The machine puppets then all fell down to the ground and stopped moving. As that happened, Dragonaurus flapped his wings powerfully behind the PokeKage, sending a powerful wind to blow him, but the PokeKage aimed two of his tentacles that had cannon-like tips of bone at Dragonaurus's wind blast, and they shot two spheres of compressed air at it, cancelling it out in a two huge explosions of air that happened upon their collision. Then another tentacle with a bone cannon tip aimed at Dragonaurus and blasted an Ice Beam at him, but Dragonaurus quickly moved and almost dodged it, except the end of his left wing was hit slightly and froze a bit. At the same time as this was happening, Acclaim was also attacking the PokeKage with a Dragon Punch of his left hand, but the PokeKage moved his body and avoided the attack, while also grabbing Acclaim's wrist with his hand! Then, with his other hand, the PokeKage thrusted his bone blade at Acclaim's stomach, and Acclaim gasped as he saw that! Immediately, he deflected the attack with his Dragon Sword, and then he violently swung his left arm, which the PokeKage had caught with his own left hand, and released it from the PokeKage's hand. As he freed himself, Acclaim also took two steps back, and he took some breaths as he looked at the PokeKage with an angry look on his face. "Shit... What the hell is this? Fighting for this long, even though you've obviously been putting much more effort than me or Dragonaurus, your energy seems to drop at a much lower rate than ours! What's your trick this time, bastard?" Acclaim said angrily, as he took a few breaths. "It is another advantage of the machine body I have. This machine body collects the solar energy in the environment and converts it to chakra that I use. Both my own chakra, as well as that of the chakra batteries in my body and those in the bodies of my puppets constantly recharge when exposed in the sunlight, like now. So, while you only lose energy during a battle, I recover my lost energy constantly without effort, keeping it at a closely steady level while you keep weakening. It is only a matter of time until this battle turns completely to my advantage" said the PokeKage calmly then, and Acclaim frowned extremely furiously as he heard that, and lowered his head a bit as he looked at the PokeKage with his extremely angry-looking eyes! "You bastard... You've just been stalling us this whole time until you'd eventually overpower us with your ability?" said Acclaim angrily then. "That would be correct. Although I did lose energy by the battle, to the point where I can no longer control my puppets with psychic powers, you have lost even more energy than me. Now that I have even stopped spending energy to control my puppets, the difference between our powers will keep increasing, until you eventually crumble" said the PokeKage as he calmly looked into Acclaim's eyes, enraging him even more with his words! "Graaargh!! An ability like this!! Shit!! Making fools of us all this time!! Damn this machine body!!" said Acclaim angrily then, as he looked furiously at the PokeKage, who was standing calmly, while Dragonaurus had also stopped attacking him and looking at him surprised from behind. "Impossible... Machines are really this much better than normal organisms? This guy... His abilities are just insane..." thought Dragonaurus, as he looked at the PokeKage's back and his huge, thorned tentacles spouting out of it. "Now, what will you do?" said the PokeKage calmly then. "Grrr... Sunlight, eh? In that case, all I have to do is block it!!" Acclaim screamed loudly then. "Hm?" the PokeKage said as he heard that. Acclaim then raised his right hand and pointed his held sword at the sky and said "Weather Control!". The PokeKage then looked at the sky, and saw the weather was starting to get heavily cloudy, as many dark clouds dtarted gathering in the sky and covering it up entirely, even the Sun, making the entire place dark! "So, you can control weather" the PokeKage said calmly then. "Fwahahahaha! Y're not the only one with tricks up ya sleeve, PokeKage!! Without the sunlight now, it will only be a matter of time before WE win this battle! Fwahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!" Acclaim laughed excitedly then. But then the PokeKage ignored him and ran at his machine puppets. "Hahaha! What the hell're ya tryin' to pull?" said Acclaim as he saw that. The PokeKage went at one of his puppets, and then he opened up a small door on the puppet's back, out of which he pulled out its fire-element chakra battery, which still had much energy in it. The PokeKage then opened up a door on his own stomach, and in his stomach he had his five chakra batteries! The PokeKage pulled out his almost empty fire-element chakra battery and replaced it with that of the puppet's, instantly giving him an increase in power! The PokeKage then put the almost empty fire-element chakra battery into the puppet whose chakra battery he had taken, and then he closed the door on its back, and he also closed the door on his stomach. After that, he started running towards another puppet! "What the hell is he doing?" said Acclaim, as he looked at that confused. "He's replacing his near-empty batteries with almost full powered ones! This is bad!" said Dragonaurus, as he looked at the PokeKage exchanging his water-element chakra battery with that of a puppet in the same process as before! Then he started running at another puppet machine to restore another of his batteries! "Shit! And you're still here?! Hurry up and stop him!!" Acclaim said then, with a surprised, nervous look on his face, as he looked at the PokeKage bending over another machine! "Yes!" said Dragonaurus, as he quickly flew at the PokeKage. "Stop!" he said then as he reached the PokeKage and blasted an Aeroblast at him from his mouth! The PokeKage turned his head and looked at the Aeroblast with the corner of his right eye, and then he quickly jumped away and avoided the powerful blast of wind, which hit the ground and blew much sand away, also creating a crater. The PokeKage landed a small distance away, and then he faced Dragonaurus and Acclaim, who was also charging at him. "Fwahahahaha! It's over, PokeKage!" Acclaim laughed then, as he ran at Acclaim with an evil smile on his face and an evil look on his eyes. "Dragon Fang!" he said then, as he slashed his sword at the PokeKage's direction, sending out a huge green crescent-shaped blast of energy at him, which carved a path on the ground as it travelled! The PokeKage moved to the side and avoided it, but then as he moved there Dragonaurus immediately fired a huge Hyper Beam at him from his mouth! The PokeKage ducked and avoided it in the last second, but then he looked and saw both Acclaim and Dragonaurus charging him, Acclaim from the front, and Dragonaurus from the back! Then Dragonaurus tried to slash the PokeKage from behind with his claws, but the PokeKage blocked with his two claw-ended tentacles, while Acclaim tried to slash the PokeKage with his Dragon Sword, but the latter blocked with his bone blade. Then the PokeKage started fighting against Dragonaurus and Acclaim at the same time, and the fight was being even, with the PokeKage managing to block, avoid, or otherwise cancel out all attacks by Dragonaurus and Acclaim. But then, Acclaim smiled evily as he did a seal with his left hand and said "Heheh! Dragon Replication!". Then a clone of Acclaim appeared to the left of the PokeKage, very close to him, and immediately tried to stab his throat with his sword! But then suddenly a long bone spike spouted out under the PokeKage's left arm, and it immediately impaled Acclaim's clone, destroying it. The bone thorn then withdrew back into the PokeKage's body. "Tch" said Acclaim, looking annoyed as that happened. The PokeKage then changed his left hand into a mass of eight tentacles, with which he then tried to grab Acclaim! "Shit!" said Acclaim, widening his eyes as he saw that, and immediately he disengaged the PokeKage and took some rapid steps backwards away from him, avoiding his eight-tentacle arm. Meanwhile, Dragonaurus was still fighting with the tentacles on the PokeKage's back. "Damn it... If this Warugan hadn't destroyed so much of my energy, I would just blast him with a Golden Blast now..." thought Dragonaurus as he deflected a claw attack by the PokeKage with his own claws, and at the same time he avoided a Hydro Pump fired from a tentacle-cannon by moving his body to the side. "Shit, this is getting nowhere! For all I know, this guy could still have tricks up his sleeve and stalling us on purpose! This has to end now!" thought Acclaim, as he angrily looked at the PokeKage. Then he looked at Dragonaurus and said "Dragonaurus! Try to grab him so I can finish him off with a Hyper Beam!". "Impossible! He's got six of those tentacles and I only have my fangs and claws!" said Dragonaurus, as he avoided a Fire Blast by one of the PokeKage's cannon-tentacles. "Just grab his claws! The others just fire fire and water attacks, you can take some of them!" said Acclaim then. "Okay! I'll try!" said Dragonaurus, and then he focused on the PokeKage's tentacles. A claw-tentacle was thrushed at him fast, but then Dragonaurus managed to dodge it by moving to the side, and then he grabbed it with his hand, in a way that it could not cut him. Then he opened up his mouth and bit a cannon-tentacle, but then the other claw-tentacle was swung at him to cut off his neck! But then Dragonaurus reacted quickly and blocked the claw with his own remaining claw, and now he was holding the PokeKage in position since he was holding two of his tentacles with his claw and mouth! "Excellent!" said Acclaim as he saw that. "Mistake" said the PokeKage apathetically, as he changed the cannon tips of two of his tentacles to long spears of bone, with which he then stabbed Dragonaurus's body deeply! "GRRAAARGGHH!!" screamed Dragonaurus as that happened, with much blood pouring from his huge wounds! "Shit! He transformed his tentacles! But it doesn't matter! Good job, Dragonaurus! Now it's time to kill this bastard while he can't dodge!" said Acclaim then, as he pointed his sword at the PokeKage. "Vanish! Hyper Beam!" he said then, as he blasted a huge, extremely thick and bright Hyper Beam straight at the PokeKage from the front, while Dragonaurus was holding some of his tentacles behind him in the air! Acclaim's Hyper Beam was twice as tall as the PokeKage, and it carved a large river along the ground as it travelled at him, and Acclaim saw it hitting the PokeKage and vanishing him instantly as it hit him! Then it kept going and went through a hundred and fifty houses on its way, demolishing them in rubbles and huge clouds of dust! Only some end parts of the PokeKage's long tentacles were left in the air as they had not been hit directly by the Hyper Beam, and two of them were the ones Dragonaurus was holding in his claw and mouth. The tentacle remains then fell down to the ground, and Dragonaurus also fell from the air along with them and hit the ground hard, raising much dust. "Hahahahahahaha! Dragonaurus, we did it! It's over! He completely perished in the Hyper Beam! Hahahahahahaha!!" Acclaim laughed excitedly then, as he looked at the tentacles of the PokeKage that were left, which dissolved into organic material that got absorbed in the soil. "Who exactly perished?" Acclaim heard a calm voice from behind them, and he widened his eyes as he heard it! Immediately then, he turned around and saw the PokeKage standing there with his arms folded and without tentacles! "Imp-Impossible!!!! You...!! You're still alive???!!! How can this be!! I clearly saw you vanishing in the Hyper Beam!!!" Acclaim said, unable to believe in his eyes! "You have a short memory. I thought I had already displayed the abilities to cut off my tentacles at will and move at speed the eye can not follow" said the PokeKage then. "You bastard! After all this... You just avoided it like...!! Shit!!!!!!" said Acclaim then, looking extremely nervous and angry. The PokeKage was just standing calmly and looking at him apathetically with his arms folded. "YOU!!!" said Acclaim loudly then, but then he felt a large hand grabbing his shoulder. Immediately he turned his head and saw Dragonaurus, who had grabbed his shoulder, and had much blood coming out of his mouth as he had been damaged badly by the stabs of the PokeKage's long spear-like tentacle ends of bone earlier. "Dragonaurus... I'm sorry... You got damaged like this for nothing..." said Acclaim as he looked at Dragonaurus. "It's alright... I can't battle any longer... But at least I'll do something to help you..." said Dragonaurus. "What?" said Acclaim then. "Earthquake!" said Dragonaurus then, as he stomped the ground hand, causing a huge earthquake! The earthquake affected a huge area, demolishing many buildings around, and also cracking the ground wildly and changing its surface so it was really hard to walk on, let alone run on! "This should at least prevent him from moving at blinding speed... Now go get him, Acclaim..." said Dragonaurus then. "Okay! Great Idea! Thanks, Dragonaurus! I'll finish him off now, for sure!" said Acclaim then excitedly. Then he jumped on a slightly elevated piece of cracked land, made so by the earthquake, on which the PokeKage also was. "Your tricks are going down one by one, PokeKage! This is soon going to end!" said Acclaim then, as he faced the PokeKage. "Hm" said the PokeKage then, as he spouted out six tentacles from his back, ready to battle. He also still had a bone blade held in his right hand, and an eight-tentacle part as his left hand. Then he also spouted some sharp bones on his knees and elbows, three large spike-like bones on his back, as well as two snakes from his shoulders, which faced Acclaim and hissed at him! "Going all out? Heh... Bring it on! So will I! Fwahahahaha!!" laughed Acclaim as he saw that, standing fearlessly before the PokeKage despite his extremely intimidating presence! But then, something happened at the PokeKage! "Uh..." said the PokeKage, as the bone spikes on his back, knees, and albows all withdrew back in his body, and the same also happened with the tentacles on his back and the snakes on his shoulders! The PokeKage also dropped the bone blade he was golding with his right hand, and his left arm changed from eight tentacles to a normal arm! The PokeKage's skin then turned from dark gray to normal, his fangs turned to normal teeth, his hair shortened, and generally, the PokeKage turned back to his normal form, before he had entered his Released Form! His eyes also changed from silver to black, and now, the PokeKage was just like he was in the beginning of the fight, but now he looked exhausted! "I've no energy left to stay in this form..." said the PokeKage then, looking powerless! "HAH!!" Acclaim laughed loudly then, with an extremely excited look on his eyes and a huge smile on his face! "FWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! It's over, PokeKage!!!!" Acclaim shouted insanely then, as he ran at the PokeKage quickly and slashed him across the chest! Much electricity spouted out from the PokeKage's wound, and the PokeKage took some steps back by the force of the attack! "HAHA!!" Acclaim laughed loudly then, as he did a huge kick on the PokeKage's chest, kicking him hard and sending him flying a bit, and the PokeKage fell and splashed into a nearby lake! "Fwahahahahahaha!! Let your own machine body sink you to your death, PokeKage!!! Ahahahaha!!! Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!" Acclaim started laughing insanely then, while the PokeKage was sinking into the lake! "I can't get out of this lake like this... Not with so little energy left... I have to abandon this metal body..." thought the PokeKage, as he was seeing the surface of the lake moving further and further away from him. "Heart Release" he thought then, and then his chest opened up a bit in the middle, and a diamond-like crystal came out of the PokeKage's metal body! The crystal was a bit larger than a heart, and inside it it was hollow, and contained the PokeKage's heart stored in it! There were only a few holes on the crystal, out of which some veins connected to the heart came out! "Cell Manipulation" the PokeKage's heart thought then, and then starting from the veins, the PokeKage's entire body grew back, along with its clothes as well! Now, the PokeKage had a normal human body, with his heart being on the left chest and stored inside a diamond-like crystal! As his old metal body fell on the bottom of the lake, the PokeKage started swimming towards the lake's surface. Outside the lake, Acclaim was laughing evily "Fwahahahaha! It's over... It's finally over...", as he sat on a rock and smiled in satisfaction. But then suddenly, a splashing noise was heard from the lake, and the PokeKage came out of it! "What exactly is over?" said the PokeKage, as he slowly came out of the lake all wet, and Acclaim widened his eyes as he saw that! "Shit! You just won't die, will you?" Acclaim said then, as he got up from the rock he had just sat on and faced the PokeKage in a fighting position. "I told you, it is impossible for me to lose..." said the PokeKage then, as he stood before Acclaim and folded his arms. "SHUT UP!!" screamed Acclaim loudly then, as he pointed his sword at the PokeKage and fired a huge Hyper Beam at him, instantly disintegrating his entire body except for the crystal with his heart in it! The crystal then fell to the ground, and then a new human body just grew out of it, regenerating the PokeKage back to his previous condition just before the Hyper Beam! "What...? What the hell are you? What was that crystal?" said Acclaim, looking very confused as he saw that. "This diamond case contains my heart. As long as I have a heart, I will live on, and I can easily regenerate myself with minimal energy. If you can not destroy this heart, you will never defeat me" said the PokeKage then. "Heh, and I s'pose y' think it's indestructible since it's in a diamond case, eh? Well guess what! My Dragon Sword can effortlessly slice through diamond as if it's butter! You'll be dead in a single swipe! Fwahahahaha!" Acclaim laughed then, as he charged at the PokeKage with his sword raised. "Cell Manipulation" said the PokeKage then, and then cells came out of his forearms and shaped into ten replications of the PokeKage exactly identical to him in every detail! "Ha!" said Acclaim then, as he stabbed his sword through the heart of the PokeKage which was in the diamond case, as the sword even cut through the diamond! Much blood then spouted from the wound on that body of the PokeKage, and then it fell lifeless to the ground. "Fwahahahaha! How pointless... Coming back to fight me at this sorry state... You would have lived longer if you had just ran away! But now you die! Fwahahahaha!" laughed Acclaim then. "Who died?" said one of the nine remaining PokeKage's bodies then. "Huh?" said Acclaim then as he heard that, and then he looked at the PokeKage's bodies. "You're still standing? How is that possible? Since the PokeKage died, shouldn't his replications also crumble along with him?" said Acclaim then, looking confused. "I never died" said the same body of the PokeKage which had spoken previously. "What?" said Acclaim then as he heard that. "Weren't you listening to what I said? As long as I have a heart, I will live on. Even if you destroy one of my hearts, I will simply revive into another. You can not win, Acclaim" said the PokeKage's body, which was in fact the PokeKage himself revived into that body! "I-Impossible!" said Acclaim as he heard that, unable to believe what he was hearing! "This has to be some sort of trick! Die!" said Acclaim then, as he slashed the PokeKage in half, killing his body. But then the PokeKage revived into another body and said "Pointless". "Shut up!!" said Acclaim then, as he stabbed that body's heart, killing it as well. But then another body of the PokeKage was used to revive him, and then the PokeKage said "A wasted effort". "Ghhaaaagh!!!" Acclaim screamed then, as he slit that body's throat, killing it. Then he went on and killed two more bodies, but then the PokeKage revived himself into another one and he immediately used Cell Manipulation, creating thirty more bodies! "What the bleep is happening???" said Acclaim as he saw that with his eyes widened! "Give up. No matter how many dozens of times you try it's the same" said the PokeKage in one of the bodies then. "Shit!! SHIT!!! DIE!!! SHUT UP AND DIEEEEEE!!!!" Acclaim screamed insanely then, as he did a huge Dragon Punch at those thirty bodies, disintegrating all of them in some devastating green flames he blasted from his fist! But then, he heard a voice from behind him "You can't kill me. I'm immortal". "GRAAAAAARRRRRGGGGGHHHHHH!!!!!" screamed Acclaim insanely then as he turned around quickly and stabbed the PokeKage, who was standing behind him right through the heart! "Huh... I'll be back..." said the PokeKage then, with blood coming out of his mouth, and then his body fell lifeless on the ground. "Hah... Hah... Want some more of this? Huh? HUH???" Acclaim said then loudly, as he also breathed heavily. Then he looked around, and saw no more bodies of the PokeKage, and those he had killed previously had dissolved into organic material and absorbed into the soil. "This must be it... This HAS to be it... The end... The PokeKage... is finally... dead! DEAD!!! HAHAHAHAHA!!!" said Acclaim then excitedly, as he raised his fists in the air in victory, and looked at the sky, which now cleared up from the clouds that were filling it before, and the bright Sun shone on his face. "You did it, Acclaim! You defeated the PokeKage!" he heard a voice from behind him then. Acclaim then turned around and saw Dragonaurus there. "Dragonaurus! Heh, yeah! That bastard is finally dead! No more hearing his annoying voice anymore! Haha! Now it's time to celebrate... BY TAKING OVER EARTH!!! HAHAHAHAHA!!!" said Acclaim then excitedly, and also laughed loudly, feeling glad and satisfied with his victory against the PokeKage. "Heh..." said Dragonaurus, as he smiled as well when he looked at Acclaim smiling too. "Well then, shall we begin?" said Acclaim excitedly. "Sure!" said Dragonaurus. "Fwahahahahaha!!!" laughed Acclaim then, as he ran at a woman and lopped off her head with his sword, while at the same time, Dragonaurus roared loudly as he grabbed a truck and threw it at some teenagers, killing them all in an explosion that happened as the car crashed on the road before them! The people then started running around and screaming in panic, while Acclaim and Dragonaurus both laughed as they started rampaging on Shinobi Village, or what was left of it after the destructive battles that had taken place! ------------------- Fear the power of Chaos!
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Dragon Swordsman Shin sekai no Kami forum raider total posts: 2569 since: Jan 2005	Apr 13, 08 at 10:30PM re: Make Your Own Story Thread
	Chapter 102: Fuu, Mizu and Rai Mizu and Flarerizamon were standing in a forest, facing each other. "So you're a machine from Chaos Planet..." said Mizu. "Flame Tower!" said Flarerizamon as he spread his arms out, and then a huge pillar of flames suddenly appeared and fell on Mizu from above, and Mizu gasped as she jumped back and avoided the flame pillar, which crashed onto the ground and cratered it! A huge explosion of flames also radiated from the spot where the flame pillar fell, and many trees were being burnt by the flames! "Suiton: Suishouha!" said Mizu as she formed some hand seals while flying backwards, and then she converted much water vapor in the air into liquid water, summoning a huge tsunami and sent it at the flame pillar, putting it out instantly, and then the tsunami kept going towards Flarerizamon, while crushing many trees in the process! "Amazing... As expected from Mizu... She managed to use such a high-level water-element technique in a place with no water?" said a Shinigami, looking amazed as some steam came out of the place where the flame pillar was before. Then Flarerizamon jumped up and back, avoiding Mizu's tsunami, which kept going and washed over the forest. "Grrroooaargh!" Flarerizamon then roared loudly as he was high up in the air, with the starry night sky behind him from Mizu's perspective, and then he dived straight down at Mizu and tried to crush her with his right claw, but Mizu quickly pulled out her katana, which had a sea-blue colored hilt and blocked the attack with it, although the force of the attack cratered the ground beneath Mizu! "Aah!" said Mizu as she felt the impact of Flarerizamon's claw on her blade. "Rhaaaa!" roared Flarerizamon as he tried to breathe a devastating stream of flames at Mizu at point-blank range, but Mizu turned her katana downward, pushing Flarerizamon to the side, as Flarerizamon's right claw was still touching Mizu's sword. Flarerizamon's fire attack then missed Mizu, and it kept going and hit many trees, setting them on fire! After that, Mizu said "Take this!" as she did a 360 spin before slashing Flarerizamon hard across the right side of his body horizontally! "Grrroarh!" Flarerizamon roared loudly as the slash cut him deeply in the body, and he slid back a bit as much flames exploded out of his body as he got slashed, and then the flames fell on the ground and set it on fire! "Argh! You bitch! Die!" said Flarerizamon as he slid away from Mizu, and then he took in a deep breath before blasting many high-temperature flame bullets out of his mouth at Mizu, who jumped back away from the flame bullets, and then she started blocking the flame bullets with her sword, although each bullet had so much force that Mizu was gradually being pushed backwards by the bullets, which blew up in many small explosions of flames as they collided with Mizu's sword! After blocking the flame bullets for a while, Mizu suddenly dissapeared with Instant Movement, avoiding some more flame bullets, which kept going and crashed into some trees, ripping them to pieces before burning their remains to ashes! Flarerizamon stopped firing his flame bullets and widened his eyes as he saw that, and then he suddenly heard Mizu's voice coming from the side. "Suiton: Suiryuudan no Jutsu!" said Mizu, and then Flarerizamon turned his head to the left and saw Mizu standing, holding a hand seal! Immediately, two explosions of water happened on the ground in front of Mizu, and then two seadragons made of water flew out of those explosions! The two seadragons looked exactly like the seadragon of dark energy Senme sent at the Massacrer before, except these two were smaller, had two red eyes and were made of water instead of dark energy, and they flew up in the air and started hovering around! One of the dragons dived head-first at Flarerizamon, who jumped high up in the air and avoided the dragon, which crashed into the ground and got destroyed in an explosion of water. But while Flarerizamon was in the air, the other dragon dived at him and hit him, creating an explosion of fire, water and steam in mid-air! "Aaaauurrghh!" Flarerizamon screamed as he got hit directly by the water dragon, and immediately, Mizu appeared right next to him in the air with Instant Movement! "Aqua Edge!" she then said as she slashed Flarerizamon with her sword, and as that happened, a huge crescent-shaped wave of water appeared from her sword and also hit Flarerizamon! "Gargh!" Flarerizamon screamed in excruciating pain as he fell from a great height and landed on the ground, causing a crater, and the destroyed Flarerizamon was seen at the center of the crater, with all the flames surrounding his body having been put out by Mizu's attack, while some dark energy were also leaking out of two slash wounds on Flarerizamon's body. Mizu then landed back on the ground from the air, on her feet. "So, how was it?" she then said as she did a playful spin, winked and looked at the fifty black-masked Shinigami with a smile, after she just defeated Flarerizamon. Meanwhile, Rai was facing D-Fence. "Let's go!" said Rai as he pulled out his katana, which had an orange hilt, and swung it at D-Fence, sending a stream of electricity at him, but then D-Fence roared loudly as he stomped the ground, sending a large wave of muddy water out of the ground towards Rai! The wave of muddy water and the electrical stream collided together, creating an explosion of muddy water filled with deadly electricity! While that explosion happened, Rai suddenly dissapeared with Instant Movement, and then he reappeared high up in the air in front of D-Fence! "Die!" said Rai as he dived down from the air and tried to slash D-Fence vertically with his sword, but D-Fence blocked the attack with the side of his right claw, although the impact of Rai's attack created a powerful shockwave, which cratered the ground below D-Fence! Then Rai continued pushing his sword against D-Fence, while much sparks were flying as Rai's sword was pushing against D-Fence's claw! "Lightning Release!" shouted Rai then, as he pushed his sword hard against D-Fence's claw, blasting a powerful crescent-shaped fang of yellow lightning out of his sword, hitting D-Fence at point-blank range! "Grrrooaahh!" D-Fence roared in pain as the lightning fang pushed him sliding back on his feet, while reducing the ground to rubbles as the lightning fang travelled, pushing D-Fence back along with it! After a while, the lightning fang exploded in a huge blast of lightning, zapping D-Fence badly and flinching him! Then Rai jumped towards D-Fence at extreme speed, but then D-Fence blasted a Hyper Beam from his mouth at Rai while he was doing that! However, Rai did a sideway flip in the air, barely but confidently avoiding the Hyper Beam, and then he reached D-Fence and started kicking him repeatedly at the face with his two legs while flying forward towards him, but D-Fence was blocking and parrying all the kicks with his arms, although Rai's kicks were slowly pushing him sliding backwards on his feet! Rai kept flying towards D-Fence and launching many kicks at him repeatedly, but D-Fence was still parrying all the kicks. After a while, D-Fence said "Dynamic Punch!" as he reared back his left fist, before delivering a heavy punch straight at Rai's chest, and Rai widened his eyes a bit as he saw that! Rai reacted quickly and managed to catch the punch in his right hand, but as he caught the punch, an explosion happened at D-Fence's fist on impact, blasting Rai flying diagonally upward and backward away! "You're finished! Hydro Cannon!" said D-Fence as he looked up at Rai in the air briefly, before breathing deeply and then blasting a huge, thick shot of water out of his mouth up at Rai with insane pressure! "Rai!" said a Shinigami, widening his eyes as he saw that! Then Rai tossed his katana up in the air above himself, while he was still in mid-air, and then he started forming some hand seals. "Raiton: Gian no Jutsu!" he then said, as he blasted a huge, thick beam of lightning, which was just as big and powerful as D-Fence's water attack out of his mouth at D-Fence! The lightning beam was also made up of lightning so compressed that the attack just resembled a straight beam, and the zigzag shape of lightning could not even be seen in the beam! Then the lightning beam, which radiated enough light to enlighten a big area in the forest temporarily collided with D-Fence's water blasting, resulting in a devastating explosion of water filled with deadly electricity on impact! The fifty Shinigami wearing black masks all gasped as they saw that, and they all immediately radiated some spirit energy from their bodies to deflect the electrified water from the explosion, which even caught those Shinigami within its range! A huge crater was also made in the ground by the splash damage of the explosion. Then Rai, who had thrown his katana up in the air before, caught his katana again, and then he said "Lightning Strike!" as he pointed his blade down at D-Fence. Immediately as he did that, several bolts of lightning descended from the sky and struck D-Fence one after another! "Grargh! Impossible!" said D-Fence as the lightning bolts struck him, and each lightning bolt was followed by a thunder one second later. Then while D-Fence was flinching from those lightning bolts, Rai dived straight through the explosion from before and landed right in front of D-Fence! "Raijinken!" he then shouted as he stabbed his sword straight through D-Fence's body, and the blade reappeared thirty centimeters out the other side! After that, a bolt of lightning, which was three times as thick as the ones which struck D-Fence before descended from the sky and hit D-Fence! "Gaaaahhh!" D-Fence then screamed loudly, as his body disintigrated into the extremely huge, bright and powerful lightning bolt, which was followed by an extremely loud thunder three seconds later! "Amazing... Fuu, Mizu and Rai... I knew they were strong, but to be able to use such high level wind, water and lightning element techniques to be able to take out those machines that easily..." said a black-masked Shinigami, as he and the other fourty nine Shinigami all looked extremely surprised at Fuu, Mizu and Rai. "And on top of that, they didn't even need to release their swords in order to take out those machines... which they disposed of almost effortlessly..." said another Shinigami. "Well, that's what I would expect from them. After all, Fuu, Mizu and Rai are three Shinigami considered by Heaven to be geniuses, and were trained directly under Lord Yaiba himself. They wouldn't be Lord Yaiba's most trusted subordinates if they weren't this strong..." said another Shinigami. "I've been with them on countless missions before, but this is honestly the first time I've seen them even need to utilize such powers... I wonder how strong they would be like in their released forms..." said another Shinigami. "Let's go, everyone!" said Mizu then as she looked at the fifty black-masked Shinigami. "Ah-Yes!" the fifty Shinigami all replied together, and then they all moved off at blinding speed towards the East, along with Fuu, Mizu and Rai. Meanwhile, far away to the East of where the Shinigami were before, there was a thick, dense forest, which was quite dark, and the trees in the forest were also blowing in some strong, cold night wind. Some creepy noises which sounded like ghosts crying could also be heard as the strong wind blew at the trees. ChaosPiedmon was hiding somewhere within the depths of the forest, with his back leaning against a tree, and then he suddenly felt some faint spirit energy carried by some strong wind from the East. "Hmhmhm... How amusing it is... to think that those fools would march to their death just like that. Very well then, if that's what they'll do, I'll just have to give them a proper welcome" said ChaosPiedmon with an evil smile on his face, and then he stopped leaning on the tree, walked forward a bit and then he clapped his hands together. "Hm!" he then said, as an explosion of white smoke happened around him, and when the smoke faded away, ChaosPiedmon had transformed himself into a tree! Meanwhile, Giant Soldier of Steel walked along an icy tunnel covered in snow, creating a large footprint and trembling the ground with every step. Eventually, he arrived at a large area of a cave which mainly had a large body of crystal-clear water. Many dark tunnels connected to this chamber, which was about ten times the size of a football stadium. The chamber's ceiling was as high as a seven floor building, and there were many large stalactites coming down from the ceiling and many stalagmites rising from the ground, most of them even from under the crystal-clear water! There were some crystals in the chamber which emitted some dim light, and some light waves can be seen on the ceiling of the cave, caused by the light coming from the crystals reflecting on the moving water surface. The place was also covered in some thin mists, and nothing but the sound of some water dropping from the ceiling could be heard in the place. Giant Soldier of Steel walked out of one of the many tunnels connecting to the chamber, and then he looked around. But then suddenly, some extremely thick mists started covering the whole place, making it impossible for anyone to see more than a meter in the chamber! "What?" said Giant Soldier of Steel, looking around confused. "Iiiiraaaa" he then suddenly heard a cry, and then he immediately faced the front, at the direction where the cry came from, although he could not figure out what had made the noise due to the extremely thick mist that blocked his sight. Then suddenly, Giant Soldier of Steel saw much red and green aurora light radiating from the mist before him, making him covering his eyes with his left arm a bit! "What the..." he then said as he looked into the light with his eyes widened. Then certain areas of the aurora light started fading away, and this happened in such a way so that there were some gaps within the light! Much aurora light was still shining on Giant Soldier of Steel's face, but there were some areas without aurora light, and these areas which had an absence of light was shaped into some words! "Are you a machine of Chaos Planet?" read the words. Giant Soldier of Steel then smiled evily as he saw those words. ""Are you a machine of Chaos Planet", eh? Hmph. So it seems that a being without the ability to speak is trying to communicate with me. Are you a Holy Creature?" said Giant Soldier of Steel as he looked into the aurora light. Then the words on the aurora light caused by the areas without light dissapeared and got replaced by some new words, which read "Yes". "I knew it! But, to answer your question, it's yes as well! I am the great machine, Giant Soldier of Steel!" said Giant Soldier of Steel as he raised his sword high. "Please leave this place immediately" the words on the aurora light then read. "Huh? Leave this place, you say? What are you talking about? My objective is to slay as many beings from this world as I can! I ain't leaving, atleast not before I slaughter you, just like I did with the other Holy Creatures earlier! Just like I did with that knight, that moth, that skeleton and that pig!" said Giant Soldier of Steel. "Is that what your intentions are? In that case, expect no mercy" the words on the aurora light then read. A few seconds later, the words dissapeared, and then Giant Soldier of Steel immediately heard the sound of something in front of him moving at blinding speed! "What!" said Giant Soldier of Steel, widening his eyes, and immediately after that, a huge diagonally slash appeared on his back, and much dark energy leaked out of the slash! "Damn you!" Giant Soldier of Steel then said as he quickly turned around and did a horizontal slash behind him, but as he did that, he heard the sound of something behind him moving at blinding speed again, and then Giant Soldier of Steel's attack hit nothing! Then suddenly, Giant Soldier of Steel felt something kicking the back of his head hard, making him stumble forward! "Gah!" he said as he turned around and swung his left fist behind him, but the attack also hit nothing, and Giant Soldier of Steel could not see his enemy due to the thick mists! "You coward! Who the hell are you?!" said Giant Soldier of Steel angrily as he quickly turned to look at the direction where the aurora light was. He then waited for a few seconds, but there was no response. "Are you gonna show yourself or what? If not, then I'll simply force you to!" said Giant Soldier of Steel, and then he punched the air with both his fists, releasing a powerful explosion of dark energy from his body which blew away much of the mist surrounding him, and now he could see the area around him again! He looked forward, at the place where the aurora light was, and he saw a unicorn-like Holy Creature with red eyes and blue flames standing on top of a rock, which was sticking out of a large pond of water! It was Holyta, and some aurora light was also surrounding him! To be continued -------------------
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OverLord of Chaos Chaos Cannon! true seeker (2K Remix) total posts: 2134 since: May 2007	Apr 16, 08 at 02:22PM ...
	Here is a picture-story I made: ------------------- Fear the power of Chaos!
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sonicx MASTER OF THE UNIVERSE true seeker total posts: 1243 since: Jul 2003	Apr 25, 08 at 06:30PM re: Make Your Own Story Thread
	One day on the planet Earth their was an individual who was sick,twisted & perverted. His name was nightmarexv1. He always talked about killing all the students at his university since he was sick of being bashed up & decked on by all the varsity football players & cheerleaders. His 2 years of ongoing torture led to him having schizophrenia . Nightmarexv1 was hearing voices in his head telling him to kill not just the football players but everyone on the entire university campus. A week later he came out of his Nissan shitbox car & pulled out a pistol. He went on a complete rampage & shot everyone on sight. The voices in his head where getting the better of him. Unfortunately for him due to lack of money he only had enough bullets to kill 10 people. The lack of money is clearly shown since he drives a Nissan shitbox. Now that he was out of ammo Nightmarexv1 had to pull out his knife & try to knife down as much people as possible. He saw a man sleeping under a tree. He decided to kill that man. As he charging to the man he tripped over & almost stabbed himself. As he got up & made sure he didnt have any minor injuries. Nightmarexv1 then realized the man was sleeping under the tree anymore. He turned back saw that man. Just as he was going to stab him the man said "listen boy you dont want to do this.You got your whole life ahead of you.Actually why am i trying to convince you to stop ill just finish you off". The man then jumped up & landed behind Nightmarexv1.Due to him doing that so fast he got Nightmarexv1 by surprise. The man then said "remember this name as you are about to be sent to the pits of hell where you belong.Sonicx". Sonicx then finish him off by using his two hands to brake of Nightmarexv1 head from his body. Everyone at the university campus then cheered & praised Sonicx. They then said out loudly in great joy Sonicx,Sonicx,Sonicx. Note: I did this story out of complete board em. Iam not trying to offend you in any way Nightmarexv1. This message was edited by sonicx on Apr 25 2008. ------------------- Visit my site feat pkmn dragon
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Dragon Swordsman Shin sekai no Kami forum raider total posts: 2569 since: Jan 2005	May 12, 08 at 11:43PM re: Make Your Own Story Thread
	Chapter 103: Divine Lightning: Indignation! "I am Holyta, one of Heaven's Ten Holy Elites" some words then appeared on the aurora light around the unicorn. "Heh! Holyta, one of the Ten Holy Elites? Serious?! Hahaha! Bring it on then!" said Giant Soldier of Steel, with an insane smile on his face as he looked at the unicorn, who was Holyta, and then he started charging fast at Holyta's direction with his sword raised, while smiling insanely! "Haaaaa!" Giant Soldier of Steel shouted excitedly as he ran along the bottom of the pond of water in the room towards Holyta, while much ripples radiated from him as he ran through the water, and then he reached up to Holyta and tried to slam his sword at him! However, Holyta used Instant Movement and dissapeared just before the sword reached him, and then Giant Soldier of Steel's sword hit the rock which Holyta was standing on before, shattering it to pieces and creating an explosion of dust, rocks and water! "What!" said Giant Soldier of Steel, widening his eyes in surprise, while the aurora light surrounding Holyta before faded away, and then the next thing Giant Soldier of Steel noticed was a small shadow covering him! Then he looked up and saw Holyta, who had just jumped over him at blinding speed, with some dark energy covering his horn! "Impossible..." said Giant Soldier of Steel, and then he suddenly noticed with the corner of his right eye a deep vertical cut on his right shoulder, out of which spouted much dark energy like a volcanic eruption! Holyta then landed on the surface of the water behind Giant Soldier of Steel, who said "Die!" as he turned around and tried to deliver a heavy backspinning kick at Holyta with his huge, right metal foot, but Holyta, who was standing sideways and had the left side of his body facing Giant Soldier of Steel, calmly raised his left leg and effortlessly blocked the kick with it, and Giant Soldier of Steel's kick created a huge splash in the water upon impact, and much ripples and tidal waves radiated from the shockwave caused by the kick's impact! "What the hell...?!" said Giant Soldier of Steel, looking extremely surprised, and then Holyta suddenly pushed his left leg hard against Giant Soldier of Steel, knocking him over and sending him sliding away along the bottom of the pond of water, although he did not slide at a huge distance at a huge speed due to the huge friction of the water, which was much more than the friction in air. "Gah!" screamed Giant Soldier of Steel as he slid a bit before stopping, and then he rolled back and got up on his feet. But as soon as he did that, he saw Holyta running around him along the water's surface at blinding speed in a circle, so fast that he created afterimages as he ran, and Holyta ran with such huge speed and force that a huge circular wall of water rose up from the pond and extending up to the ceiling of the cave! An extremely strong hurricane-like wind also radiated outward from Holyta as he ran so fast in a circle, creating tidal waves all over the pond of water, with Giant Soldier of Steel at the center of where the wind was radiating from! "Such a pointless and annoying trick... Do you think it'll work on me?!" said Giant Soldier of Steel, and then he was about to do a horizontal slash with his sword, trying to hit Holyta with it, but before he could even swing his sword, he found his right arm immobolized as some hard ice encased around it! "What...!" said Giant Soldier of Steel, widening his eyes as he looked at his frozen right arm, and then he looked and saw that the rest of his body, along with a cylinder-shaped pillar extending from the ground where he was standing to the ceiling of the cave started getting frozen in ice, and the cylinder had a radius the same as that of the circle which Holyta was running around in! "Aaaarrghhh!" Giant Soldier of Steel screamed as he watched his entire body started getting frozen! After the cylinder got completely frozen, Holyta used Instant Movement while he was still in the middle of running at extreme speed, and he dissapeared from sight, reappearing right behind the pillar of ice which Giant Soldier of Steel was encased in, and Holyta appeared with his back turned to the pillar of ice. The pillar of ice then cracked slightly, and then Giant Soldier of Steel broke out of the ice with a powerful move of his arms, and Holyta turned his body to the side and turned his head to face Giant Soldier of Steel as he saw that! "Gahh! You lowly creature!" shouted Giant Soldier of Steel angrily then as he raised his sword, turned around and tried to slam its blade down at Holyta's head to split his head in half but Holyta blocked the sword effortlessly with the horn on his head, although the huge downward force of Giant Soldier of Steel's attack created an enormous splash of water which radiated from under Holyta's feet, and an enormous tidal wave radiated outward from Holyta towards all directions, soaking the land surrounding the pond wet! A huge explosion of sparks also happened as Giant Soldier of Steel's sword collided with Holyta's horn. "Iiiirraaaaa" ("Give it up. At your level of power, you are no match for me. Continue, and you'll only be throwing yourself into the sword") said Holyta. "What the hell?! What's with the strength of this creature? I'm three times his size, yet he's able to stop my attack so easily? Impossible!" said Giant Soldier of Steel, looking down at Holyta with his eyes widened! "Iiiiillaaaaa" said Holyta ("The simple answer is that the difference between the power of the energy I have stored in my body is way too huge compared to yours. It's pointless to continue, so please just stop"). "Grrr..." said Giant Soldier of Steel, as he held his sword with both hands and continued pushing against Holyta hard, although Giant Soldier of Steel's efforts were not even moving Holyta! "Iiiiraaa" ("Unfortunately, it seems you won't understand!") said Holyta, and then he started spinning his horn around like a drill, while pushing it forward against Giant Soldier of Steel's sword, creating a huge amount of friction which caused much sparks to fly from where Holyta's horn was spinning against Giant Soldier of Steel's sword, and Giant Soldier of Steel widened his eyes and gasped as he looked at his sword, while he felt the strong friction scraping against it! As Holyta spun his horn faster and faster while pushing it forward, more and more friction were created, until eventually an explosion of lightning happened, blasting Giant Soldier of Steel backwards on his feet! "Gaaarrghh!" screamed Giant Soldier of Steel as he took many steps back after being blasted backwards by the explosion, and then Holyta tapped the surface of the water gently with his right front foot, raising an enormous tsunami of crystal-clear water filled with much aurora light and sending it crashing at high speed towards Giant Soldier of Steel! The tsunami, which was almost as high as the ceiling of the cave, washed past Giant Soldier of Steel, who closed his eyes and formed an "x" with his arms to guard his face as the tsunami went over him, but the force of the tsunami was so great that Giant Soldier of Steel got pushed over, and he rolled backwards along the bottom of the pond of water a few times before getting back up and sliding back a bit on his feet. But as soon as he got back up, he looked forward and saw Holyta flapping his wings a few times, before calmly blasting an extremely powerful and compressed beam of aurora light out of his mouth at him, and the beam was so strong that it was even shaking the surrounding environment! "Shit!" said Giant Soldier of Steel, widening his eyes just before he got hit directly by the beam, which blasted him and sending him sliding back on his feet at huge speed, despite the huge friction of the water which resisted the force of the beam! Giant Soldier of Steel slid backwards fast for a huge distance, carving two rivers under the water with his huge feets, while he also crashed through ten rocks which were underwater, smashing them to pieces, before he got blasted straight out of the pond of water and hit a wall in the cave, cracking the wall and also shaking the whole cave! "Gah!" screamed Giant Soldier of Steel as he crashed hard onto the wall and coughed out some dark energy while closing his eyes in pain! Then he opened his left eye to look forward, and he saw the beam of aurora light fading away. But as soon as the light faded, he saw Holyta kicking off the surface of the water which he was standing on hard, creating an enormous splash before launching himself towards Giant Soldier of Steel fast at the speed of a comet close to the surface of the water, while two huge tidal waves were radiating from under him due to the insanely high speed at which he was flying! Giant Soldier of Steel widened his left eye as he saw Holyta diving horn-first at him, and then he quickly raised his sword and blocked a diving stab attack from Holyta's horn with the flat side of his sword, although the huge force of Holyta's attack cratered the wall behind Giant Soldier of Steel, and also sent many rocks flying out of the wall! "Argh! Why you little..." said Giant Soldier of Steel, looking desperate and angry at Holyta. "Iiiiirruuaa" said Holyta ("It's pointless to resist") as he looked into Giant Soldier of Steel's eyes with his own red eyes, and then he started spinning his horn around like a drill again! "bleep!" said Giant Soldier of Steel, widening his eyes, but before he could react, Holyta's spinning horn cut right through Giant Soldier of Steel's sword, shattering its blade to pieces, before the horn impaled Giant Soldier of Steel straight through the stomach, and then the horn started drilling his inside! "GRAAAAGGGHHH!" Giant Soldier of Steel screamed extremely loudly in pain as an insane amount of dark energy was constantly spouting from his stomach as Holyta's horn was drilling it! "bleep! bleep you!" screamed Giant Soldier of Steel as he tried to slam Holyta with the hilt of his sword, which was the only part of his sword which was left after Holyta had smashed its blade to pieces, but before he could do that, Holyta suddenly raised his two front legs and kicked Giant Soldier of Steel hard in the stomach! "GRRRAAAUGH!" Giant Soldier of Steel screamed in excruciating pain with his eyes widened and almost popped out of his head as Holyta's two front legs kicked him directly in the stomach with huge force, and then a huge blast of dark energy spouted from Giant Soldier of Steel's mouth, before he got sent flying straight into the wall which he was pinned again by the huge force of Holyta's kick, and then Giant Soldier of Steel smashed a hole through the wall and ended up in another chamber in the cave! Giant Soldier of Steel slid back on his feet at blinding speed across that chamber, until he hit the wall at the back of it and smashed a hole through that wall too! Then Giant Soldier of Steel kept sliding through the cave at huge speed, crashing through hundreds of walls and rocks, which were all made of extremely hard cave rocks, and he was barely being slowed down each time he crashed into something, as he was kicked with unimaginable force and was sliding back at huge speed and carving two deep rivers in the ground with his two huge feet! Giant Soldier of Steel kept crashing through walls after walls through the cave, and he even slid straight through the beginning of the cave, where many Electabots, Magmabots, Silverducks and Cythers were still fighting against some Holy Creatures, and after that he kept going and slid outside the cave! At that point, Giant Soldier of Steel had lost a lot of speed, but he was still sliding at a high speed! He then crashed through about twenty trees in some bushes before hitting a rock, smashing it to pieces and then stopping. As of then, two deep rivers had been carved in the ground by Giant Soldier of Steel's slide, and the rivers led from inside the deepest level of the ice cavern, where Holyta had kicked Giant Soldier of Steel, all the way outside the cave in a straight line, to the place where Giant Soldier of Steel was now. Hundreds of holes were also smashed in the ice cavern through hundreds of walls, and this created a straight-line path which led from outside the ice cavern straight into the deepest level of the cave, and this made it possible to take a shortcut all the way to the cave's deepest level without having to go through the extremely complicated maze which Giant Soldier of Steel had to go through before! Much dust and snow particles also filled the air above where the two deep rivers were carved. After a few seconds, the snow and dust settled. "What the..." said a Cyther, who was inside the ice cavern then as he got out and looked at Giant Soldier of Steel, who was lying extremely beaten up on the ground outside! "Impossible... Even Giant Soldier of Steel, who all by himself managed to kill those four Holy Creatures who we were doing so hopelessly against before... Even he got beaten up so badly? What the hell's just happened?" said an Electabot, covering his mouth with his hands and looking extremely surprised! "He must've been fighting an unimaginably powerful opponent... To be able to bring him down to this state..." said a Silverduck. "Gahh..." said Giant Soldier of Steel then, breathing heavily as he slowly got up from the ground, while many pieces of metal fell off his half-destroyed body, and much dark energy was leaking from a diagonal slash across his back, a vertical slash across his right shoulder, a huge hole in his stomach and various cracks on his body! "Giant Soldier of Steel, are you okay?" a Magmabot then said as he looked at Giant Soldier of Steel. "Grah... I... I'm fine... Damn that... that Holy Creature..." said Giant Soldier of Steel, looking tired and out of breath. Then suddenly, the ground around Giant Soldier of Steel cracked open in a circular way, and then some blue flames came out of the cracks, so that now a ring of blue flames was surrounding Giant Soldier of Steel, although there were some open space within the ring of blue fire, as the ring had a radius of ten meters. Giant Soldier of Steel, the Electabots, Magmabots, Silverducks and Cythers then all gasped and widened their eyes as they saw that, and immediately, they noticed the sound of something moving at blinding speed! Then they all looked up at the top of a high, steep rock which was about three floors high, and was located between the ring of blue fire where Giant Soldier of Steel was trapped in and the cave where the other machines were in! When they looked up at the top of that rock, they saw Holyta appearing on top of it at blinding speed, and he appeared facing Giant Soldier of Steel's direction! "Iiii Raaaaa..." said Holyta ("Now that I think about it, if I were to let you leave here alive, you would only go on to attack other beings of this world, according to what you claim your objectives to be. If such is the case, then it'll be as I said before... I won't show you any mercy") as he looked at Giant Soldier of Steel. "Damn you!" said Giant Soldier of Steel. "Hey you! Were you the one who did this to Giant Soldier of Steel?!" said a Magmabot angrily as he looked up at Holyta. "Hey, give us an answer!" said an Electabot. Holyta then turned his head just enough to look at the machines behind him with the corner of his right eye briefly for a second, before he turned back to look at Giant Soldier of Steel. After that, he gently flapped his wings backwards, at the direction of the Magmabots, Electabots, Silverducks and Cythers, sending an extremely cold wind at them! "Argh what!" said a Cyther then as he noticed his body starting to get frozen by the wind! "Shit!" said a Cyther, and within less than three seconds all the machines got frozen solid completely! After that, Holyta gently tapped the ground with his right front foot, creating a slight earthquake which instantly shattered all the frozen machines to pieces! "Argh! Damn! Nooo!" said Giant Soldier of Steel as he looked at the destroyed machines. Now, Holyta was still standing on top of a high steep rock, looking down at Giant Soldier of Steel, while Giant Soldier of Steel looked up at the rock where Holyta was standing, and the Moon in the sky could be seen in the background behind Holyta from Giant Soldier of Steel's perspective. "Iiiiiuuuu laaaaa" said Holyta ("It's over, Giant Soldier of Steel. You can prepare to witness one of the most powerful lightning-element techniques in existence"), as some strong wind suddenly started blowing by, and the strong wind blew some dark clouds which started covering the sky! Many bolts of lightning were also sparking within those dark clouds, and it soon started raining extremely heavily! Many loud thundering noises could also be heard from the sky, which within just a few seconds blocked out the Moon from the sky! "Hm...?!" said Giant Soldier of Steel, looking alert up at the sky. Holyta then slowly closed his eyes and said "Iiiiiuuuurreaaaa!" ("I, who stand at the full light of the heavens command thee, who opens the gates of hell! Come forth divine lightning!") as a gigantic circle of holy light appeared in the night sky directly above Giant Soldier of Steel! The circle of holy light was extremely huge and bright, enlightening half the area of Heaven surrounded by the white circular wall! An extremely bright ray of holy light also shined down from the circle onto Giant Soldier of Steel, creating another circle of holy light on the ground, with Giant Soldier of Steel standing at the very center of the circle, which had a radius fifty times that of the ring of blue fire which was also surrounding Giant Soldier of Steel, who widened his eyes and gasped loudly as he looked up at the holy light! Many gigantic bolts of lightning then sparked in the sky, creating extremely loud thunders! "Iiiiiaaalaaa!" ("This ends now! Indignation!") Holyta then said as he reopened his eyes fast, and then hundreds of gigantic thick bolts of lightning descended from the circle of holy light up in the sky and struck the circle of holy light on the ground all simultaneously! "Aaaarruuggghh!" Giant Soldier of Steel screamed loudly as he dissapeared into the hundreds of lightning bolts which engulfed him, and the hundreds of lightning bolts also created so much light that the entire area of Heaven surrounded by the white circular walls, as well as even areas outside the wall temporarily became as bright as daytime, and an unbelievably loud thunder, which would instantly deafen any ordinary human who hears it from close also radiated from the hundreds of lightning bolts, and this thunder could be heard from areas of Heaven miles away from the white circular wall! To be continued -------------------
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DragonMaster JKA 1 Pure...almost -.- high on "N" since: Feb 2004	May 14, 08 at 12:53PM re: Make Your Own Story Thread
	The Forgotten Conquerer; Prologue For years and years, tales of destruction and misfortune among the gods have been thrown around in attempts to awe the listener. Tales of how the almighty ChaosLord formed the universe, tales of how the foul creatures of Dragon Planet and the darkened machines of Chaos Planet have been at war for centuries. But what isn't told in these legends, is that there was a third conquerer. Only among the most wise scribes is the legend told of a creature jealous of Dragonaurus and Chaoslord, so jealous it would do anything to have the same power, the same strength, even the same renown. And one day, it did. Tales are told of a mighty battle between gods. This third conquerer had befriended both Chaos Lord and Dragonaurus. But one day, it had to choose between the two. After nearly a century of debating, it finally decided it would side with ChaosLord, who seemed to bestow the most kindness upon him. This wasn't the wisest choice. After the two planets had their forces at frontlines, a gruesome battle started. This battle had gone on for ages. The forgotten conquerer had seen much bloodshed, innocent machines, dragons, and other creatures dying. All for a battle deciding which lord had the most power. It wouldn't matter in the end, because even after the battle, the soldiers got notihng out of it. The feud for power would go on for eternity. The forgotten Conquerer had realised this, and fled the known corners of the universe. It isn't known what happened to this mighty conquerer, a dragon turned to chaos. Some say it lives in the depths of Chaos Planet, some say it lurks in the shadows of Dragon Planet. Life has gone on without it, and as it predicted, the tedious feud for power is still raging to this day. To be continued... ------------------- Now known as X simplicity X or I pwn3d I
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OverLord of Chaos Chaos Cannon! true seeker (2K Remix) total posts: 2134 since: May 2007	May 14, 08 at 05:36PM ...
	Here is a story I made just now for fun. No offense intended against anyone. Once upon a time, there were three friends. They were sonicx, nightmarexv1, and Dragon Swordsman. Nightmarexv1 was a sad loser wasting oxygen and natural resources of the planet with his worthless existence, and the only things he offered in return were insults and attacks on other people. Basically, he was a complete jackass and a failure at everything. He was the hateful anti-social bastard of the group. Sonicx was quite similar but less aggressive and more random. He was the one in the group who was the most close to an average person, but still he was far behind in terms of intelligence. He was also known for his rather awkward sexual preferences, namely in kangaroos. Both sonicx and nightmarexv1 suffered from an inherent weakness of the intellect that goes beyond simple stupidity, easily identifiable by their decision to mess with ChaosLord. They also shared a close relationship with each other (VERY close). Dragon Swordsman was more intelligent than the previous two, but for some reasons he was hated by many people. This made him wonder if there was something special about him that made him stick out so much from the others, and then through various psychological sequences into his soul through the passing years, he ended up seeing himself as a God who was destined to judge the world. He also had the Dragon Sword and the Dragon Cape which he believed to be invincible. One day, Dragon Swordsman assigned a mission to sonicx and nightmarexv1. It was to kill his enemy, a cool guy known as ChaosLord. "I wonder, will those two make it with their limited intelligence?" thought Dragon Swordsman as he saw his two friends setting off for their mission. Nightmarexv1 and sonicx split and searched for their target. Nightmarexv1 found ChaosLord first and then he screamed "Die, ChaosLord!" as he charged at him with an iron pipe. But then he slipped on a banana on the ground and then he fell face-first into a pile of dog crap. ChaosLord then laughed loudly at him. "You bastard!!" screamed nightmarexv1 then as he got up, wiped the shit off his face and charged at ChaosLord again. But then ChaosLord quickly moved to the side and kicked nightmarexv1's leg, making him trip and fall straight into a trash can. "Ugh! What's that?" nightmarexv1 said then. "A garbage can, where trash like you belong" ChaosLord said then. "Fuck! I'll kill you!" screamed nightmarexv1 then as he got out of the trash and charged at ChaosLord once again. "I guess a normal trash can won't do, hm? Well then, let's try something else" ChaosLord said then. Then he grabbed nightmarexv1 by the shirt and threw him into an incinerator. "AAAAARGH!!!" nightmarexv1 screamed loudly as he got burned to ashes alive. "Bye-bye, trash" ChaosLord said then as he calmly walked away from the scene. Next was sonicx. He found ChaosLord and said "You are ChaosLord, right? Prepare to die!" as he pulled out a pistol and started shooting at ChaosLord repeatedly. However ChaosLord suddenly vanished and the bullets all missed. "What?!" sonicx said as he saw that with his eyes widened. "Over here" he heard a voice from behind him then. He quickly turned around only to see ChaosLord there, doing a huge and vicious side kick straight at his chest. "Guh!!!" sonicx screamed and coughed out blood and dropped his pistol and was sent flying by ChaosLord's strong kick, and then he fell in a pond of aligators in a zoo, where he got eaten alive. "Serves you right for messing with me" ChaosLord said as he apathetically watched sonicx's body getting torn apart by the hungry aligators and eaten. Dragon Swordsman learned of the news and angrily said "Those useless idiots! I knew it'd end up like this!". Then he grabbed his Dragon Sword and said "I guess there's no choice. It appears I'll have to fight him myself now...". Then he went out and searched for ChaosLord. He found ChaosLord standing calmly somewhere with his hands in his pockets. "ChaosLord, now I shall bring divine judgement on you!!" Dragon Swordsman said then and he threw a Poke Ball. "Go, Dragonite! Finish this bastard with Horn Drill!" said Dragon Swordsman, and then his Dragonite flew at ChaosLord fast with its horn first and spinning like a drill. However ChaosLord calmly raised his hand and then he effortlessly stopped Dragonite's attack with psychic energy. "D-Drag?" Dragonite said confused and with its eyes widened as it pushed its spinning horn against ChaosLord's hand, but it had no effect and ChaosLord was watching at it with psychic energy shining blue in his eyes. Then ChaosLord suddenly blasted Dragonite with psychic energy, and the Dragonite fell on the ground and slid on its body for some distance before stopping, and its belly had also been injured by getting scratched on the road as it slid along it. "Dammit! Psychic energy!" Dragon Swordsman said then as he saw that. "But heh, I'll defeat it with spirit energy!" he said then as he radiated some spirit energy from his body. "Haaa!" he shouted his battle cry then as he charged at ChaosLord and swung down his blade at him. But then ChaosLord calmly blocked Dragon Swordsman's sword with just his index finger, and without even getting injured or pushed back at all. "What!" Dragon Swordsman said then as he saw that with his eyes widened. "Let me teach you something. Psychic energy is not power. It is control. Power is completely useless against control. No matter how much of it you have, you will never defeat me with it, as I will simply take control of it and stop it effortlessly with my psychic energy" said ChaosLord, and then he grew a bone blade from his other hand and slashed Dragon Swordsman's stomach, almost chopping him in half. "UGGGHHH!!!" screamed Dragon Swordsman then as his entire stomach was gone after ChaosLord's brutal attack. "Shit! But I thought spirit energy was like dark Pokemon and ghosts!!" Dragon Swordsman said desperately. "You were wrong" ChaosLord said then. "Ghh... I'll still kill you somehow! Take this!" Dragon Swordsman said then as he kicked a rock from the ground and it flew at ChaosLord's head. But then ChaosLord widened his eyes at the rock and shattered it just with his mind. "Ugh!" Dragon Swordsman said then as he saw that unable to believe in his eyes. "Shigan" said ChaosLord then as he thrusted his index finger at Dragon Swordsman's throat at unbelievable speed, impaling it like a bullet. Then he pulled it out full of blood, and Dragon Swordsman fell on his knees and caught his throat, which now had a bleeding hole on it and he couldn't breathe or speak. ChaosLord then kicked Dragon Swordsman on the face, making him fall down completely. "D-Dam yuh..." Dragon Swordsman then said in a quiet whispering-like voice. "Never mess with ChaosLord" ChaosLord said then, and then after that, Dragon Swordsman stopped breathing and died with his eyes left open wide in surprise. The End. ------------------- Fear the power of Chaos!
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Dragon Swordsman Shin sekai no Kami forum raider total posts: 2569 since: Jan 2005	May 17, 08 at 05:52AM re: Make Your Own Story Thread
	Chapter 104: Confrontation Atop Mount Mugen The entire area of Heaven within the white circular wall, and even some parts outside of it became as bright as daytime temporarily, due to the insanely bright light radiating from Holyta's Indignation technique, which he used on Giant Soldier of Steel! Much extremely loud sound, as well as an unbelievably huge and powerful shockwave of spirit energy radiated outward from the hundreds of bolts of divine lightning, ripping thousands of nearby trees out of the ground, many beings around the area were being completely blown away by the insane hurricane-like spirit energy, and an unbelievably huge and deep crater with a radius of a kilometer was created on the ground where Giant Soldier of Steel was standing before due to the hundreds of lightning bolts striking that area simultaneously. Much rain was also falling from the sky at the same time. Now, all that was left was the huge crater on the ground caused by the lightning bolts, and an extremely huge area was reduced to mere rubbles due to the mere splash damage of the attack! Holyta was now no longer standing on top of a steep rock, and he was just floating in the air with his wings, as the rock he was standing on before instantly disintegrated by the splash damage of the Indignation! Giant Soldier of Steel was also completely obliterated into nothingness the second he was struck by the Indignation! After a few seconds the hundreds of lightning bolts that descended from the sky, as well as the circle of holy light in the sky faded away, and everything became dark again. Meanwhile, MetalGreymon and SkullGreymon were running through a dark forest somewhere under the heavily raining sky. Suddenly, they noticed the hundreds of lightning bolts raining from the sky in the distance, as well as the extremely loud thunder, the extremely bright light and the powerful shockwave of spirit energy which radiated from that direction! The two beings stopped running as they noticed the Indignation attack, and they turned their heads to look at that direction. "Heh, looks like things are getting heated up, eh?" said MetalGreymon after the the lightning bolts descended. Meanwhile, the Massacrer was walking along an uphill dirt path, which was actually a steep path which led up the mountain where Yamix was standing on, and it was also raining at that area. The Massacrer was also walking so high up the mountain that there were some nearby dark clouds that could be seen from very close, as the mountain was extremely high and touching the sky! As the Massacrer was walking, many bolts of lightning were happening around him, striking at random places, and the sound of the thunder also came immediately as the lightning bolts happened, since the Massacrer was so close to the lightning bolts! Suddenly, a large crow-like Holy Creature lunged out of some bushes to ambush the Massacrer from the left, who impaled the Holy Creature with his metal scorpion tail and tossed him away without even looking at him! After that, the Massacrer kept walking, but then another crow-like Holy Creature flew out of the bushes and tried to peck the Massacrer from the right, but the Massacrer pointed his palm at that Holy Creature and shot an Ice Beam at him, hitting him at point-blank range and freezing him, and then he fell on the ground and shattered to pieces! Then five more crow-like Holy Creatures flew up to the Massacrer and surrounded him from all sides, but before they could attack, three huge black spikes erupted out of the ground around the Massacrer and impaled three of the Holy Creatures through the stomach, killing them bloodily! After that, the Massacrer moved his tail at blinding speed and did two extremely fast whips at the remaining two Holy Creatures, taking them both out within less than a second! After that, the Massacrer heard some flapping noises coming from above and in front of him, and then he raised his head and saw ten more crow-like Holy Creatures divebombing at his direction at extreme speed! But then the Massacrer calmly raised his right hand and pointed his right palm up at the Holy Creatures, and then he sent a wave of darkness upward which washed over those Holy Creatures, draining all of their energy instantly, and then the Holy Creatures all fell on the ground defeated! The Massacrer then kept walking forward slowly along the wet ground, and he stopped just as he walked past the corpses of the ten Holy Creatures he just defeated. After he stopped, the Massacrer had his head lowered to look down at the ground, and at that moment, an enormous bolt of lightning sparked across the sky, lighting up the entire mountain temporarily, and the lightning was followed by a loud thunder! After that lightning and thunder ended, the Massacrer stood still. On his way up the mountain, he had defeated dozens of bird-like Holy Creatures who had tried to attack him on his way up, and the corpses of all those dead Holy Creatures were lying all over the wet dirt path which the Massacrer took in order to reach the mountain's top! Then all those corpses disintegrated into some energy particles, which then flew at the Massacrer and got absorbed into him! After the energy particles all got absorbed into the Massacrer completely, he stood still, still with his head down and remaining silent for a few seconds. "So you are Yamix, one of the Ten Holy Elites of Heaven" said the Massacrer suddenly, as he raised his head, looked forward and saw Yamix standing in front of him, at the highest peak of the entire mountain! However, the Massacrer could not see him properly as the place was too dark. Yamix was initially standing under the heavy rainstorm, but as soon as the Massacrer looked at him, the dark clouds that covered the sky dispersed, the rainstorm and thunderstorm stopped immediately, and then the many stars and the Moon in the sky which were covered by the dark clouds before got revealed again! Since Yamix and the Massacrer were both at the top of an extremely high mountain which touched the sky, even the Moon did not seem to be very high up in the sky, and it seemed to be so low that it almost touched the horizon from the perspective of one standing at the top of the mountain! However, at the same time, since the mountain was so high, one standing on top of it was closer to the Moon than one standing on the ground, so the Moon seemed much bigger than normal! From the Massacrer's perspective, the Moon was hanging low in the sky near the horizon, directly behind Yamix, and the moonlight shined towards the Massacrer from behind Yamix. This made it seem to the Massacrer's perspective that the moonlight was radiating from behind Yamix, and this, along with the powerful spirit energy which Yamix was unconsciously radiating from his body, made Yamix's presence seem extremely intimidating! Now, with the moonlight, the Massacrer could see Yamix properly. "And… who’d think you’d be the same one who managed to defeat hundreds of machines at Chaos Planet using a variety of fire, lightning and holy techniques" the Massacrer then continued. Then Yamix, who was standing flapping his wings gracefully and looking at the Massacrer said "Iiiiinnngggoooouuhhh" ("So you actually remember me from way back then? Such an honor! You are the Massacrer of ChaosGraveyard, the Second Chosen Champion. Welcome here to the peak of Mount Mugen, the highest mountain within Heaven’s Sacred Area. You effortlessly disposed of dozens of bird-type Holy Creatures under my command. And you even managed to beat Senme, the second strongest bird-type Holy Creature in all of Heaven. To be able to accomplish all of these feats and make your way all the way up here before me… I guess that is enough of a reason to acknowledge your power"). "You know my name? Although I do not remember telling it to you" said the Massacrer. "Iiiiooouuunng" ("Ofcourse you didn’t. But, did you not notice the fact that I had Primero, Segundo and Tercero observe you throughout your whole battle with Senme?") said Yamix. "Those three birds who stood at the side of that mountain the whole time? I’ve noticed them from the very start. I was planning to eliminate them right after I destroyed Senme, but it’s a pity they fled soon after" said the Massacrer. Yamix then smirked and said "Iiiinnguu" ("Well then, that’s just too bad for you"). The Massacrer then stood silent for a few seconds, while some strong wind came by and blew his clothes along with Yamix's feathers. Then suddenly, fifty eyes resembling those on

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