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Topic: The Great Island [purely off-the-cuff written story created in thread]
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Jul 26, 08 at 10:41am
The Great Island [purely off-the-cuff written story created in thread]

Greetings.
I am a.. "fairly" new user here, and as a new user this is my first attempt at RGPM XP.

The story you are about to read was written in this post directly out of my imagination. I took no extra time to create fantasies and or realms in which this game takes place. I write as I think.
Please, enjoy.

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The night was evidential that the trees had their suspicions as well. As the moon glowed red, we all knew it had been done that day.
Far to the east, in the forgotten city of Ash, Lord Gauph himself stood in front of his company with blood dripping from each side of his brow, and a slight grin.
He raised his sword to the air with his other arm grasping the chain, he burst with a loud roar as his men did also.

Bandaered, the kingdom to the south, a castle in the sand and a city lost in the illusions of the desert, where his majesty King Gregory VI hails. His men were defeated at the front of Ash where the Gauph's men entered the Great Island.
The decree was set by the king that three messengers would be sent out to the three kingdoms of the Great Island; Halbert, the kingdom of the north, Hanley, the kingdom to the west, and New Ash, the flying city in the center of the Great Island.

These three messengers carried a letter baring the hope of the Great Island itself. If they did not reach their destination and gain the aid of the other three kingdoms, Gauph would surely destroy Bandaered and gain even more power from its chain.

The growing young man, Rimaldo, was one of the chosen messengers.
Just graduating from his knight school this wasn't exactly the assignment he was hoping for.
Upset and still yet willing, young Rimaldo took up the task and begat his ride for Hanley, unknowing that he would be the one to save us all from the clutches of Lord Guaph.


-Characters-
Rimaldo
Age: 21
Occupation: Bandaered Knight, Messenger
Rimaldo is the first of his family to finally make it out of the kitchen in the Bandaered Castle and finish knight school. Upset that after generations before him he finally completed the harsh task, only to be given a small assignment fit for a farmer.
He wields almost anything you give him, and his late tarties for kitchen duty were due to too much time spent studying Knight hood and working on his mechanical apparatus.


Some things people could be wondering:
Q: What the fudge are these chains???
A: The chains are mithril chains with runite crystals on them. The are put in the kingdom's Chamber of Ancients. The chambers are gardens sealed away by magic bindings allowing only the royal blood line to enter. These "Gardens" are opened roves and each has an enormous tree in the middle, which has the spirit of an ancient sealed inside it. The chain keeps the spirit alive in its vessel, and the ancient keeps New Ash afloat, for the lord of ancients resides in New Ashes garden and he keeps all things in the world at balance.

Any new questions will be added and answered.

Working on... a "demo" right now.

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Jul 26, 08 at 3:36pm
re: The Great Island [purely off-the-cuff written story created in thread]

Give it a rest, Divvy. You're not fooling anyone with your 'I am a.. "fairly" new user here' crap... Especially not after the you identified yourself as Divvy in the introduction thread



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Jul 26, 08 at 8:58pm
re: The Great Island [purely off-the-cuff written story created in thread]

..Okay?
...
..So what do you think of the story?

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Jul 27, 08 at 4:57am
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It's not bad. Some of the word choice struck me as a little off, but other than that, not bad at all



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Jul 27, 08 at 8:42am
re: The Great Island [purely off-the-cuff written story created in thread]

Woots.
And what "word choices"? Like "apparatus"? XD

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