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Jul 24, 08 at 7:28am
re: General Discussion ~ReMix 10~ Good Reviews!

The joint stories should either be taken to the role-playing forum, or they should just be gone all together.



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Jul 24, 08 at 7:52am
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quote Deis
I didn't say concrit wasn't allowed. I said the forum was overrun by fanbrats who don't know how to do it and don't see the point in it.
And who exactly does that? I can't name a single regular here that doesn't see the point in it.

And why would Joints go in the RP forum?
We're not Roleplaying anything. We're writing a story.

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Jul 24, 08 at 7:57am
re: General Discussion ~ReMix 10~ Good Reviews!

Cba to find quotes, but I know some people have said, essentially, that any comments other than "omg, you're such a good writer!" aren't welcome.

http://www.neoseeker.com/forums/directmessage.php?m=20475831

^

I'd also disagree about the joints going into the RP forum, but I suppose it depends on how they're carried out. I haven't actually read any of them.




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Jul 24, 08 at 8:01am
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Good example, but those are mainly the people who are just getting into writing and such, (that I see) and people get a lot of favourtism. So, yeah, I'm on the fence about your point. Half and half situation really.

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Jul 24, 08 at 8:11am
re: General Discussion ~ReMix 10~ Good Reviews!

quote Nicole 7
We're not Roleplaying anything. We're writing a story.[/size]
And how is Role-Playing not writing a story?

The few joint stories I have glanced over are carried out exactly like a Role-Play: each person writes about one point of perspective. In fact, in my opinion, the Role-Playing forums could well be subforums of Writing. Except Interactive Role-Playing perhaps.

Of course, that's just my opinion. In any case, if you think Role-Playing is vastly different from writing, you should really head over to the Role-Playing forums and check out some of those Role-Plays, you'll be surprised at what you find.



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Jul 24, 08 at 8:15am
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My opening sucks.

This is problematic, because it's the first thing people see.




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Jul 24, 08 at 8:49am
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quote Nicole 7
Good example, but those are mainly the people who are just getting into writing and such, (that I see) and people get a lot of favourtism. So, yeah, I'm on the fence about your point. Half and half situation really.

No, pretty much everyone in this forum only appreciates comments such as "OMG YOU'RE SO GODO KJDFJASDKFJSDALJF ". I've just given up helping most of the people.

And I don't see how joint stories aren't exactly like role-playing. Role-players write a collaborative story to get different character development and opinions. This is exactly what they're doing in the writing forum but it's not meant to be done in this forum. They can go plague another forum.



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Jul 24, 08 at 8:54am
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I barely ever get comments.

Here

Or Here

The only comments certain people give are like, "Great characters, he's cool", stuff like that. You can C + C all you want, I don't care. It's only going to help me improve.

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Jul 24, 08 at 9:01am
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That's the point. This forum is crap because no one gives criticism and if a few select people actually try to help we get flamed by most people.

Prime example: http://www.neoseeker.com/forums/32/t1199763-tip/

I won't read your joint story, because I hate those, but maybe I'll look at the other one.

EDIT: Oh wait, they're both joint stories. Sorry.

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Jul 24, 08 at 8:23pm
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We should have a REQUIREMENT to state whether or not a story is a Short Story or not. I'm clicking all of these links to interesting titles, and they all sound like 13-year-old fan-fictions, lol.

Oh...
Sigh, sigh, sigh.




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That's the point. This forum is crap because no one gives criticism and if a few select people actually try to help we get flamed by most people
I agree. Well, I don't think the forum is crap, but I wish people would actually give some constructive critism (I haven't actually wrote anything yet, not sure what to write, but I've been looking at some other stories). I hate it when people just tell me that my story is great. I need to know why its great, so I can keep it up, and if there's anything to change. I'm never going to get better if I don't know how to improve.

I don't really know what to say about joint stories, so I'll leave that topic alone (for now).



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Aug 09, 08 at 8:36am
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Would it be possible to have an general award thread made for this forum? Where we could vote for the person who best befits each category?

Similar to the General Neo awards, just different categories?

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Aug 09, 08 at 9:20am
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quote born2be

No, pretty much everyone in this forum only appreciates comments such as "OMG YOU'RE SO GODO KJDFJASDKFJSDALJF ". I've just given up helping most of the people.
Ever since a few weeks ago, I've actually been wanting real criticism. I only have one more chapter to go on Losing Myself, which was my first story I've written in the paragraph/chapter style. Basically I just think people are too lazy to read the long posts, that's why they pass over it.



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Aug 09, 08 at 11:09am
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I have to agree with Caitlin there. All the comments I ever get now are "Wow HH/Marie, that's like amazing! I really like the name [insert my character's name here please]!" and "OMG WOW CONTINUE OMG"

I've never gotten actual CC before, just stupid comments like that which are just a few words. Even one line of something would be okay, as long as it has constructive advice and comments in it. All we hear today is "OMG IS SO AND SO GUNNA DAI?!ONESHIFT!"



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Aug 09, 08 at 2:30pm
re: General Discussion ~ReMix 10~ Good Reviews!

Yeah, I mean, I like comments that are nice, and people saying they like my story. But I don't wanna keep seeing: "Like it. Continue." No, I wanna see stuff like, "What's gonna happen? Is he still alive? Please, I'm into this!" It's nice to see people ask questions about your story, because it means they're following it. But still, I don't like predictions such as, "I bet she dies. =)" That just ruins the whole story.

My point is, encouraging posts and criticized posts are what I'm really looking for. Not stupid one-liner posts.



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