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Jun 03, 08 at 12:48pm
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The thing about writing forums is that it can be very hard to manage politically. I don't feel like I'm a good enough writer to be critiquing others works. I'll read their stories and enjoy them, but I think most people prefer critique rather than just a comment saying how much you like it. Now the thing is, if I go off posting my stories without critiquing others some people may think I'm selfish. Drama for the loss?

Also, when will this forum be updated? The featured writer, stories, etc is like 4 years old..

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I tend not to comment on where peple can improve, because usually people write with their hearts and pour their "soul" into their work. I'd rather not personally be told what's wrong with the few poems I write, because I spend such time getting them exactly how I want them to be. You can't criticise pure creativity.
If I think something could be better, doesn't matter. The article in question is an expression of the writer's mind, and I wouldn't want to play with that.



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Jun 19, 08 at 10:13pm
re: General Discussion ~ReMix 10~ Good Reviews!

Who here thinks that poetry should have its own forum or even sub-forum? I think it would be good to separate it from the stories and fan-fics because of the innate differences in the writing styles of each genre... that and I really don't want to have to sift through pages of ramances and sci-fi efore finding another poetry thread besides my own.


Just a suggestion.



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Jul 22, 08 at 5:57pm
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quote Redsnakebite
I tend not to comment on where peple can improve, because usually people write with their hearts and pour their "soul" into their work. I'd rather not personally be told what's wrong with the few poems I write, because I spend such time getting them exactly how I want them to be. You can't criticise pure creativity.
If I think something could be better, doesn't matter. The article in question is an expression of the writer's mind, and I wouldn't want to play with that.
    I criticize by creation, not by finding fault.

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I think there is a way to build people up with your words while critiquing a piece of literature. When I used to write here, I knew I wasn't perfect, and I appreciated what people had to say about what I wrote, good or bad. Writing is a way to express ideas, and if someone has a way to convey those ideas those ideas more effectively, then I would welcome that person's thoughts.



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Jul 23, 08 at 4:14pm
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I honestly have no clue as to whether or not the answer to my question is even on this forum, but I'm thinking of posting different parts of a 600-page novel I'm working on. I need opinions, and not just from my friends. Haha, wouldn't it be pretty bad to post it on Neo? Due to people possibly stealing my ideas and whatnot?



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Jul 23, 08 at 4:29pm
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My novel's on here. Problem is, it's hard to get decent concrit, due to the fourteen-year-olds and their "you can't criticize pure creativity" bollocks. You can if you want to be a better sodding writer.



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Jul 23, 08 at 4:37pm
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quote Deis
My novel's on here. Problem is, it's hard to get decent concrit, due to the fourteen-year-olds and their "you can't criticize pure creativity" bollocks. You can if you want to be a better sodding writer.


Oh, really? Haha, I took a look at your work. Real inspiring, yo. The thing with me is that I plan to publish it when I'm in my early 20's, after I've polished it. But there's no harm in revealing the first few chapters. I'm just paranoid. =P



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So do I, but my early twenties begin in 19 days. I'm looking up advice on query letters atm. There's still polishing to do, but I'm aiming to get those out by my twentieth, which is when $20k will be deleted from Neo.



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Jul 24, 08 at 4:35am
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Oh man, you'd be leaving the teen life. Even though 19 is considered an adult, it's still in the number...!
I'm sure you'd get it all polished up. Me, I'm real perfectionist about my work if I love it. I'd probably never leave it alone. In fact, I know I'll start way back in the prologue once my vocabulary's better in the future, haha.

Good luck with that. If you can, tell everyone how it goes so us writers can see how it's like to start out with the serious processes. ^^b
$20k? I'm probably slow, but...what's that about? o___o

edit: Never mind, I thought you were referring to actual money. LOL.




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quote Deis
My novel's on here. Problem is, it's hard to get decent concrit, due to the fourteen-year-olds and their "you can't criticize pure creativity" bollocks. You can if you want to be a better sodding writer.
Deis, criticizing is allowed in the forum. I just don't allow people to be mean and malicious and outright attack the work of members here.



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Jul 24, 08 at 5:43am
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quote ChiroVette
quote Deis
My novel's on here. Problem is, it's hard to get decent concrit, due to the fourteen-year-olds and their "you can't criticize pure creativity" bollocks. You can if you want to be a better sodding writer.
Deis, criticizing is allowed in the forum. I just don't allow people to be mean and malicious and outright attack the work of members here.
I tend to disagree ChiroVette. I've tried criticizing constructively before but I just get flamed saying my ideas and suggestions are crap and that's probably what led to my outburst. Frankly there's no reason to post my work in this forum anymore because there's no actual critique. All this forum is is a clique of about 10 people posting new repetitive stories every day. I barely get a chance to look at the GOOD work because it's just flooded by all the mediocre pieces that have no thought, grammar or effort put into them. This forum has gone down the drain, especially inbetween the times we didn't have a constant mod watching the forum.

EDIT: Frankly there needs to be a subforum for the joint stories because there's just too many and joint stories aren't worth reading. They may be fun for the authors but other than that they provide nothing else. Looking at the front page right now, half of it is joint stories. It was a good idea back when Deis first presented it, and people put lots of effort into their sections but now it's just annoying.



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quote Deis
My novel's on here. Problem is, it's hard to get decent concrit, due to the fourteen-year-olds and their "you can't criticize pure creativity" bollocks. You can if you want to be a better sodding writer.
Deis, criticizing is allowed in the forum. I just don't allow people to be mean and malicious and outright attack the work of members here.
I didn't say concrit wasn't allowed. I said the forum was overrun by fanbrats who don't know how to do it and don't see the point in it.



Mine's only here so I can direct people to it when they don't have access to word, or their own computers.




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Jul 24, 08 at 6:08am
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quote born2be
I barely get a chance to look at the GOOD work because it's just flooded by all the mediocre pieces that have no thought, grammar or effort put into them.
Haha, I agree with that. Not to be a little harsh, but I stumbled upon a lot of "stories" on here that were meant for "I'll keep going until I run out of ideas". I've seen interesting ones, but there are others that pretty much ruin the effect of reading the beginning of a new story, you know? Well, that's them.

The way you put things, it makes me wonder what this place was like when you said it was better. Hah, my (ridiculously and embarrassingly) lengthy prologue of my own work was kicked back to the second page in a flash. The short stories, the ones with seven lines per post, seem to be the most viewed. Probably because long stories are intimidating. No clue.




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Jul 24, 08 at 6:12am
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quote born2be
I tend to disagree ChiroVette. I've tried criticizing constructively before but I just get flamed saying my ideas and suggestions are crap and that's probably what led to my outburst. Frankly there's no reason to post my work in this forum anymore because there's no actual critique. All this forum is is a clique of about 10 people posting new repetitive stories every day. I barely get a chance to look at the GOOD work because it's just flooded by all the mediocre pieces that have no thought, grammar or effort put into them. This forum has gone down the drain, especially inbetween the times we didn't have a constant mod watching the forum.

EDIT: Frankly there needs to be a subforum for the joint stories because there's just too many and joint stories aren't worth reading. They may be fun for the authors but other than that they provide nothing else. Looking at the front page right now, half of it is joint stories. It was a good idea back when Deis first presented it, and people put lots of effort into their sections but now it's just annoying.
Isn't that the whole idea of Role-Playing? Taking into account everyone in the joint story writes from the perspective of their own character, of course. Then again, the rules in the Role-Playing forum may be too much for them, which could be the reason they are doing it here.

I don't hang around this forum much, since I do prefer Role-Playing, it is so much easier to write if you constantly have to respond to the story of the others. Writing your own story requires a lot more thought and effort. In a Role-Play you can use the creativity and inspiration of others for your own story as well.

But that is quite beside the point. I'll try and hang out here a bit more, and to comment on some stories. Do you have a link to yours, Deis? I couldn't immediately find it. This one, right, Deis?



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Yeah, that one's mine.

I'm a little bit crankier than normal today.




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