no one is on the boat
everyone is behind Dolge and Claria

Im going to make my 2 characters brother and sister because... Dolge is the younger brother and Claria is the older sister that ran away before he was born.

Alright I'll continue:

While Jake was looking for the Hookshot until Dolge woke up muttering something. They asked Jake where Murlock was. "He's over there" as Jake pointed towards the volcanoe on the island. Then a tree fell near where Jake pointed. The whole group ran to the tree and saw Murlock and a girl.

"Who are you?" Jake asked the girl
"My name is Claria" the girl redponded
"Yeah but we have bigger things to worry about this girl is my sister!" Dolge exclaimed
"WHAT?!?" the whole group said
"Yeah she knows my name and she rememebers me! How cool is this to actually find my sister!" Dolge said, "Probably the best feeling in the world for me right now!"
"Well sorry to break this reunion you guys..." Aria interrupted, "But turn around and look at that" As she pointed to the sky. "What the hell is that?!?" Aria said.
"It looks like a....oh crap it's a DRAGON!!!" Jake exclaimed.
"I got dibs!" said Riku as he left charging towards the direction of the dragon.
"Wait Riku!" everyone yelled. But he had already gone into the forest....

So I hope you like my new stlye of dialoge lol...

Hahaha! Lol.
I got dibs. nice.

I have a good idea for next peice but Im pretty sure people want to read someone else's style of writing.

Name: Zach
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Birthday: May 21
Physical description: A Ruto with Blonde hair.
Personality: Free spirited, kind, an adventure, and a bit carefree.
Likes and dislikes: Loves magic, but hates people who abuse it.
History: He used to deliver pakages, but now, that he's ran from home, he practices magic.
Family: None, he's an orphan.

Now all you have to do is write and intro for him... have you read all the other pieces? are you up to date?

Hey another person that will use magic is here.

Well Major has been gone or ignoring this but should we let him in anyway?

Yes time to kill a dragon

Not kill a dragon yet! We dont want to kill it because its Claria's friend.
Yeah... I just had to add some conflict in this.

Well time to beat up a dragon then.

No!
No hurting the dragon!
Claria will kill you!
maybe not
you sure, go ahead and beat the dragon... no wait!
in windwaker, the dragon is trapped, and you grapple on its tail to kill the monster.
So as you rush into battle you see monsters hold the dragon in a net, (flying of course) and trap it in the volcano!

Mixture of windwaker and Phantom hourglass

like my idea?

EDIT: I was too late... T_T

I dont think we were killing it yet binary numbers person. Its still far off. near the volcano... so... maybe idk, but you should change that...

What are you talking about saged?

Zach hears a person say they were about to try attack a dragon.

Zach: I heard that. I won't let you hurt such a magnificent creature. Din's Fire!

Launches a fireball at Riku.

lol. Nice replacement 00100100

Riku, I meant that you kill the dragon when we go inside the volcano. Duh.

Okya sounds good.

00100100 is attacking me

I was hoping to put the dragon in the vulcano. So the dragon flies back to the volcano... RIku, you write a piece.

Okay, when I come back from the movie I'm about to go see so probably around 11:30. And 00100100 if you don't want you're character to be hurt too badly send me a pm or post.