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Apr 13, 07 at 6:59am
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I recently downloaded Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Red Rescue Team, and this game was so awesome and touching that I was inspired to make a story. Really, this game was one of the best games I've ever played, and I'd recommend anyone to buy/download it. It reminded me of Digimon World 2... anyway, here's the story:

"PokeGod Chaos Lord"

Once upon a time, in the pokemon world, there was a Pokemon Rescue Team called Team Alpha. The team's leader was Darkel, a human who had turned into a Psyduck and stayed in the pokemon world after developing a strong friendship with Pikachu. Team Alpha's main members were Psyduck, Pikachu, and Oddish, and they had managed to reach the highest Rank possible. They were widely known for their achievements, and for the fact that they once saved the world from getting destroyed by a huge meteor. Ever since, they did simple rescue jobs, such as saving pokemon from dungeons or escorting pokemon to their friends in dungeons. However, a few weeks after the meteor was destroyed, the world would face a danger once more...
Psyduck woke up in Team Alpha's base, which had the shape of a psyduck's head. He walked outside and saw Pikachu. He looked very worried. "Hurry, Darkel! Everyone is in the Pokemon Square discussing about a great danger that is threatening our world once more! Come on, let's go!" said Pikachu. Then he and Darkel went to the Pokemon Square. All the pokemon of the town were gathered there, talking. "No! This can't be! Another meteor?" said Lombre. "Yeah, this is hard to believe! Alakazam, are you sure?" said Granbull. "Yes" replied Alakazam, serious as always. "Xatu informed me about this. Another meteor is heading towards our world" he continued. "We must ask for Rayquaza's help again!" said Blastoise. "Yes! Rayquaza will save us once more! But who will go ask for his help?" said Golem. Then all the pokemon looked at Psyduck, Pikachu, and Oddish. "Again..." said Pikachu. Then he looked at Psyduck and said "What do you say, Darkel? Should we go ourselves or send some other pokemon of the team?". "Let's go and do it!" said Psyduck. Then he, Pikachu, Oddish and Alakazam went to see Xatu.
The four of them went to the Great Canyon and met with Xatu, and then Alakazam and Xatu used their psychic powers to teleport Team Alpha to the Sky Tower. Psyduck, Pikachu and Oddish made their way to the top of the tower, and met with Rayquaza once more. Rayquaza saw them. "You again! How dare you show yourselves again!" he said as he looked at them angrily. "We need your help once more" said Pikachu. "What is it?" said Rayquaza. "Another meteor is about to hit our world!" said Pikachu. "What? Do you expect me to believe that?" said Rayquaza. "We're not joking, Rayquaza, Look!" said Oddish. Then Rayquaza looked and saw a meteor heading towards the world. "This... is impossible! Another meteor? And so soon?" he said, surprised. "See, we weren't lying. Now please, help us, Rayquaza!" said Pikachu. "Okay then" said Rayquaza, and then he charged a Hyper Beam and blasted the meteor again from a great distance, so that this time Team Alpha wasn't caught in the explosion. After the Hyper Beam, Rayquaza was exhausted. "I... hope... there will be no more of these..." he said. "No, I don't think this will happen again. " said Pikachu. Then he looked at Psyduck and Oddish and said "Okay, let's go!" and then the three of them returned back to the Great Canyon, and from there they went back to the Pokemon Square.
At the Pokemon Square, many pokemon were waiting for them. "What happened? Did the meteor get destroyed?" said Lombre. "Yes, Rayquaza crushed it, just like the previous one" said Pikachu. "You did it again... you saved the world once more... you are so awesome!" said Caterpie, with tears in its eyes. "This calls for a celebration!" said Granbull, and then the pokemon had a party. They were very happy that the world had been saved.
But a week later, Alakazam received another message from Xatu. He called all the pokemon at the Pokemon Square to inform them. "Come on, Alakazam, tell us what's going on!" said Raichu. "Yeah! What's wrong this time?" said Rhydon. "It is happening again" said Alakazam. "What? What is happening again?" said Pikachu. "Another meteor" said Alakazam. "What? You're kidding! This can't be true!" said Pikachu. "But it is. Another meteor is heading towards our world. And it is even bigger this time" said Alakazam. "Oh no! What should we do? I don't think Rayquaza has enough energy left to destroy another meteor... He used almost all of his power for the last Hyper Beam..." said Pikachu. "But... why? Why is this happening?" said Metapod. "Are we cursed?" said Shiftry. "No" sounded a voice. The pokemon turned and looked. It was Whiscash. "Tell us, Whiscash! What is happening?" said Pikachu. "According to folklore" said Whiscash, "a long time ago, there was a pokemon trainer named Trevor. He was arrogant and selfish, and wished to become a king one day. Now, that person liked dragon pokemon much, because he thought they were the only pokemon worthy of a king. However, he had Jirachi as a pokemon, which was of the psychic type. Because of that, Trevor saw his pokemon as inferior and didn't care for it. He did not love it and did not want to raise it through battling. One day, he encountered Ninetales, and wished to take one of its tails to gain immortality. He challenged it into a battle, but his Jirachi soon fell defeated by Ninetales's flamethrower. Afraid that the Ninetales would also attack him, Trevor did a very selfish and cowardly thing. He started to run away. Ninetales could see and feel Jirachi's pain as it witnessed its trainer abandoning it. "I wish he could feel as I do" said Jirachi. "Your wish shall come true" said Ninetales, as he looked at Trevor fleeing the battle. "Hahaha! Running away's the smart thing to do! Love only yourself, fight only for yourself!" were Trevor's last words, before Ninetales turned him into a pokemon". The pokemon looked at Whiscash strangely. "What does this have to do with the meteors?" said Kangaskhan. Whiscash said "Trevor turned into a dragon-type pokemon, similar to a dratini. He trained himself very hard to become strong enough to defeat ninetales in a battle. It is said that, after an extreme amount of training, and by draining a lot of power from the hatred and anger in his soul, Trevor evolved into a half red half blue dragon with wings, called Dragonaurus. Exhausted from training, he flew away from our world to rest on another planet, until the day he would wake up to destroy our world as revenge. This would be his so-called justice". "So, it seems that day has come!" said Smeargle. "No! What are we going to do?" said Butterfree. "I do not think anyone of us here is strong enough to stop him. Even Rayquaza, who lives in the sky, cannot travel in space" said Alakazam. "So we are doomed?" said Granbull. "No! It cannot be!" said Blastoise. "Did you hear that? We're doomed!" said Pinsir to Scyther. "The unthinkable... will it really happen?" said Scyther. Then all the pokemon started to panic, until Whiscash said "There might be someone strong enough to stop Dragonaurus". Then all the pokemon looked at him. "Who can stop someone so strong as to even be able to send meteors against us?" said Golbat. "It is a pokemon of unimaginable power. But, it will be really hard to get to it. For someone to reach this pokemon's location, they must first go through Infinity Mountain" said Whiscash. "Infinity Mountain? Do you mean... the place where extremely powerful pokemon live? The mountain which noone has been able to explore yet?" said Mr.Mime. "Yes, that one. It is rumoured that, after you reach its peak, you will come across a huge, black tower. That tower is Chaos Tower, and it has 100 floors! On the final floor, it is said that the Ultimate organism rests. It is Chaos Lord, a dragon who possesses infinite power, and is made of metal that can't be scratched even by the most powerful Hyper Beam!" said Whiscash. "Infinite power? Can... can such a being really exist?" said Aipom. "It is said that Chaos Lord is the one who saved our world from destruction once, when he defeated both Kyogre and Groudon in a battle and put them to rest. He stopped the chaos that the giants of the land and the water were causing, and this is why he became known as Chaos Lord. He has the power to create chaos in the world, or stop it" said Whiscash. Then all the pokemon were surprised. "Such power... Chaos Lord... but how do we know if he really exists?" said Phanpy. "There's only one way to find out!" said Pikachu, and all the pokemon looked at him. "What do you say, Darkel?" he continued as it looked at Psyduck. Psyduck said "Okay, let's do it!". "We will also come!" said Alakazam. "Yeah" said Charizard and Tyranitar. "You have Team Hydro's support as well" said Blastoise. "We of Team Constrictors will join this as well!" said Octillery. "We're coming too" said Golem, leader of Team Rumblerock. Soon, every Pokemon Rescue Team joined the mission. Suddenly, a voice was heard from the sky "Team Tri Force will assist you too". The pokemon looked and saw Zapdos, Moltres, and Articuno! "Zapdos? Moltres? Articuno? Will you help us too?" said Pikachu. "Yes. This situation is serious. We feel it is our duty to help you" said Moltres. Then, after they all agreed to go to the mountain, all the Pokemon rescue Teams went to rest.
The next day, team Alpha and the rest teams headed for Infinity Mountain. The mountain seemed to be so tall that it reached the sky! The three friends saw an entrance to a cave. Pikachu looked at all the pokemon. "Are you ready? This is going to be the most difficult mission we've ever been in. It is almost impossible, but we must not give up! The world depends on our success!" he said. "Let's go!" said the pokemon of all teams, and then they entered the cave on Infinity Mountain. The pokemon faced some extremely difficult challenges, with huge boulders blocking their way, big and dangerour rivers of water or lava, and a lot of extremely powerful pokemon of all sorts. The only common thing in these pokemon was that they were all fully evolved and were very strong and dangerous. But the Pokemon Rescue Teams managed to defeat them, either with their strength, like Team Tri Force, or with strategy, like the pokemon of the Alpha Team. Against powerful foes, Oddish would use Sleep Powder to put them to sleep while Psyduck used his Screech + Scratch combo and Pikachu used his Thundershock + Quick Attack combo. When they were surrounded by enemy pokemon, Pikachu would thunderbolt them all, causing heavy damage, and Psyduck and Oddish finished them off with Confusion and Absorb, or other attacks. Psyduck also attacked enemied from a distance with Ice Beam, and Oddish also attacked opponents from far with Bullet Seed. On their way, some pokemon fainted, but a special rescue team of three Chanseys that had been formed especially for this mission was healing them. "These pokemon are extremely powerful!" said Scyther, after a tense battle against an Ursaring. "Yes. It is said that this is where Chaos Lord trained for thousands of years until he reached the level of Infinity. He strived to become the Ultimate organism, and after being the winner of all battles, he achieved his goal. He is the Ultimate Champion. His power is beyond logic, beyond even imagination! That is why he can definitely help us" said Whiscash, who was escorting the Pokemon Rescue Teams to provide them with information.
Finally, after some days of struggling against wild pokemon and exploring the cave of Infinity Mountain, the Pokemon Rescue Teams managed to reach the top of the mountain. A huge black tower stood in front of them when they exit the cave. The top of the tower could not be seen, as, after a point, Chaos Tower disappeared into some dark clouds in the sky. The weather was cold and rainy, strong winds were blowing, and it was dark like at night. "I don't understand... I thought it is morning" said Rhydon. Alakazam said "It is". "Then why is it dark?" said Rhydon. Whiscash said "This is because of Chaos Lord. According to the legend, his power is so great that it even extends outside his body, on the surrounding environment. What we see is the reflection of Chaos Lord's soul on the environment...". "Such power... Even affecting the environment..." said Raichu. "Let's go! The comet could hit out planet anytime! We have to hurry!" said Pikachu, and then all of the Pokemon Rescue Teams entered Chaos Tower. It was dark and cold inside, so Raichu had to enlighten the place with Flash, while Charizard warmed up the place with his fire. The Pokemon Rescue Teams went all the way up to Chaos Tower's top. The tower was so big that it took them a whole day to climb it! When they reached the last floor, they saw a huge machine dragon standing still, with his eyes closed. "This must be him..." said Whiscash. The pokemon were feeling faint. "Let's ask for his help... quickly. I feel like I'm about to lose my senses. I can't keep using Flash for much longer..." said Raichu. Pikachu said "Me too... But why?". Alakazam, who could sense Chaos Lord's psychic power, said "There is psychic power in this room. Very powerful psychic power. I can tell it is radiated from Chaos Lord". "So this is why we feel exhausted" said Oddish. "Come on, let's wake him up" said Mr.Mime as he approached Chaos Lord and touched his right claw. But suddenly, he was blasted away by a wave of psychic energy, and he was sent flying until he hit a Wobbuffet. "Careful! He's waking up!" said Pikachu. Then Chaos Lord opened his eyes and raised his head, looking at the Pokemon Rescue Teams. "You" he said, as he pointed at the Pokemon Rescue Teams with his left claw. "Intruders" he continued. Pikachu stood in front and said "No! We mean no harm. We are here because we need your help!". Chaos Lord looked at Pikachu's eyes for a while, and then he said "So, you want my assistance in defeating Dragonaurus...". Completely surprised, Pikachu asked "What? How... how can you possibly know that?". Alakazam said "He read your mind..." as he looked into Chaos Lord's eyes. "Really? You really have such abilities, Chaos Lord?" said Pikachu, still amazed. Whiscash said "Chaos Lord, like Alakazam, has extreme psychic powers...". Chaos Lord said "Exactly. And I can tell that Alakazam has, like me, memorized everything there is to memorize" as he looked at Alakazam in the eyes. "Amazing!" said Machamp. "So, can we count on your assistance?" said Alakazam. "No. As a matter of fact, I will destroy you for trespassing into my tower" said Chaos Lord. Then Zapdos used Thunderbolt on Chaos Lord, while Moltres used Flamethrower. "Get out of here! We will battle him while you escape!" said Zapdos to the Pokemon Rescue Teams. "Hurry! I will delay him with Ice Beam!" said Articuno, as he froze Chaos Lord solid with Ice Beam. However, Chaos Lord raised the temperature of his body very much, and the ice that was trapping him melted. Some Pokemon Rescue Teams started running away, frightened by Chaos Lord's power, who had taken no damage by the attacks of the embodiments of Fire, Ice, and Lightning. But suddenly Pikachu said "No, we're not leaving". Then all the pokemon who were running away stopped. "We came here because we need Chaos Lord's help. If we run away now, we will fail all our friends in the pokemon world! They depend on us!" said Pikachu. "He's right... We can't flee now" said Rhydon. "Yes..." said Octillery. Soon, all the pokemon who were running away previously changed their mind. Chaos Lord approached Pikachu and pointed at him with his right claw. Then he opened it and started charging a Hyper Beam. "I could kill you right here and right now... and you choose to stay?" said Chaos Lord. "All my friends in the pokemon world depend on me. If I have to give my life for the pokemon world to be saved, I will do it!" he said. "Me too!" said Oddish, and Psyduck also agreed. All the Pokemon Rescue Teams also agreed. When he saw that, Chaos Lord stopped charging the Hyper Beam. "You are determined, and your cause is good..." he said. "I will help you" he continued. Then suddenly a bright light came inside the room from Chaos Tower's windows on the room of the last floor, where Chaos Lord and the Pokemon Rescue Teams were. The ground also shook a little. "What is this?" said Rhydon. Then Chaos Lord teleported to the top of the Chaos Tower, and the Pokemon Rescue Teams followed him through some stairs. "It is the comet... It is approaching our world! Hurry, Chaos Lord!" said Pikachu. Then Chaos Lord pointed at the comet in the sky with his right claw, and then he opened it and said "Mega Laser!". Then a huge laser beam came out of Chaos Lord's right claw and went flying at extreme speed towards the comet, and destroyed it in a huge explosion! "Wow!" said Pikachu, surprised. Then Chaos Lord said "Go back to your homes. I will deal with Dragonaurus". He then began to fly towards the place where the comet came from. Then the Pokemon Rescue Teams started returning back to their bases.
Much later, Chaos Lord reached the place where the comet came from, and saw a small planet. He noticed a dragon figure on it. He flew closer to the planet and saw Dragonaurus. He teleported behind him and said "Dragonaurus...". "Who's there?" said Dragonaurus, but by the time he turned around to see who was behind him, Chaos Lord had teleported behind him again. "I am your end, dragon" said Chaos Lord. "What?" said Dragonaurus, who turned around once more, only to realize that Chaos Lord had teleported behind him again! "Show yourself, you coward!" said Dragonaurus, as he looked around. "Turn around, lowly existence..." said Chaos Lord. Then Dragonaurus turned around and saw Chaos Lord. "Who are you?" said Dragonaurus. "I am the Ultimate Champion of all battles. I am here to stop you" said Chaos Lord. "Stop me? Hahaha! Yer in fer the fight of yer life! 'N the last one too! Har!" said Dragonaurus as he laughed, and then he used Hyper Beam against Chaos Lord, but Chaos Lord took the hit without getting damaged. "So, you're a tough one! Destroying you will be a pleasure!" said Dragonaurus, smiling. "Oh, I assure you, the pleasure will be all mine" said Chaos Lord. "Hmph! Eat this!" said Dragonaurus, as he used Flamethrower against Chaos Lord. But Chaos Lord used Twin Hydro Cannon with his two cannons and put out the fire. "So, you can use water techniques... Try this then!" said Dragonaurus as he used thunderbolt against Chaos Lord. But Chaos Lord simply absorbed the attack into a huge drill on his head! "What? How..." said Dragonaurus. "It is futile!" said Chaos Lord as he roared. "I do not fear you, machine!" said Dragonaurus. "I should hope not, Dragonaurus. Fearless foes are much more satisfying" said Chaos Lord. "The only satisfaction I will give you is a quick death!" said Dragonaurus. "And now you tire me, Dragonaurus. I've heard far too much empty boasting already" said Chaos Lord. "Come on, then, if you think my boasts are empty!" said Dragonaurus. "Patience, Dragonaurus. I will kill you in good time..." said Chaos Lord. "Enough!" said Dragonaurus as he used Ice Beam, only to see it get stopped by Chaos Lord, who used a move called Dragon Fire. Flames came out of his mouth and melted Dragonaurus's Ice Beam before it could even get close to Chaos Lord. Dragonaurus was surprised by how easily Chaos Lord was stopping his attacks. "Cower in fear!" said Chaos Lord as he roared. "These were only my basic attacks! Prepare to see my true power! Lava Blast!" said Dragonaurus as he blasted lava out of his mouth towards Chaos Lord. "Ha, ha, ha" laughed Chaos Lord, as the lava hit him and kept going without having caused any damage to his metal body! "Y-You weren't hurt by that?" said Dragonaurus, amazed by Chaos Lord's endurance. "I cannot be harmed by anything" said Chaos Lord. "S-shut up! Ice Blast!" said Dragonaurus as he blasted a gigantic beam of ice towards Chaos Lord. The beam hit Chaos Lord and froze him solid. "Let's see how you'll get out of there! Hahaha!" laughed Dragonaurus. Then he heard a voice "Why are you talking to the ice?". Dragonaurus turned around and saw Chaos Lord! "Surprise" he said. "C-Chaos Lord? But..." said Dragonaurus. "You thought you had frozen me solid, right? Well, guess what. I can teleport" said Chaos Lord. "No! This can't be true!" said Dragonaurus, and he used Ice Blast again, freezing Chaos Lord once more. But Chaos Lord used Explosion and broke free from Dragonaurus's icy trap. "I'm afraid it is" said Chaos Lord. Dragonaurus stepped back, but then he noticed that Chaos Lord had some water on him, which came from molten ice from his Ice Blast attacks. "Ha! Lighting Blast!" said Dragonaurus as he blasted a huge beam of electricity at Chaos Lord. In a second he had finished his attack, and then he saw Chaos Lord wasn't there anymore. "Hahaha! I destroyed him at last! Sorry, Chaos Lord! But that's what you get for messing with me!" said Dragonaurus, laughing. Then he heard a voice from behind him "Fool...". Then he turned around and saw Chaos Lord! "C-Chaos Lord? Y-You're still alive? But how?" said Dragonaurus. Chaos Lord said "I read your mind and avoided your attack". Dragonaurus said "Y-You read my mind and avoided my attack? Impossible! I don't think you can read my mind, and even if you could, there's no way you can have the reflexes to react soon enough to avoid my attack, because I attacked just when I thought about attacking!". Chaos Lord closed his eyes, smiled evily, and said "The weak reflexes of inferior beings such as you, can not be compared with the abilities I have. Being a machine, I am able to do things that other living beings could never even imagine. Can you calculate 1337 x 105312 in less than a second?". "No..." said Dragonaurus. "That's what I'm talking about" said Chaos Lord. "Aaaargh! You... You're just messing with me! I... I cannot believe these things you say! It's... just... impossible!" said Dragonaurus. "It is okay not to understand my strength. After all, my powers are beyond belief" said Chaos Lord, smiling. "Soulless automaton! I will destroy you!" said Dragonaurus as he used Lighting Blast against Chaos Lord once more. This time, the attack hit him, but it didn't seem to have any effect at all! "Cling to your hope, my friend. It will make your destruction all the sweeter" said Chaos Lord. "Blaze Blast!" said Dragonaurus as he used Blaze Blast at Chaos Lord, and set him on fire. But, although fire was covering Chaos Lord's entire body, Chaos Lord was not being damaged by the extremely hot flames. "Just... Die already!" said Dragonaurus as he used Hyper Beam at Chaos Lord, who then used his left claw as a shield, deflecting the Hyper Beam and sending it back to Dragonaurus, who took some damage. "There is no hope in opposing the inevitable" said Chaos Lord. Dragonaurus then said "You have incredible survivability, I give you that. But now, I shall end you" said Dragonaurus as he started forming a gold ball of energy. The gold ball of energy got bigger and bigger, until it became as big as a planet! "This is it, Chaos Lord! Prepare to die by my ultimate attack! Golden Blast!" said Dragonaurus, as he shot the gigantic gold ball of energy at Chaos Lord. The ball of energy hit Chaos Lord and a huge explosion of light was caused! "It's all over... Goodbye, Chaos Lord..." said Dragonaurus. But after a few seconds, when the light faded away, Dragonaurus was suprised to see Chaos Lord still standing where he was before the attack, without even a scratch! "It cannot be!" he said. "Impressive attack, but nowhere close to my power" said Chaos Lord. Then he said "Giga Claw!" as he slashed the air with his left claw, and then Dragonaurus felt the slash on his body! "Hyper Beam!" shouted Dragonaurus as he fired a Hyper Beam against Chaos Lord, who opened his mouth and absorbed the Hyper Beam into a black hole which was in his mouth! Then Chaos Lord spinned his drill on his head extremely fast, and it caused a whirlwind. Then Chaos Lord sent the whirlwind at Dragonaurus, who was sucked into it and started to spin around fast, getting dizzy. Then Chaos Lord used Twin Hydro Cannon at the whirlwind, filling it with water, and then he blasted some electricity from his horn at the water-filled whirlwind, zapping Dragonaurus and causing massive damage to his body. Chaos Lord then used Double Ice Beam and froze the whirlwind, and Dragonaurus in it. Dragonaurus's body was entirely trapped into the ice, except his head. "This battle isn't over yet..." he said. "But your life is" said Chaos Lord, as he used Double Hyper Beam at the frozen whirlwind, shattering it to pieces, along with Dragonaurus's body.Dragonaurus died, and then he had an experience after his death. He found himself lying down exhausted. He was back in his human form, as Trevor. "Where am I? Am I... a spirit?" he wondered. Then Gengar appeared. "Kekekekeke!" he laughed as he grabbed Trevor and started dragging him towards somewhere. "Where is Gengar taking me?" wondered Trevor. Then Gengar took Trevor to the dark side, where he was tormented by his worst nightmares for eternity.
Meanwhile, the Pokemon Rescue Teams had all gathered at the Pokemon Square. "I wonder if he made it..." said Rhydon. "Yeah, Chaos Lord looked strong, but was he strong enough to defeat Dragonaurus?" wondered Raichu. "I have faith in Chaos Lord's power" said Pikachu. Suddenly, Chaos Lord appeared in the center of the Pokemon Square. He had just teleported there. "Chaos Lord! What happened?" asked Tyranitar. "Your problem is solved. Dragonaurus is no more" said Chaos Lord. "Hahaha! I knew you could do it, Chaos Lord!" said Charizard. "Thank you, Chaos Lord, PokeGod!" said Pikachu. "Just stay away from my tower" said Chaos Lord, as he teleported back to his tower. Then the pokemon had a huge celebration, and later some smeargles and other pokemon erected a huge statue of Chaos Lord in the center of the Pokemon Square. Ever since, Chaos Lord was worshipped by the pokemon as the PokeGod, the Almighty, Eternal Protector of the pokemon world.


I'm also planning to extend this story in the future, including more victims for Chaos Lord... Ryuumaru will definitely be in. I have thought that he will be a clone created by mixed human and dragon DNA, who will consist of 33% dragon DNA and 66% human DNA. In fact, I had started writing a story but Ihave stopped now as I want to find a way to mix all my stories into one and create a gigantic story. Below is the story I was talking about so far. It is meant to be a continue of this story.


But the peace didn't last long. Another evil already had its eyes on earth. It was Dragonaurus, one of Acclaim's most loyal servants, who hated ChaosLord for killing his master. He swore to avenge his death by killing ChaosLord. But, having seen ChaosLord's power in battle, he realized that he couldn't just beat him in a fight alone. To do this, he thought that he would also need the help of his fellow dragons on dragonplanet, as well as the assistance of the humans, the pokemon, the digimon, and the yu-gi-oh monsters on earth. But when he asked the dragons to help him, they refused, preferring a peaceful life than a war against ChaosLord for petty revenge, which would probably lead to their complete extermination. Only Acclaim's five most loyal and most powerful dragons agreed to oppose ChaosLord. They were Magmegalosaurus, Kylorados, Enu, Exrai, and Hinakaze. These dragons, disappointed by the other dragons who refused to battle ChaosLord, decided to combine their powers in one. They found a single hair that was left from Acclaim, and used that to make a clone of him, but much more powerful. Dragonaurus added its extreme powers, Magmegalosaurus added its ground-controlling powers, Kylorados added its water-controlling powers, Enu added its fire-controlling powers, Exrai added its electricity-controlling powers, and Hinakaze added its wind-controllong powers. All these powers got combined with Acclaim's DNA and a much more enhanced clone was created. Ryuumaru was given birth. Ryuumaru's outer appearance, however, was different than that of Acclaim's. Ryuumaru had long, white hair and green eyes, with a serious and sometimes mean look. The difference between Acclaim and Ryuumaru came as a result of combining Acclaim's DNA with DNA from the six dragons. Ryuumaru was made of 66% human DNA and 33% dragon DNA, but his form remained human. His soul was also different than that of Acclaim. Ryuumaru appeared to be much wiser than his old self, and he also had the ability to use some unnatural spirit powers, which appeared as a combination of human and dragon DNA! The downside was that he was far more boring. Ryuumaru dressed in a black kimono and wore a light blue scarf, and the dragons offered him a black cape they had made by a material they had not been able to destroy so far, so they thought it was indestructible. The dragons also repaired Acclaim's broken dragon sword, which still contained Dragongod's powers in it, and made it even stronger by adding their own powers in it! Then they gave it to Ryuumaru, who then left for earth. Although he was based on Acclaim, Ryuumaru was a new human and did not have the memories of Acclaim. For some reason, he had a single, overwhelming need: to bring a so-called justice on earth, and become its ruler forever, since he could not die of age because of his dragon powers which protected him. With the belief that he was invincible, Ryuumaru went to rule earth.

Ryuumaru flew with his dragons to a small island with only two towns. He decided to start building his empire from there. He used his powers to create a huge castle between the two towns, protected by walls that were supposedly impossible to destroy. He declared himself king of the island, and to make people accept him as one, he used his dragon powers to allow them to slow down their aging process and keep the environment of the island at a good condition. Ryuumaru was eventually accepted as the island's governor, and then he imposed some extremely strict rules for the people. Although the people liked the environment being clean and some of them liked the fact that the aging process had been slowed down, life got extremely boring on the island because of the rules. A lot of people fled the island because they preferred their life as it was previously, while others became mad religious fanatics, blindly loyal to Ryuumaru, obeying all his rules without question. Ryuumaru picked the five of them he considered to be the best among the other people of the island, and gave them special powers. The five people were Rance, Kuroi, Mag, Rika and Yaiba, and they formed a unit called Ryuumaru's Guard. Ryuumaru used his underlings to impose his fascist opinions and so-called justice on the island. His "justice" included killing all those who defied Ryuumaru's power and insulting him, disobeying his rules, and inciting rebellion against the so-called highest god Ryuumaru. When asked why these people had to die, Ryuumaru replied "Revolution demands sacrifice".

This is how the Ryu Heresy was born, according to which Ryuumaru was the highest god and his dragons and his five human underlings were also gods to be worshipped. The Ryu Heresy started to cause problems and dividing the people, who, until then, believed that ChaosLord was the Ultimate Organism. And all people outside the island still believed that, but some maddened zealots started spreading the Heresy from the island to other places! The Ryu Heresy soon spread all over the Pokeia Region, whose people were known for their lack of intelligence and tendency to believe in inextstent things such as reincarnation. The people of this region started fighting each other because of their beliefs, and the region fell to chaos. The most maddened heretics, led by a man named Drag, formed an organization called Team Dragon, which had its base on a small island known as the Dragon Island. At that island, Team Dragon had a huge fortress, which was guarded by an entire army of dragon pokemon which had been trained to use various weapons, such as rocket launchers! It was from there that Team Dragon sent their heretical apostles to spread the Ryu Heresy all over the world! The Pokeia Region fell to the heresy easily but the rest regions did not like and did not want to accept the foul teachings of the new false religion. They hated Ryuumaru's rules and would rather have a few years of free life than many years of blindly obeying Ryuumaru's rules. And so they fought the heretics who were trying to spread their foul propaganda and delude people with promises of eternal youth and a "perfect world".

However, Ryuumaru's new society was anything but perfect. In fact, the imbalance Ryuumaru caused to nature's wise laws caused a lot of problems. Slowing down the aging process made life harder for many people, as now parents had to take care of infants for a lot more years than usual, which was extremely tiring. Also, people who grew old had to wait a lot more years until they finally went to rest, which was depressing. People remained young for much longer, which resulted in overpopulation. Since Ryuumaru used his dragon powers to allow them to live without needing to eat, or give any effort at all, there was nothing to stop people from reproducing again and again in their life. With life not being a struggle anymore, people saw no reason why not to keep creating life. Therefore, they started reproducing at a phenomenal rate, and overpopulation started causing trouble. Also, since life was not a struggle anymore, as people could live without effort, life completely lost its very meaning, and feelings of emptiness and boredom swept through people's hearts. Humans also started to turn unethical, even going as far as banning marriage, since many of them got bored of their spouses after the first 200 years of marriage. These people's immorality, which was also supported by Ryuumaru's "Do as you wish" saying, made these people hated by the outside world. Ryuumaru's supposed heaven was, in fact, a hell.

ChaosLord soon learned about what was happening to earth when some digimon asked for his help. ChaosLord then sent some of his Chosen Champions to deal with the situation. They were ChaosBlackWarGreymon, ChaosMetalSeadramon, and ChaosPiedmon. The three Chosen Champions flew to the Pokeia Region to search for the source of this evil. When they reached that location, they split up and started searching.

ChaosPiedmon travelled east, and watched as people and pokemon were fighting in the streets. He landed on the ground and started looking around. Suddenly he heard a voice "Hey, who are you?". ChaosPiedmon turned around and saw two swordsmen looking at him. "I am ChaosPiedmon. I was sent here by ChaosLord, to find what is causing all this trouble" said ChaosPiedmon. One of the swordsmen said "So, you are another of these fools who believe in ChaosLord. Prepare to get slain by the finest swordsmen of the Pokeia Region, Roy and Marth!". Then Roy and Marth drew their swords. ChaosPiedmon smiled as he pulled two swords from his back with his psychic powers, and started floating in the air. ChaosPiedmon's swords were also floating in the air, as ChaosPiedmon was controlling them with psychic powers instead of holding them with his hands. Then ChaosPiedmon, with a sadistic smile on his face, moved his swords extremely fast towards Roy and Marth, trying to stab them at their hearts. But Roy moved to the side and avoided the attack while Marth blocked ChaosPiedmon's attack with his own sword. Then ChaosPiedmon started having a sword fight with both Roy and Marth at the same time, and he was laughing during it! With a swift and violent move of his sword, he managed to disarm Roy, and then he used his sword to slap Roy twice with the sword's side that isn't sharp, while he managed to stab Marth lightly at the shoulder at the same time! "Ha, ha, ha" he laughed as he saw Roy rolling on the ground to get his sword back, only to get disarmed once more by ChaosPiedmon's floating sword! Then Marth slashed ChaosPiedmon's sword away from him and screamed "For master Ryuumaru!" as he started charging at ChaosPiedmon to stab him, but ChaosPiedmon simply teleported away! Then he slashed Roy's stomach a little with his sword, making it bleed, while he teleported behind Marth while he was duelling with his other sword, and kicked his leg lightly, making him trip and fall. "Your end is ivevitable. Submit and spare yourselves the pain of living" said ChaosPiedmon, as he slashed Roy's leg with his sword and stabbed Marth's other shoulder at the same time with his other sword. "We will never surrender to the likes of you!" said Roy, as he grabbed and threw his sword at ChaosPiedmon, who stopped it in the air with his psychic powers before it could stab him. "Fine then" said ChaosPiedmon, as he turned Roy's sword against him and sent it flying at him with extreme speed. The sword went straight through Roy's heart and came outside his body full of blood, and Roy fell on the ground dead. "Roy! Nooo!!" shouted Marth. "So much fear. So much noise" said ChaosPiedmon, as he looked at Marth. "Damn you, monster!" said Marth as he started charging at ChaosPiedmon. But he stopped running when he found himself against three swords controlled by ChaosPiedmon's psychic powers! "Game over!" said ChaosPiedmon as his two swords and Roy's sword surrounded Marth, and then they all got stabbed deep into his upper body from all sides. Marth fell on his knees, coughing out blood. "F-Forgive me, master... I... I have f-failed you..." were Marth's last words before he fell on the ground dead, in a pool of his own blood.

Meanwhile, ChaosBlackWarGreymon was at the west part of the Pokeia Region. He found a huge dragon torching people to ashes with his fire attacks. "If you won't join heaven, you'll join hell!" he screamed as he punched a building and destroyed it entirely! "What do you think you're doing?" said BlackWarGreymon. "I'm sending these unbelievers where they belong! Noone can defy and disrespect Ryuumaru's power!" shouted the dragon. "You will have to stop" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. "What? Noone tells Giga Bowser what to do!" shouted Giga Bowser as he spit some flames at ChaosBlackWarGreymon. However, ChaosBlackWarGreymon emerged from the flames unharmed. "It looks like I will have to stop you myself" he said. "Shut up!" said Giga Bowser as he tried to slam ChaosBlackWarGreymon with his tail, but ChaosBlackWarGreymon flew away fast and avoided the attack. Then Giga Bowser tried to punch him some times, but ChaosBlackWarGreymon was moving around fast and avoiding Giga Bowser's attacks. "Stop moving so I can kill you!" said Giga Boswer. "Giga Blaster!" shouted ChaosBlackWarGreymon as he fired a missile at Giga Bowser's stomach, that did some damage. "Argh... you are strong... But I'll hide in my shell! Hahaha!" said Giga Boswer. Then ChaosBlackWarGreymon prepared to fire another missile at Giga Bowser, but Giga Bowser hid in his shell and protected himself from the attack. ChaosBlackWarGreymon kept shooting missiles at Giga Bowser, who was hiding in his shell, but he was doing very little damage. "Ha, ha ha! You can keep attacking me all you want! Your pathetic attacks can't penetrate my shell!" laughed Giga Bowser. Then ChaosBlackWarGreymon said "Terra Force!" as he formed a gigantic ball of yellow energy and threw it at Giga Bowser's shell, damaging it very badly. Giga Bowser's shell started to crack! "No! My shell! I... I have to end this battle now!" thought Giga Boswer. Then he shouted "Die!" as he started spinning his shell really fast and flying towards ChaosBlackWarGreymon. ChaosBlackWarGreymon said "Dragon Slayer!" as he raised his arms, his hands pointing at the sky, and then he started spinning around extremely fast. Then he started flying towards Giga Bowser at a great speed, with his hands first and his entire body spinning around like a drill. ChaosBlackWarGreymon and Giga Boswer collided, and ChaosBlackWarGreymon drilled his way through Giga Bowser's shell and body, and came out of it full of blood, while what was left of Giga Bowser's dead body fell on a factory, demolishing it.

At the same time, ChaosMetalSeadramon was exploring the north side of the Pokeia Region. He found a black knight who was wielding a huge sword with a mysterious eye on it, and disposed of him and his sword quickly with a single hyper beam. Suddenly,




And that's the story so far. Of course, it doesn't mix with the one I just posted (as Dragonaurus's already in the dark side), but I'll rewrite it.

I love making these!


~PokeGod ChaosLord

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Here's a story which I am planning to write bit by bit. I have done some planning for this story for a while before I started writing it, as unlike all the other stories I have written so far, this one will actually have a more complicated plot. In fact, when I first thought about this story, I was thinking of making this into a Manga, but in the end, I gave up that idea as I can't be bothered to draw hundreds of pictures. So I've just decided to write this instead.

Here is Chapter 1 of my story:

Heaven and Chaos Planet

Chapter 1: A Special Day


Somewhere in the universe, far away from Earth, there was a planet which resembled Earth in size and appearance. Its surface composed of 33% water and 66% land. The North pole of the planet was covered in ice and snow, and it looked white from outerspace, while the South pole was covered in deserts which looked yellow from outerspace, and the majority of the rest of the planet was mostly covered in brown mountains, hills and plains, which looked brown from outerspace. There were also some oceans which looked blue from outerspace. Somewhere on the brown mountains, hills and plains, there was an area which looked black from outerspace. From close up, that place was an extremely dark graveyard. All the lands of the planet were joined together in one extremely large continent which made up about 65% of the planet's entire surface, except there was one single island which was not connected to the rest of the land. That island looked green when viewed from outerspace, and it was actually a tropical island with a single large mountain on the center of it. On the summit of that mountain, there was a large green bird-like machine which always seemed to be standing there, emitting some strong sunlight from its body which enlightened the entire island! This island was also the only place on the planet which was bright, as it was enlightened by some sunlight coming from the green bird on top of the mountain, while the rest of the planet did not receive any sunlight at all, as the planet itself was not even remotely close to any star which was able to provide sufficient sunlight. Due to the sunlight available on the tropical island, there were many trees and plants which were native to the island on that planet - they could not be found anywhere else on the planet, although most of them would be quite common on Earth.

Aside from the tropical island, the planet was always dark like the night, but there was a little light coming from a small, nearby planet, which resembles the Earth's Moon. From far away, the planet didn't seem to have anything else, but in fact, it was inhabited by many machines, who could all speak human language.

It was an unusually exciting day on that planet for the machines. Almost all the machines on the planet had gathered in front of a place located on the land West of the black graveyard. That place resembled a tiny gray dot when viewed from outerspace. In fact, it was a quite large place, where the ground was covered by nothing but flat, dark metal. On the center of the area, there was a huge black tower which had green energy flowing through it. To the North-East of the tower was another black tower, which was even taller than the other tower! And on the South-West of the area, there was an enormous black cannon, which was twice the size of the tower on the center of the area! Some huge cables were also connecting from that tower to the cannon. Although many machines were gathering around the gray area where the cannon and the two towers were, none of them dared to even step into the area.

The machines seemed to be looking at a huge black tower somewhere on the planet, and many of them were cheering and waiting, as if a big event was about to happen. "Hm? What's happening? Why is everyone so happy?" asked one of the many machines inhabiting the planet. This machine resembles a brown scorpion with some red patterns on its face, a blade attached to the end of its tail and many smaller blades attached to its back and both sides of its body, which served as its legs. Then another machine, who resembles a metal Qwilfish said "Huh? How could you not know what day it is today, Scorpiomon? But anyway, I'll tell you. Today is the day when ChaosLord, the ruler of our planet, Chaos Planet, will be demonstrating his incredible powers to all the machines on this planet by destroying some stars and planets in outer space! He will be destroying the stars by shooting them from the top of the Chaos Tower", and then he pointed at a huge black tower, which all the machines on the planet were gathering in front of. "Cool! I remember he did something like that every once in a while... So that's why everyone's so excited today... they're waiting to watch ChaosLord destroy some stars!" said the scorpion-like machine, known as Scorpiomon. Then the Qwilfish-like machine said "Yes, ChaosLord does that once every fifteen months, if I recall correctly." "Every fifteen months? Why not every year?" asked Scorpiomon. Then the other machine said "Because if ChaosLord did it once every year, he'd be doing it on the same day every year, which means he'd be destroying the stars on the same side of the universe each time he does it, and he finds that boring. So he does it once every fifteen months, so that he'd only be destroying the stars of the same side of the universe once in every sixty months. You get what I'm saying?". "No, not really. But anyway, the last time ChaosLord was destroying stars, the machines weren't as excited as they are today. Why is that?" asked Scorpiomon. "Well, I heard that this time, the three Chaos Generals would be destroying the stars with ChaosLord too" said the blue-eyed machine. "The three Chaos Generals? Who are they?" asked Scorpiomon. Then another machine, who resembles a muscular guy, except he was made of metal came and said "Man, you don't even know the three Chaos Generals? Mate, are you sure you're from this planet? The three Chaos Generals are ChaosBlackWarGreymon, ChaosMetalSeadramon and ChaosPiedmon. They are ChaosLord's three Elite guards. How could you not know who they are?". "Well, now that I think about it, I think I've heard of them before... but I just forgot... hehehe..." said Scorpiomon. "So anyway, when's ChaosLord going to start destroying stars for us to see?" he asked. "He'll start soon" the blue-eyed machine answered.

Meanwhile, in another place far away, there was a huge white castle with a gold dragon statue with eyes made from ruby at the top of it. The castle was surrounded by two large towns and some forests, which were all surounded by a white, circular wall. Inside the wall, there were millions of strange animals, angels and people wearing black kimono and carrying katana, while outside the wall, there were many normal people living in villages. A gigantic tree which even reached up to the sky could also be seen in the Southern horizon. It was a sunny day in the afternoon there. There was not a single cloud to be seen in the sky, and a man with long, white hair, large green eyes and wearing a light blue scarf, a black kimono and a black cape and had a sword with a purple hilt and green dragon wings attached to the hilt was standing at the top of the gold dragon statue at the top of the white castle. The man was looking down at all the other people around the castle as his hair, cape, kimono and scarf were blowing gracefully in the wind. Suddenly, a huge half red and blue dragon with yellow eyes flew to the top of the dragon statue, where the white-haired man was standing. "Ruuuu guu" Dragonaurus cried (which, in Dragonaurus's language means "Ryuumaru") as he looked at the white-haired man, who's name was Ryuumaru. "Dragonaurus" said Ryuumaru as he looked at the dragon, known as Dragonaurus. as he stood next to the white-haired man, named Ryuumaru, while looking up in the clear blue sky. "Gruuuuu!" said Dragonaurus ("So, what are you doing now?"). "Nothing much. I'm just looking to see if everyone's doing their jobs..." said Ryuumaru, who could understand what Dragonaurus was saying. "Roouuu..." said Dragonaurus ("I see"). Then Ryuumaru said "By the way, have you visited the other five in the living world recently?". Then Dragonaurus said "Grooouuuuu!" ("You mean Hinakaze and the others? No, I haven't visited them in quite a while. In fact, it's been some time since I last went to the living world... Maybe I should see them soon though..."). Then Ryuumaru said "I see. Well, I haven't been to the living world recently either. But I've promised to Rika that I would take her with me the next time I'm going there. After all, she loves it when I take her to the living world. Maybe I should let her meet my old Pokémon when I take her there?". "Rooooahhh!" said Dragonaurus ("Yeah, I imagine she would get along with them pretty well"). Ryuumaru said "Anyway, I think I should head back to my office now. While I haven't been to the living world in a while, I also haven't checked on it in a while". "Reeeeuuuu!" Dragonaurus said ("I see. Well anyway, I'm going to continue on with what I'm doing. See you later"), and then Dragonaurus flew off, while Ryuumaru entered the mouth of the dragon statue which he was standing on. Inside the mouth, there were some stairs, which leads inside the white castle below the dragon statue. Ryuumaru walked down the stairs and went into the white castle.

Meanwhile, the machines on Chaos Planet were still waiting for ChaosLord and the three Chaos Generals to start destroying stars. "Come on... when's it going to begin?" asked one of the machines, who looked like a gray dragonfly with sharp forelegs and large round green eyes. Then suddenly, a voice was heard coming from the top of the Chaos Tower: "Good morning, machines". Then all the machines on Chaos Planet looked at the top of the Chaos Tower and saw a big, red machine with a horn on his nose, red eyes and had a drill on one hand and sharp claws on the other. He also had a tail and two huge cannons on his back, and he could be seen standing on the top floor of the black tower through a large window there, which was opened. "I assume everyone's excited?" asked the machine. "Yeaaahhhh!" all the other machines on the planet shouted. Then the machine said "Well then! I'm getting excited too! I'm sure you have all been waiting for this day ever since fifteen months ago! This time, I'm not the only one who's going to destroy stars! ChaosBlackWarGreymon, ChaosMetalSeadramon and ChaosPiedmon are going to join me too! Well anyway, I, ChaosLord am going to start off by destroying the biggest star in the sky right now!", and then he waved his claws. Then a red "x" appeared in the sky before ChaosLord, and a black "x" also appeared on the biggest star in the sky which could be seen. "X-Destruct Ray!" ChaosLord shouted, and then the red "x" in the sky started flying towards the black "x" at extreme speed. Then the red "x" landed directly onto the black "x", and when that happened, the star which the black "x" was on exploded. The explosion was so bright that Chaos Planet was lit up temporarily! "Target destroyed!" said ChaosLord, and then all the machines cheered, and the ones with hands clapped their hands. "Well then, who wants to go next?" asked ChaosLord as he looked down at three beings from the top of the Chaos Tower. One of these beings was a black and white robot dragon with two sharp claws, a horn on his nose but didn't have a tail. Another one was a red-haired black dragon covered with metal. And the last was a pierrot dressed in black and red, had two swords on his back and had a half black and half white face. "I'll go!" said the pierrot, and then he looked up in the sky. "Well then, you can go first, ChaosPiedmon. After all, all three of you will get a turn eventually" said ChaosLord. Then ChaosPiedmon said "Ending Spell!" as he created a sonic blast, which shot at the sky and destroyed many small stars, creating one huge explosion which lit up the whole galaxy where the planet was in for about one minute! "How was that?" asked ChaosPiedmon as all the other machines were amazed. "Let me go next!" said the red-haired dragon. "As you wish, ChaosMetalSeadramon" said ChaosLord. Then ChaosMetalSeadramon shot a powerful energy blast out of his mouth at a star, making it explode. A huge explosion of energy blasted by ChaosMetalSeadramon also happened with the star's explosion. "Now, please have your turn, ChaosBlackWarGreymon" said ChaosLord. Then the robot dragon, known as ChaosBlackWarGremon said "Giga Blaster!" as he fired a fish-shaped missile from between his hands at a large star, making it explode. There were also many planets orbitting that star, and they were also destroyed by the star's explosion. After that, all the machines started cheering loudly. "Lemme have some more fun!" ChaosLord shouted as he blasted billions of needles out of the twin cannons on his back at the sky. Some of those needles hit some of the stars in space, while others missed and continued flying through space. Then five seconds later, fifty stars in the sky exploded simultaneously, and the sky on Chaos Planet became so bright that nothing but white could be seen for two minutes. After the light faded away, the machines all clapped their hands and cheered loudly. "Hahahahaha! Let's keep having fun!" said ChaosLord, and then he continued destroying stars with the three Chaos Generals.

To be continued


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Chaos cannot be denied.

Here is a small story I created today.

PokeGod ChaosLord flew to a mysterious planet, which was inhabited by humans and other creatures with unnatural powers. The entire planet seethed with foul energies that slowed down the aging process of the beings of that place. The Eternal PokeGod teleported inside the walls of a huge castle. "Who are you?" asked a man as he saw him. "I am the Almighty PokeGod, and I was informed that the people here believe in an awful, immoral heresy" said ChaosLord. "We believe in lord Ryuumaru, the highest god. His wise rules-" said the man, but then he was interrupted by ChaosLord. "His foul teachings have put you to sleep. I am here to open your eyes. Behold my power, and bow before me" said ChaosLord, as he used Energy Blast and decimated the walls of the castle, which were believed to be indestructible by the members of the society of that planet. Suddenly, the ground started shaking, volcanoes erupted and tsunamis started happening all over the planet, causing massive disasters. Then a man walked out of a golden dragon statue, which was on the top of the castle of this planet. "Ah, you must be Ryuumaru, the so-called highest god" said ChaosLord. "So what of it?" said Ryuumaru. "I am pleased to meet you. My name is ChaosLord" said ChaosLord. "What do you want?" said Ryuumaru. "Nothing that is too difficult for a person of your abilities, my friend. I just want you admit my superiority in front of all your people" said ChaosLord. "And why should I lie to them?" said Ryuumaru. "You can not lie by telling the truth, my friend. I am the ultimate organism" said ChaosLord. "There is only one way to find out about that" said Ryuumaru. "Let us battle then" said ChaosLord as he stomped the ground, creating an earthquake. "But if we fight here, my planet will suffer enormous damage. We shall-" said Ryuumaru, but then he got interrupted by ChaosLord. "Your planet already got destroyed when your energy caused earthquakes and tsunamis previously. There is no need to leave from here" said ChaosLord, as he looked to his right and saw a mountain, and then he aimed at it with his right claw, opened it, and shot a gigantic beam out of it, devastating the entire mountain. "It looks like there is no point trying to reason with you" said Ryuumaru. ChaosLord turned his head and looked at Ryuumaru, and then he said "Of course there is no point in that, since you insist on the illogical argument that your power is beyond infinite". "What are you talking about?" said Ryuumaru. "My power is endless" said ChaosLord, as he roared and caused an entire forest to go down. "You are mad" said Ryuumaru. "The only madness is in failing to see my power" said ChaosLord, as he stabbed a huge rock that was fifty times his size with his left claw, and then threw it at the dragon statue, destroying it entirely. "I only see a deluded tyrant" said Ryuumaru. "Then, by all means, allow me to show you the truth" said ChaosLord, as he fired a Hyper Beam at Ryuumaru, and disintegrated him before he could even react. Then some people and creatures started attacking ChaosLord. "We will drive you from our planet, beast!" said one of them. "You will only follow your false prophet into death" said ChaosLord, as he unleashed a massive tidal wave of psychic energy, and sent everyone around him flying. Then he eviscerated a man with his right claw, and stabbed his left claw through the body of a woman called Rika, who was a friend of Ryuumaru. He also disembowelled a dragon called Dragonaurus with the three horns on his head. ChaosLord then flew high in the sky, and said "Have a taste of the forbidden power of Chaos. ChaosCannon!" as he used ChaosCannon, and destroyed the entire planet to pieces, along with all the living organisms on it. Then ChaosLord returned back to ChaosTower on earth, and rested there.



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re: Make Your Own Story Thread

Chapter 2: Burial of The Soul


It was just an ordinary day on Earth, in a big, crowded city, with many sky scrapers and other buildings. A young boy with brown hair, brown eyes, wearing a blue school uniform and carrying a school bag was walking along the dirty street, on his way to school, when suddenly, a needle came flying down from the sky and hit his neck, killing him, and he fell down on the street. Then another boy who was wearing the same school uniform and had blonde hair and blue eyes, who knew the boy who was killed started running towards him. "Hey! Ben! Are you okay? Get ahold of yourself! What's happening?" asked the blonde kid as he looked at the corpse of Ben, the kid who was just killed. Then many people wearing grey uniform, who were on their way to work started running towards Ben too. "Huh? What's happening?" asked one of the people. "He got stabbed by this needle! And he's dead!" said the blonde kid as he pulled a thick needle out of Ben's neck. "He got stabbed? By who?" asked one of the people. "I don't know. I just saw a needle coming down from the sky and it him, and then he just fell down!" the blonde kid replied. "Let me see it" said a man wearing grey uniform, and then Ben gave the needle to the man. "What kind of needle is this? I've never seen it before..." said the man.

Meanwhile, a man with long, black hair, black eyes, wearing a black kimino and carrying a katana was watching what was happening. "Strange... that needle seemed like it came down from nowhere..." said the man as he started walking towards Ben's corpse. However, no one on the streets seems to notice his existance, as they could not see or hear him for some reasons. Then suddenly, Ben's soul came out of his corpse! "Where am I?" asked Ben as he looked around, but nobody except for the black-haired man could see him. Then Ben turned around and screamed as he saw his own corpse on the ground, which was surrounded by many people! "Wh-what the hell is happening? A-Am I dead? Wh-what just happened to me?" asked Ben as he stepped back, but the people couldn't hear him. Then suddenly, he heard a voice coming from behind him: "Hey kid, it seems like you died a really unlucky death! A needle just came down from nowhere and killed you!". Then Ben turned around and saw the black-haired man standing behind him, and he also had his katana raised. "Wh-what are you doing? H-Help me someone!" said Ben as he stepped back again. Then the black-haired man said "Hey calm down kid, I am not your enemy. I am a Shinigami". "Shini...gami? Sh-shinigami as in... you mean... Death God? Wh-what are you trying to do to me? Go away! GO AWAY!!!" said Ben as tears came out of his eyes. Then the Shinigami said "Look, just calm down. I have no bad intentions. I am just here to send you to Heaven". "H-Heaven?" asked Ben. "Yes, or maybe Hell, depending on how much you've sinned" said the Shinigami. "So... where am I going?" asked Ben. "It depends on how much you've sinned during your life" the Shinigami answered. "If you've sinned a lot or have commited a mortal sin, you'll go to Hell and burn forever, but otherwise, you'll go to Heaven! I don't decide where you go though. You are just sent to either Heaven or Hell as soon as my blade touches you!". "C-Can't I just stay here? I-I don't wanna risk it! I don't know if I've sinned or not!" said Ben. Then the Shinigami said "Well then. There's only one way to find out!". "NO! STOP! STOP! I DON'T WANNA GO ANYWHERE! I WANNA STAY HERE!" said Ben. Then the Shinigami said "I'm sorry kid, but I'm just doing my job. I don't have a choice whether I should send you to Heaven or Hell or let you stay here... But if you know deep down that you have not sinned badly in your life, then there's no reason to be afraid. After all, you'll most likely go to Heaven, which is a much better place than here, as the air and water of Heaven are not polluted, unlike in this world. Also, you age a lot slower in Heaven and you never get hungry, so although you can still enjoy eating food there, eating is no longer neccessary to survive! So just believe me, Heaven is much better than Earth!". "B-But...wh-what do I have to go through?" asked Ben. "Nothing. I just need to touch you with my sword, and you'll be sent away from the living world. Don't worry, I've done this with thousands of other people before!" said the Shinigami, and then he tapped Ben on the forehead with the hilt of his katana, and then a bright blue light starting coming out of Ben's body. After a few seconds, Ben dissapeared from the living world. "As always, humans are afraid of the unknown..." said the Shinigami.

Suddenly, many explosions was heard coming from the sky. Then everyone looked up at the sky and saw many stars exploding. "Wh-what the hell is going on?" asked a man as a huge shot of fire came down from the sky and torched a sky scraper on fire. When that happened, all the people in the city were screaming and running around, panicking. "I-It's a terrorist attack!" said a man. "No, that can't be... it must be something from outer space..." another man replied. "Could the ones who are doing this... be the same ones who killed Ben?" asked the blonde-haired kid. "It seems likely... that needle just kept came down out of nowhere, didn't it?" said an old lady as another shot of fire came down from the sky, and it caused a huge explosion when it landed on the center of the city. "Wh-what? Why is this happening so suddenly? Dammit, I better report this to Lord Ryuumaru quickly!" said the Shinigami, and then he thrusted his katana at the air in front of himself. When he did that, a wooden gate suddenly appeared out of nowhere, which led to a different world. Then the Shinigami entered the gate, and then the gate dissapeared.

Meanwhile, Ben found himself lying down on some grass in the middle of a small village. "Wh-where am I?" asked Ben as he sat up and looked around, seeing the clear-blue sky, the village which he was in, and he also saw a huge white castle with a gold dragon statue at the top of it in the horizon far away. Then an old man came out of a large, wooden house in the village and walked up to Ben. "Welcome to Heaven, boy! What is your name?" asked the old man as he looked at Ben. "Uh... I'm Ben" Ben answered. "Well, I'm Fred, the Mayor of this village! Nice to meet you, Ben! Would you like to live with us in our village?" asked the old man. "Where is this place anyway? Is this really Heaven?" asked Ben. "Hahahahaha! Ofcourse it is Heaven! You're surprised, aren't you? But that is only to be expected! Don't worry, everyone's surprised when they first die, get sent here by a Shinigami, angel or a Holy Creature and arrive here! But anyway, it seems you lived a very short life in the living world, didn't you?" asked Fred. "Well... yeah, it seems so..." Ben answered. "But don't worry! I'm sure you'll have a much better time here in Heaven! So anyway, do you want to join our village, Ben?" asked Fred. "Umm, yeah... okay..." Ben said. "By the way, is it really true that we age a lot slower here than in the other world? Also, we can survive without food according to the Shinigami who sent me here, right?". "Yes, that's right! All the more reason why you should be happy here in Heaven!" said Fred. Then Ben said "What happens when we die here?". "You'll simply be reincarnated as a new human on Earth" Fred answered. Then Ben said "So like, we can do whatever we want here, right?". "That's not exactly true" Fred answered. "Hm?" asked Ben. Then Fred said "The reason why Heaven is so much better than the living world is not just because we age a lot slower or because we don't need to eat. It's also because of the extremely strict rules imposed by Lord Ryuumaru, the King of Heaven, who is also known as God". "Lord... Ryuumaru?" said Ben. "Yes, Lord Ryuumaru lives in Vinheim, which is that castle right there!" said Fred as he pointed at the white castle with the dragon statue at the top of it, which was located far away in the horizon. "As the ruler of Heaven, he has imposed many strict rules for us. For example, we must not purposely harm anyone. We must not spit on the ground. We must not insult Lord Ryuumaru's name or use it in vain. We must not steal. There are many other rules created by Lord Ryuumaru, and breaking any of these rules will result in some extremely harsh punishment" said Fred. "We must not harm anyone? But what if they harm us first?" asked Ben. Then Fred said "Don't worry, Ben. I'm pretty sure there is not even a single person in Heaven who would dare to harm another person... atleast those who knows of the extremely harsh punishments which would come with doing so. So since no one would dare to harm you in the first place, there is no reason anyone would harm another person in retaliation, as there would be no one to retaliate on anyway. This is why Heaven is such a good place. Due to the strict rules, everyone would behave, making it a peaceful place". Then Ben said "Okay, I understand. I'll live in this village, but for now, would you mind if I go visit Lord Ryuumaru's castle? It seems like an awesome place!". Then Fred said "Well, you can only look around it. You cannot enter it, as it is located inside the Pure Zone, an area surrounded by a large, white circular wall which is completely indestructible, and you're not allowed to enter it anyway. The only beings who are permitted to go inside the wall are the Shinigami, angels and Holy Creatures. "Huh? Well, I know what Shinigami are, as I've seen one before. But angels? Do they really exist? And what are Holy Creatures?" asked Ben. Then Fred said "Well, let me start off first by telling you that Shinigami, angels and Holy Creatures are all beings who works under Ryuumaru. That's one thing they all have in common. Another thing is that they all have the ability to send deceased souls from the living world to either Heaven or Hell, and they cannot be seen by living humans in the living world. You were sent here by a Shinigami, right? Well, some people are sent to either here or Hell by an angel or a Holy Creature. So anyway, angels are just humans with wings, as you probably know. The lower-ranked angels under Lord Ryuumaru's command have white, physical wings, like angels are depicted traditionally in the living world. However, higher ranked angels have wings made from a special type of energy called spirit energy, and they can choose to have their wings appear or dissapear whenever they want. As for Holy Creatures, they are just sacred animals, who are usually dragons, birds or unicorns, but they could be anything. Despite the fact that they are animals, they are all just as intelligent as humans". "How did Shinigami, angels and Holy Creatures come into existance?" asked Ben. Then Fred said "Well, Shinigami and angels were originally just normal human beings, but they were given special powers by Lord Ryuumaru, who made them become what they are. As for the Holy Creatures, they were originally Pokémon which were given special powers by Lord Ryuumaru, and ever since then, they slowly evolved, until they became what they are. Also, another thing you should know: Among all the Shinigami, angels and Holy Creatures in Heaven, there are ten who are particularly strong and trusted by Lord Ryuumaru. They are known as the Ten Holy Elites, who in Heaven, are all second in command. The Ten Holy Elites is made up of nine males and one female, and it is made up of four Shinigami, three angels and three Holy Creatures. Oh yeah, Ben, have you heard about the Ancient Pokémon War?". "Yeah, in school, I learnt about it in History..." Ben answered. "I see. Do you know about a dragon who caused great devastation some time during the beginning of the war?" asked Fred. "No..." Ben answered. "Well, that dragon is currently one of the Ten Holy Elites. Also, do you remember how in the end of the war, you were taught that some guy used his magic powers to create a bright light which distorted the atmosphere? Well, that guy was in fact Lord Ryuumaru. Back in the Ancient Pokémon War, Earth, Heaven and Hell were in fact one world, and Ryuumaru used to be just a normal human being. But he had magic powers, which eventually became so strong that Ryuumaru could use them to split the world into three in order to stop the war. The worlds were split into Earth, Heaven and Hell. Earth became the living world, Heaven is the afterlife for good people, and Hell was a world which got destroyed by the war, and it is now always being burnt by endless flames. It became the afterlife for sinners". "I see. Heh, you do know a lot..." said Ben. "Well, this is just common knowledge among the inhabitants of Heaven" said Fred. "Also, that tree..." said Ben as he looked at a gigantic tree which even extended up to the sky. "Oh yeah, that tree is known as Yggdrasil" said Fred. "Yggdrasil? Wait, this is Heaven? But if that's Yggdrasil, this must be Pokéia..." said Ben as he looked at the giant tree, known as Yggdrasil. "No no no... Actually, I'll tell you... even though you'd find out about this eventually anyway. You already know that somewhere on a region called Pokéia located on Earth, there is a tree called Yggdrasil, which looks exactly the same as that tree over there, right?" said Fred as he pointed at the Yggdrasil in the horizon. "Yeah... I learnt that in Geography..." said Ben. Then Fred said "Well, there are actually three trees known as Yggdrasill which exists. One in Heaven, one on Earth and one in Hell". "There's a Yggdrasil in Hell too?" asked Ben. "Yes. In fact, somewhere on each of these trees, there is a small hole which actually leads inside the tree. Inside, there is a maze, and somewhere in the maze, there are two dimensional gates". "Dimensional gates..." said Ben. Fred said "In other words, gates which lead from one world to another. Inside that Yggdrasil over there, there exist two dimensional gates, just like the other two Yggdrasils. One of the two gates in Heaven's Yggdrasil leads to one of the gates in Earth's Yggdrasil, while the other gate in Heaven's Yggdrasill leads to a gate in Hell's Yggdrasil". "And the two dimensional gates in Hell's Yggdrasil leads to a gate in Heaven's Yggdrasill and a gate in Earth's Yggdrasill..." said Ben. "That is correct. However, one cannot travel through those dimensional gates unless they find some items which are located on Earth" said Fred. "What are they? Where are they located" asked Ben. "The Key to Heaven and the Devil's Key. The Key to Heaven was created and split into six pieces by Lord Ryuumaru many million years ago, and they were scattered among various places on Earth. As for the Devil's Key, I heard it was split into three pieces, but I'm not sure..." said Fred. "Wow... While I've always thought it was amazing how big Yggdrasil could grow... I never knew it was something this important... So... Hehe... I see... it seems I learnt a lot from you... well anyway, I think it's a good idea to live in this village..." said Ben. "Yeah, you should meet my children here. I think you could be good friends with them!" said Fred as he smiled. "Well, where are they?" asked Ben. "They should be playing in the bushes right now. Here, I'll show you to them!" said Fred, and then they both started walking towards some bushes happily.

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Edit1: I Added Special Moves, Cool Eh?
Edit2: NEW TEAM MEMBER WOOTS!
Edit3:NEW TEAM MEMBERS WOOTS!
*Note That Some People Don't Have Special Moves, such as brainy*

I'll Start A story, But Heres an Intro To My Characters. (So Far That is, I'll Put in Different enemy teams later on.)

Team Smeargle.


Smeargle

The Leader Of Team Smeargle, His Best Buddy is I-Pod Smeargle, he lets Smeargle Have Free I-Pods.

Motto:"Alls Well That Ends Well"
Favorite Food:Painter's Kebab
Favorite Item:Paint Brush
Special Move:Paint Bursh Blast


I-Pod Smeargle

Founder Of Team Smeargle, His Best Friend Is Smeargle, He showed up in lots of Poke-TV Comercials About The New Improved Apsle I-Pod.

Motto:"Want A Free I-Pod?"
Favorite Food:Apsles
Favorite Item:I-Pods (Of Course!)
Special: I-Pod Sound Wave


Brainy Smeargle

The Brains Of The Group, He is also the oldest, he made lots of gadgets Like The Glowing Electrode To Help out with the team!

Motto:"Sigh."
Favorite Food:Mind Bomb Kebab
Favorite Item:Glow Machine


Glowing Electrode

The Glowing Electrode is a pet to Team Smeargle, Usually Explodes For No apparent Reason.

Motto:"Boom!"
Favorite Food:Explosive Kebab
Favorite Item:Grenades
Special:Grenade Lob


Porygon-Z

This Lil Guy Is The Helper, when theres a war between Teams To Teams, He Makes An Army Of Porygons To Come To Team Smeargle's Aid

Motto:"Go Porygons, Eat Their Computers!"
Favorite Food:Computers
Favorite Item:Computers (They Eat And Use Computers at the same time XD)
Special:Quad-Attack


Porygon2

Porygon-Z's Helper, Also A Very Good Friend Of Smeargle And I-Pod Smeargle.

Motto:"Would You Like Computer Chips With That, Sir?"
Favorite Food:Computers
Favorite Item:Computers
Special:Trick Room


Pory Pory Army

The Army Of Porygons That Porygon-Z Summons

Motto: PORY PROY
Favorite Food:Computers
Favorite Item:Computers
Special:Zap Cannon


Shiny Giratina

He Is Nice even though he follows the shadows of darkness. His Moves Are Very Powerful.

Motto:Thank you!
Favorite Food:Darkness Kebab
Favorite Item:Shadow
Special:Shadow Drive/Rush


Kirby

He Can Copy Opponents Abilitys! Cool Eh?!

Motto: Poya!
Favorite Food: EVERYTHING!
Favorite Item: ???
Special: Suck In


Luigi

Motto: Lets-a Go!
Favorite Food: Pasta
Favorite Item: GHost Sucker
Special: Thunder Strike

Well, Thats Teh Team!
I'll Post The Story After The Next Person Posts



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That story sounds really interesting with all these teams.

Cmon, don't keep us waiting post it



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Sure Sure... Dude....

Chapter 1: The First Mission
As Soon As The Morning came, smeargle woke up, he asked brainy if theres any new missions, brainy said that theres some missions in the Mission Control Soon, smeargle was there, he checked the computer Monitor.

"Hope Theres Some Good Missions >=)" Smeargle said.

computer:

2 new messages & 1 New Mission

Message 1:

Title: HELP!
To: Smeargle Mission Control
From:Smeargle Caves

Message: HELP HELPPP HELP PLS PLS
I'll Make more info later... I have a feeling smone bad is going to kill us.

Smeargle looked ashamed at this message...

Message2

Title: I KNEW IT ASKFASJKASFAFSKJL
To: Smeargle Mission Control
From: Smeargle Caves

Message: OMG OMG OMG SOME PEOPLE CALLED THE AXEM RANGERS OMG OMG HELP OMG HES USING HIS BLADE OMG TO KILL COMPUTER OMG BETTER POST NOW OMG!

Smeargle said very confused sounded,
"Whats A Axem Ranger?

"An Axem Ranger Is This boss from a super mario 64 game... Why am I supposed to know this?"

"Well, I guess I Should Go check the smeargle cave out."

Porygon2 Suddenly bursts into the room with the glowing electrode.

"Wait, don't go without me!!!!" Said Porygon2
"Wheres Porygon-Z and I-Pod Smeargle?"
"Their still in the dorm, but i want to come to!"

Brainy Smeargle Soon Teleported The 3 To The Smeargle Cave, what could be there? What Are The Axem Rangers? ( I'll Post Their Team info later)
Will I-Pod Smeargle and porygon-Z Wake Up?

Find Out, In the next chapter of...
Team Smeargle Saga!



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Sorry About Double-Post, Im Posting The Axem Ranger Team.

Axem Rangers

(Sorry SOme Sprites are small, couldn't find the right ones)


Axem Red

Hes The Leader Of The Axem Rangers, His Attack Power Is The Highest of them all.

Motto: We Fight For Evil!
Favorite Food:???
Favorite Item:Double-Blade Axe


Axem Black

This Guy Has Some Serious Attitude Problems.

Motto: We Fight For Justice!
Favorite Food:???
Favorite Item:Double-Blade Axe


Axem Green

This Dude Really Likes Nature... and i mean really. (No Not That!)

Motto: We Fight For Nature!
Favorite Food:???
Favorite Item:Johjoh Spear


Axem Yellow

This Guy Always Looks For Food. Especially Donuts.

Motto: We Eat Donuts!
Favorite Food:Donuts
Favorite Item:Axe


Axem Pink

She Likes Clothes. Trust me.

Motto:We Wear The Trendriest Clothes!
Favorite Food:???
Favorite Item:Clothes

Thats Axem Rangers...



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Chapter 3: Investigating the cause of the Destruction


Ryuumaru was sitting on a green chair with dragon wings attached to it in his room in front of a computer with a large monitor, which was placed on top of a large, black desk. His room was located at the very top floor of his castle, directly under the gold dragon statue. Inside the room, there were blue carpets, light blue walls, and there was a huge chandeleir at the top of his room. There was also a huge bed, a big television, a large shelf full of old books with some small dragon statues placed on the top of the shelf, and there was also a relatively large dragon statue on one corner of the room. There was also a big window on one of the room's walls. Ryuumaru was on his computer, and he was using a special program which allows him to see exactly what is going on in a specific place in the living world at the very moment. He was using the program to see what is currently going on in a certain city in the living world. However, he could not see the stars which were exploding in space, or the huge shots of fire which were coming from the sky at the city which Ben used to live in before he died, as Ryuumaru was not viewing that area on Earth (in fact, he was actually viewing a city on the side of the Earth opposite to the side where all the chaos was taking place).

Then suddenly, Ryuumaru heard someone knocking on his door. "Who is it? Enter" said Ryuumaru. Then a girl opened the door and entered the room. She had long, wavy green hair, large orange eyes, she had a red line across her nose, she wore a purple shirt and miniskirt and wore fluffy light blue shoes. "Rika..." said Ryuumaru as he looked at the girl. "Ryuumaru!" said Rika as she looked at Ryuumaru and smiled. Ryuumaru then raised his head slightly. "Umm...Ryuumaru... are you busy right now?" asked Rika. "Not really. I was just looking on my computer to make sure everything's going well in the living world..." said Ryuumaru. "Well... I don't really have much to do right now... so would you mind if I stay and talk for a while?" asked Rika. "Sure" said Ryuumaru. "Thanks" said Rika as she smiled again, and then she closed the door behind her and sat at the end of the large bed which was in the room. "So... is everything going fine in the living world?" asked Rika. "Well, I haven't checked all the places yet. But out of all the places I've checked, it seems fine" Ryuumaru replied. "I see, that's good..." said Rika. "By the way, speaking of the living world, we haven't been there in a while lately, have we?". "I know, but I promised to take you with me the next time I go there, didn't I?" said Ryuumaru as he got up from his seat, and then he walked over to the end of his bed and sat there next to Rika. "Umm, I think so..." said Rika as she smiled while looking away. "So, what do you want to do when we get there?" asked Ryuumaru. "Well, let's see... the last couple of times we went there, we've been to Saffron City and the Indigo Plateau in Kanto, Olivine City and the Lake of Rage in Johto, Sootopolis City and Slate Port in Hoenn, and Dragon City and Paradise Bay in Pokéia... Awww, I can't decide! Can I let you decide since you're more familar with the living world?" said Rika. Ryuumaru said "Sure. Well let's see... would you like to go to the hot spring in Magma Town in Pokéia?". "A hot spring? Sure! I'd love to go there!" said Rika. "How about the Whirl Islands in Johto?" asked Ryuumaru. "Whirl Islands?" asked Rika. Then Ryuumaru said "Well, it's obviously not as fun as the caves in Paradise Day, but it's really quite similar. I'm sure you would enjoy it there. Besides, there's also a chance that you may get to meet the legendary Pokémon Lugia in there". "Really?" asked Rika. "Yeah" Ryuumaru replied. "Yay! I can't wait to go there! Ryuumaru, when are we going?" asked Rika. "Well, I'll try arranging a time for us to go. I'll do my best to make it soon. I'm looking forward to it too".

Then suddenly, Ryuumaru and Rika heard someone knocking on the door. "Just come in!" said Ryuumaru, and then a black-haired Shinigami entered the room. He was the same Shinigami who sent Ben to Heaven before, and he was taking deep breaths, as if he had been running. "Hm? What's wrong, Dan?" asked Ryuumaru as he looked at the black-haired Shinigami. Then Dan took three deep breaths, and then he said "Lord Ryuumaru! There's some bad news! In the living world, some stars in space are exploding, and huge shots of fire are falling down on Earth!". "T-that's horrible!" said Rika as she covered her mouth with her hands. "Hm? When did that happen?" asked Ryuumaru. "Just a while ago... Oh and also, just before the stars started exploding, a needle came down out of nowhere from the sky and hit a little kid on the neck, killing him before I sent him here to Heaven... I'm not sure, but I think that needle and where it came from must be connected with the stars exploding..." said Dan. "Where on Earth did you see that happening?" asked Ryuumaru. "It was in Airport City, in the Chaos Region. Currently, almost half the city is already destroyed by the huge fire which came down from the sky..." said Dan. Then Ryuumaru said "Airport City? I see. So that explains why I didn't see it happening when I was viewing the world with this program before. It happened on the other side of the world to what I was viewing before...", and then he got up from the bed which he was sitting on, and then he started walking towards his computer, while Rika followed him. Then Ryuumaru sat on the chair in front of his computer, and then he typed "Airport City" in the program which allows him to see what is going on in the living world. After a split second, Ryuumaru saw the top view of Airport City on his computer screen, while Rika was standing behind Ryuumaru and looking at the computer screen too. Ryuumaru saw that almost all the buildings in the city was on fire, and the people in the city were running around screaming and panicking as fire was constantly coming down from the sky and onto the city and the seas around it. Then Ryuumaru clicked on a button in the program, and then he saw the skies of Airport City from his computer screen. He saw many stars exploding, and fire was flying out of the exploding stars towards Earth. "No... this is horrible... wh-what are we going to do, Ryuumaru?" asked Rika as she stared at the screen. "Well, about the fire which is going on in Airport City right now, I'm going to immediately get a Water-element Holy Creature to go there and put out the fire. As for what we're going to do about the stars..." said Ryuumaru, and then he looked at Dan. Then he said "Dan, please go to the living world and explore space there in order to find out about the cause of the stars' destructions. For safety reasons, please take atleast ten Shinigami, angels or Holy Creatures with you in any combination. If anything happens, please tell me through your cell phone. Also, before going, please tell Gama-aka to go to North York and put out the fire there". "Yes sir!" said Dan, and then he left the room at extreme speed. "Ryuumaru..." said Rika as she looked worried. Then Ryuumaru said "This may or may not be something big. Hopefully, it's just caused by some large meteoroids crashing into the stars in space for some natural reasons, which should stop sooner or later. However, the worst case scenario... is that it may be the cause of some extremely advanced aliens from another planet... but I doubt it. Don't worry though, Rika. If all the stars exploding is really the cause of some aliens... then we simply need to defeat them!"."Yeah, I guess... but we still need to be careful..." said Rika. "Ofcourse" said Ryuumaru.

Meanwhile, Airport City is in total chaos. People were screaming, and some of them were running around while on fire. Some firefighters came and tried to control the fire, but they were ineffective, as the fire was way too big. Some of the firefighters were even being killed by some more flames which were coming down from the sky! Some Water-type Pokémon from other regions saw the huge fire from the distance, and they came to try and put out the fire with their Water-type attacks, but they were still ineffective. Then suddenly, a gigantic wooden gate appeared somewhere in the city, which leads to Heaven. However, the people of Airport City could not see the gate. Then twelve beings came out of the gate, and then the gate dissapeared. One of the twelve beings was Dan, the black-haired Shinigami who was sent to the living world by Ryuumaru before. Another was a gigantic Holy Creature the size of several sky scrapers, who resembles a monstrous red frog. The remaining ten beings were three Shinigami, four angels and three Holy Creatures. One of them resembles a cat, another resembles a dog and the last resembles a snake. However, the citizens could not see the twelve beings. Then Dan looked at the big, red frog and said "Gama-aka, please put out the fire in this city while the rest of us goes to see why the stars are exploding...". "Gaaaaaiigaaa!" said Gama-aka ("Understood"), and then he started blasting huge shots of water out of his mouth at the city, putting out the fire. "Let's go!" said Dan as he looked at the ten beings other than Gama-aka who he brought with him, and then he created some spirit energy around his own body, which allows him to fly. The other ten beings did the same, and then they all started flying into space at incredible speed.

When they reached outer space, they all started flying towards the place where the most stars were exploding. When they got close to the stars, they realized that some projectiles such as missiles and energy blasts were hitting the stars, causing them to explode! "So this IS the doing of some aliens somewhere in the universe afterall..." said a brown-haired angel as he was flying. "In any case, let's hurry!" said Dan, and then kept on flying towards the place where the projectiles were coming from.

Meanwhile, the people of Airport City were surprised when they saw a lot of water coming out of nowhere and putting out the fire, as they could not see Gama-aka, who was blasting the water, since he's a Holy Creature. "Wh-what's going on? Where's all this water coming from?" asked a man. "I don't know, but we should be glad that the fire's getting put out!" said a woman. "This... this is a miracle! God is performing a miracle to save us!" said an old man. Soon, all the fire in the entire city had been put out by Gama-aka's water.

Meanwhile, on Chaos Planet, ChaosLord, ChaosBlackWarGreymon, ChaosMetalSeadramon and ChaosPiedmon were still having fun destroying stars. "Ahahahahahaha!" said ChaosLord as he blasted two Zap Cannons into space, destroying two stars. "Ultimate Stream!" said ChaosMetalSeadramon as he summoned a huge wave of water and sent it into space, wiping out many stars. At the same time, ChaosPiedmon was tossing swords at the sky, destroying stars, while ChaosBlackWarGreymon was forming energy spheres in his hand and throwing them at some stars, destroying them.

Then suddenly, all the machines on Chaos Planet saw eleven beings flying into the atmosphere of the planet. They were able to see Shinigami, angels and Holy Creatures for some reasons. They were Dan and the other Shinigami, angels and Holy Creatures who he had brought with him! "I see! So you machines are the ones who are destroying the stars, right?" said a bald and fat Shinigami who was with Dan and the others. "Who the hell are you guys?" asked a machine who looks like Steelix. "We are from Heaven, and we have come to destroy you for all the chaos you've been causing to Earth!" said the fat Shinigami as he dived towards the surface of Chaos Planet at extreme speed. "Hey stop it, David! We don't need to use force just yet!" said Dan, but before the fat Shinigami could reply, ChaosLord blasted two Hyper Beams at him, destroying his entire body. "DAVID!!!" Dan shouted. "Why are these machines able to see us?" asked the brown-haired angel. "Huh? So you're insulting us and implying that we're blind?" asked ChaosPiedmon as he threw a sword at the angel, chopping one of his wings off. Then the angel started falling towards the ground, and then ChaosPiedmon's sword stabbed straight through the angel's heart, killing him. "No, we're not insulting you. It's just that no one other than spirits should be able to see us..." said a female angel with long, green hair and large orange eyes. "Why shouldn't we be able to see you?" asked a robot woman. "Lord Ryuumaru gave us the power to be invisible to everything other than spirits!" said the female angel. "I don't know who this Ryuumaru is, but we're gonna destroy you anyway!" said ChaosMetalSeadramon as he flew towards the female angel at extreme speed and stung her with the tip of his tail. Then ChaosMetalSeadramon crunched the angel killing her. "Dammit! We can't reason with these stupid machines! Let's just destroy them!" said an angel with black hair and a long beard as he shot a huge blast of light out of his palm at three machines, disintigrating them all. But then ChaosBlackWarGreymon jumped at the angel and slashed him in half. "Freeze the enemy solid, Hyoiken!" said a Shinigami with short, white hair and blue eyes as he pulled out his sword, which transformed into a machete made of ice, and then he dived down at a bird-like machine and stabbed him, freezing him solid. Then the Shinigami pulled his machete out of the machine's body, and then the machine shattered into many tiny pieces of ice. "Take that!" said the Shinigami, but then he got stomped to