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Dark Sorcerer
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Jun 25, 08 at 12:24PM
re: Make Your Own Story Thread

Here is a story part I was going to include in my story. It is one of my favorite scenes in the story, but it probably won't make it in my new one since the event that happens here will happen in another way in my story (although, it will still look as cool).



One day on Chaos Planet, ChaosLord was sitting on his throne, on the top of Chaos Tower. His throne was facing some large red windows, from which ChaosLord was observing ChaosPlanet, while behind him, in the end of the room, was a wall with an open door. Suddenly, someone knocked the wall close to the door. "Enter" ChaosLord said then, and then he heard some footsteps of someone walking in. He turned his head slightly to the left, and with his left eye he noticed a Catbot, who immediately bowed on his knee before the OverLord of Chaos. "What is it?" ChaosLord said then, as he turned his head and looked to his front again. "Sir! I am here on behalf of Chosen Champion Mechanikat. He requests your permission to launch a test attack against a group of dragons discovered wandering in space" the Catbot replied. "What kind of attack?" ChaosLord said. "The V-2 Rocket" the Catbot replied. "Hm. For it to be able to defeat those dragons, it must be quite the powerful weapon..." ChaosLord said then, as he looked outside the red windows at space. Then he got up from his throne, and started walking towards the exit of the room behind the throne. "You are dismissed" he said to the Catbot as he walked by him and exit the door, starting to go walk down Chaos Tower.

Meanwhile, the Chaos Generals, the Massacrer, Beelzemon, Alphamon and Omegamon, Puppetmon, Mega-Emperor, and Mechanikat were all gathered in a very large control room somewhere inside Mechanikat's laboratory. The room had a lot of computers, as well as a large screen, which all the machines and dark beings were watching at the moment. There was also another similar screen on the other side of the room, through which Machinedramon observed as well. The screen which all the machines were observing displayed an area in space, where countless millions of dragons were travelling! Suddenly, in the room, two large double doors slid open quickly and automatically, revealing ChaosLord, who then stepped into the room, attracting the machines' attention. "So everyone is here" he said, as he looked at the Chaos Generals and the Chosen Champions. "Ah, ChaosLord, you came yourself?" Mechanikat said then. "Your messenger talked about a weapon of mass destruction. Show me" ChaosLord said then. "I see" Mechanikat said then, as he turned and typed some stuff rapidly on a computer keyboard and panel. Afterwards, the picture on the screen which the machines had been watching changed to a picture of an underground base's interior. In this underground base, there was one huge rocket set up on some machines and pointing upwards. "This is the V-2 Rocket, my latest invention. It is a missile with the capability to travel across large distances in space and destroy targets up to the size of a star. Its surface, mostly the top, is infused with dark energy to absorb resistance from the atmosphere, enabling it to travel with more ease. Its engine utilizes electrical energy and converts it into another special form of energy, which under ideal conditions would enable the rocket to travel even up to the speed of lightning. Combining the incredible speed at which the rocket travels with the massive destructive power of the explosives in the nose cone and the rest of the rocket, a gigantic explosion is produced, able to instantly eradicate targets of great size and power, such as..." said Mechanikat, and then he clicked a button, changing the picture on the screen to a picture of countless dragons flying in space. "...these dragons" he continued, while everyone was watching at the dragons on the screen. "Incredible... It can really take out that many enemies at once?" Mega-Emperor said then, as he looked at the countless dragons in the screen. "In their current formation, at least 95% of them" Mechanikat replied with certain confidence. "Interesting. Try it, Mechanikat" ChaosLord said then, smiling evily a bit. "Thank you. Right. Now first, to set up the rocket..." Mechanikat said, as he clicked some buttons and moved some levers, and then the screen on the picture changed to a picture of the ground above the underground base which was showing previously. On that ground there was a huge, circular metal double gate, which then slowly slid open, while at the same time the V-2 Rocket from the underground base was being lifted by some machines and arising to the ground level through the opening gate! In some seconds, the gate opened completely, and the rocket was also completely out of the base, in the surface of the ground, pointing at the sky and ready to launch. "Done. Now, to lock on the target..." said Mechanikat, and then he clicked a button and changed the picture on the screen to a picture that showed many of the dragons flying in the universe. Then Mechanikat clicked some more buttons, opening a program which showed a huge list of numbers, some of which were changing constantly, while others were static. "Analyzing the movement data of the dragons collected in the past half hour... Calculating the best target..." Mechanikat said, as he clicked some more buttons, and then some insane stuff and diagrams appeared on the screen, which the other machines didn't understand as they were extremely complicated and happened at way too great speeds. "Incredible. So this is the extent of Mechanikat's intelligence..." the Massacrer thought as he watched silently. "Hey, what's all this stuff? Where's the explosion?" Puppetmon said impatiently then. "It's almost ready. Locking on the target..." said Mechanikat, as he clicked some buttons, and then the picture on the screen showed some dragons and one of them got highlighted. The highlight then flashed three times and then stopped and remained, confirming the target. "It's finished. Now, let's launch the rocket!" Mechanikat said then, with some excitement in his voice, as he clicked a button and changed the picture on the screen to a picture of the V-2 Rocket. "V-2 Rocket!" Mechanikat said then, as he clicked a button, and then the rocket started launching! Immediately, the ground started shaking like an earthquake by the rocket's power, as well as its huge sound of being launched, although Mechanikat's laboratory was sound-proof, and he and the others only heard a less loud launching sound from the video which displayed the rocket launching. From the bottom of the rocket, a huge, continuous burst of blue flames and blue lightning at the same time came out, and with insane power, it quickly sent the rocket flying very high in the sky! The rocket was also accelerating at an unbelievably high rate, and in only a few seconds it vanished in space! "Fast!" Mega-Emperor said then as he saw that. Quickly then, Mechanikat clicked a button and changed the picture on the screen to a picture of the dragons in space. Then he zoomed out of the picture, so much that the dragons looked like dots on the screen! "Behold! The power of the V-2 Rocket. 3.. 2.. 1.." said Mechanikat, and an exact second after he finished, the rocket flew at speed way higher than ultrasonic speed and crashed right on the dragons before they could even react! The V-2 Rocket, as programmed, hit the dragon targetted by Mechanikat, and then it caused an insanely massive, unbelievably spectacular explosion at the size of a star! An extremely loud sound was also produced, which could be heard even as far as Chaos Planet, as well as the explosion being visible there too, looking like a star in the sky that shined for a few seconds and then faded away! "AWESOME~~!!" Puppetmon said in a loud, excited voice then as he saw that, watching as the dragons had been reduced to nothing by the explosion! Meanwhile, the others watched more calmly, but still quite amazed, while Mechanikat, ChaosLord and ChaosPiedmon had evil smiles on their faces as they saw that! "They all got killed... An entire population of them, just like that..." the Massacrer said then, surprised but still calm as always. "This is certainly a powerful weapon" ChaosBlackWarGreymon said then, looking serious, but not as surprised as the others. "How interesting" ChaosPiedmon said, smiling evily. "Abominable" Alphamon said then, catching everyone's attention. "These dragons died in the explosion without having any way of fighting back. They were not even given the opportunity to defend their pride and their ideals. A dishonorable death like that... Not even our worst enemies deserve that kind of end" Alphamon said then, and then he turned his back to everyone, facing the way to the exit of the room. "I've seen enough. Let's go, Omegamon" he said then. "Yes" Omegamon said then, and then Alphamon and Omegamon walked out of the room and left. "Well now, it seems some of us have no appreciation for art..." ChaosPiedmon said then. "He does have a point, though. If you overuse such a weapon, it will be no good. Battles should be fought, not destroyed" said Beelzemon, who had been standing with his back against a wall with his arms folded the whole time. "And speaking of such, it seems there are some dragons that survived the blast. I'll be off to finish them" he continued, and then he also walked out of the room. The machines then looked at the screen and indeed saw just a few dragons who had survived the explosion, barely, because they just happened to be in the furthest distance from its center when it happened. "At any rate, it was powerful. Good job" ChaosMetalSeadramon said then. "Thank you" Mechanikat said then. Meanwhile, Machinedramon had already cut connection with the room. "Impressive work, Mechanikat. That rocket was definitely amongst the most powerful attacks on Chaos Planet. However... Allow me to show you the meaning of true power" ChaosLord said then.

Shortly afterwards, on the top of Mechanikat's laboratory, an elevating ramp from within the building raised, bringing ChaosLord and the others on the top of the building. Under the night sky and its Moon, the machines looked at the countless stars. "I will show you my Ultimate attack, Chaos Cannon... At minimal power. Of these stars... How many do you think it will destroy?" ChaosLord said to the machines then, as he pointed his left claw at the countless stars in the sky. "An attack that destroys stars with roughly any of its power..." the Massacrer thought, as he looked at ChaosLord's cannons, which shined a bit under the moonlight. "What do you think, Puppetmon?" ChaosLord asked Puppetmon. "Um... Since ChaosLord is stronger than ChaosBlackWarGreymon, who can destroy a star with his Terra Destroyer... Maybe five or so" Pupetmon said, looking unsure. "Ridiculous" ChaosBlackWarGreymon said then, and all looked at him. "ChaosLord can destroy at least a million stars" he continued. ChaosLord smiled evily as he heard that. "A million... Isn't that a bit too much?" ChaosPiedmon said. "At minimal power... Perhaps hundreds, or a few thousands" ChaosMetalSeadramon said. "What about you, Mechanikat?" ChaosLord said then. "I could not know. Even my machines are unable to calculate your power. But it must definitely be an extraordinary amount, much more than anyone here has mentioned" Mechanikat said, surprising everyone except ChaosLord, who smiled evily. "Even more than a million?" Mega-Emperor said, surprised. "Impossible..." the Massacrer said. "Ha, ha, ha. Alright... I'll show you!" ChaosLord said then, as he looked at the stars and aimed his cannons on his back at them. "Chaos Cannon" ChaosLord said then, as he blasted only a single blast of yellow energy from his right cannon, which then travelled in space. The machines waited impatiently for the few seconds the beam took to fly far in space, even getting lost from sight, and then it hit an extremely distant planet and caused a galaxy-sized explosion! The explosion was unbelievably huge and bright, even enlightening the whole of Chaos Planet and many other planets, and all the beings of Chaos Planet covered their eyes by the bright light! "...!" the Massacrer was surprised, covering his face by the light, as did many other machines, and then, after a few seconds of shining, the explosion finally shrinked back to darkness and faded away. "Wh-What was that..?" Mega-Emperor said then, unable to believe what he had seen! "Impossible..." ChaosBlackWarGreymon said, as even he had been left surprised by the explosion! Rapidly, Mechanikat grabbed a walkie-talkie-like device and said "Catbot! How much damage?". "A-An entire galaxy, sir! A hundred billion stars just disappeared from the universe!!" the Catbot replied, and Mechanikat widened his right eye as he heard that! "I-Impossible... So this is ChaosLord's true power..!" He said then, looking extremely surprised. "This much power..." ChaosPiedmon said, as he looked at ChaosLord, and even he looked serious, while ChaosLord was standing smiling evily with his eyes closed.

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Jul 02, 08 at 09:14AM
re: Make Your Own Story Thread

Yay~ I always wanted to do this!
...some people I swear are doing Digimon...anyway, POkemon!!
Pokemon Master

Eva was 6 when she left her home of Lenonda City in the Theora region to be just like her dad, the Pokemon Master. She had only lost once, when she was three to her nannie, Jessie. Since then, she's trained her Umbreon from an egg.
Now she's 11, and waits to Chalange the Pokemon Master, after traveling through Kanto, Jhoto, Hoen, and Sinnoh regions, she waits to challange her dad, the Pokemon Master, to a battle. In her party, Umbreon, Giratina, Darkrai, Shadow Lugia, Mismagus, and Mawile. All Level 100.

Suddenly the doors opened, the lights of the stadium lit up the stands, filled with pokemon fans from all over the world. Eva walked to her side of the arena, her father stood oposite of her.
"Ready?" he asked, "Let's see how well you've trained. Go! Crobat!"
"I'm more than ready," she said, "I'll be the Pokemon Master! Go! Umbreon!"
the crowed starred in awe. Eva was a feared trainer in all regions, known well for her ability to talk to all pokemon, and send silent comands without saying anything. Her dad, was loud, but clever. but he didn't know about his daughter's psychic powers.
Eva stood silent for a moment, with her eyes closed.
Suddenly, Umbreon attacked, with Dark Pulse. the Pokemon Master, Duke, didn't see the attack coming. Crobat was fainted, in seconds, Umbreon, wasn't even tired. His daughter was a strong trainer.
"Go, Dragonite!" he said, throwing his pokemon, and returning his Crobat.
'That pokemon is huge,' Eva thought, 'well, big vs. small wont work, better send out Giratina.'
"Umbreon, return." Eva said, calling her pokemon back, "Giratina, let's go."
Giratina towered over the Dragonite.
"Damn," Duke said, to himself, "that is a BIG pokemon."
Eva gave Giratina the silent command to use Shadow Force. Giratina vanished instantly. the Dragonite was too afraid to even listen for a command. Giratina attacked, and the Dragonite fainted. Duke called it back. It was on, he would not lose to a kid, let alone his own daughter. He sent out his Noctowl, Eva returned her Giratina, and sent out Darkrai, Noctowl attempted to use Zen Headbutt,but it didn't affect Darkrai. Darkrai used shadow ball, and fainted the Noctowl.
"Didn't you learn that normal doesn't affect ghost?" Eva asked her dad, surpirsed.
She called back Darkrai, and sent out her Shadow Lugia. The crowd gawked. How on Earth did a 11 year old girl get a Lugia?!
Duke sent out his Dragonair, but soon called it back when Lugia used tackle. Soon, her Mismagus defeated his Skarmony, and her Mawile pwned his Salamence.
the Pokemon Master had lost to a 11 year old girl.
Eva shook hands with her dad, "Congrats, you're the new Pokemon Master." he said smiling.
Eva silently thanked her pokemon, without them, she would have probably lost.
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there will be more!!


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Jul 11, 08 at 03:55AM
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Once upon a time, there was a guy known as the Dragon Champion. A proud dragon trainer, he had defeated the Elite Four and was now in the final room, a huge, gray room without any decorations at all. Before him stood the current Pokemon League Champion, a tall man with dark brown (almost black) hair, calm and serious brown eyes, and dressed in black shoes, dark gray pants and a light gray T-shirt. He was standing with his arms folded and looking down at Dragon Champion, who was shorter than him. "Fwahaha... The Champion? Not for much longer!" Dragon Champion said as he grabbed a Poke Ball, threw it, and out came a Gyarados. Calmly, the Pokemon League Champion then snapped his fingers, and then a Mewtwo covered in armor teleported in front of him, facing the Gyarados! "Huh? What's that Pokemon?" Dragon Champion said, confused as he had never seen that Pokemon before. "This is the Ultimate Pokemon, Mewtwo. Do not hesitate to send any number of your Pokemon out against him" the Pokemon League Champion said. "What? Are you kidding me?" Dragon Champion said angrily. Then he pointed at Mewtwo and said "I'll finish this with one attack! Hyper Beam!", and then his Gyarados charged a Hyper beam and fired it at Mewtwo! However, Mewtwo just calmly raised his hand, stopping the Hyper Beam effortlessly, and then blasted it right back at Gyarados, fainting him in a single blow! "What!" Dragon Champion said as he saw that. "Is he serious?! How's that possible?" he wondered, as he looked at Mewtwo a bit frightened. "This will be a clean 6-0 sweep" the Pokemon League Champion said then. "Grr... Dammit, don't underestimate me!!" Dragon Champion screamed furiously then, as he grabbed another Poke Ball and sent out Tyranitar. "Tyranitar, Hyper Beam!" he commanded then, and then Tyranitar started charging a Hyper Beam in his mouth! But suddenly, Mewtwo teleported right in front of him, surprising him, and then he delivered a devastating Dynamicpunch at Tyranitar's stomach, crushing his rock armor and blasting him through a wall by a massive explosion! "Tyranitar!" Dragon Champion said, eye-widened, as he looked at the hole in the wall his Tyranitar had crashed through! "Hmph. There is no challenge at all. What a waste of my time..." the Pokemon League Champion said then tauntingly. "Darn you!!! Fine, you asked for it!! Go, my dragons!! Devastate!!!" Dragon Champion said then with an insane look on his eyes, as he grabbed his four remaining Poke Balls and threw them all in the battlefield. A Kingdra, an Aerodactyl, a Charizard and a Dragonite came out and looked at Mewtwo. "Hyper Beam!!" Dragon Champion screamed, with an insane evil smile on his face, while the Pokemon League Champion calmly said "Psychic Attack". Then, the Dragon Champion's eyes almost popped out of disbelief as he saw Mewtwo whooping all of his dragons solo with a single Psychic attack! "Guuu... Imp-Impossible..." Dragon Champion said then, as he fell on his knees and had an empty, desperate look on his eyes, which couldn't believe how effortlessly he had been overwhelmed by Mewtwo's psychic power! "Splendid work, Mewtwo. Return" the Pokemon League Champion said then, and then Mewtwo vanished in teleportation. "Do not feel bad about losing. Mewtwo is invincible" the Pokemon League Champion said to Dragon Champion then. "GRAAAAARGH!!! I may not have defeated you, Champion! But I can still eliminate you!!" Dragon Champion then screamed insanely, as he unsheathed a katana he had and started charging at the Pokemon League Champion! "DIE!!" he screamed in madness, but then suddenly the Pokemon League Champion pulled out a silenced pistol from his pocket and stuck it against Dragon Champion's forehead! The Dragon Champion then widened his eyes before the Pokemon League Champion pulled the trigger, blowing a hole through Dragon Champion's head! Dragon Champion then fell lifeless to the ground, and much blood started coming out of his head, which formed a red lake of blood around his corpse.

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Chapter 107: OverLord of Chaos


"After completely slaughtering all the beings at the planet where those machines attacked other than ChaosLord, the machines fought against ChaosLord, but they were unable to do anything to him. After witnessing the Ultimate Champion, a machine of power close to even that of the three Chaos Generals fall before ChaosLord, they were forced to retreat from the planet, but ChaosLord chased them all the way back to Chaos Planet, where he travelled the Great Long Beach, the Freezeland, the ChaosGraveyard and the plains to the West of there, while defeating all three of us Chaos Generals during that time, before he arrived at File City, where he defeated NeoCrimson. Upon watching all of these feats, GAIA became interested in ChaosLord and wanted to take his powers for himself. ChaosLord finally headed North towards the Kernal Zone, where Core Tower was, at the top of which GAIA was awaiting him. ChaosLord climbed to the top of Core Tower, and after a huge, universe-shaking destructive clash between the two beings of unimaginable power, GAIA was destroyed by ChaosLord, who proceeded to take over Chaos Planet as the OverLord of Chaos, and proving himself to be the true Ultimate Organism. Although GAIA was destroyed in his battle against ChaosLord, the remains of his body was later taken and rebuilt by Mechanikat, the greatest genius, engineer and researcher of Chaos Planet, and restored to full power. The New GAIA was created, although he no longer had control over his body, which now only serves an extremely powerful weapon, a radar with enough power to scan the universe, and a device able to create a shield big enough to guard the entire Chaos Planet from enemy attacks, all controlled by Mechanikat's computer in his laboratory. Although the GAIA who once stood as the Ultimate Organism is nowadays generally considered to be a thing of the past, some believe that his spirit still lives on in his body, awaiting the day when his body would run low enough on energy so that he will be able to take control of it again. Whether that may be the case or not, GAIA as of today is but a pathetic shell of his former self, being unable to do anything as his body serves under the very same machines who were ironically created by him. After ChaosLord became the King of Chaos Planet, all the machines who were faithful to GAIA before turned their loyalties to ChaosLord after his triumph... with the exception of NeoCrimson, who for some reasons fled into the wild immediately after he recovered from his battle with ChaosLord, and he had not been seen since" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon, who was facing Yaiba. "So basically, that Overlord GAIA could be considered... as the greatest ancestors of all machines at Chaos Planet... the Legendary Machines are the embodiments of ten different elements themselves, and NeoCrimson is basically a super-powerful being with all the powers of the three Chaos Generals?" said Yaiba. "That is correct" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. "I see" said Yaiba, and then he slowly drew his katana, revealing its blade to ChaosBlackWarGreymon, while much orange light radiating from the flames in the distance reflected off the surface of the shiny blade! ChaosBlackWarGreymon stood and watched calmly at Yaiba, while some gentle wind was blowing his hair. "In that case, before I worry about the beings that lie ahead at Chaos Planet, I shall focus all my attention on dealing with this invasion first!" Yaiba then continued as he pointed his katana at ChaosBlackWarGreymon, while much orange light reflected off its blade! "Very well then. Before the Legendary Machines, NeoCrimson or the OverLord of Chaos have to step in, I shall personally ensure that Heaven meets its utter destruction" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon as he spread his arms outward, and then he started radiating much dark energy from his body! ChaosBlackWarGreymon and Yaiba then looked each other in the eyes for a few seconds, while much strong night wind was blowing at them from the side! After that, the two beings both dissapeared from where they were standing at blinding speed, before reappearing high up in the air close to each other, and they clashed together in mid-air! ChaosBlackWarGreymon tried to slam his right claw at Yaiba while radiating much dark energy from his body, but Yaiba blocked with his katana, while radiating much spirit energy from his blade! ChaosBlackWarGreymon pushed his right claw extremely hard against Yaiba's katana, but Yaiba pushed back with equal force, and this made much spirit energy and dark energy radiate from where the two beings clashed with huge pressure which shook the atmosphere! After pushing against each other for a while, the two beings both dissapeared at blinding speed again, leaving behind some sparks at where they clashed before, and then they both reappeared and clashed together at another place, creating another explosion of dark energy and spirit energy! Then they dissapeared again, and then they kept appearing, clashing together and then reappearing while moving around at blinding speed, and they left behind huge explosions of dark energy and spirit energy as well as sparks with every collision! Ocassionally, the two beings would also clash at ground level, creating huge craters and explosions of dust as they clashed, due to the ground being hit at point-blank range by the explosions of dark energy and spirit energy that happened at ground level! After a while, Yaiba surrounded his katana with much flames, and swung his sword at ChaosBlackWarGreymon while in the middle of moving at blinding speed, sending a huge wave of flames at him, but then ChaosBlackWarGreymon slashed the air at Yaiba's direction, dispersing the flames instantly, and then the two beings clashed again at blinding speed! This time, Yaiba's katana had much flames surrounding it, but ChaosBlackWarGreymon also created an explosion of dark energy at the moment of his attack's impact against Yaiba's blade, and this created an enormous explosion of flames, dark energy and spirit energy on impact, and this explosion was greater than all the other explosions that happened in this fight! Then the two beings dissapeared at blinding speed again and then they kept clashing together at that speed like before, except this time, a huge explosion of flames, dark energy and spirit energy happened with each clash! The two beings were fighting together so fast that to an observer from the distance, they could not even be seen, except for when they collided together at random places, as they stopped for a split second each time they collided and pushed their blade and claw together. To an observer, it also seemed as if many explosions were constantly happening in the forest at random places where they were fighting, while the flames caused by Yaiba when he defeated MetalGreymon and SkullGreymon before could still be seen burning in the background!

While Yaiba and ChaosBlackWarGreymon were clashing, Yamix and the Massacrer were standing at the peak of Mount Mugen, facing each other, as much spirit energy radiating from Yamix's body, shaking the atmosphere around the whole mountain and lifting many small rocks from the ground! "I did not mean to ask you to show me that technique again. It’s just that after I defeat you, the reward I’ll gain seems to be quite rewarding" said the Massacrer as he was facing Yamix. "Iiiingguhh" ("So even after all I’ve told and shown you, you still believe that you stand a chance of victory?") said Yamix. "What are you implying, exactly? You told me that several machines have already been destroyed. Indeed, MetalDitto and Crustaroth no longer exist, although Alphamon and Armageddon are not entirely dead. And now, MetalGreymon and SkullGreymon have been destroyed as well. Was telling me all of this intended to be a form of intimidation? Ridiculous. The only inconvenience of those fools’ destruction is that I cannot take the powers and abilities of their’s which I desired" said the Massacrer. "Iiiinnguuurrrr" said Yamix ("Heh, it seems that they’re not really your friends after all. I take back my comment from earlier. So you machines really ain’t collaborating with each other as much as we thought, and it seems you just came to Heaven to fulfil whatever your personal goals may have been. Such a pity… that the machines don’t realize the weakness in disorganization"). "Names are for friends, so I don’t need one" said the Massacrer. Yamix then smirked as he heard that. "Iiiiinnguuuhh Oooooiiiiaaarrahh" ("Hah! I get it now! Judging by this attitude, you don't consider yourself to be part of the machines' side after all, eh? Very well then! So your goal is to simply fight only for yourself and gain power on your own! Interesting! Well then, allow me to take you on without holding back!") said Yamix, and then he raised his head and pointed his beak up at the sky while taking in a deep breath for a few seconds, before leaning forward and blasting an extremely thick stream of flames out of his mouth at the Massacrer at huge pressure! Just as he blasted the flames, an enormous shockwave of spirit energy also radiated from Yamix's body, cratering the ground below his feet, ripping hundreds of rocks out the ground and sending them flying outward, and the whole environment also became slightly darker! The flames were about to engulf the Massacrer completely, but the Massacrer quickly surrounded himself with a thick cloud of darkness to guard against the intense flames, which were melting the ground as they travelled and emitted much orange light, which could be seen from very far away, and so from the distance, much orange light could be seen radiating from the top of Mount Mugen, making the mountain seem like a volcano! "Iiiiinnguhh IIIIOOUU" said Yamix ("So you immediately guarded yourself with dark energy, your specialty, in an attempt to absorb all the flames, eh? Well then... WE'LL SEE JUST HOW MUCH YOUR DARK POWERS CAN DEFEND AGAINST!!"), with a sadistic look on his face, and then he started rapidly increasing the heat, intensity and pressure of the flames he was blasting! While doing that, Yamix also gradually changed the color of his flames from orange to yellow, then to green, to blue and finally to purple! By the time the color of the flames changed to purple, the flames had reached such a high level of heat, intensity and pressure that the dark energy the Massacrer was using to defend himself was starting to get overpowered! The Massacrer raised his head a bit and gasped as he saw that, and then he looked forward and saw the sadistic look on Yamix's face! "Iii" ("Die!") said Yamix, and then his purple flames were just about to overpower the Massacrer's dark energy completely and burn the Massacrer himself to ashes, when the Massacrer suddenly said "Thunder Quake", and then a huge earthquake as well as an unbelievably huge sphere-shaped explosion of compressed yellow lightning suddenly radiated from the Massacrer's body! The earthquake shook the entire Mount Mugen, causing a landslide, while the explosion of lightning instantly dispersed all of Yamix's purple flames, and then the explosion which travelled at the same speed as lightning itself was about to engulf Yamix, who instantly ceased the flames he was breathing and jumped up high, kicking off the ground with such huge force that he cratered it, and then Yamix flew out of the explosion's range and avoided it, while looking down at the explosion, and much bright yellow light was radiating from the explosion and shining in Yamix's face, which was smirking sinisterly! The Massacrer's explosion of lightning kept expanding until it had a diameter much greater than the entire width of Mount Mugen itself! The explosion of lightning was also extremely bright and came together with an unbelievably loud deafening thunder, and the explosion also instantly destroyed the entire top part of the mountain! "Iiiinngouuhh!" said Yamix ("Hah! So you've already found a perfect situation to use Thunder Quake, Senme's most powerful technique which you absorbed from him?! Such skill at handling techniques you've never had experience using before... That's impressive!") as he looked down at the explosion of lightning, which was radiating much yellow light which was shining in his face! The explosion of lightning then faded away, leaving behind a huge cloud of dust, which then faded as well, revealing the Massacrer standing calmly within them, with his black cloak blowing in the wind, while much orange light radiating from some flames from Yamix's attack before which was dispersed everywhere by the Thunder Quake before was shining on the Massacrer's cloak! "Iiiiioonngghuuuahhh!" said Yamix ("However, being the one directly above Senme, I know for a fact that his Thunder Quake is a technique which drains an abhorent amount of energy from its user, meaning that you wouldn't want to use it too often! Or, are you gonna waste your energy to deal with this as well?!"), and then many thick pillars of holy light started raining down from the sky at random locations! Immediately, the Massacrer raised his arms and summoned a huge cloud of darkness like a roof above himself to guard himself! However, the pillars of holy light were effortlessly passing through the Massacrer's cloud of darkness like nothing while dispersing them easily upon contact, before crashing onto the ground and creating many huge craters! "Iiiinngg ooouhh!" ("It's pointless! The purifying light of Judgment will pass through your darkness just as easily as they pass through thin air!") said Yamix, and then one of the pillars was about to hit the Massacrer, who quickly used Sonido to move away and avoid getting disintegrated by the holy light, and then he reappeared at another location! But as he did that, another pillar of holy light was falling down at him! The Massacrer used Sonido again, avoiding that pillar of holy light, and then he reappeared elsewhere again, but then another pillar of holy light was falling at him! The Massacrer kept using Sonido repeatedly to avoid the pillars of holy light which were constantly raining down at him and creating huge craters in the ground! While the pillars of holy light were still raining down and the Massacrer was using Sonido constantly to avoid them, Yamix suddenly said "Innnnggg!" ("Sacred Fire!"), and then some sacred flames spiralled around his body, before flying him up in the air and descending down vertically at the Massacrer like a gigantic pillar of sacred flames! The Massacrer used Sonido and just barely avoided the pillar of flames, but when it hit the ground, it created an enormous crater as well as a huge explosion of sacred flames which caught the Massacrer in its range, and now, the Massacrer's black cloak got caught on fire! The Massacrer reappeared next to the burning crater where Yamix's Sacred Fire had landed, and then Yamix descended from the air and landed back down on the ground in front of the Massacrer, and then he looked sadistically at the Massacrer, who's cloak was completely engulfed in sacred flames! "So you actually managed to make me remove my cloak. Commendable. To be able to do such is quite a feat in itself. After all, I haven't had to remove this cloak ever since I was re-accepted back into the Seven Chosen Champions. I wonder how long it has been..." said the Massacrer, and then, with a quick move, he ripped his burning black cloak off his body with his right hand and threw the cloak away, and then the cloak got blown away in the wind! Yamix then gasped, raised his head and widened his eyes a bit as he saw the Massacrer after he had ripped his cloak off! "...since I've last had to show this form to an opponent" the Massacrer then continued, as he now stood without his black cloak, revealing his new appearance! He was wearing a white shirt with a large collar and long sleeves, a white hakama, black shoes, white gloves, and his head was just a tall, round glass tank within which was filled with red acid, and he had no eyes, mouths, a nose or ears whatsoever! After he took off his cloak, the Massacrer also extended his metal scorpion tail out of his back, and then he stabbed it into the ground behind him. After doing that, he made his tail form into an "s" shape, while extending the tail outward enough so that the Massacrer lifted himself up from the ground! The Massacrer also placed his two feet on his tail, so that he was standing on his own tail, which was stabbed into the ground! "It's really been a while... since I've had to go to such lengths in a battle" said the Massacrer, as much deadly red poison was dripping from his tail and falling onto the ground below! Yamix then continued watching surprised at the Massacrer without speaking. "What's wrong? Aren't you going to attack?" said the Massacrer. "Iiiingo" ("So this is your true form... This is what you look like without that black cloak...") said Yamix, as his surprised facial expression changed to a sinister smile! "If you aren't going to attack..." said the Massacrer, and then he pointed both his palms at Yamix! "I'll make the first move!" he continued, and then a small black cannon appeared out of each of his palms, before he fired two huge blasts of water lasers out of his cannons at an extremely high pressure at Yamix, who immediately formed an "x" with his wings, which were densely compressed with much spirit energy and used them to guard from the water blasts!

Meanwhile, in the living world, in space, ChaosLord and ChaosMetalSeadramon were still flying towards Earth. "We're almost there..." said ChaosLord, with an evil smile on his face as he looked forward and could see Earth in the distance, although it was only a tiny dot from his perspective as he was still quite far away.

Meanwhile, on Earth, it was night time at a village where there were many houses with people wearing forehead protectors with a PokéBall symbol on them. At the center of the village was a large, green building with a very large sphere painted like a PokéBall built at the top of the building. On the wall of the building, there was also a white Japanese Kanji character which said "Pokémon" on it. Standing on top of that building was a man wearing white and green robes, a triangular green hat with a Japanese Kanji character which said "Pokémon" on it, and under the man's robes he wore black shoes, dark gray pants and a light gray shirt. He also had black hair and calm-looking brown eyes. The man was standing on top of the green building with his arms folded and with an Alakazam next to him, looking up at the starry night sky, while he also had a large army of ninja who looked like the ones who had attacked ChaosLord much earlier at Vermillion City before standing behind him. "I've detected his presence..." said the man wearing the green and white robes. "Serious?" said a ninja as he looked at the man. "So he's coming to Earth... this will be the second coming of the PokéGod!" said another ninja. "I see... judging by his distance, and the speed at which he is travelling, the Earth should have turned in such a way so that he should land there by the time he arrives" thought the man wearing robes. "Everyone, come with me" he then said. "Yes sir!" the ninja then all said together. "OverLord of Chaos..." the man wearing robes then thought as he took one last look up at the night sky, and then he clicked his right hand. After that, the Alakazam next to the man Teleported itself along with the man and all the ninja standing behind him away.
To be continued



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Jul 17, 08 at 04:21PM
re: Make Your Own Story Thread

Here is a story I made just today for fun. Turned out a bit larger than I expected, as I got some inspiration with Mag along the way of writing it...

"Spirits Fade Away in the Darkness"

One day, on a planet known as Heaven by its inhabitats, there were some people inside a base located somewhere on the planet. They were twelve characters. One was an old man called Yaiba, the other was a person with gold hair and a cape known as Rance, another was a blue-haired muscular guy called Mag, the other was Rika, a woman with wavy green hair, the other was a serious-looking black man named Kuroi, the other was a calm gerbil-like creature, Holyta, the other was a dark phoenix-like being known as Yamix, the other was a huge monster that looked like a cross between a dragon and a sandworm, called Molgera, the other was a young blond boy named Seigi, another was a guy dressed in yellow and wearing a green dragon mask and a green cape, known by the name of Vaiknite, the other was Megakoopa, who was a large dragon with a spiky shell, and the last one was a man with long blue hair named Aoi. Within the base, they all were in a room that looked like a control room, with a massive screen on a wall, and a computer by the same wall as the massive screen, located just under the screen. Aoi was sitting on a chair in front of the computer and looking at its screen, Megakoopa was standing beside him and also looking at the computer's screen, and the others were standing in the back, also watching the huge screen above the computer. The screen was displaying a dark planet somewhere in space, a crosshair symbol that had locked on on the planet, and some numbers, meters, and confirmation buttons on the screen. As everyone was waiting in the room, Megakoopa then suddenly heard a voice in his head. "In the perfect world we're striving to create, these demons do not need to exist. Eradicate them!" the voice said. Megakoopa then said "Do it". As he heard that, Aoi then asked "How much power should I use?". Megakoopa then heard the voice in his head saying "Full power!". "Full power" he said then. "..." Aoi remained silent for a few seconds then, thinking of something. "...But that would cause too much unnecessary destruction... For one planet, we'd only need-" Aoi said, but then suddenly, he widened his eyes as he felt an insanely huge spirit pressure overwhelming him! Immediately, he fell down on his knees and said "Yes sir...! Please excuse my audacity!" loudly. Afterwards, the spirit energy that was being unleashed on him stopped, and then Aoi got back up and sat on his chair in front of the computer. "Okay then... The target is locked... Setting the power to maximum level..." Aoi said then, as, on his computer's screen with his mouse, he changed a meter labeled "Power" ranging from 0 to 255 to 255. "Preparations are complete. Fire the Spirit Cannon!" Aoi said then, as he clicked the "Enter" button on his keyboard! Then, the picture on the screen changed to a picture of a giant cannon located somewhere on Heaven, and then the sound of energy loading up in the cannon was heard for a few seconds, before the cannon fired an unbelievably massive energy blast! The energy blast then flew and disappeared in space, and then Aoi clicked a button on his keyboard, changing the screen's picture back to the one of the planet he had aimed at. There was also a timer on the lower right corner of the screen, which was going down second by second to zero. The twelve characters then waited patiently in the control room, looking at the screen. Meanwhile, somewhere else, a mysterious white-haired man with green eyes was also watching at the same picture on his own computer and smirked sinisterly.

On the dark planet which the previous characters were watching, known as Chaos Planet, there were a lot of machines and dark beings. In a control room somewhere in a huge laboratory, some yellow cat-like machines known as Catbots were sitting on some computers and observing stuff on their screens. Others of them were also walking in the room and doing other tasks, while another cat-like machine with a mechanical left eye and a cape, known as Mechanikat, was standing and thinking of something. Suddenly, an alarm-like sound started sounding from one of the many computers in the room, and a red "WARNING!" symbol started flashing on that computer's screen! "Sir, we have an emergency!" the Catbot who was watching the screen then said. Mechanikat, as soon as he heard the alarm sound, quickly ran and looked at the screen of the computer which was on alarm. "What is it?" he said. "On Space Sector S-13, a great concentration of energy was spotted flying and heading towards our planet!" the Catbot said. "Let me check it" Mechanikat said then, as he rapidly clicked some buttons and changed the screen to an unusual login screen which had neither a username nor a password bar. Then, he looked at the screen and shot out a red light with a stream of binary data from his mechanical eye, which the computer accepted and logged him in to another page. From that page, Mechanikat then did some stuff and chose an option that said "GAIA Radar", then "Analysis". Then, after setting the coordinations, he clicked a button, and then looked at the screen.

As Mechanikat did that, on the top of a huge tower somewhere on the planet, a radar that was there moved and faced at the location where the energy blast from Heaven was coming from. Then, the purple machine part in its parabolic reflector withdrew inwards, so that the purple sphere-shaped part of the radar was now inside the parabolic reflector, resembling the construction of a flashlight. Afterwards, the spherical purple part started emitting some special signals, which then, with the help of the parabolic reflector, all headed at the direction of the energy blast from heaven at the speed of light. Then, once reaching their target, they hit it, reflected back and returned back to the parabolic reflector, which absorbed the reflected signal.

In Mechanikat's laboratory, Mechanikat had now opened a screen on the computer he was on, and the screen then displayed much information about the energy beam heading towards the planet. "Sir, what plan of action should we follow?" said a Catbot then, as he and other Catbots in the room had also gathered around the computer Mechanikat was on and watching. Mechanikat then looked the information about the energy beam on the screen. "Oh, it's..." he said, making a little surprised expression on his face for a second, but then changing to normal. "How ridiculous..." he said then, as he clicked a button and logged off the page he was on, returning the picture on the screen to one showing the energy blast flying through space. "What shall we do, sir?" a Catbot said. "Nothing. I will handle this" Mechanikat said, and then he suddenly teleported away in a spark of lightning! "Sir...?" a Catbot said as he saw that. "Over here!" another Catbot said, as he looked at the computer screen, and saw Mechanikat had teleported in space, in an area that was in the energy beam's way! "Sir Mechanikat! What will you do?" a Catbot said then. Meanwhile, Mechanikat was floating in space, facing the energy blast which was heading towards him fast. "Hmph" he said then, as he raised his hand and pointed his open palm at the energy blast. "Destabilizer Ray" he said then, as he fired a dark lightning-like ray at the energy blast, which was unbelievebly larger than the ray! The dark ray flew at the energy blast and hit it, and then within a second, the energy blast's hue started changing so that it shifted between all the colors, before it suddenly dispersed to nothingness! "Wha...!!" the Catbots said as they saw that, amazed by how such a huge, incredibly destructive energy blast had just been taken out with so little effort! Afterwards, Mechanikat teleported back to his laboratory, in the same control room as he was before. "Sir, how...?" said a Catbot. "It was spirit energy" Mechanikat said then. "Spirit energy?" said a Catbot. "It is a rare form of energy that is one step below psychic energy. It is usually used by living organisms such as the ones who attacked us or the ones on File Island" Mechanikat said. "Like psychic energy? So, it is vulnerable to darkness as well?" a Catbot said. "Exactly. Spirit energy can be decent when compared to elements such as fire and water. However, its value is reduced to zero when it is put against dark energy" Mechanikat said then. "So, since spirit energy is so helpless against dark energy, you created a Destabilizer Ray with darkness properties to counter it" a Catbot said then. "That would be the idea" Mechanikat replied, and then, he heard many footsteps advancing towards the room he was in from the door.

Meanwhile, the twelve characters in the base at Heaven were watching at the computer screen displaying Chaos Planet. Five seconds were left to the end of the countdown. "5... 4... 3... 2... 1...!" Aoi said, and then a second passed, but nothing happened! "What?" Aoi said as he saw that. "Hey, where's the explosion?" Mag said then. "What on earth happened?" Aoi said then, as he started typing some stuff rapidly on the computer's keyboard. "Tch. How useless..." Mag said then. "What's wrong, Aoi?" Rika said then. "I... I have no idea. I have no way of knowing what happened to the beam after I fired it..." Aoi said then. "Did the weapon miss?" Rance said then. "No, I doubt that's it. Something else must have interfered with the energy blast" Aoi said then. Meanwhile, somewhere else, the man with the white hair and green eyes, who was sitting on a chair, clenched his fist in anger at the failure of the launched attack.

Back in Chaos Planet, ChaosLord, the Chaos Generals, Alphamon, Omegamon, Beelzemon and Mega-Emperor were now in the same room with Mechanikat, discussing with him. "That they would try to attack this planet of darkness with spirit energy... Very deplorable" ChaosBlackWarGreymon said. "Indeed. In fact, I did not even have to stop the attack. I could have just let it come here and harmlessly get absorbed into the planet's dark soil" Mechanikat added. "What idiots..." ChaosMetalSeadramon said then. "Uncivilized" Alphamon said, looking disgusted by the cowardice of his foes who launched such a detestable attack without even an honest, civilized declaration of war first. "How fascinating" ChaosPiedmon said, smiling evily as usual. "Even if it wasn't spirit energy, wouldn't the GAIA shield automatically activate itself if the attack got close enough?" Mega-Emperor said then. "Yes. There was nothing to worry about from the beginning" Mechanikat replied. "It seems that our opponents lack in intelligence or knowledge. Who are they?" Beelzemon said then. "They are the beings of a planet they call "Heaven"... The Shinigami, Angels and Holy Creatures" Mechanikat said then. "What information do you have about them?" ChaosBlackWarGreymon said then. "A lot. But I think the most interesting part would be the fact that they use spirit energy for everything in their lives. They believe that it is actually holy energy, but this is certainly not the case; holy energy is an entirely different form of power. Maybe this is why they thought they could defeat us so easily with an energy blast like that. Little did they know that all the spirit energy in their planet is useless against us..." Mechanikat said then. "This is ridiculous" ChaosBlackWarGreymon said then. "Hmhmhmhm!" ChaosPiedmon laughed then. "Ha, ha, ha... Shinigami are foolish. They can't even begin to understand the power of darkness..." ChaosLord said, and then everyone looked at him. "Shall I show them what true power is about?" Mechanikat said then. "Yes... Go ahead" ChaosLord said then. "Thank you" Mechanikat said then, and then he went to a computer and logged in to a page with a stream of binary data fired with a red beam from his left mechanical eye. Mechanikat then did some stuff on his computer, selecting "GAIA Cannon", power level, Element Mode: Darkness, and the coordinations, which were the planet of Heaven. "Everything is prepared. GAIA Cannon: Darkness Mode!" Mechanikat said then, as he clicked a button on his computer, which changed the picture on the screen of the computer to one displaying an incredibly massive black cannon somewhere on Chaos Planet! Incredible amounts of energy were loaded in the cannon, and after that was done, a giant beam of insanely compressed darkness was fired from the cannon towards Heaven's direction!

Meanwhile, the twelve characters in the base at Heaven were still wondering what had gone wrong. "I knew this shit was going to fail! Screw this, we should've charged right at them as I had said!" Mag said angrily. "Calm down, Mag. There is no point in such behaviour" yaiba said then. "Sheesh, yeah right, geezer! As if you know anything about a battle! I bet it won't be long before you forget how to even breathe!" Mag said then disrespectfully, surprising everyone! "That idiot..." Kuroi said then. "My, my, but it seems you never learned any manners..." Yaiba said then calmly. "Mag..." Yamix said then. "That guy... How did he actually make it to Heaven, let alone be a Holy Elite...? How could Lord Ryuumaru possibly see kindness within such a person?" Holyta whispered to Molgera. "You know, I've always wondered about that too... I guess maybe even Lord Ryuumaru's judgement can be faulty at times..." Molgera said then. "Mag! Watch your mouth!" Vaiknite said then, as he looked angrily at Mag. "Shut up, shy guy! Why don't you take off that mask an' tell me what you have to say in my face?!" Mag shouted back at him then. "Wh-What?!" Vaiknite said then, surprised. "Oh no..." Rika said then. Meanwhile, Megakoopa was just standing there doing nothing, like a robot. "E-Everyone! This is bad!" Aoi said then suddenly. Then all looked at his computer's screen and saw the blast of darkness flying at their planet! "Those demons from that dark planet... They are fighting us back!" Aoi said then. "What!" Rance said then. "Those arrogant...!" he continued. Just then, Aoi suddenly heard a voice whispering in his head! "Aoi, stop that beam!" the voice said. "Impossible...! This darkness...!!" Aoi said then, feeling powerless just by seeing the darkness blast! "Worthless! Worthless! WORTHLESS!" Mag complained then. "Mag, why don't you-" Vaiknite said then, as he turned around from watching the computer to face Mag behind him, but then suddenly, Mag stuck his hand right into Vaiknite's mask, catching his face! "EH?" Mag said then, smiling insanely, before he unleashed a huge Cero on Vaiknite's face from point-blank range, disintegrating everything above his shoulders! Everyone except Megakoopa then watched in horror as Vaiknite's headless corpse crumbled to the ground and its blood flooded out from the neck and started creating a pool around it! "VAIKNITE!!!" Aoi screamed then as he saw that. "Mag, what did you do?!!" Yamix said then, unable to believe his eyes! "Mag, you bastard! You're insane!" Rance said as he drew out his sword! "Heh heh heh!! Bring it on! I'll take y'all on!!" Mag said then, and then he started laughing insanely as he charged at Holyta and impaled him at the body! "AAAH!" Holyta screamed, before Mag fired another Cero from his hand, blasting Holyta from point-blank range and and splitting his body in two! "M...a...g..." Holyta said with his last breath, before his front body part fell forward face-first, and the back body part fell back on its butt, and then both body parts started flooding out huge rivers of blood. "Haaa!" Rance shouted his battle cry then as he charged at Mag and tried to slash him with his sword, but then Mag caught the sword's blade effortlessly in his hand without getting cut! Rance widened his eyes as he saw that, and then Mag laughed as he suddenly grabbed Rance by the throat with his other hand, violently raised him up the air by the throat, and then slammed him hard back down on the ground while also unleashing a Cero from his hand, completely obliterating Rance's entire upper body! "Mag, stop!" Rika said then as she charged at Mag with a spear and trident-like weapon, but as she tried to stab him with the trident, Mag suddenly vanished and reappeared right behind Rika, who widened her eyes! "Later" Mag said as he smiled evily, before he unleashed a Cero that completely obliterated Rika's whole upper body from behind! Rika's remains, her legs and waist, then kneeled and fell down to the ground to bleed with the rest of the corpses. Kuroi then pulled out his Desert Eagles and started shooting at Mag, but then Mag immediately drew out his sword and started deflecting Kuroi's bullets confidently and easily! "What! Such speed... When did he..." Kuroi thought, but then suddenly Mag vanished and reappeared right in front of him, and began unleashing a flurry of punches on his face while laughing madly! "Hahahahaha! Hahahahahaha! Hahaha!" Mag laughed insanely as his punches struck all over Kuroi's face and shattered his glasses, and then Mag did an upper punch that sent Kuroi flying upwards, but before he could go too high Mag vanished and appeared right above Kuroi, doing a spectacular, insanely powerful kick that struck Kuroi's head directly and splattered it like a watermelon! A huge explosion of blood also rained all over the room, showering the Holy Elites in Kuroi's blood! Afterwards, Mag fell back down on his feet and immediately vanished and reappeared right in front of Yaiba, doing a huge slash across his chest! A blood fountain smirched Mag's white clothes, and then Yaiba flinched momentarily, and then he tried to slash Mag, but then Mag instantly disappeared and reappeared behind Yaiba and stabbed his sword right through his throat! Then he did a violent move that cleaved off Yaiba's head, and then, with a fountain of blood from its throat, Yaiba's body fell dead to the ground. "You'll pay for this!" Seigi said then, as he casted a spell on Mag that surrounded him tightly with some rings of yellow energy to immobilize him. However, Mag then effortlessly broke out of the attack! "Wh-What? That was a high-level spell... How could he possibly break out?!" Seigi said then, unable to believe what he was seeing! Mag then licked his lips in bloodlust as he looked at Seigi, and then he moved his palm across his sword's blade and transformed it into a chainsaw that started roaring its machine voice loudly and intimidatingly! "Hey, Seigi... I've alllllways hated you, you know!!" Mag said then, as he looked at Seigi with an insane evil smile on his face and an insane look on his excited eyes! "W-Wait...!" Seigi said then, but before he could do anything, Mag said "DIE!!" as he charged at Seigi with blinding speed and massacred him like a butcher with his chainsaw! "GRUOAAAARGH!!!" Seigi screamed as Mag was making mincemeat out of him, and his blood was being spilled around everywhere like a rain as his body parts were flying off his body after being torn apart by the chainsaw! Molgera and Yamix watched in terror as Seigi's unrecognizeable remains fell on the floor, and Mag then started laughing madly, with his clothes, hands, chainsaw and face covered in his victims' blood! Mag then pointed his blood-stained chainsaw at Yamix and Molgera and made it move, splilling the blood on its chain on Yamix and Molgera's faces! "That guy...! It's impossible! His speed, attack and defense are on an entirely different level than normal! Just what the hell is the deal with this?!" Molgera said then, looking intimidated by Mag! "On top of that, his spirit energy feels completely different and... it seems to disable our Instant Movement and other spirit energy-based techniques somehow? Just what exactly is up with him?" Yamix wondered.

As this was happening, Mechanikat and the others were in his laboratory, and Mechanikat changed the computer's screen to one showing the twelve Holy Elites, who were the twelve characters in the base at Heaven. They were watching Mag charge at Molgera and Yamix. "These are... or, were... the Holy Elites, the second highest-ranking soldiers at the disposal of the beings of Heaven. The experiment was a success" Mechanikat said then. "Experiment?" Mega-Emperor said. "Do you see this blue-haired person, the one who just massacred his own comrades? One day, he just came on our planet on his own and started attacking us at random. Using Darkness Gears, I took control of him, and..." Mechanikat said, as Mag pointed his hand at Molgera and fired an Ice Beam at him, freezing him solid, "...I changed him into a machine with a hundred times the power capacity of his original body and an equal increase in his attack versatility" Mechanikat continued. After that, the machines saw Mag doing a huge, back spinning kick at Molgera's frozen body, shattering him to thousands of pieces! "A hundred times... so this is the difference between a machine and a normal living being, huh..." Beelzemon said then. "I could have made him even more powerful, but I did not want to waste too many resources on inferior human trash. He should be more than enough to even finish the boss of these Holy Elites without even 10% of his power. After all..." Mechanikat said then, while Mag charged at Yamix, who tried to use Instant Movement but he failed, and Mag cut off his right wing with his chainsaw, "...I changed him so that besides emitting his little signature spirit energy to be recognized by his allies, he can also use stored dark energy in his machine body to kill them" he continued. Meanwhile, Yamix fired off a huge Fire Blast at Mag, hitting him and incinerating the skin anc cloth of his entire right arm and shoulder, revealing a machine body below that had been unharmed by the attack! "What?!! M-Metal?! A machine???" Yamix shouted as he widened his eyes, before Mag charged at him and impaled right through his stomach with his chainsaw! "M-Mag..." Yamix said then, but then mag mercilessly activated his chanisaw and ripped Yamix to shreds, with his blood and feathers flying all over the room! With Yamix's feathers still falling down slowly in the room, Mag then turned and looked at Megakoopa, who had just been standing doing nothing the whole time. "Time for some turtle soup!" Mag said with a mechanical-like voice, and his eyes also glowed red, and then suddenly his forearms opened up and out came some guns with some darts! "Bye-bye, you oversized lizard!" Mag said as he pointed at Megakoopa and shot the darts at him, which then got stabbed in his body and infused a deadly virus in him! Megakoopa stayed still and silent for some seconds, but then suddenly he widened his eyes and screamed "GROAAAAARRRR!!!" as his body started melting from every cell! Even Megakoopa's extremely hard shell was no more resistant to the virus than the rest of his body, and soon Megakoopa had been reduced to nothing but a fluid-like substabnce that formed a large pool on the floor! Mag then stood still and did nothing after having killed everyone. "He did it" ChaosMetalSeadramon said as he saw that. "A delightful performance, as expected of Mechanikat!" ChaosPiedmon said, looking satisfied and filled with sinister joy. "It is not over yet. Mag still is functional, so he can do one final task..." Mechanikat said. Then, Mag heard a command in his head, and then he flew out of the base he was in and headed at a huge tower known as the Tower of Salvation, located in the center of a huge white wall. Two towns where Shinigami and Angels lived were also within the wall, as well as a huge forest inhabited by all kinds of Holy Creatures. Mag then went and stood right where the Tower of Salvation was. "What now?" said Mega-Emperor. "Delete!" Mechanikat said then as he clicked the Delete button on his computer's keyboard, and as he did that, Mag suddenly exploded in a giant nuclear-like explosion! The blast was so huge that it caught everything within the white circular wall within its range, killing all of the Shinigami, Angels and Holy Creatures in the blink of an eye! The Tower of Salvation's part on Heaven also was destroyed and crumbled down to the ground, and after the explosion, there was nothing but a huge crater inside the white circular wall! "Hahahahaha! What a perfect final touch! Excellent work!" ChaosPiedmon said then excitedly as he laughed from his evil heart. "Thank you" Mechanikat said then. "Ha, ha, ha" ChaosLord also laughed evily. "Now, let's switch to Scene 2 of the play!" ChaosPiedmon said then, as he moved his right hand's fingers like typing on a keyboard and used some magic to change the picture on the computer to another place in Heaven, at a village outside the huge white circular wall. The darkness blast was approaching Heaven, and the people of the village were looking at it frightened! "What is this... darkness?" said a man. "It looks like a black hole! It's heading straight towards our planet!" a woman said then. "Waaah!! It feels like it's going to suck us right in!!" another guy said. "AAAH!!" the people started screaming in panic then, as they started running around their village in circles! "Don't panic! Lord Ryuumaru will definitely save us! Let's pray to Him!" an old man said, as he fell on his knees and began praying Ryuumaru, the man with the white hair and green eyes. "Holy Father save us! Doom is upon us! Only you can stop it...!" the old man said, and some other people also joined him in praying. "Hahaha! Those two-bit players are frozen with stage fright! Hopelessly waiting for the moment they'll be saved" ChaosPiedmon said, and then Ryuumaru suddenly appeared in the scene! "And yet, there's an unseen twist in the plot! ChaosPiedmon continued. "Those demons... how dare they..." Ryuumaru said quietly, as he clanched his fists in anger, and some purple spirit energy started radiating from his body! "HOW DARE THEY DEFILE HEAVEN!!!" Ryuumaru shouted in extreme anger, and then suddenly a huge explosion of purple spirit energy happened around his body, and then Ryuumaru transformed into a giant golden dragon! "BEGONE, FOUL SPAWNS OF HELL! HEAVENLY GOLDEN BLAST!!!" Ryuumaru shouted as he unleashed an unbelievably gigantic blast of gold energy from his mouth! The golden energy blast collided with the dark energy blast, only to be consumed by it effortllessly without even slowing it down! "WHAT??!" Ryuumaru said as he saw that, and then the darkness energy blast hit him and consumed a huge hole through his body! "GRAAAAARGHHHH!!!" Ryuumaru screamed then as loudly as he could, before shattering to countless particles which then vanished in the atmosphere! Afterwards, the darkness energy blast kept going and destroyed Heaven in a huge dark explosion, leaving no trace of it behind. "Well, that was quick" ChaosPiedmon said then as he saw that. "Of course. After all, all spirits fade away to darkness in the end..." Mechanikat said, and ChaosLord smiled evily as he looked one last time at the place where Heaven used to be, where there was nothing but empty space now...



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Jul 17, 08 at 09:41PM
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Here is chapter 108 of my story, and here is a cool song to listen to while reading this chapter as well as the two chapters following it. Also, in case it is not clear, the diving attacks which Yamix uses against the Massacrer in this chapter are the same as the diving attacks which the Helmaroc King uses against Link several times in this video, such as at 04:11.

Chapter 108: The Massacrer vs. Yamix! The Clash of Techniques! Part 1


Under the night sky in Heaven, the Massacrer and Yamix were both at the top of Mount Mugen, facing each other, with the huge Moon hanging in the sky behind Yamix. An area of the top of the mountain was also set on fire due to Yamix's Sacred Fire attack before. The Massacrer had his tail extended outward and stabbed onto the ground, and he was standing on his own tail while blasting two huge shots of water at huge pressure out of two small black cannons on his palms at Yamix, who had formed an "x' with his wings to guard from the water blasts! "Iiiinnguuhhhh" ("Hah! Come on! You think an attack of this level would actually harm me?!") said Yamix, with a confident look on his face, while much powerful spirit energy was constantly radiating from his body like a very strong wind, blowing much dust into the air! "I see. So it seems I haven't put enough power into my attack. In that case..." said the Massacrer, and then he started rotating his wrists around, and then his water blasts was becoming thinner and thinner as his wrists rotated, until the water blasts became as thin as laser beams, and their pressure also increased to an incredible level! Then the Massacrer, while still blasting his high-pressure water lasers from his cannons, swung his arms diagonally at Yamix's direction a few times, using his water lasers as a sword in an attempt to chop Yamix in half! The Massacrer's water lasers sliced Yamix a few times, and since the water were being shot at a much higher pressure than before, the Massacrer managed to chop off some of the feathers on Yamix's wings, but overall Yamix was still unharmed by the water lasers! Yamix smirked after the Massacrer's water lasers slashed him harmlessly a few times, and then he hovered up in the air with his wings a bit, before flapping his wings hard and fast at the Massacrer repeatedly, sending an incredibly strong wind at the Massacrer, who gasped as he felt the wind, which was so powerful that the Massacrer was no longer able to remain his stance on his tail, and he was forced to jump off the tail by the incredibly strong wind! The Massacrer used his tail, which was still stuck in the ground to prevent himself from getting blown off the edge of the mountain, while he continued blasting Yamix with his water lasers! However, his water lasers were no longer even reaching Yamix, due to the incredibly strong wind Yamix was blowing at the Massacrer with his wings, which deflected all the water away, despite the huge pressure at which the water lasers were fired! As Yamix flapped his wings, thousands of feathers were also coming out of his wings and being blown everywhere! "What an incredible wind pressure... At this rate, it'll be difficult for most attacks to even get close to him..." thought the Massacrer as he ceased his water lasers, while he also retreated his cannons back into his palms and lowered his arms. "Ugh!" he then said as he felt the wind blowing at him even harder than before, causing him to form an "x" with his arms to guard his head from the wind! The Massacrer then gasped a bit as he noticed that his tail was slowly being lifted out from the ground by the wind pressure, and then he quickly used much of his strength to push his tail back into the ground, so deep that ten meters of the tail was buried deep under the ground and hooked there to prevent the Massacrer from being blown away! "I see... To be able to infuse spirit energy into your wings and compress the energy enough to take my water lasers, which have enough pressure to cut through stones effortlessly like that... you must have a huge amount of energy stored in your body. In that case, I'll simply eliminate that energy" said the Massacrer, and then he lowered his left arm while pointing his right index finger at Yamix. "Darkness of Hell" he then said, and then the whole atmosphere started shaking even more than it already was by the wind and Yamix's spirit energy, while some dark energy started appearing in a circle around Yamix, and then they started spinning around while rapidly increasing in size! A massive thick and compressed cloud of darkness soon surrounded Yamix completely and started spinning around him like a cyclone while draining his energy rapidly! The cyclone-like cloud of darkness was extremely huge, having a width half that of the entire top of Mount Mugen, while the height of it was so high that from the Massacrer's perspective, it reached up and touched the sky! The extremely strong wind radiating from Yamix's wings before then ceased as the spinning cloud of darkness surrounded Yamix and blocked out the wind and spirit energy he was radiating, but the spinning cloud of darkness itself also radiated much wind outward, although they were spread at every direction and were not anywhere close to being as strong as the wind which Yamix was creating before. However, the wind was still strong enough to lift many small rocks up from the ground, and then the rocks all got sucked into the spinning darkness! The Massacrer stood calmly and watched as the cloud of darkness was spinning around like a huge cyclone before him, with Yamix inside and having his energy rapidly absorbed, while the Massacrer's clothes were blowing in the strong wind radiating from the cloud of darkness! But then suddenly, Yamix did an unbelievably huge and powerful explosion of rainbow-colored spirit energy from his body, instantly blowing away all the darkness with the force of the explosion, which also created a massive crater in the ground! Hundreds of black, purple and blue feathers also came off Yamix's wings and filled the air after he did the explosion! "Iiiinngguuuhhh ooouuuhhh!!!!" ("Hahahahahahahahaha! Nice! Though it seems to use up a large amount of energy, that cloud of darkness seems to be very powerful! Even though I was only surrounded by it for less than half a minute, you managed to drain away quite a bit of spirit energy from me!") said Yamix excitedly as he emerged out of the explosion and flew vertically straight up at the sky like a rocket! "Interesting. So you managed to survive even after being engulfed by my Darkness of Hell technique for so long. Normally, my victims should be left with absolutely no energy remaining by this point. Your energy capacity is way beyond what I had imagined. So this is the difference between the power of a Holy Elite and an ordinary being of Heaven like Senme..." said the Massacrer as he looked up and saw Yamix ceasing to fly vertically upward after a certain height, and then he started flying around the air above Mount Mugen, circling the air around and above it, while much spirit energy from Yamix's explosion before was blowing the Massacrer's clothes. "However, your efforts to escape was futile. Even though you managed to deflect all the darkness with your spirit energy, they will always return to surround you and once again continue to absorb your energy until you are left powerless" the Massacrer continued, as he watched as the dark energy which Yamix blew away before were now flying back up at Yamix and chasing after him in the air! "As soon as I targeted you with that technique, you have become a magnet which will always attract those dark particles back to you no matter how many times you blow them away" the Massacrer continued as he was looking up at Yamix, who then smirked sinisterly as he started descending diagonally downward from the air at huge speed, circling the air above and around the mountain as he was descending like he was sliding down an invisible staircase, and when he descended low enough, he dived at the Massacrer with huge force and speed! But he did not did not dive head-first, though, as he had his body upright as he was diving. Yamix dived at such a low altitude that as he came close to the Massacrer, his talons scraped against the ground, creating two huge skid marks on the ground as his talons scraped against it, and some sparks were also flying as his talons were scraping against the ground at huge speed! Yamix dived straight at the Massacrer, trying to ram into him with his talons, while the Massacrer could not dodge as his metal scorpion tail was still stuck in the ground! The Massacrer gasped as he saw Yamix diving at him, and then he quickly made his tail, which was underground do a "u" turn so it came back up, emerged out of the ground at another location, and then the Massacrer made that part of the tail which came up to the surface tilted diagonally between himself and Yamix, trying to guard himself from Yamix's attack with his tail! However, Yamix's diving attack had such huge speed and force that he crashed straight through the tail, smashing it to pieces like nothing, and then he kept going towards the Massacrer himself! Just as he was about to hit the Massacrer, he flew a bit higher than before, raising his talons in the process so that they were no longer scraping against the ground, and then his talons slashed the Massacrer deeply in the right shoulder, before Yamix flew back up high into the air, off the edge of Mount Mugen, and then he started circling the air around it again, while the dark energy from the Massacrer's Darkness of Hell attack from before was still chasing after him! At the same time, an insane amount of dark energy spouted out of the Massacrer's right shoulder like a volcanic eruption! "Ugh!" said the Massacrer, looking surprised at his right shoulder, while the slash wound there was so deep that the Massacrer's entire right arm fell off his right shoulder, and a huge amount of dark energy leaked out from there! The right side of the Massacrer's glass head tank also cracked due to the extremely powerful wind surrounding Yamix's body when he dived at the Massacrer before, due to the huge speed at which he was diving! "Grraarghh!" said the Massacrer, as the glass broke off from the cracked part of his head, and much red acid which was inside the Massacrer's head leaked out of his head and landed on his right shoulder, and the acid which was extremely corrosive started melting the Massacrer's entire right side of his body! "Iiiinnguuuhh!" ("Haahahahahahahahahaha!!") said Yamix, looking excited as he saw that, while flying at high speed in the night sky, with a massive cloud of dark energy chasing him from behind! "Tch" said the Massacrer as he faced Yamix's direction, retreated the remains of his tail back out from the ground and back into his back, and then he quickly jumped away from him! But by the time he did that, Yamix dived at him again, reaching the same low altitude as before, scraping the ground with his talons and creating much sparks, trying to ram into the Massacrer, who used Sonido and avoided the diving attack, although much red acid was spilled on the ground as he moved at blinding speed, and the red acid fell on the ground and started melting it at an incredibly high speed due to the extremely high corrosive level of the acid! The Massacrer then reappeared at another location on top of Mount Mugen, while Yamix ascended back up in the air and started circling around the top of the mountain again. The dark energy from the Massacrer's Darkness of Hell attack from before also chased after Yamix, carving a short but deep river in the ground as the dark energy went close to its surface while chasing Yamix when he was divebombing the Massacrer, and then the dark energy kept flying after Yamix! "Dark Regeneration!" said the Massacrer then, as he started using a healing technique to regenerate his right arm, the right side of his body which was melting due to the red acid, as well as the right side of his head, which was cracked and red acid was leaking out. But while he was doing that, Yamix dived at him again, this time from behind, scraping the ground with his talons just like before, but the Massacrer used Sonido on time and avoided the dive, and then Yamix kept going and crashed onto a large, steep rock at the edge of the mountain's peak, shattering the entire rock as he dived into it! The Massacrer reappeared at another location on top of the mountain and continued regenerating himself, but Yamix dived at him again, but he avoided the dive again with Sonido. But as soon as he reappeared, a thick bolt of lightning suddenly descended from the sky to strike him, but he used Sonido right away to avoid the lightning bolt, which hit the ground, creating a crater and also lighting up a fire! The Massacrer then reappeared, continued to regenerate himself, and then he thought "Dammit. The injury I suffered from that very first slash was way too serious. Even with Dark Regeneration, I can't heal myself at a reasonable speed. At this rate, I won't be able to regenerate completely, as he's starting to be able to predict my movements with Sonido. It doesn't seem like I can continue avoiding these diving attacks for much longer". Then Yamix dived at the Massacrer again from his right side, scraping the ground with his talons and trying to hit him, but the Massacrer instantly moved to another location with Sonido to dodge the attack. But as soon as he reappeared, Yamix turned around to look at him in the air, and then he said "Iiinguu" ("Too predictable!") as he turned his head and blasted a Solar Beam from his mouth down at the Massacrer from the air, but the Massacrer summoned a wall of darkness in front of himself to absorb the beam. "The only thing I can do would be to enhance the rate of my regeneration..." the Massacrer then thought. Then Yamix once again dived at him, this time from behind, scraping his talons on the ground in the process. But this time, Yamix pushed his talons so hard on the ground while scraping against it that an insane amount of sparks were created, and this lit a huge fire on the ground! However, the Massacrer did a backflip and just barely avoided Yamix's attack, and immediately afterwards, Yamix said "Iiiinnaaa!" ("Rainbow Lightning!") as he radiated some rainbow-colored lightning from his body, sending many huge bolts of lightning, which were all of a different color at a location where he predicted the Massacrer would move at with Sonido, but the attack missed though, as the Massacrer did not move at that location, and the attack hit the ground and created a huge explosion of dust as well as a crater. Then the Massacrer landed back on the ground, on his feet, before concentrating carefully while some green energy started surrounding his body! "Holy Rebirth of The Heavenly Peacock!" said the Massacrer, and then his body started regenerating at a much higher rate than normal, as he was now healing himself using two different regeneration techniques simultaneously! Within seconds, his right arm had already grown back halfway, while the crack on the right side of his face had been restored back completely! "Iii" ("Die!") the Massacrer then heard Yamix's voice coming from his left, and then he looked to his left and saw Yamix diving at him, and he did a curved skid on the ground as he scraped against it with his talons this time, creating so much sparks that he lit a fire just like last time! The Massacrer used Sonido to avoid the attack, and then Yamix ascended back up into the air, off the edge of Mount Mugen, and then he turned around to face the top of Mount Mugen! "Iiiiooounnghuh!" ("God of The Sun!") said Yamix as he formed an "x" with his wings briefly, before spreading them out and blasting hundreds of Solar Beams out of his wings, and then all the Solar Beams fell down at Mount Mugen's summit like a catastrophic rain of light beams from the Sun! The hundreds of Solar Beams blasted by Yamix also emitted so much solar energy that the entire Mount Mugen and a large area around it temporarily became as bright as daytime! The Massacrer quickly formed a thick wall of dark energy in front of himself to guard against the hundreds of Solar Beams. However, most of the Solar Beams did not hit the Massacrer, and instead they hit the ground all over the peak of Mount Mugen, shattering the mountain's top to many large pieces of rocks, and a huge explosion of dust and solar energy could be seen at the top of the mountain from very far away as the Solar Beams all crashed into the mountain! The explosion of solar energy also lit up an even larger area than before! The Massacrer jumped backwards immediately as the ground below him shattered to pieces, and many rocks were sent flying at every direction! The Massacrer flew backwards after his jump, and his feet landed on one of the many large rocks which were flying in the air. Then he jumped diagonally forward and downward off that rock he was standing on, and then he landed on another rock in the air, jumped off it, and then he kept wallkicking downward from rock to rock, while a huge cloud of dust was filling the atmosphere around him. Eventually, the Massacrer landed down on the ground below, which was now in fact the new highest point on Mount Mugen, as the top part of the mountain, which was the highest point on Mount Mugen only a few seconds ago, was shattered to pieces by the hundreds of Solar Beams before. Now, the Massacrer stood on the new highest point of Mount Mugen, while a huge cloud of dust was surrounding him, and many rocks were falling all over the place around him. The Massacrer's right arm and the slash in his right shoulder was now completely regenerated back to normal, and then the green energy surrounding the Massacrer's body dissapeared. His glass tank head, which was usually completely filled with red acid, was now only 25% full, as much of the acid had leaked out of the glass tank before when the tank had cracked. But then the Massacrer looked at his right palm, which then got ripped a bit, and then some red acid leaked out of the ripped part of the palm! But then the Massacrer clenched his right fist and absorbed the acid back into his palm again, and then some red acid started flowing from the Massacrer's neck up to his head, until his glass tank head was completely full again. After that, the Massacrer looked up at the sky, while the rocks falling down all around him ceased, and the cloud of dust surrounding him also faded away, and then the Massacrer saw Yamix flying gracefully in the sky.

To be continued



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Jul 18, 08 at 05:17PM
re: Make Your Own Story Thread

Here is another story I wrote today for fun.

"Massacre"

One day, on Chaos Planet, ChaosLord was sitting on his throne on the top of Chaos Tower, watching at a visual projection of a scene on the wall of the room in front of him. Next to him was also Mechanikat, and behind were a few other machines that were all watching at the projected scene on the wall. The scene displayed an area of Heaven, where the machines were fighting against the Shinigami, Angels and Holy Creatures! ChaosLord was smiling evily as he watched, and then he said "It seems to be going smoothly, doesn't it, Mechanikat?". "Indeed..." Mechanikat replied as he smirked. "Once their leading figures have been eliminated, they will learn to never attempt an attack here again" ChaosLord said then, as he kept watching the battle's visual projection.

Somewhere on Heaven, Yamix was flying in the air and looking down at Mega-Emperor on the ground. "Why did you attack our planet?" Yamix asked. "That is a silly question coming from you" Mega-Emperor replied then. "Ha! So it's for revenge for us attacking you before? However, it could not be helped. It was God's orders; God's orders can not be defied!" Yamix said then. "And to change that is why we are here" Mega-Emperor said then. "Hah! You will change it? Don't make me laugh!" Yamix said then as he smirked. Then, he suddenly dived at Mega-Emperor to attack him with his talons and said "You're a worm! I'm a bird! Sorry, machine! You ended up against the wrong opponent!". But then, some electricity started sparking on Mega-Emperor's antennas, and then Mega-Emperor suddenly unleashed a huge bolt of lightning on Yamix, zapping him with incredible power! "Aaaaarghhh!!" Yamix screamed as the attack was super-effective on him, and then he turned while flying and completely missed Mega-Emperor, falling and sliding on some nearby ground instead! Mega-Emperor then looked at Yamix fallen on the ground, and then a little electricity sparked on his antennas, as he said "You are the one who is facing a bad match. You are a bird... Your feathers provide you no protection against lightning...". "Dammit!" Yamix said then as he got up. "It doesn't matter... Because I'll never let you hit me again!" Yamix said then, as he flew up, and then he suddenly began flying around Mega-Emperor in circles at blinding speed! "Hahahahaha! As long as I keep using my Instant Movement technique, all your techniques are useless!" Yamix said then, laughing as he kept flying at incredibly high speed, unnoticeable by the bare eye! "Fool" Mega-Emperor said then, as some electricity sparked on his antennas, and then the electricity was blasted at the speed of lightning at Yamix and zapped him! "Graaaaaarghhhh!!" Yamix screamed loudly in pain as his vulnerable bird body got electrified badly, and then he fell hard down on the ground and slid for some distance before stopping, having raised some dust on his way. "Did you really believe you could move faster than lightning?" Mega-Emperor said then. "You bastard..." Yamix said then, closing his eyes and looking furious! "I'LL KILL YOU!!" he screamed then, as he flapped his wings and flew up in the sky, and then he took a deep breath before blasting a huge fire blast down at Mega-Emperor! Mega-Emperor then ducked, letting the fire blast pass above him and missing him, and then he raised up again and saw Yamix diving at him with his talons! "DIEEEEE!!!" Yamix screamed insanely as he dived, but then Mega-Emperor aimed his right hand at him and said "Missile Barrage!", shooting six missiles at him. "Hmph!" Yamix said as he maneuvered around and avoided the first missile, and then the second, but the third one hit him immediately after he had avoided the second one, and the three last ones also blasted him in explosions afterwards! "Guargh!" Yamix shouted in pain as he was blasted by large explosions, and then he fell out of a smoke cloud and down on the ground. "Y-You..." Yamix said then, and then suddenly some light started glowing above him, and Yamix widened his eyes as he noticed that! Yamix then looked up and saw a huge light descending from the sky, and then Mega-Emperor said "Thunder!" as a gigantic pillar of lightning descended from the sky and landed right on Yamix's location! "GYAAAAAARGHHH!!!" Yamix screamed insanely then, as he disintegrated completely by the huge pillar of lightning! Then, nothing was left of him, and Mega-Emperor looked at the large scorched circular area where the pillar of lightning had struck.

Somewhere else, some huge armies were clashing. One was an army of many machines, well-organized and with good formations, another was an army of barbaric Bulblins riding large boars, fighting the machines, and the last was an army consisting only of Shinigami horsemen, also fighting the machines. The machines were being overwhelmed in numbers, however, the battle was going incredibly well in their favor! While their enemies used little more strategy than a mindless frontal charge, the machines had utilized many formations and intelligent battle tactics, such as phalanx formations and skirmishing, and they were completely outsmarting and embarrassing their enemies! In fact, the difference between the machines and their enemies was so great, that the machines were winning the battle with a 1,000 to 1 ratio of kills! This was also due to the fact that the machines, being made of metal, were much more powerful and tough than their enemies, harmlessly shrugging off almost all the attacks they received! Some Bulblins had charged onto their own massacre against the lances of some ChaosGallantmon in a phalanx formation, while some Shinigami horsemen, instead of making use of the speed and charge advantages horsemen normally have, they just jumped straight into the battle and got stuck into the crowd, getting butchered by close combat specialists such as Boltmon and ChaosBerserker! On the other hand, many mounted ChaosGallantmon, Knightmon, and ChaosImpaler were charging at their enemies' flanks and rear, causing them devastating casualties before retreating away and charging again and again, hitting their enemies with great force every time! This also easily broke the Shinigami and Bulblin's morale, who then began fleeing the battlefield! However, even then they couldn't escape as the machine horsemen hunted them down like worthless animals and trampled them with their horses, hunted them with javelins, and stabbed them from behind with lances and swords. Somewhere on the battlefield, Omegamon was pulling out his Grey Sword from the corpse of Bulblo, the leader of the Bulblin, who he had just slain. "Pretty good... for a barbarian" he said then, as he looked at Bulblo's body, which was lying lifeless on the ground with the eyes left open wide and blood coming out of the mouth. Meanwhile, Vaiknite was facing Alphamon somewhere else. Alphamon was standing unharmed and calm, holding his Holy Sword in his hand, while Vaiknite looked exhausted and breathed heavily, and his weapon Ryuutetsu had many cracks all over it. Suddenly, Vaiknite mounted Ryuutetsu on his shoulder like a rocket launcher and shouted "Dragon Cannon!!", as he shot a large, powerful blast of energy from the weapon's mouth towards Alphamon. "Holy Arrow" Alphamon said then, as he swung his Holy Sword and shot out a stream of holy energy that travelled straight like an arrow towards Vainkite's energy blast, dispersing it effortlessly as it hit it, and then it kept going and went through Vaiknite's right shoulder! "Aaaargh!!" Vaiknite screamed in pain as blood spouted from his wound, and then he fell on his knees and touched the wound. At the same time, his Ryuutetsu's cracks expanded, and then the weapon shattered completely to pieces that fell on the grass. "R-Ryuutetsu..." Vaiknite said as he saw that. "It's over" Alphamon said then. Vaiknite then took some deep breaths and said "N-No... It can't be...". "My army..." he continued, as he looked at the innumerable corpses of his men that filled the entire battlefield, and Alphamon's machines chasing down the survivors with blood lust! "You have fought well, Shinigami. For that, I shall grant you death of the utmost honor" Alphamon said then, as the Holy Sword disappeared from his hand, and then an extremely bright light started shining in front of him! "Ugh!" Vaiknite said, as he faced away from the extremely blind light that was blinding him! A few seconds later, the shining stopped, and then Vaiknite looked and saw Alphamon holding the Ultimate weapon, the Ultimate War Blade King Dragon Sword! "N-No... No!" Vaiknite said as he saw that, and then he fell on his butt and sat down, looking up at Alphamon's terribly powerful legendary blade! "Do not blemish your pride now. Die with honor!" Alphamon said then, as he raised his sword in the air with both hands! "Soul Blade!" Alphamon said then as he swung down his blade on Vaiknite! "NOOOOOOO!!!!" Vaiknite shouted loudly in fear, before the Ultimate War Blade King Dragon Sword struck him down with all its might! An unbelievably insane explosion of holy energy then happened upon impact, which covered an enormous portion of the entire battlefield and blew friends and allies away, while Vaiknite shouted "GRAAAAARGHHH!!!!" as he disintegrated to nothingness by the blade's immense power! The holy explosion then settled down, leaving behind nothing but a giant crater on the ground, which was completely empty except for Alphamon standing in its center.

At another place of the planet, Mag was battling Knightmare, along with some other Shinigami. "Haaa!" the Shinigami shouted their battle cries as they charged at Knightmare, but then Knightmare swung the Soul Edge and took them all out in a single hit, sending them flying! "Aaah!" the Shinigami shouted, as much spirit energy flew out of their bodies and got sucked into the Soul Edge after it had hit them, and the Shinigami then fell to the ground after having being struck by the attack. "You bastard..." Mag said, as he looked at the fallen Shinigami. "Offer your soul!" Knightmare said then as he tried to slash Mag, but then Mag jumped back and avoided the attack! Then he landed on his feet and said "Eat this!" as he pointed his hand at Knightmare and charged some red energy in it, before blasting a huge red energy blast at Knightmare! "Devour!" Knightmare said to Soul Edge then, as he swung it at Mag's attack, which the sword then sucked in completely! "What!" Mag said as he saw that. Knightmare then grabbed his sword and held it in front of him, with the sword pointing at the sky, and then the sword's eye looked into Mag's eyes! "Ugh!" Mag said as that happened, and then suddenly darkness shrouded everything as Mag got trapped in an illusion! "Wh-What is this?" Mag said, as he took a step back. But then suddenly, a demonic hellhound leaped out from the shadows behind him and took a huge bite off his right shoulder! "GRAAAARGH!!!" Mag screamed as that happened, as much blood spouted out like a fountain from his wound! Mag also turned around and saw the hellhound crunching the meat it had torn off his body and eating it! "D-Dammit!" Mag said, with his eyes widened in terror, and then some red eyes appeared in the shadows behind him! "WAAAAAHH!!" Mag screamed then, as some terrible things started happening to him in this fearsome nightmare! Meanwhile, outside his illusion, Mag was standing with his eyes widened in surprise, but he wasn't moving as he wasn't in control of his body any longer, since he was busy in the illusion. "Disappear, you cur!" Knightmare said then as he thrusted his sword at Mag, stabbing through his stomach and then keeping his arm going and raising the sword in the air, with it pointing at the sky and Mag impaled on it! Mag's spirit energy then got completely devoured by the sword, and then after that, Knightmare swung his sword and tossed Mag's lifeless corpse away, where it fell at the ground and rolled sideways for a bit before hitting a tree and stopping. Knightmare then looked around, watching the hundreds of enemies on the ground that he had slain so far. "Souls... I need more souls!" he said then.

Elsewhere, Kuroi was standing on his guard in an empty area somewhere. Suddenly, he saw Beelzemon riding on his Behemoth and heading towards him very fast! Beelzemon then tried to run Kuroi down, but Kuroi jumped away in the last second, avoiding the attack while Beelzemon's bike kept going. Kuroi then turned around and looked at Behemoth, but he noticed Beelzemon wasn't riding it anymore! "Fufufu..." he heard a laughter from behind him then, widening his eyes, but before he could do anything a shotgun blast popped his head! Kuroi's headless corpse then kneeled and fell to the ground, while Beelzemon, who was standing behind Kuroi with his shotgun drawn out and aimed at where Kuroi's head was during the shot, then put his shotgun back on his back. Afterwards, Behemoth turned around on its own and drove back to Beelzemon, stopping in front of him. Beelzemon then got on Behemoth and drove off the scene, leaving behind a dead Kuroi with his head popped by his shotgun.

On another area, Vamdemon was facing Rance. Rance no longer had his sword, as he had now transformed it into a billion dragons who were flying in the air above him! "Hmm... That is an interesting ability" Vamdemon said, as he looked at the dragons. "I will end this now. Hyper Beam!" Rance commanded, and then all of his dragons charged some energy in their mouths and shot a billion Hyper Beams at the same time at Vamdemon! However, Vamdemon then calmly raised his hands and pointed them at the one billion Hyper Beams, and then every single one of them dispersed to nothingness as soon as they got close to Vamdemon! "Wh-What!!!" Rance said as he saw that, widening his eyes which he was unable to believe! Vamdemon then smiled evily as he looked at Rance's frightened expression, and then he turned his attention to his dragons above him. "Hm!" he said then with an evil smirk, and then suddenly, all one billion dragons suddenly got engulfed in some black flames! "Oouuuu!!" the dragons roared in excruciating pain as they got consumed by the black flames of Vamdemon's attack! "Dragons!! What's going on?!!" Rance said then, as he looked at his one billion dragons perishing one after the other by the black flames! In a matter of seconds, all of Rance's dragons had then been eliminated by Vamdemon's dark technique, and Rance watched as the last one growled in suffering as he vanished into the black flames that had engulfed him! "N-NOOO!!!" Rance shouted then, as all of his one billion dragons had been eliminated with a single attack by Vamdemon! "Night Raid!" Vamdemon said then as he spread out his cape, unleashing many bats on Rance, who had now been left completely defenseless as his sword in the form of dragons had been destroyed! "Huh?" Rance said as he turned and looked at the bats, which then reached and began devouring him! "GRAAAAAAARGHHH!!" Rance screamed in pain as he then got devoured by Vamdemon's bats, and within seconds, the bats devoured him entirely, leaving only his ripped, torn apart c