Are we doing the IC and OoC chat like they do for other role-playing threads? For example: OoC:

quote Koj

EDIT: Wtf Pichu beat me to it.

...Wait, what did I beat you to?

quote Lorx

Shaving Razor pride! *gives a thumbs up*

Meh, he'll ditch it later along in the story.

IC:

As the sun shines over the horizon, Elliot wakes up to the usual sound of jackhammers and cars outside his window. He gets out of bed and walks over to his broken mirror. After he shaved his chin, he stepped out side and inhaled the fumes of the city. With Razor in hand, he goes out to get something to eat.

Would this be an acceptable way to do this?

I know how it works Lorx, I've done RPs before. Thanks for the insight though.

And one more question, are we allowed to put up another chunk of story, even though someone has posted but they haven't done anything? Like if I would add another piece to Elliot's story, even though Lorx hasn't done anything else to his.

Yes you may just dont double post.So you can post after another person has posted after your post.

Well try to post at least one paragraph or 12 sentences.

Anyone have a name for this RP?I need suggestions...=_=

Heiro walked along the road that connected the rain forest and Henesys.He had just left his home at the Nautilus Harbor to seek out other fighters around Victoria Island.The bush nearest Heiro rustled.He turned around.A snial with a blue shell crouched.The snail tried to pounce on him,but he quickly sidesteped.Heiro braced himself.Again the snail jumped at him.This time He jabbed it across the face with his knuckle.The snail fell uncounscious.He huried away cautious of any attacking monster.It was sundown when Heiro fianlly reached Henesys.He found an Inn,it was in the shape of a mushroom.Opening the doors he found himself in a small lobby.Three wooden chairs were set up against the wall.A young girl with light-brown hair stood on the other side of a counter.looked bored.Well what could you expect of a job where you sit around all day and check people in rooms.He thought.

Heiro advanced to the counter."One room please."

"I'm sorry,but were full tonight"She responed in a sweet voice.

"Well is there anywhere else I can stay for the night?"

"Hmmmm well you can sleep in the basement if you have no where else"

"Thank you that'll do"Heiro smilled.

She lead him to a back room that lead to a a set of stairs.They walked down the stairs and she opened the door at the end of the stairs.

"Well this is it."She said.

"Thank you"Heiro said once more.The basement was a small room with just a bad and a shelf cramed with books.Cobwebs were almost everywhere.He entered the room.

OoC: And now hopefully we can get something accomplished.

Maybe since everyone is such a low level at the moment, "The Moon Bunny's Rebellion?" It got tired of continuously pounding out cake after cake to the nubby parties that could barely protect it anyway.

IC:

After enjoying a stolen breakfast of an apple and a few eggs, Elliot decided to go out and check out the surrounding area.

"That' him!"

Elliot turned around. Running towards him was the store clerk and a small group of officers.

"I'd recognize that haircut anywhere!" the clerk yelled, as he was gasping for breath.

"Boy, stay where you are! Do not try to run!" one of the officers exclaimed.

"Well, it's about time they started to catch on," Elliot murmured to himself. He threw a few stars at the group pursuing him. When the officers looked up after avoiding the stars, Elliot was gone. Only a note, tacked to a pole remained.

The note read,

"Catch me if you can "

Elliot then started to make his way South, towards the hustling, bustling town of Henesys.

While making his way down the road, a strange man in a panic ran and almost knocked Elliot over. After catching himself, he turned and watched the stranger scurry away over the hills. He turned back around while he was thinking "WT-!". Before him stood a giant mushroom, larger than than any mushroom he'd seen before. Reaching for his stars and razor, the beast rushed past him in pursuit of the stranger.

Ventus had been talking to Pio who had been begging him to find Mano's Rainbow Shell.

"Please Ventus, please!" Pio begged latching on to Ventus's leg.
"Pio, I would love to help but for the moment, I'm pretty darn colorblind right now." He replied kicking Pio off his leg while signaling a salutation to his long time friend.

This sucks, thought Ventus. I can't even help anyone out here. Everything is so visual. I hate Henesys. HPQ is ALL about color. The stupid seeds all smell and feel the same. Kerning is more echoy and less colorful.

And so, Ventus escaped the viciously crowded town and ran off to Kerning. The City of Bandits and Assassins...

Nearing Kerning, Ventus noticed a lot of people running away from the town. He smelled a stink. It was very familiar but stronger than normal. It smelled like mushroom. KPQers were in grave danger! Ventus was ready to shoot in the direction of the smell but he felt another presence in front of the mushroom but was unsure if it was a friend or a foe.

EDIT: Too much? hehe

This message was edited by Koj on Aug 04 2009.

OoC: I'm guessing Ventus is blind one.

IC:

"Get out of the way!" Elliot yelled, throwing a handful of stars at the oversized mushroom. "What are you, blind!?"

Elliot stayed at a distance from both, his adversary and this new stranger.

"Well, don't just stand there! Help me!" the young theif shouted at the archer as he was throwing handful after handful of stars. "Jeez, I knew I should of lifted some Mokbis off of some noob."

Elliot was running low on stars. He didn't want to get in close to this unknown enemy, so instead he used his trusty thief skill Dark Sight to avoid damage from the beast.

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Since the mushroom beast was chasing after the archer, Elliot made his way into town. "Hm, looks like a good place to stay for a while."

After resting a bit, Elliot decided to explore the town. There were lots of people gathered in the park.

"Come on! Let us in!" one of the people shouted.

"It's been longer than 10 minutes!" another said.

"Hm, looks like I can maybe get lift some stuff here." Elliot thought to himself.

As he made his way through the crowd, grabbing whatever items he could, he found that everyone was gathering around some girl in a bunny costume.

"God, not this again."

Leaving the crowd to their obsession with the bunny girl, Elliot left the park. As he made his way back to Town Square, he saw two people walking across the way.

"Hm, they look pretty tough. I think it's best I shouldn't mess with them."

After having his fill of the busy town, Elliot decided to travel east, to the forest town of Ellinia, home of the Magicians.

EDIT: Edited the content because of the rules >.>

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Ventus heard stars being thrown, but not in his direction. He heard them flying at the giant mushroom.

He must be on my side since he isn't attacking me. He thought. First, I have to make sure he's out of the way. I'll use Focus. I don't want to hurt him.

Ventus used his Archer skill, Focus. It raised the accuracy of his shot and heightened his working senses. Ventus was more sure of himself now. He quickly grabbed two arrows from his backpack, (check the image ) and readied his arrow, but out of nowhere, the other person had vanished before his... nose!

"Whatever." Ventus said to himself. "Now I have nothing to worry about." Ventus quickly shot a flurry of arrows in pairs of two at the beast. He noticed that the movements of the monster had stopped.

"*sigh* I did it." Ventus said looking down in exhaustion. "That monster was probably five, no, ten levels above me."

Being from Henesys, Ventus was used to a crowd of people cheering for him after killing a monster but the dark empty city of Kerning was much more different than what he was used to. Exhausted, Ventus quickly scooped up his prize and limped his way over to the item shop to restock on more potions and hopefully find somewhere to rest.

This message was edited by Koj on Aug 05 2009.