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Apr 25, 07 at 09:32AM
Chaos cannot be denied.

Here is another pokemon story. It is about a Scyther that uses Slash and chops off the head of Aizen Sousuke.



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Chapter 7: The Machines' Attack


"You're welcome to come in" said Ryuumaru, and then an angel with long, red hair and green eyes opened the door and entered the room. "Huh? Justin? This better be important! You're interruptin' a meeting of the Ten Holy Elites, y'know!" said Mag as he looked at the angel. "Just be quite, Mag" said Yaiba. Then the red-haired angel, known as Justin said "Excuse me for interrupting a meeting of the Ten Holy Elites and Lord Ryuumaru! But I have an important message!". "What is it?" asked Ryuumaru. The angel said "Six machines from outer space has landed on Earth, and one of them is attacking the people there!". "What?" said Kuroi. "One thing after another, hm?" said Yaiba. "On which part of Earth are they?" asked Ryuumaru. "They're currently in Slateport City, in the Hoenn Region. One of the machines who went there are shooting missiles like crazy from the sky of Slateport City, killing thousands of people!" the angel replied. "Slateport City? I see" said Ryuumaru. Then he looked at Kuroi and said "Well anyway, please take Guardromon and lock him up in a cell for now". "Yes sir" said Kuroi as he walked up to Guardromon, grabbed him and took him outside the room. Then Ryuumaru looked at the others and said "Well, since this is an emergency, I'll have to check on my computer to see what is going on in Slateport City right now. Depending on what I see going on, we may need to take action as soon as I return" said Ryuumaru, and then he got up from his seat and started heading towards his room in his castle. Rika, who had a worried look on her face got up from her seat too after a few minutes. "Where are you going, Rika?" asked the blonde-haired boy. "Just to see Ryuumaru" said Rika in a rush, and then she started running after Ryuumaru. Then Mag had a huge smile of insanity on his face as he got up from seat, and immediately, he ran outside the room and continued running from there on. "Hey! Wait! Where are you off to?" said Rance as he looked at Mag, but Mag didn't reply, and he just kept running. "Why do you even need to ask? If you just even bother to think about the situation right now, it's quite obvious where he's gone off to..." said the blonde-haired boy.

Meanwhile, Kuroi had locked Guardromon inside a cell somewhere in Ryuumaru's castle. "Listen, machine. From now on, all dreams are to be thrown away. You are no longer associated with Chaos Planet or the other machines from there. The only value of your existance which remains... is that you are merely going to answer everything we ask you truthfully. That is your primary goal as of this minute. If you fail even one step towards your goal, then you'll be finished off immediately" said Kuroi, and then he started walking away. "D-Dammit..." said Guardromon as he punched the ground.

Meanwhile, six machines were floating in the sky above a port city somewhere on Earth. One of them was Mega-Emperor, while the other five were the Skarmory-like machine; the Machamp-like machine; a purple dinosaur-like machine wearing a metal mask, has a metal left arm and with a long horn on his nose; a machine who looks like Blastoise except he is made of metal; and a velociraptor-like machine. "Heh. So just as ChaosLord thought, there are indeed living things on this planet!" said Mega-Emperor as he was firing many rockets and laser beams out of his weapons at the many buildings on the land next to the harbor, destroying many of them and killing thousands of people. "Hmm... the people on this planet do seem to bear a strong resemblance to the guys who attacked us before..." said the Skarmory-like machine. "But they're definitely a lot weaker, don't you think?" said the Blastoise-like machine. "Maybe the stronger guys are located somewhere else on this planet?" said the velociraptor-like machine. Then Mega-Emperor said "Skarmwary," as he looked at the Skarmory-like machine. "Gunchamp," he continued as he looked at the Machamp-like machine. "Virus MetalGreymon," he continued as he looked at the purple dinosaur-like machine. "Crushtoise," he continued as he looked at the Blastoise-like machine. "Robociraptor," he continued as he looked at the velociraptor-like machine. "...let's have some fun and kill some o' these weaklings before we tell ChaosLord about this! After all, we can't let him have all the fun!". "YEEAAAHH!!!" all the machines shouted together, and then they all dived towards different locations of the city and started massacreing the people there.

Mega-Emperor landed on top of a big office building, where he continued to fire rockets and laser beams at the citizens, while Skarmwary was flying around the sky and blasting missiles out of his wings down at the city and Gunchamp was killing people with his guns and flamethrower. At the same time, Robociraptor was slashing at people with his claws and biting their heads off, while Crushtoise was on the streets, punching people and blasting shots of water out of his cannons at them, and Robociraptor was crunching people's heads with his powerful jaws. The people in the city were running around and screaming.

Meanwhile, a wooden gate appeared in the sky above the city where Mega-Emperor and the others were. Then the wooden gate opened, and six beings from Heaven came out of it. One of them was Mag, while the other five were; a Shinigami with blonde hair, black eyes and an extreme amount of gel in his hair; an angel with long, blue hair, golden eyes and holding a bow and arrow, a female angel with long, purple hair, extremely large orange eyes and holding a sword, a Holy Creature resembling a grey wolf and another Holy Creature resembling a velociraptor with red, blue and yellow scales. After all six of them came out, the wooden gate dissapeared.

Meanwhile, Ryuumaru had just entered his room in his castle in Heaven. He was about to go on his computer, when suddenly, he heard Rika's voice coming from behind him: "Ryuumaru...". Then Ryuumaru turned around and saw Rika. Then he said "Hm? Rika? What are you doing here?". "Umm... I just need to talk to you about something..." said Rika. "Yeah, what is it?" said Ryuumaru. Then Rika said "Ryuumaru... if ChaosLord doesn't listen to us when we ask him to stop destroying the stars in the living world, are you definitely going to fight him?". "Well, ofcourse. As the God of the world, I can't just let him act so selfishly. If he continues, then sooner or later, the whole universe would be destroyed" said Ryuumaru. Then Rika said "I understand the way you're thinking, and I like that quality of yours... but didn't Guardromon say that ChaosLord has never been harmed in the whole history of the universe? If that's the case, how could anyone defeat him if he can't even be harmed?" "Until he fights me, we don't know if it's really true that he can't be harmed by anything" said Ryuumaru. "But what would you do if you can't harm him?" asked Rika. "I seriously doubt he can't be harmed" said Ryuumaru. Rika said "Well, if no one has ever harmed ChaosLord before... I'm just worried if you do fight him... Umm, I'll try my best to hope that you're right... but either way, Ryuumaru... can you atleast promise me this?". "Hm?" said Ryuumaru. "I know this may be extremely selfish, but Ryuumaru, if you find that there's no way to defeat ChaosLord, can you please just return to Heaven? He can't come after you if you stay in Heaven, can he?". "I doubt he can, and I also doubt that there's no way to defeat ChaosLord. And you mean I just abandon the living world if I find out that I can't beat ChaosLord?" said Ryuumaru. Rika said "I know it's extremely selfish to do... but... I just don't know what to think...". "So like... if I know I can't beat ChaosLord and so I retreat back to Heaven, the living world would be destroyed, but I'll survive... while if I know I can't beat ChaosLord and yet I still fight him to the death, I'll die, and the living world would be destroyed anyway... is that what you're thinking, Rika? In that case, alright, I originally never planned to do this... but if I really find that there's no way to defeat ChaosLord, I'll return to Heaven as I promised. After all, it's the logical thing to do, isn't it? But I really doubt I'd need to do that..." said Ryuumaru. "Th-thank you!" said Rika. "Now, can you please not worry? There's still a chance that I don't even need to fight him... so it's really too early for anyone to be worried..." said Ryuumaru. "Okay, I'll try not to think about it so much... I know you're strong, but this ChaosLord seems like he's really strong too...". "I told you there's no need to worry, silly" said Ryuumaru, who smiled as he pat Rika on the head. "Umm, sorry" said Rika as she blushed. Then Ryuumaru said "So anyway, let's see what the machines are doing in Slateport City..." as he walked to his computer. Then he typed "Slateport City" in the program which allows him to observe the living world, and he saw Mega-Emperor and the other five machines slaughtering the people of Slateport City. Then Rika looked at the computer screen too, and she saw Mag, another Shinigami, two angels and two Holy Creatures floating in the sky above Slateport. "Mm? What's Mag above Slateport?" asked Rika. Then Ryuumaru said "Just as I thought, he'd go off to the living world to have some "fun" when I'm not there to stop him... and he even went to bring five others along with him?". "Should we take him back?" asked Rika. "No, I'll just let Mag and the others fight those machines for now. Anyway, let's head back to the meeting room" said Ryuumaru, and then he and Rika headed back to the room where the other Holy Elites were waiting.

Meanwhile, Mag was in the living world. "Aruuuu! Rrururururur!" said the velociraptor-like Holy Creature ("Are you guys sure it's okay to do this without Lord Ryuumaru's permission?"). Then Mag said "Well, I don't know about that... but for now, IT DOESN'T MATTER! All that matters between now and until we leave... is that we're all gonna enjoy ourselves... as we fight to the DEATH with these machines here!" as he smiled insanely. "Well, the machines do seem to be causing much destruction to this city..." said the blonde-haired Shinigami. "Yeah, seems so..." said the blue-haired angel. "I wonder why they're doing this?" said the female angel with purple hair. "Grrrrr..." said the wolf-like Holy Creature ("Who knows..."). "These machines seem to be having quite a good time, don'tcha guys think? How 'bout we have some fun too?" said Mag excitedly as he looked at the six machines, who were slaughtering the people in the city. "Which one... which one of them is the STRONGEST?" said Mag as he observed each of the machines in the city. Then he said "Well, without a doubt, it's HIM!" as he looked at Mega-Emperor. Then he said "Ronald," as he looked at the blonde-haired Shinigami. "Roy," he continued as he looked at the blue-haired angel. "Ren," he continued as he looked at the female angel. "Wolfoz," he continued as he looked at the wolf-like Holy Creature. "Raptoraus," he continued as he looked at the velociraptor-like Holy Creature. Then he said "...each of you target one machine in this city and obliterate him! I'll deal with that guy firing the missiles over there...", and then he started diving through the air towards Mega-Emperor at supersonic speed, while Ronald flew at the Machamp-like machine, Roy flew at the Skarmory-like machine, Ren flew at the Blastoise-like machine, Wolfoz flew at the purple dinosaur-like machine and Robociraptor flew at the velociraptor-like machine.

To be continued


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Apr 26, 07 at 09:35AM
Chaos cannot be denied.

Below is a story I wrote yesterday. It took me only a few minutes, so it is not very big.


"Death before dishonor"

It was a normal, peaceful day in a town. A boy named Trevor was alone in his house, in his room, doing something on his computer. Suddenly, the lights went off. "Dammit! A blackout!" said Trevor. Then, he heard the door of his house opening. "Who is that? I'm not expecting anyone to come until after six hours. Could it be... a burglar?" thought Trevor. Immediately he grabbed his mobile phone to call the police, but he realized that this was impossible. His mobile phone had been infected and destroyed by a virus. "Shit! That reminds me of something... something bad..." said Trevor. Suddenly, a man came into his room and saw him. He was wearing black shoes, dark gray pants, a light gray t-shirt, and a silver watch. The man was tall and had short, black hair and some facial hair. By his eyes, the man looked serious, but also very calm and relaxed at the same time. "Is this... Antony?" said Trevor. "Trevor, the fates conspire to throw us together at last" said Antony. "So, you found me. What are we going to do now? We're gonna have a pokemon battle? C'mon, bring out your gameboy!" said Trevor, as he was smiling nervously and trembling a bit. "Pathetic creature..." said Antony. "Huh?" said Trevor, as he looked at Antony and took two steps back. "I don't suppose you... want to actually... kill me, right?" he continued. "Tch tch tch" said Antony, as he closed his eyes and shook his head. "You're just afraid of the Greatest Pokemon Master on earth!" said Trevor. "You claim to be someone great... but all I see is a desperate, deluded fool who can't even control his own self" said Antony. "Can't control myself? What're you talkin' about?" said Trevor. "I know of the sick, horrible things you see on the internet. And your addiction to those... things" said Antony, as he had an expression of deep disgust on his face. "You mean... you fool, get in reality! Stop dreaming! Those things are just fine!" said Trevor. "Immoral *bleep*... Have you no heart at all? I know that a loser like you has to be desperate, but this? This... this... this awful, perverted thing? You are a lowly existence, but I never expected you to fall THAT low..." said Antony. "Dude there's nothin' wrong with this stuff. Noone gets hurt, y' know" said Trevor. "You filthy bastard. You are trash. And I am not talking about trash. I am talking about the kind of trash that makes trash look good. Just like all the rest twisted freaks out there who watch this kind of shit" said Antony. "All of you... are going to hell" he continued, as he pulled a pistol out of his pocket and stuck it on Trevor's forehead. "C-come on man... L-let me show you some of those movies... I'm sure you'll like them too, if you see them..." said Trevor, frightened. "Mother*bleep*ers with no morals don't deserve to live" said Antony, as he fired his gun and blew Trevor's brains out.



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Chapter 8: The Destructive Battle! Wolfoz vs. Virus MetalGreymon!


"Waaarrghhh!!!" Ronald screamed his battle cry as he dived towards Gunchamp at extreme speed. Then Ronald pulled out his katana and tried to stab Gunchamp while flying, but Gunchamp turned around and blocked the attack with his shotgun. However, the power of the attack pushed him and made him slide back a few dozen metres on his feet. He also destroyed the ground a bit when he slid on it. "Who the hell are you, you bastard?" said the machine as he looked at Ronald. "I am Ronald, a Shinigami from Heaven!" said the Shinigami as he did a fighting pose. "Heaven? I see. So you're the same type of guy who attacked Chaos Planet before, right? Heh, I remember that black kimono..." said the machine. "But anyway, I am Gunchamp, a machine from Chaos Planet!".

Meanwhile, Roy was flying towards Skarmwary. Then Roy shot a fire arrow at the machine, who just barely dodged the arrow. "You! You're the same guys who attacked us before!" said Skarmwary as he looked at the angel, while they were both hovering in the air above Slateport City with their wings. "Well, it's my first time fighting with ones of you guys though!" said Roy. Then Skarmwary said "This planet is your home, isn't it?". "Nope. This planet is called Earth. Our home is Heaven" said Roy. "Heaven? Where is that?" asked Skarmwary. "It's located in another dimension, which can only be reached by Shinigami, Holy Creatures or us angels! We came here because we heard you guys were causing chaos on Earth!" said Roy. "Heaven is in another dimension, eh? So there's really no way we can access that place?" asked Skarmwary. "Nope" Roy answered.

Meanwhile, Ren was confronting Crushtoise on a street. "A machine?" said Ren. "Hahahahahaha! So what of it? What can you pssibly hope to do against me, little girl?" said Crushtoise as he started approaching Ren, who drew out a sword.

Meanwhile, Mag dived down at extreme speed at the bottom of the building which Mega-Emperor was standing on. "Ha!" said Mag as he pulled out a sword and slashed the bottom of the building with it while flying past the building. After that, Mag sheathed his sword and jumped to the top of another building, while he watched as the building Mega-Emperor was standing on before started falling down. "Tch..." said Mega-Emperor as he floated in the air and looked at Mag. "Yo, it seems you're the strongest of all the machines who came here, eh? In that case, it seems I'm the best suited to be your opponent!" said Mag as he looked at Mega-Emperor, and then much powerful spirit energy radiated from his body! His spirit energy were so powerful that the windows of many buildings nearby were shattered instantly! "Beings from Heaven, huh?" said Mega-Emperor, while he was struggling a bit to stay in the air as Mag's spirit energy was pushing against him hard. "I am Mag, one of the Ten Holy Elites of Heaven" said Mag. "Holy Elite?" asked Mega-Emperor. "Ah! The ten strongest of Heaven other than God, also known as Lord Ryuumaru!" Mag answered. "God? I wonder. Anyway, I am Mega-Emperor, the Sixth Chosen Champion!" said Mega-Emperor. "From what I saw, it seems your powers are pretty impressive, machine!" said Mag. "Is that so? Then I'll use them to end your life!" said Mega-Emperor. "Come at with all you've got! If you dun wan me t' rip a hole in ya!" said Mag as he raised his fists and started bouncing on his feet.

Meanwhile, Raptoraus was confronting Robociraptor on a street.

Elsewhere, Wolfoz dived at the face of Virus MetalGreymon and headbutted his face. "Gagh! Outta the way, you stupid creature!" said Virus MetalGreymon as he tried to slash Wolfoz, but Wolfoz did a backflip off the machine's head and landed on the ground. "Y' wanna fight? C'mon!" said Virus MetalGreymon. Then Wolfoz charged at Virus MetalGreymon and tried to headbutt him, but Virus MetalGreymon blocked with his arm, and then he pushed Wolfoz back, who slid back a few metres on his feet. Then he jumped at Virus MetalGreymon and tried to bite him, but Virus MetalGreymon blocked the attack with his metal claw. Then Virus MetalGreymon swinged his claw, sending Wolfoz flying, and his feet landed on the wall of an office building. "Giga Blaster!" said Virus MetalGreymon as he shot two fish-shaped missiles out of his stomach at Wolfoz, but Wolfoz wallkicked off the building which he was on, and he landed back on the ground again, while the fish-shaped missiles hit the building which Wolfoz was on before, and then it started collapsing. Then, with a quick move, Wolfoz bit Virus MetalGreymon's right arm, making it bleed. "Argh! Damn you!" said Virus MetalGreymon as he hit Wolfoz with his tail, sending Wolfoz sliding back on his feet. Then Virus MetalGreymon shot two more fish-shaped missiles at Wolfoz, but Wolfoz jumped back and avoided them, and the missiles hit the ground, exploding and creating a huge crater there. Then Wolfoz, while in mid-air, blasted a Hyper Beam out out of his mouth at Virus MetalGreymon, but Virus MetalGreymon blasted two fish-shaped missiles at the Hyper Beam, causing a huge explosion in the air which canceled out both attacks. Then Wolfoz landed on the side of a building again, and from there, he wallkicked off the building and dived at Virus MetalGreymon at extreme speed. Wolfoz tackled Virus MetalGreymon at the stomach, sending him flying through a building. "Fυck..." he said as he was flying through the air. Then Wolfoz jumped through the hole in the building made when Virus MetalGreymon went through it, and he chased Virus MetalGreymon through the air. He blasted a Hyper Beam at Virus MetalGreymon from point-blank range, sending him flying across the sky of Slateport City, and he landed on a street, where he continued to slide through it and hitting many cars, destroying them. "Dammit..." he said as he was sliding on the ground. Then Wolfoz dived down from the sky onto the street where Virus MetalGreymon fell on, where he just kept running and chasing after Virus MetalGreymon, who was sliding along the street. "You low-life..." said Virus MetalGreymon as he shot two fish-shaped missiles at Wolfoz while still sliding back, but Wolfoz jumped up to dodge the missiles, which hit a fuel truck, making it explode, and the explosion also destroyed many cars which were near it. Then Wolfoz, who was now directly above Virus MetalGreymon in the air, said Grrraargh!" (It's over!") as he shot a Hyper Beam straight down at Virus MetalGreymon, stopping him from sliding on the ground, and instead, he was pushed straight into the ground, creating a huge crater there. Wolfoz then did three front flips in the air before landing back on the ground, next to the crater where Virus MetalGreymon was in. Wolfoz looked down at the crater and saw Virus MetalGreymon lying down in the center of it. "Damn you, bastard wolf!" said Virus MetalGreymon suddenly as he flew up from the ground, and then he said "Mega Claw!" as he shot his metal claw off his arm, which went flying at Wolfoz, who dodged the attack by jumping in the air, and then the metal claw slashed the ground, creating a deep slash mark there. But then Virus MetalGreymon caught Wolfoz offguard by shooting two fish-shaped missiles at him in mid-air, causing a huge explosion when they connected, and Wolfoz was sent backflipping through the air. He hit a hospital, creating a hole in it, and then he kept flying, until he hit a building. From there, he started running down the side of the building at incredible speed. "Die!" said Virus MetalGreymon as he shot two missiles at the top of the building, while reattaching his claw to his arm at the same time. The missiles his the top of the top of the building, which started collapsing, while Wolfoz continued to run down the bottom of the tower. When he reached the ground, he started charging at Virus MetalGreymon at unbelievable speed. Virus MetalGreymon used Mega Claw on Wolfoz again, and then he blasted two fish-shaped missiles at the air above him, hoping Wolfoz would fall for the same trick again by jumping up into the missiles. But Wolfoz didn't fall for that trick, so he didn't jump, and the missiles missed completely and continued flying into the horizon. Then, instead of dodging the metal claw, Wolfoz did a 360 spin while sliding forward on the ground, and then he hit the claw with his tail as hard as he could, kocking it out of his way. Now, Virus MetalGreymon was completely caught offguard. Wolfoz jumped at him and bit him at the face. However, he was not hurt, as his face was protected by metal. But then Wolfoz blasted a Hyper Beam at Virus MetalGreymon's face while biting it at the same time, and then Virus MetalGreymon was badly damaged and sent sliding backwards again along the road. He was also reducing the road to rubbles as he slid along it. Then Wolfoz kept running after Virus MetalGreymon, while still continuing blasting a Hyper Beam at him. "I-Impossible! What the hell is that thing?" said Virus MetalGreymon as he reattached his metal claw to his arm while sliding back. After sliding back a few dozen kilometres, Virus MetalGreymon blasted two fish-shaped missiles at the Hyper Beam which was blasting at his face continuously, causing a huge explosion which cancelled both attacks out. However, Virus MetalGreymon was sent sliding back even faster now, as the explosion happened close to him (in fact, it happened right next to him, since the fish-shaped missiles connected with the Hyper Beam almost immediately after being fired, as the Hyper Beam was already touching him by the time he fired the missiles). Then Virus MetalGreymon scrapped the ground with his metal claw, creating some friction, which stopped him from sliding back eventually. However, his claw created some sparks when he was scraping the ground with it before, and the sparks eventually created a fire, which was now burning before him. Now, over 100 kilometres of a road was reduced to nothing but rubbles after Virus MetalGreymon slid across it at incredible speed, and one part of the road was now on fire due to Virus MetalGreymon scraping it with his claw. Hundreds of cars on the road were also destroyed. Virus MetalGreymon was now badly damaged, and there were many cracks on the metal covering his face. Then Virus MetalGreymon looked forward and saw a lot of dust in the air. But when they faded away, Wolfoz was nowhere to be found. "What? Where did that wolf go?" said Virus MetalGreymon. Then suddenly, he heard a wolf's cry coming from his right. Then he looked to his right and saw Wolfoz charging at him from another road there, which connected with the road he was currently on. "Impossible! When did he get there?!? He can't be that fast!" said Virus MetalGreymon before Wolfoz jumped at his face and did a 360 spin in the air, knocking him back. Then Virus MetalGreymon flew up into the air with his wings. "Die, bastard wolf!" said Virus MetalGreymon as he was flying and started blasting many fish-shaped missiles at Wolfoz, who was running along a road and dodging the missiles, which were creating many craters on the road when they landed. Then Virus MetalGreymon saw that Wolfoz was running and dodging the missiles, so he shot two missiles in front of Wolfoz, hoping that Wolfoz would run into them, but Wolfoz jumped back and dodged at the last second. Then Wolfoz flipped upside down while in mid-air and blasted a Hyper Beam at Virus MetalGreymon from that position, but Virus MetalGreymon dodged the beam, and then he flew over to Wolfoz and hit him at the stomach with the horn on his head, making some blood come out and sending him flying downwards and he created a crater on some grass in a park where he landed. Then Virus MetalGreymon dived down at Wolfoz and tried to finish him off by stabbing him with his metal claw, but Wolfoz rolled to the side, dodging the blow, and now Virus MetalGreymon's metal claw was stuck in the ground. Wolfoz took this opportunity to kick Virus MetalGreymon at the stomach with his hindlegs, sending him flying back a bit. Then Virus MetalGreymon flew up in the air again with his wings. Wolfoz blasted three Hyper Beams at Virus MetalGreymon, who flew around the air and dodged them all, and one of them hit an aeroplane which was flying by, destroying it. Then Virus MetalGreymon blasted two missiles at Wolfoz, who was standing still on the ground. Wolfoz suddenly bolted at one direction to avoid the missiles, which caused an explosion when they hit the ground. But Virus MetalGreymon predicted which direction Wolfoz was going to bolt at, and then Virus MetalGreymon did a downward aerial dive from the sky and bit Wolfoz at the back, creating a deep bite mark there. After that, Virus MetalGreymon ascended into the sky again. Then Wolfoz started running towards an office building. "You're not getting away!" said Virus MetalGreymon, who saw Wolfoz running, and then he started chasing Wolfoz in the air. When Wolfoz reached the office building, he started running up the building's wall. Virus MetalGreymon shot two missiles at the bottom of the building, making the entire building start to collapse, but by the time the missiles hit the building, Wolfoz was already close to the top of the building. Then he wallkicked off the building while it was collapsing, and he jumped at Virus MetalGreymon and grabbed him by the stomach with his powerful jaws. "Bastard! Let go!" said Virus MetalGreymon as he was about to slash Wolfoz with his metal claw, but Wolfoz blasted a Hyper Beam out of his mouth at Virus MetalGreymon's stomach while biting him at the same time, doing massive damage to him! However, Virus MetalGreymon was not sent flying away from Wolfoz by the Hyper Beam, as Wolfoz had clutched him really tightly in his jaws. Then Wolfoz blasted a few more point-blank range Hyper Beams at Virus MetalGreymon's stomach in mid-air, while Virus MetalGreymon was not able to do anything about it, and he was also not sent flying by them. However, the Hyper Beams were causing him excruciating pain, and he screamed loudly as blood was coming out of his stomach. After a while, Wolfoz and Virus MetalGreymon both started falling towards the ground, with Virus MetalGreymon falling first. Virus MetalGreymon was no longer able to move, as he was in too much pain. Then Wolfoz said "RRaaaaaa!!" ("Holy Beam!") as he started charging up a white-coloured beam in his mouth. After a few seconds, he blasted an extremely powerful beam of white spirit energy out of his mouth at Virus MetalGreymon, sending him flying straight down at the ground, where he created an enormous crater. A huge explosion of white spirit energy also happened, which blew many people, animals and cars within twenty kilometres of the crater and sent them flying away. All the houses and buildings within twenty kilometres of the crater were also destroyed by the spirit energy. When the white spirit energy faded away, Virus MetalGreymon was seen at the center of a huge crater in the ground, with his metal claw and the metal covering his face cracked into many pieces, and he was also covered in blood, while Wolfoz was standing victoriously next to the big crater.

To be continued


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Chaos cannot be denied.

I created another picture-story yesterday. Here it is.





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Apr 27, 07 at 11:07PM
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Chapter 9: Clash! The Machines vs. The Beings of Heaven!


"Rrragh!!" Crushtoise shouted as he tried to crush Ren with his arm, but Ren blocked the attack with her sword. Then Crushtoise pushed his arm downwards against Ren hard, and then the ground below Ren's feet was starting to crack, as Ren was being pushed down hard on it. After pushing down for a while, Crushtoise briefly raised his arm from Ren's sword, and then he started whacking at Ren's sword repeatedly with his arm, and sparks went flying every time Crushtoise's metal arm came into contact with Ren's sword. Ren was also being pushed back on her feet every time her sword got hit. After whacking at Ren's sword about twenty times, Crushtoise tried to punch Ren with the fist of his other hand, but Ren blocked that attack too. However, she was sent sliding back on her feet. Then a car was about to hit her, so she jumped high into the air to avoid getting hit by the car. Then Crushtoise aimed at Ren, who was in mid-air with the twin cannons on his back. Then he shot two missiles at Ren, but Ren blasted two beams of pink lightning out of her two index fingers at the missiles, and a huge explosion happened in the air, which made several buildings surrounding the explosion collapse. Some smoke also filled the air above Crushtoise. Before they faded away, Ren suddenly dived down through the smoke, caught Crushtoise offguard and slashed him at the face, making a deep scar there. "How dare you, bitch!" said Crushtoise as he tried to punch Ren, but Ren blocked the attack with her sword. Then Crushtoise started running towards the direction where Ren was, pushing her back on her feet. After pushing Ren back a few kilometres, Crushtoise slashed her at the left shoulder with the claw of his other hand, sending her flying, ripping off the left sleave of a kimono which she was wearing, revealing her left shoulder, which was bleeding badly. "Ouch..." said Ren as she slid back on her feet while putting her right hand on her left shoulder. "Hahahahaha!!" Crushtoise laughed as he looked at Ren's left arm. Then he punched the ground hard, and then a shot of rubbles and dust started travelling across the ground towards Ren, who dodged the attack by jumping diagonally upward and backward, and then the shot of rubbles and dusts hit a bus full of people, and then the bus flipped over. Then Crushtoise blasted some fire out of his cannons at Ren while she was in mid-air, but Ren shot a huge blast of blue fire out of her index finger at Crushtoise's fire, creating a huge explosion of purple fire in the air, which fell down onto the ground and filled the entire area. Then Crushtoise lost sight of Ren, as the entire area was covered with fire. "Damn, that bitch's gone!" said Crushtoise. Then suddenly, Ren jumped right in front of Crushtoise and blasted a red fireball out of her palm at Crushtoise's face, flinching him a bit. Ren took this opportunity to charge some spirit energy into her sword, and then she slashed Crushtoise hard with it, damaging his stomach and sending him flying through the sky, and his body scraped against the side of a University building, destroying some windows of that building. Ren chased after Crushtoise by running under him on the foot path of a road. "How's this..." she said as she blasted a huge ball of pink flames out of both her palms at Crushtoise, but Crushtoise dodged the attack by moving to the side. While Crushtoise was dodging, Ren jumped up to him and tried to slash him, but Crushtoise blocked the attack by forming an "x" with his arms. Now, both Ren and Crushtoise were in mid-air. Ren pushed down on Crushtoise from above, sending him tumbling down at the ground, creating a huge crater there. Then Ren, in mid-air, shot a powerful blast of icy wind out of both her palms at Crushtoise, freezing a large area surrounding him. After that, Ren landed back on the ground. "I hope it's over..." said Ren, but then she suddenly heard Crushtoise's voice: "You wish!". Then Ren looked and saw Crushtoise blasting a huge shot of fire out of his cannons, melting the ice, and now the fire were heading towards Ren. Ren jumped to the top of a high rise building, dodging the flames, which were so thick that they covered the entire width of a street! Now, a whole street and many houses, buildings, cars and people on it or around it were on fire. The building which Ren was standing on also caught on fire too, and the flames were five storeys high! Then Crushtoise shot two Hydro Pumps at the building which Ren was standing on, destroying it. Ren jumped off the building at the last second, but then Crushtoise flew towards her and tried to punch her in mid-air, but luckily for Ren, she was able to block the attack with her sword in time. Now, Crushtoise was pushing against Ren's sword with his fist. Ren herself was being pushed through the air by Crushtoise, who was flying forward at supersonic speed. Then Crushtoise tried to slash Ren with his claw while Ren's sword was being occupied by Crushtoise's other fist, but Ren let go of her sword and started falling down towards the street in order to avoid getting slashed a second time. While falling, Ren blasted a ball of pink flames out of both her palms at Crushtoise. This time, the pink fireball hit Crushtoise at the back, setting him on fire. Now, Crushtoise was backflipping in the air as he was tumbling diagonally towards the ground at incredible speed while on fire. Then Ren caught her sword, which was falling down in mid-air, and then she continued to chase Crushtoise by running along the foot path of a street. Crushtoise eventually hit the ground, where he continued to slide along as he reduced it to rubbles while also destroying many cars on the street at the same time. Eventually, Crushtoise fell into the sea next to a harbour after destroying a fence next to it. Now, all the fire on his body were gone. While Crushtoise was under water, Ren blasted a shot of icy wind out of both her palms at the water while running on the foot path, but Crushtoise hovered out of the water before the icy wind touched it, freezing a large part of the sea next to the harbour. "I ain't gettin' caught in that ice again!" said Crushtoise as he flew back, hovering in the air above the sea, which was frozen by Ren's icy wind attack before. Then Crushtoise started shooting many Hydro Pumps out of his cannons at Ren, but Ren was running and dodging the beams, which were causing huge explosions and destroying the ground. Then Ren ran onto the frozen ocean and started sliding across the ice on her feet at super speed, while still dodging Crushtoise's Hydro Pumps, which were making huge craters in the ice. While Ren was sliding on the ice, she started blasting fireballs out of her palm at Crushtoise, but Crushtoise dodged them all fairly easily while continuing to shoot Hydro Pumps at Ren. Then Ren looked at the direction where she was sliding at, and she saw a frozen tidal wave. Ren slid onto the frozen tidal wave and used it as a "quarter pipe" to launch herself high up in the air. While in mid-air, she twirled her sword around, summoning a strong whirlwind, which flinched Crushtoise a bit and temporarily stopped him from shooting his energy blasts. Ren was also light enough to get carried by the wind which she summoned. The wind carried her, sending her spiralling in the air around Crushtoise, and then she got carried up into the air above Crushtoise's head. She also charged up some spirit energy into her sword while the wind was carrying her. After Crushtoise recovered from the wind which flinched him, he looked up and saw Ren coming down straight at his face with her sword! "It's over... it seems..." said Ren as she smiled, and then she thrusted her sword, which had a lot of spirit energy infused in it straight down through Crushtoise's head. A huge explosion of pink spirit energy happened in the sky as soon as Ren's sword came into contact with Crushtoise's head. Then Crushtoise died, and his body started falling down from the sky, and he created a huge crater on the frozen ocean when he landed there. Then Ren fell out of the cloud of pink spirit energy in the sky, and she landed next to the big crater on the frozen sea.

Meanwhile, Raptoraus was fighting with Robociraptor. The two raptors charged at each and slashed each other once at the face with their claws, and then Robociraptor said "Begone!" as he hit Raptoraus horizontally across the face with his tail, knocking him down and making him slide across the ground a great distance. Then Raptoraus blasted some fire out of his mouth at Robociraptor, but Robociraptor jumped up into the air, higher than all the buildings in the city, dodging the attack. Then Raptoraus blasted a lightning beam out of his mouth at Robociraptor, but Robociraptor deflected the lightning with his tail, and the lightning striked a truck on the streets, making it explode. Then Raptoraus jumped up to Robociraptor and tried to headbutt him, but Robociraptor guarded himself by forming an "x" with his arms. Then Raptorous pushed his head downward against Robociraptor, sending him tumbling down, and he landed through the window of the second floor of a hospital. Then Raptoraus, in the air, dived down and landed through a window of the top floor of the same hospital. Then Raptoraus started running around in the hospital, looking for some stairs which leads to a lower floor. At the same time, Robociraptor got up from the ground, and he started running around in the hospital, looking for some stairs which leads to a higher floor. The two of them eventually found some stairs, and then Raptoraus went down to a lower floor, while Robociraptor went up to a higher floor, and now they both got a bit closer together. They continued running around in the hospital, knocking down nurses and other people who were in there. Robociraptor also grabbed a pair of scissors from a desk inside the hospital as he was running past it After about ten minutes, Raptoraus and Robociraptor eventually bumped into each other at the corner of a corridor in the hospital. Immediately after finding Raptoraus, Robociraptor hit him in the head with a horizontal strike with his tail, sending him flying out a window of the hospital, and he landed on top of a parked car in the streets. Robociraptor jumped out the window too. He dived towards Raptoraus, did a front flip while in mid-air and tried to crush him with a vertical strike with his tail at the end of the flip, but Raptoraus jumped high up into the air, dodging the attack, which completely crushed the car which Raptoraus was on before! Then Raptoraus, while in mid-air, blasted a huge fireball out of his mouth down at Robociraptor, but Robociraptor jumped to the top of a building, avoiding the fireball which created a big crater in the middle of a road, and a huge explosion of fire also radiated from the center of the crater, burning many innocent people alive. Then Raptoraus landed on top of another building. Now, Raptoraus and Robociraptor were both each standing on top of a building. "Take this!" said Robociraptor as he threw the pair of scissors which he took from the hospital before at Raptorous, who ducked and avoided being hit, but while Raptoraus was ducking, Robociraptor jumped at him and headbutted him at the stomach, knocking him off the building which he was standing on. Raptoraus fell off the building, and he landed on the ground, reducing a bit of it to rubbles. Then Robociraptor dived down from the building which he was standing on too, and he was ready to crush Raptoraus with his feet, when Raptoraus, who was on the ground, suddenly hit him with his tail, sending him flying until his body got smashed into a shop on the streets. Then Raptoraus got up from the ground, charged at Robociraptor and tried to bite him at the face, but Robociraptor kicked him hard at the stomach, sending him flying back. He did a backflip in the air berfore landing on top of a truck. Then Robociraptor jumped towards Raptoraus and tried to slash him with his claws, but Raptoraus jumped up and avoided the attack, while Robociraptor landed on the truck which Raptoraus was standing on before. Then Raptoraus tried to slash Robociraptor at the face with his claws while falling down from the air, but Robociraptor jumped to the top of a building, dodging the attack. Then Raptoraus jumped up to the building where Robociraptor was on too. While in mid-air, Raptoraus shot a huge blast of ice out of his mouth at Robociraptor, but Robociraptor smashed the ice with a single swing of his tail! But while Robociraptor was busy dealing with the ice blast, Raptoraus charged at him and roared as he kicked him hard at the stomach, sending him flying over a street, and he landed through the window of a shopping center. Then Raptoraus dived through the window which Robociraptor smashed through before, and then he headbutted Robociraptor inside the shopping center, sending him flying back a bit. Many people who were inside the shopping center started screaming and running away when they saw Robociraptor smashing through the window, but they could not see Raptoraus, as he is a Holy Creature, who could not be seen by ordinary humans. Then a group of ten teenagers walked up to Robociraptor fearlessly, while everyone else were running. "Hey guys, check out this thing!" said one of the teenagers, who seemed to be leading the group. Then another teenager punched Robociraptor in the face, but then Robociraptor immediately crunched that teenager's head, killing him, and then Robociraptor swinged his tail around, hitting all ten of the teenagers with one swing, sending them flying and killing them easily as they were only human. But while Robociraptor was busy dealing with the teenagers, Raptoraus blasted a beam of lightning out of his mouth, hitting Robociraptor's body while he was distracted. Robociraptor was sent flying by the beam of lightning, and then he fell down some escalators in the shopping center which led down to a lower floor. Then Raptoraus ran to the top of the escalators and shot a huge blast of ice out of his mouth down at Robociraptor, freezing a large area around him solid. Then Raptoraus charged up some spirit energy into his body, and then he tackled the ice where Robociraptor was in hard, shattering the ice into many tiny pieces. Robociraptor, who was inside the ice, was also shattered into pieces. A huge pillar of silver spirit energy which reached the sky also came out of Raptoraus's body, and the spirit energy also created a big hole in the ceiling of the shopping center.

To be continued


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Apr 28, 07 at 03:00PM
Meet your death.

I am starting to make a new story. It is a continue of this and this story (the second story I posted goes after the first one, except Dragonaurus is changed to Dragozard, and his Golden Blast is now a move known as Nova Blast, which fires a huge ball of green energy and flames). I will post it little by little.

Part 1: Unrest on earth.

A year had passed ever since Dragozard had been destroyed. Everything appeared to be peaceful on earth. The humans lived in harmony with the pokemon, the digimon, and the yu-gi-oh monsters. However, one day something strange started to happen. It began at the Safari Zone Fuchsia City. The guards at the entrance were just sitting, waiting for the time when they would inform the pokemon trainers in the Safari Zone that it would be time for them to exit. Suddenly, a man exit the Safari Zone and went into the entrance room to leave. He was running, with sweat all over his body. "Leaving already, sir?" said one of the two guards at the Safari Zone entrance. "Gasp... get out of here..." said the man, as he ran away. "Hm? Why was this guy running like that?" said the guard to the other guard. "I dunno man, I've seen this happen before" said the other guard. Suddenly, some screams were heard from inside the Safari Zone. Then three people ran out of the Safari Zone fast. They were panic-stricken. "What is going on in there?" said a Safari Zone guard. "Let's check it out" said the other guard. Then the two guards entered the Safari Zone and saw many people running away, while others were fighting against wild pokemon with their own pokemon. There were many fainted pokemon everywhere, and even some injured humans. "What is happening?" said a guard. Then a man approached the two guards. "The pokemon... they have all run amok! They are attacking anyone for no reason! Do something!" he said, and then he ran away. "What should we do?" said a guard. "Man, I don't know! Perhaps we should call the police or something. Their pokemon are said to be well-trained, maybe they could handle this" said the other guard. "Good idea" said the other guard, as he called the police. "Hello? Officer Jenny? We have a situation here at the Safari Zone..." said the guard. "It will have to wait. We are currently trying to stop some wild pokemon that have emerged from the grass and from the forest, and are attacking the citizens of our city. Growlithe, Flamethrower! Don't let these Scythers get close!" said Officer Jenny. The guard then looked at the other guard and said "Man, the pokemon have gone insane in the rest of the city too!". "Damn!" said the other guard. "We must try to stop this situation alone..." he continued, as he sent out a Machoke and sent it to battle against the wild pokemon of the Safari Zone.

Meanwhile, the same thing was happening all over the pokemon world. Wild pokemon, digimon, and yu-gi-oh monsters started attacking people and other beings for no reason. They were causing massive destruction with their attacks, and some small villages were burnt to the ground entirely, with the people that lived in them running away to find shelter into the more heavily defended cities. Many untamed pokemon, digimon, and yu-gi-oh monsters were totally out of control, and they were fighting against a few wild creatures that had not gone crazy, the humans, and the pokemon, digimon, and yu-gi-oh monsters that had been tamed, and had not ran amok. The wild pokemon were so powerful that the army had to fight them to prevent them from demolishing cities. The forces of the mad creatures and the humans and tamed creatures appeared to be evenly matched, until a huge earthquake started to happen all over earth. It was Groudon, who had awoken from his sleep and had also ran amok. Groudon roared loudly as he emerged from inside a volcano after a gigantic eruption. Then he used Rock Slide and destroyed some tanks, and then he jumped from the top of the volcano down to the ground, causing a massive earthquake, which cracked the ground to pieces and buried a large part of the human army under the ground. Some tanks fired their cannons against Groudon, but they were mere pinpricks for him. Groudon then used Eruption, and the volcano behind him erupted, with lava starting to come down from it and heading towards some towns that surrounded the volcano. The army desperately continued to fight against Groudon, hoping they could bring him down, but the pokemon simply continued to cause havoc, setting entire forests on fire with Fire Blast and making rivers and lakes around the area evaporate by his drought ability. The drought was so powerful that many people, pokemon, and other creatures in the army fainted just because of it.

At Pallet Town, there were few wild pokemon, which were also quite weak. Professor Oak used his own pokemon to fight against them, and he was being successful in that battle. However, suddenly, a huge tidal wave came from the sea and flooded the entire town, destroying it almost completely. But Pallet Town was not the only place that got destroyed by a tidal wave. Many coastal cities and other places near the sea suffered enormous damage by some huge tidal waves which were being created by Kyogre, who had also awoken and had begun to spread destruction in its path. Kyogre swam to Cinnabar Island, where a volcano was erupting and had destroyed almost all of the buildings there, and then it used Water Spout to fill the volcano with water and freeze the lava solid. But at the same time it destroyed all the remaining buildings of the island, except a pokemon center. Furious, Kyogre dived and swam to another region, known as the Pokeia region. It went to Port Steel and destroyed it entirely with a single Hydro Pump. The navy came to try to stop Kyogre, but Kyogre simply created a huge whirlpool, which sucked many warships and submarines into it. Some airplanes and helicopters then arrived and tried to damage Kyogre with missiles and bombs, but Kyogre dived in the water, and avoided the attacks. Then, from beneath the water, it used Thunder, destroying some airplanes and helicopters, and then it emerged from under the water and jumped high in the air, and from there it used Ice Beam and froze about ten helicopters in a single attack. Kyogre then fell back into the water and dived again, and then it started heading towards its next destination, while the heavy rain created by its drizzle ability was flooding entire towns, forcing the people to evacuate them and head for the mountains.

There was war everywhere on earth. While Kyogre and Groudon were causing havoc, other legendary pokemon were also destroying anything in their path. Ho-oh, accompanied by Raikou, Suicune, and Entei, was obliterating anyone who stood in his way. These four pokemon attacked anything they could: buildings, humans, pokemon, digimon, yu-gi-oh monsters. Zapdos, Articuno and Moltres were all after Lugia, and these pokemon were having a tense fight in the skies, while their missing attacks kept going and devastated anything else they hit. Lugia's Aeroblasts were capable of decimating huge factories in one hit. Zapdos's Thunderbolts had such energy that they could even crack holes in the ground, while Zapdos himself could absorb electricity from towns and cities and cause blackouts. Moltres was able to torch entire forests to ash with Flamethrower, while Articuno would freeze whole rivers and lakes with Ice Beam. Rayquaza had descended from Sky Tower, and he had started to crush whole towns with his powerful Hyper Beams. Mewtwo, Mew, and Celebi had stayed calm, and they were trying to restore the peace on earth. But unfortunately, their efforts were not enough.

As all these things were happening, ChaosLord was watching interested, but uninvolved, from a window at the top room of ChaosTower. Suddenly, a Jijimon arrived at the room. He was very tired. "C-ChaosLord..." he said, as he coughed. Without turning to face him, ChaosLord continued to watch what was happening from the window. "We need your help..." said Jijimon. "Are you unable to stop these disasters alone?" said ChaosLord. "Yes, I'm afraid we can't do it alone. You see, even the legendary pokemon are out of control! Groudon, Kyogre, Ho-oh, Lugia! Although Mewtwo, Mew and Celebi are with us, they still can't defeat all of these legends alone! They'll get overwhelmed! You know how strong Groudon and Kyogre are..." said Jijimon. "Yes, I know. I have battled them once" said ChaosLord. Just then, Lance entered the room. "Are you ChaosLord?" he said, as he took some deep breaths, since he had been tired from climbing up ChaosTower. "Yes" said ChaosLord. "It is an honor to meet you, my lord" said Lance as he kneeled before ChaosLord. "You are here to ask for my help too" said ChaosLord. "Yes, master. I was told that, apart from saving the world from the dragons, you have also defeated Groudon and Kyogre once in the past. You are the only one who can save us right now. Please, help us" said Lance. "Okay, I will defeat the legendary pokemon. But I will leave the rest up to you" said ChaosLord. "Yes, my lord. We can handle the wild pokemon" said Lance. ChaosLord then turned and faced Lance and Jijimon. Suddenly, Team Alpha entered the room. "PokeGod ChaosLord, we need your assistance! Our once peaceful village is now in chaos!" said Pikachu. "I know, do not worry. I will go and take care of the situation" said ChaosLord, as he walked up some stairs to the top of ChaosTower, and then he used his cannons as rockets and started flying towards a place where there were many thick clouds, and it was raining extremely heavily. It was the area where Kyogre was.



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Chapter 10: The Heated Match! Ronald vs. Gunchamp!


Ronald was fighting with Gunchamp. "Let's begin!" said Gunchamp as he fired at Ronald with his shotgun, but Ronald hit the bullet with his katana, knocking it away. Then Gunchamp tried to burn Ronald with his flamethrower, but Ronald dodged the fire, and then he charged at Gunchamp and tried to slash him with his katana, but Gunchamp blocked the attack with his shotgun. "Hah!" said Gunchamp as he pushed against Ronald's katana with his shotgun, sending Ronald flying back. Ronald did a backflip while in the air. Then he said "Split, Niryuu!" as some yellow spirit energy came out of his sword while he was in mid-air, and then his sword transformed into a nunchaku! One of the sticks which makes up the nunchaku was red, while the other stick was blue. Then Gunchamp started firing at Ronald with his machinegun. "Aaaatchouu!!!!" Ronald screamed his battle cry as he knocked all the bullets away with his nunchaku! Then Gunchamp fired at Ronald with his rocket launcher, but Ronald moved his shoulder to the side and just barely dodged the rocket, which hit the top of a building and set it on fire. Then Ronald dived down from the air and slammed his nunchaku hard on Gunchamp's head, damaging him badly. Then Ronald tried to slam Gunchamp with his nunchaku again, but Gunchamp blocked the attack with his rocket launcher. Then Ronald started screaming some battle cries as he kept on whacking at Gunchamp with his nunchaku, while Gunchamp was blocking the blows with his guns. However, he was slowly being pushed back on his feet, and he didn't get the chance to attack back as Ronald was placing constant pressure on him by whacking him repeatedly, so he couldn't change from his defensive position. After a few minutes, Gunchamp got used to using his guns to block Ronald's vertical nunchaku attacks. However, since he got used to blocking such attacks, he could easily get caught offguard if Ronald suddenly used a different attack. So Ronald did vertical attacks on Gunchamp repeatedly while screaming some battle cries, and Gunchamp was blocking those attacks. But then suddenly, in the middle of whacking at Gunchamp's guns repeatedly, Ronald suddenly did a 360 spin on his feet, and then he held both ends of his nunchaku together. Then he thrusted his nunchaku, with both ends held together at Gunchamp. Gunchamp, who was used to the vertical attacks and didn't expect Ronald to suddenly use a thrusting attack, got caught offguard, and he got hit hard on the stomach. He fell down on his back, and he slid back a few metres on the ground. "Wrraghh!" Ronald screamed as he jumped in the air and tried to slam his nunchaku with both ends held together at Gunchamp's face, but Gunchamp rolled back, avoiding the attack, which created a small crater on the ground. Then Gunchamp kicked Ronald at the face while his guard was down, sending him rolling backwards, and he got up as he slid back on his feet. Then Gunchamp fired at Ronald with his rocket launcher, but Ronald jumped diagonally upward to his right, dodging the rocket, which kept going until it hit a taxi, blowing it up. Then Ronald landed through a window of one of the top floors of an office building. Gunchamp fired at the building several times with his rocket launcher, destroying the building almost completely. However, Ronald escaped by running along a bridge which linked to another office building. However, Gunchamp did not see that. "Hahaha! He must've been blown to pieces!" said Gunchamp, laughing, but then suddenly, Ronald smashed through a window of the office building which he was currently in. He jumped out of the window and dived at Gunchamp, trying to crush him with a vertical nunchaku attack, but Gunchamp stepped back, barely dodging the attack, which destroyed the ground a bit. "What? He's not dead yet?" said Gunchamp. Then Ronald did an upward swing with his nunchaku. Gunchamp blocked the attack with his machinegun. However, it got knocked off his hand. Then Ronald kicked Gunchamp hard at the stomach, making him slide back a bit. Then Ronald picked up the machinegun which Gunchamp dropped before, and then he fired at Gunchamp repeatedly with it. Gunchamp was getting damaged badly, and he was sliding backwards as the bullets were hitting him. However, since he was metal and had excellent defence, he was not damaged too badly by the bullets. Eventually, the bullets pushed Gunchamp into the garage of someone's house, but there was no car inside the garage. After a while, the machinegun ran out of bullets, so Ronald threw it at Gunchamp, who destroyed it by karate chopping it with his hand which was not holding anything (the one which used to hold the machinegun). "Burn in hell!" said Gunchamp as he tried to burn Ronald with his flamethrower, but Ronald jumped high up in the air and dodged the flames. Then he was about to land on the roof of the house which Gunchamp was in. He hit the roof with his nunchaku, making a hole through it, and then he fell through the hole and into the garage where Gunchamp was in. Before landing on the ground, he kicked Gunchamp at the stomach, sending him flying at a wall inside the garage, and then that wall cracked a bit when Gunchamp's back hit it. Then Ronald placed his nunchaku on a shelf in the garage, which was right next to Ronald himself. After that, he started punching Gunchamp in the face repeatedly. After punching him in the face repeatedly for two whole minutes, Ronald did an uppercut to Gunchamp's chin, sending him flying upward. He created a hole in the roof above him, and he went flying outside and landed on some grass outside. Then Ronald grabbed the nunchaku from the shelf which he placed it on before, and then he used the nunchaku to smash the wall in front of him, which was already weakened, since it cracked a bit when Gunchamp's back hit it before. The wall got smashed into many pieces, creating a hole which led outside the garage. Then Ronald walked out of the hole, and he slowly approached Gunchamp, who was lying on the ground. "Ronald, right? I want to ask you something!" said Gunchamp as he got up from the ground. Then he said "You're from a world called Heaven, right?". "Yeah, so what of it?" asked Ronald as he stopped walking. Then Gunchamp said "When you guys from Heaven attacked us on Chaos Planet for the first time, one of the ten guys who came said that they're not supposed to be able to be seen. When we asked them why they aren't supposed to be able to be seen, one of them said something like, "Lord Ryuumaru gave us the power to be invisible to everything other than spirits". So it does seem like you guys can't be seen by most things..." as he looked at a group of people who walked by, saw Gunchamp and started running away, although they did not notice Ronald's existance at all. "Yes. I am a Shinigami, and only Shinigami, angels and Holy Creatures are supposed to be able to see each other. I'm surprised that you, a machine are able to see me" said Ronald. Gunchamp said "I see. In that case, forget it. You obviously wouldn't know the answer to what I was about to ask then. I think I understand a bit about why we machines are able to see you...". "Hm?" said Ronald. Then Gunchamp said "A guy called Ryuumaru made you invisible to many living things, right? Well, I guess he probably did that by giving you guys special powers which does not allow you to be seen by the eyes of humans, animals and other creatures on this planet, as well as any other living organisms he may know of. I'm guessing he did that a long time ago, right?". "Yeah. In fact, millions of years ago, before I was even born" Ronald answered. Then Gunchamp said "Well, since that Ryuumaru guy didn't know about the existance of us machines from Chaos Planet, he obviously didn't give you guys the power to be unable to be seen by our eyes. That's my theory on why we are able to see you... I was trying to get you to confirm if it was true...". "I don't know if it's true or not" said Ronald. "Well then! Let's get back to business!" said Gunchamp as he fired at Ronald with his shotgun, but Ronald moved to the side and avoided the bullet, and then he started charging at Gunchamp. "Tsouuriyaa!!!" Ronald screamed his battle cry as he tried to slam his nunchaku at Gunchamp, but Gunchamp blocked the attack with his shotgun. Then Ronald did a quick 360 spin while lifting his right leg up to his shoulder, and then he dropped his ankle down hard at Gunchamp's hand which was holding the shotgun. Ronald's ankle hit Gunchamp's fingers hard, making him drop the shotgun. Then Gunchamp burnt Ronald with his flamethrower from a close range. Ronald's shirt caught on fire, and then he jumped diagonally backwards while he ripped his shirt off. Then, while in mid-air, he threw his shirt, which was on fire at Gunchamp, but Gunchamp stepped back to avoid getting hit by the shirt. Then Ronald landed behind the house where he and Gunchamp were in before, where Ronald was punching Gunchamp in the face. Gunchamp fired at the house with his rocket launcher, destroying it in a huge explosion. Some smoke came out of the house, and then Ronald jumped out of the smoke, caught Gunchamp offguard and kicked him at the stomach while flying, knocking him down. After Ronald landed from the ground, he immediately did a sweep kick, hitting Gunchamp, who was lying on the ground. "It's over!" said Ronald as he held each stick of his nunchaku with one hand, and then he slammed both ends of his nanchaku at Gunchamp's stomach. "Don't underestimate me!" said Gunchamp as he rolled to the side, barely dodging the attack, which made two small holes on the grass. Then Gunchamp did a roundhouse kick at Ronal's face as he got up from the ground. Then he tried to punch Ronald in the face with ones of his hands which used to hold a shotgun, but Ronald did a 360 spin while sidestepping the attack at the same time. Then Ronald, who was still holding each end of his nunchaku with one hand started "drumming" at Gunchamp's body. After being hit by that attack, Gunchamp flinched temporarily, and Ronald took this opportunity to roll behind Gunchamp, and then he did an upward strike with his nunchaku at Gunchamp from behind, sending him flying straight up in the air. Then Ronald held both ends of his nunchaku together with one hand, and then he jumped up to Gunchamp and thrusted both ends of his nunchaku at him, but Gunchamp blocked the thrust with the side of his rocket launcher. Then Gunchamp hit Ronald in the head with his machinegun, hurling him straight downward, where he created a crater on the ground where he landed. While he layed on the ground, he picked up a small rock with his hand. "The end!" said Gunchamp while in mid-air as he shot a rocket straight down at Ronald. Ronald rolled to the side and dodged the rocket, which exploded and made the crater on the ground even bigger than before. Then Ronald got up as he slid back a bit on his feet, but then Gunchamp dived down from the air and Cross Chopped him at the stomach with his two hands which were not holding any weapons (the one which used to hold a machinegun and the one which used to hold a shotgun), creating a deep "x" mark on Ronald's stomach, which started bleeding badly. "You bastard..." said Ronald as he was also sent flying by the attack, but then he regained his balance by using his left hand to grab onto a rail, which was next to the foot path of a street. Then Gunchamp shot another rocket at Ronald, who jumped to avoid the attack, and he landed on his feet on top of a parked car next to a street. "Burn! Burn! Burn!" said Gunchamp as he kept trying to burn Ronald with his flamethrower, while Ronald was dodging the flames by jumping from the top of one parked car to another. The flames also hit the cars which Ronald was jumping on, and they all exploded soon after. Gunchamp continued to try burning Ronald with his flamethrower, while he suddenly fired another rocket in front of Ronald, hoping Ronald would run into it. But Ronald jumped to the side and avoided the rocket, which hit a car and blew it up instantly. Then Ronald's feet landed on the wall of a building. He wallkicked off that wall, and then he landed at the top of another building. Gunchamp fired a rocket at Ronald, but Ronald dodged by jumping from one building to another, and the rocket missed Ronald completely and kept flying up into the sky. "You're not getting away!" said Gunchamp as he jumped up to the top of the building which Ronald was standing on, but by the time he landed there, Ronald had jumped to yet another building! "Wait!" said Gunchamp as he started chasing Ronald, who was running away by jumping from the top of one building to another! Gunchamp did the same, jumping from one building to another in order to chase Ronald, while he fired some more rockets at Ronald, but they missed completely as Ronald was constantly moving, and the rockets just hit some buildings and caused some destruction. After running for a while, Ronald saw a huge building ahead of him, which was much bigger than the one which he was currently on. He jumped towards the wall of that building, and then he turned around while in mid-air to face Gunchamp, who was jumping after him. Then he threw the rock which he picked up before at Gunchamp. The rock hit Gunchamp at the face, flinching him a bit. While Gunchamp was flinching, Ronald's feet landed on the wall of the building which he was jumped at before, and then he wallkicked off that building and started diving towards Gunchamp. Then he hit Gunchamp with his nunchaku while they were both in mid-air. The nunchaku hit Gunchamp directly at the nose, damaging him badly. Then Ronald started doing many fancy combos with his nunchaku on Gunchamp, while screaming some battle cries, as well as passing his nunchaku from one hand to another occasionally, and all of this was pushing Gunchamp backwards through the air. Then Ronald ended his combo by jabbing Gunchamp hard at the stomach with his palm, sending him flying forward. Then Ronald started spinning his nunchaku around at incredible speed, and some yellow spirit energy started flying out of his nunchaku. "This is the end!" said Ronald as he thrusted his nunchaku, which was fully charged up with spirit energy straight at Gunchamp's stomach, creating a huge explosion of yellow spirit energy in the air, which tore down the big building which Ronald wallkicked off before. Gunchamp dropped both his rocket launcher and his flamethrower immediately after the attack hit him. He was finally killed by this extremely powerful attack, which sent him flying horizontally out of the explosion of spirit energy and through the sky. His body soared through the sky like a shooting star, leaving behind a trail of Ronald's yellow spirit energy. Gunchamp's body fell in a river in a place much further away from the city.

To be continued


P.S. Just to let you know, I have edited Chapter 5, Chapter 6 and Chapter 8 in order to get rid of all the "*bleep*"s which came up in those posts. I have replaced the "*bleep*"s which were originally in those chapters with what they originally censored out.



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Apr 29, 07 at 03:06AM
Meet your death.

Greek language owns.


Part 2: Land, sea and air

ChaosLord flew to a coastal city, which Kyogre was destroying at that time. Kyogre jumped out of the water and as he fell back in, a huge tidal wave was created, which caused massive damage to the city. Then Kyogre used Body Slam on a skyscraper and destroyed it to pieces, and then he jumped back in the water. When he got back to the surface of the sea, he saw ChaosLord. "You! You look familiar..." he said. "I am ChaosLord" said ChaosLord. "ChaosLord... Yes! I remember now! We have fought in the past, haven't we?" said Kyogre. "And I defeated you" said ChaosLord. "It's payback time then!" said Kyogre, as he fired a Hydro Pump at ChaosLord, who flew higher and avoided it. "Calm down, Kyogre..." said ChaosLord. "Yes, that's just what I am going to do! Calm down!" said Kyogre, as he used Calm Mind and increased its special attack. Then it used Ice Beam at ChaosLord, but ChaosLord simply pointed at the Ice Beam with his right claw, opened it, and used Flamethrower, melting Kyogre's Ice Beam before it could hit him. "Hyper Beam!" said Kyogre as he fired a Hyper Beam at ChaosLord, only to see it explode on a yellow shield of energy ChaosLord created around himself. The yellow shield faded as soon as Kyogre's attack ended. "I defeated you once in the past. What makes you believe that now it will be different?" said ChaosLord. "I have grown much stronger since our last battle, ChaosLord. Do not underestimate me..." said Kyogre. "Everything is to be underestimated when compared to infinity, my friend" said ChaosLord. "We will see about that!" said Kyogre, and then he started to use Calm Mind. He used Calm Mind five times, until his special attack had reached its highest level. "Prepare to see my true power! Water Spout!" said Kyogre, as he used Water Spout, and then he blasted an extreme amount of water at very high pressure towards ChaosLord. ChaosLord flew to the side and avoided the attack, which kept going and hit a mountain, turning it all into mud. "Water Spout!" said Kyogre again, as he fired another blast of water at ChaosLord, who avoided it once again, and the attack kept going and hit a city, demolishing all its buildings and structures and turning it into a huge lake. "Water Spout!" shouted Kyogre once more, as he fired a gigantic blast of water at ChaosLord one more time. This time, the water hit ChaosLord. Immediately after he saw that, Kyogre said "Ha! Thunder!" as he used Thunder and hit ChaosLord with an extreme amount of electricity while the Water Spout attack was hitting him. Then a huge explosion of water and electricity happened. "Ha, ha, ha. It looks like I won" said Kyogre. But then he looked and saw ChaosLord still flying in the air, unharmed. "No!" said Kyogre. "Is that all?" said ChaosLord. Kyogre then dived into the water and started to flee. ChaosLord then laughed, as he pointed at the clouds with his right claw, and then he said "Thunder Rain!" and opened his hand. Just as he opened it, hundreds of thunders fell into the sea, filling it with electricity, and fainting thousands of pokemon that were swimming inside it. Kyogre emerged from the water fainted, flipped so that his belly was facing the sky, like many other water type pokemon. The skies then became clear and bright again, as it stopped raining and the clouds started to disappear. The tidal waves and whirlpools stopped as the sea became calm again.

ChaosLord then used his psychic powers and created a whirlpool, which sucked Kyogre and sent it into an underwater cave, where it could rest. Then he looked to his left and saw a huge beam of lava and fire, which was stretching from the ground all the way up to the sky. ChaosLord then started flying towards the location where that thing was happening. He saw Groudon in a city, stomping on buildings and cars and punching skyscrapers, factories and warehouses, demolishing them. He approached him, and said "Groudon". Groudon turned to see behind him, and while he was turning his tail hit a skyscraper, causing it to collapse and fall on ChaosLord. As the dust faded away, Groudon saw ChaosLord still flying in the air without a single scratch. "Go back to sleep, or I will put you to sleep myself" said ChaosLord. Groudon then looked at ChaosLord angrily and roared extremely loudly. Groudon's roar was so loud that the entire atmosphere around shook, a small earthquake happened, thousands of glasses at a very long range were smashed to pieces, and some small buildings close to Groudon were demolished to dust. But ChaosLord still stood there, as if nothing had happened. Then ChaosLord roared too, extremely more loudly than Groudon. ChaosLord's roar caused a huge earthquake, the atmosphere shook much more, and hundreds of buildings were destroyed. Also, when ChaosLord roared, he created a wave of some sort of energy, which hit Groudon and sent him flying, while it also hit many buildings and entirely destroyed them in its way until it eventually grew weaker and faded out. Groudon fell on a big car parking building with ten roofs, decimating it and many of the cars as his body landed there. Groudon then got up and looked at ChaosLord. He then roared, and then the ground below ChaosLord exploded and a huge pillar of lava and fire came out of the hole on the ground, which stretched from the ground to the sky. ChaosLord was pushed by the lava high in the sky, but he flew out of it, unharmed. Groudon thought that ChaosLord had been destroyed by the lava, so he turned his back to the pillar of lava, which ended in a few seconds, and then he used Swords Dance three times, and then he used Earthquake, destroying two towns and bringing down an entire forest. ChaosLord then fired a Hyper Beam at Groudon to draw his attention. The beam hit Groudon on the back, and made him fall on the ground. Groudon got up and turned and faced ChaosLord. "Did you forget about our battle?" said ChaosLord. Then Groudon used Hyper Beam at ChaosLord, who then used Double Hyper Beam, firing two Hyper Beams from the huge twin cannons on his back. ChaosLord's beams collided with Groudon's Hyper Beam, and a huge explosion was caused, which sent both ChaosLord and Groudon flying. They both landed at two places quite far from the explosion. However, Groudon was breathing heavily, exhausted, while ChaosLord flew towards him still at a perfect shape. ChaosLord landed on the ground and looked at Groudon in the eyes. "Goodnight" he said then, as he used Earthquake Stomp, stomping the ground with his foot, and causing a gigantic earthquake which cracked the ground in pieces. The ground beneath Groudon's legs was cracked in two, and Groudon fell inside the ground and fell inside an underground cave. As soon as Groudon fell and was hit on the ground, he fainted. Then ChaosLord raised his left claw and waved it, as he used his psychic powers to close the all the holes on the ground and trap Groudon beneath it. The drought, the earthquakes and the eruptions then ended, as Groudon was put to rest once more.

ChaosLord then looked far, and saw a dragon figure flying in the air, firing Hyper Beams at earth. ChaosLord flew towards that dragon figure. It was Rayquaza, and he was destroying a city known as Dragon City. Rayquaza said "Denizens of the ground! Behold! The power from the sky!" as he used Hyper Beam and annihilated a group of thirty-five pokemon who were all trying to stop him together. ChaosLord got close to Rayquaza, as he started to charge another Hyper Beam. However, as Rayquaza fired his attack, ChaosLord used his psychic powers to control it and direct it towards the sky. The Hyper Beam was sent towards Rayquaza's Sky Tower, damaging it badly. "How dare you!" said Rayquaza, as he turned and looked at ChaosLord. "Return to your tower, Rayquaza" said ChaosLord. "First I will send you under the ground!" said Rayquaza, as he flew at ChaosLord and used Dragon Claw on him, with no effect though. "It's pointless" said ChaosLord. Rayquaza then used Crunch on ChaosLord's right claw, but as he was biting it, ChaosLord blasted electricity out of it, zapping Rayquaza and causing him some serious damage. Rayquaza immediately flew away from ChaosLord, and said "W-Who are you?". "I am Power" said ChaosLord, as he aimed at Rayquaza with his cannons, and used Twin Hydro Cannon. But Rayquaza evaded the attack, while using Dragon Dance at the same time. ChaosLord then used Double Solarbeam, but Rayquaza avoided this attack as well, while he used Dragon Dance once more. "No matter how big your power is, you will never catch me!" said Rayquaza. ChaosLord then used Double Psybeam, but Rayquaza moved away once more and used Dragon Dance. "Hahahahaha!" laughed Rayquaza as he used Dragon Dance three more times. "Beware, machine! My speed and attack are now at their maximum level! Now the battle gets serious!" said Rayquaza, as he laughed. Then he used Hyper Beam at ChaosLord, who flew high and avoided it. Rayquaza then used Extremespeed at ChaosLord, but as he was about to hit him, ChaosLord disappeared. "W-Where did he go?" said Rayquaza. "Behind you" said ChaosLord, who had teleported behind Rayquaza. "Argh! How did you do that?" said Rayquaza. "I teleported" said ChaosLord. "AAARGH! You're getting on my nerves! Because you are so annoying, I will use my full power to destroy you, like when I destroyed those comets!" said Rayquaza, as he started charging a huge Hyper Beam, while ChaosLord was standing still in the air. "DEVASTATE!!!" shouted Rayquaza, as he fired a gigantic Hyper Beam at ChaosLord, which pushed him to the ground and even buried him under it. "Ha... ha.... ha... that's what you get... for messing... with me, foolish machine!" said Rayquaza, exhausted after having used this attack. But then he saw ChaosLord flying out of the hole in which he had been buried. And he did not even have a single scratch. "IMPOSSIBLE!" said Rayquaza. "Well?" said ChaosLord. Then Rayquaza used Extremespeed at ChaosLord, hitting his upper body with his head at extreme speed. However, Rayquaza just harmed his own self by this attack. Then ChaosLord tried to slash Rayquaza with his left claw, but Rayquaza flew away fast. ChaosLord then fired a Hyper Beam at Rayquaza, who avoided it with Extremespeed. "You still can never get me! I'm too fast for a slow being of the ground such as you!" said Rayquaza. "Oh, we'll see about that" said ChaosLord, as he raised his claws, and then the atmosphere around the area where he and Rayquaza were started changing. Rayquaza thought ChaosLord was going to use an attack, so he tried to use Extremespeed, but he could not fly fast, as the air now felt like water, and even harder to move into. "W-What's going on? The air... it feels... strange..." said Rayquaza. ChaosLord, however, was still able to move at the same speed as he was moving previously, and he flew after Rayquaza, who was desperately trying to escape with Extremespeed, but he was now flying much slower than before. Seeing that ChaosLord was catching up to him even though he was using Extremespeed, Rayquaza turned around and fired a Hyper Beam at ChaosLord, but the Hyper Beam only flew slowly towards ChaosLord and then it vanished. "What is happening? It is as if we are fighting in water!" said Rayquaza. Then ChaosLord fired a Hyper Beam at Rayquaza, which seemed to not be affected by the change in the atmosphere in the area, and went flying at Rayquaza, hitting him hard at the chest. ChaosLord then flew at Rayquaza and grabbed the end of his tail with his right claw. Then he started swinging Rayquaza in circles, as the effect on the atmosphere just ended. ChaosLord swung Rayquaza fast and tossed him hard towards a police station, and while Rayquaza was still flying, ChaosLord aimed at him with his cannons and used Double Dark Shot. Two missiles came out of ChaosLord's cannons and flew towards Rayquaza, exploding on him at the same time as when he hit the police station, causing a gigantic explosion. After a few seconds, the dust faded away, and Rayquaza could be seen fainted on the ground. ChaosLord then teleported him back to his Sky Tower and let him rest there.

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Apr 29, 07 at 04:27AM
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Chapter 11: Violation of Orders


Somewhere in the sky above Slateport City, Roy and Skarmwary were hovering in the air with their wings, facing each other. "So... Virus MetalGreymon, Crushtoise and Robociraptor have all been defeated... only me and Mega-Emperor are left, it seems..." said Skarmwary as he looked down from the sky and saw that Virus MetalGreymon, Crushtoise and Robociraptor have all been defeated. "You bastard! Where the hell are you looking at? I am your opponent! There's no time for you to be looking away!" Roy yelled as he raised his bow and shot a fire arrow at Skarmwary, but Skarmwary flew to the side and dodged the arrow. Then he fired five missiles out of his wings at Roy consecutively, but Roy flew downwards and dodged the missiles, which all hit the top of a high rise building, and then the top of that building was set on fire. Then Roy shot ten fire arrows at Skarmwary consecutively, but Skarmwary dived down through the air, avoiding all the fire arrows, which kept flying up until they dissapeared through the clouds. While dodging the arrows, Skarmwary dived towards Roy and tried to peck him while flying, but Roy blocked the attack with his bow. Then Skarmwary kept flying forward, pushing Roy back through the air. Then Skarmwary flapped Roy with his wings, sending him backflipping through the air as he tumbled downward from the sky. While Roy was tumbling in the air, Skarmwary fired two missiles at him. Then Roy's feet landed on the side of a building, and then he wallkicked off it one second before the two missiles was about to hit him. Roy just barely dodged the two missiles, which hit the building he wallkicked off before, and then that building started falling down. Then Roy started shooting fire arrows at Skarmwary repeatedly while flying through the air, but Skarmwary just kept flying and dodging the arrows. After a while, Skarmwary used Whirlwind, deflecting many fire arrows which were flying at him. The whirlwind also hit Roy, blowing him across the sky. Then Skarmwary fired a missile at Roy while he was being blown away by the whirlwind. The missile hit Roy, making a big explosion in the sky, and then Roy was sent flying through the air by the explosion. He went flying straight through a building, and he ended up on the other side. However, he regained his balance in the air after flying through the building, as the building created some friction for him when he went flying through it. Then Roy started flying with his angel wings behind many high buildings in the city, hoping to lose Skarmwary. "You're not gonna hide from me!" said Skarmwary as he started blasting many missiles out of his wings at the many buildings, which were all very close to each other. Skarmwary's missiles were destroying the buildings one by one. Eventually, a huge cloud of smoke was created in the air by Skarmwary's missiles. Skarmwary hovered in the air with his wings, watching all the buildings falling down. "Heh! That guy's dead for sure! There's no way he could dodge all those missiles!" said Skarmwary, but then Roy suddenly flew out of the cloud of smoke in the air. He started circling around Skarmwary in the air at extreme speed, shooting many fire arrows at him while doing so. Skarmwary created a huge Whirlwind around his own body in order to guard himself from the many fire arrows which were coming towards him from every single direction, but then after the Whirlwind faded away, Roy flew directly above Skarmwary's head, and then he shot an ice arrow straight down at Skarmwary, freezing him solid, and then he fell straight down from the air, and he landed on a street, making a huge crater in it. The ice around his body also shattered when he hit the ground. "It's over!" said Roy as he shot another arrow straight down from the air at Skarmwary, who was on the ground. This arrow was like a normal arrow, except it had a bomb attached to it. "Don't underestimate me!" said Skarmwary as he avoided the arrow at the last second, and then the missile hit the ground, a causing a huge explosion which made the crater in the ground even bigger. Then Skarmwary started flying along the streets at extreme speed. He was flying very close to the surface of the ground, and he was destroying many vehicles on the street when he crashed into them. "Now you're the one trying to hide!" said Roy as he dived down to the street where Skarmwary was. Then he started flying close to the surface of the ground too as he chased after Skarmwary and started shooting many fire arrows at him, but Skarmwary was gradually flying higher and higher in order to dodge the fire arrows, which hit many cars and people in the distance. Skarmwary was also making many sharp turns as he flew through the maze of the streets, trying to lose Roy. After being chased for a while, Skarmwary decided to turn around and face Roy while still in mid-air. Skarmwary, while still flying backwards through the air, started shooting missiles at Roy, but Roy flew up to avoid the missiles, which all crashed onto a fuel truck, blowing it up. Then Roy started shooting many arrows with bombs attached to them diagonally down from the air at Skarmwary, but Skarmwary, who was still flying backwards through the air, was dodging the arrows, which caused many craters in the ground when they hit the ground and exploded. Then Roy kept shooting bomb arrows at Skarmwary, who was flying backwards, avoiding the arrows. "You... you're strong..." said Skarmwary as he was flying back. "You bet I am!" said Roy as he continued to fire bomb arrows at Skarmwary. "The other beings of Heaven... are they all as strong as you too?" asked Skarmwary. "Well, I hate to admit it... but I'm not too strong compared to some of the other guys in Heaven..." said Roy as he looked away. "What?" asked Skarmwary. Roy said "To someone of your level, I certainly seem powerful. But... there's still the Ten Holy Elites above me...". "Ten...Holy Elites?" asked Skarmwary. Roy said "It is a rank given by Lord Ryuumaru, the King of Heaven, to the ten strongest beings of Heaven other than himself. Let me get this to you clearly. Compared to us, the power of the Ten Holy Elites are in a completely different dimension altogether. And lastly, out of the six of us who came down from Heaven today... there is one Holy Elite among us...". Skarmwary was surpirised. "He is Mag... the most bloodthirsty being in the whole of Heaven" Roy continued. Skarmwary was surprised for a second, but then he said "I see... so that Holy Elite who came down here... he must be that blue-haired guy...". "So what of it?" asked Roy. Skarmwary said "Too bad for him though... his opponent is a Chosen Champion". "Chosen Champion?" asked Roy. "Yes. Chosen Champion... it is a title given to the seven strongest machines on Chaos Planet, next to ChaosLord and the three Chaos Generals... The Chosen Champions are each given a rank representing their power. That Holy Elite's opponent... is one of the seven Chosen Champions... He holds the sixth spot" said Skarmwary. "Oh, is that so?" said Roy. "Yes. The sixth Chosen Champion... Mega-Emperor" said Skarmwary. "Heh! I can only wonder who'll win then" said Roy as he suddenly shot a special arrow made from pure blue spirit energy in front of Skarmwary. "Shit!" said Skarmwary, who was busy talking and not focusing on the battle, as he saw that he was about to fly straight into the arrow, and then he quickly flew to the side, just barely dodging the arrow, which went straight through the heart of a fat man, killing him. Then Skarmwary started flying away close to the surface of a railway track, while Roy continued to chase him. Then Roy looked forward and saw that a train was coming towards Skarmwary! Roy shot an arrow with a bomb attached to it at Skarmwary, who moved to the side and dodged the arrow, but then the arrow hit the train and exploded. The train got derailed, and then it fell straight on Skarmwary, knocking him down to the ground. "Eat this!" said Roy as he flew next to Skarmwary and shot a bomb arrow at him from a close distance, sending him sliding back on his feet along a road. His feet were also creating a deep mark on the road as he slid along it. Then Roy shot another bomb arrow at Skarmwary, who made a sharp turn in order to dodge the arrow, but he crashed straight into a Church. Then Roy flew up into the sky and shot a bomb arrow at the Church which Skarmwary was in, blowing it up in a huge explosion. Some smoke was covering the place where the Church used to be, but then Skarmwary suddenly shot a missile out of the smoke at Roy. Roy moved to the side to dodge the missile, but while he was busy dodging it, Skarmwary flew behind him and grabbed him by the shirt with his feet. "You! Let go of me!" said Roy as he struggled to escape from Skarmwary, but he couldn't. Then Skarmwary flew high up in the air while still grabbing Roy. From there, Skarmwary started doing many backflips in the air, and he was flipping faster and faster. After a while, he let go of Roy, and then Roy got tossed diagonally downward from the sky, and he crashed into a building, creating a huge hole in it before landing inside. Then Skarmwary shot thirty missiles at the building, blowing it up completely, but not before Roy escaped by flying out of it, and then he started flying close to the surface of the sea, which was right next to the building. Then Skarmwary, who was flying in the air above the sea, started blasting many missiles at Roy, who was dodging them as he was flying at supersonic speed close to the sea's surface. Then one of the missiles was about to hit Roy, but he dived under the water, avoiding it. Then he emerged from the water and started shooting many fire arrows at Skarmwary, but Skarmwary was using Whirlwind to deflect them. The Whirlwinds also hit the ocean, summoning many large tsunamis, which fortunately all travelled out into the ocean. Roy kept shooting fire arrows at Skarmwary, who was deflecting them with Whirlwind and creating tsunamis in the process. But then Roy suddenly shot an arrow made from blue spirit energy at Skarmwary. Skarmwary's Whirlwind could not deflect that arrow, and Skarmwary, who was used to deflecting fire arrows, could not react in time before the blue arrow hit him, and then he fell into the water. "Die!" said Roy as he shot an ice arrow into the part of the water where Skarmwary was in, freezing it solid. "This is it!" said Roy as he landed on the part of the water which was frozen, but then Skarmwary suddenly used Steel Wing, breaking out of the ice, and then he Drill Pecked Roy at the back. "Fυck!" said Roy as his back started bleeding badly, and he was also sent flying. Then Skarmwary flew up to Roy and tried to peck him, but Roy blocked the attack with his bow. Then Skarmwary kept pecking at Roy's bow repeatedly. After pecking at it twenty times, he blasted a missile at Roy from point-blank range, knocking him into the ocean. "Now I'll finish you!" said Skarmwary as he shot some torpedos into the water. "Die a watery death!" said Skarmwary as he was about to leave, thinking Roy had been finished off.

Meanwhile, Roy was still under the water. He shot some arrows made from blue spirit energy at the torpedos which Skarmwary fired at him, destroying them befor