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Locket [14+ C&C welcome]

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I read my book as I walked in the park right enxt to the lake. it was Nearly Sun Set on this clear summer day. someone Bumped into me and I dropped my Book. Some other books had fallen on the dirt floor as well. I looked up and I saw a girl with purple hair that was in a braid and wore Big Square Glasses.

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Chapter One
The Girl that Cried




"Sorry" I said kneeling down and helping her pick up her books. I found a golden locket that a small Diamond in the middle. as I reached for it her hand touched mine.

"Sorry" She whispered picking up the locket and taking the books.

"I didn't mean to bump into you sorry sorry" She apologized

"Really its fine no worries" I told her. I looked at her again were have I seen her from

"Hey did you go to Klepto Middle school" I asked

"Yes I made the Honor role in the last year of middle school" She told me

"So that's were I've seen you before" I replied

"I already knew who you were, your the boy the girls Coo over, Victor" She replied

"Sorry But I don't remember your name" I replied

"Its okay No one really knows who I am anyway...I'm Robin" She told me

"Are you going to G.A.B. High School this school year?" I asked

"Yes I am" She replied

I looked at her clothes and they had some dirt on them

"I'll walk you home" I told her

"You don't have too" She replied

"it was my fault you got all dirty anyway I had my nose in a book and I wasn't looking were I was going" I replied sighing

"Okay..." She replied.

So me and Robin started walking to the Exit of the park.

I heard a sniffle and I looked at Robin she had tears flowing from her cheeks. I stopped walking and asked her what was wrong.


"Its nothing" Robin told me Smiling, But I saw though her smile

"I can see why no one knows you, your a horrible liar and shy also" I told her

"Really I live around a woman who cries every day" I replied

"I'm don't feel that comfortable tell something like to someone that I barely know" Robin told me looking away but still crying.

"Alright but keeping sadness inside of yourself will only rot inside of you and make you a horrible person...Also Sadness causes Pimples" I told her

"I'll tell you on the first day of day of school at the entrance to the school" She told me.

The first Day of school...


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This is really interesting.

Just one thing, though - I noticed you put capitals at the beginning of words like diamond, sadness and bumped. If you correct these it will be perfect.




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Interesting concept. Really interesting.

Renesmee got the major problem but it'd be nice to have some more description so we know what they look like.




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This is good, but I agree with Anime Ashley.
Your story overall needs to be more descriptive. ^^

I really like how you started your story though. Can't wait to read more! =D

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Thanks
Caps are my favorite part of the key board -sweat drop-
so I keep trying to not capitalize words ^^'
I feel really Happy about this story so I PROMIS THIS TIME I SWEAR I WILL FINISH THIS STORY NO MATTER WHAT!!
Just please keep Commenting. I don't care if you make me feel bad about the story as long as it'll help me with my writing I wont care.

Chapter Two
Weird Neignorhood


I just followed Robin because I knew nothing about this girl only that we went to the same school, and she cries for reasons that she refused to tell me.
I felt something Skitter across my foot and I jumped

"Whats the matter?" She asked

"N-Nothing" I replied

We passed by a homeless man that had a cardboard sign that said
"spare $20's?"
Robin Stopped and dropped some money in the homeless man's can that next to him

"Much appreciated Robin" He said

"No problem Dan" Robin Repiled

What the hell kind of Neigborhood is this??

Then we walked past an open man hole that had a real finger sticking out of it.
then we walked up a lot of wooden steps then a wild Raccoon jumped at Robin I was about to jump in front of her but she Kicked the Racoon away before he came close to her face.

"Uhh what kind of Neigborehood is this?" I asked

"The Geigto" She replied as she continued walking

I had never been to this part of town before. Once we were at the top of the steps an African American guy was drinking wine out of a paper bag. there was a busy Street to cross. Robin Looked worried and kept looking at the cars as the went by.

We waited on the side walk for 10 minutes.
"OH MY GOD ISN'T THERE A CROSS WALK SOMEWHERE?! DAMN IT!" I yelled

"3 miles from here" Robin Repiled

"This is *bleep*ing Ridicolus" I replied. I picked her up and carried her across the Street. The cars Honked and people screamed but I just yelled

"WELL IS IT MY FAULT THAT SHE NEEDED TO GET HOME? NO! ITS THE WAY THIS *bleep*ING STREET WAS BUILT! A RETARDED PERSON MUST HAVE BUILT IT!"

I let her down after we had crossed and all of cars going again.
"Y-You didn't have to pick me up..." She told me

"Yeah but only across the street I realized your so tiny, are you really going to be in high school? or did you get to skip a few grades because of your Grades" I replied

"I-I am going to be in High school! I'm G-Going to be 15!" She yelled

She wasn't lying I just wanted to see what she would say.
I looked back across the street and I didn't realize we were so high up a hill that we could see the hole sky and the ocean. The horizon was Yellow and Pink and the more it went up into the sky it got more blue until it was a black sky.

"Even though my Neigborhood is really scary and can be Dangerus I love it" Robin told me with a warm smile on her face.


"Yeah it is really nice up here" I replied.

"Well My apartment Building is right behind us so you should get going my Father and Mother are very strict about Boys" Robin told me.

"Yeah well Maybe I'll see you around Robin" I told her. I looked at her Apartment. It didn't have anywhere for someone to park. It only had Biycle Rack's. and it was a three floor building. It was painted white and a lot of the windows in the building were Broken.

"Get going! Do you want to die?!" Robin Whispered from two floors Above

"Alright I'm going I'm going" I replied walking away.


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Chapter three
Remember the time


It was already 9:00PM once I got home. I knew I'd be yelled at by my Grandfather for being late. But as I walked up to my home I saw a car parked in the driveway that I hadn't ever seen before. It was My Aunt Marnie, the biggest Snob I ever met, all she does is trick people like my Grandmother to tell her about Secrets and Gossip. My aunt is always very nicely dressed with her long brown hair always down, and her red dresses and that Giant diamond wedding ring. I was about to open the door when I heard My grandmother talking. I listened in before I opened the front door.

"Oh such a shame! Victor's Father died when he was only 2 years old such a pity and not that his mother was all that bad but I'm glad she went missing less people at the family Reunion! So anyway with no one to take poor Victor in Me and his Grandfather did! But sometimes he can be so Stubborn!" My grandmother said.

"Kana! Stop telling this little slut secrets! I don't even like the fact that she's in my house! She only married my son for his money! WELL GUESS WHAT! my son doesn't have all the money and the estates, I do! And I sure as hell am NOT giving one cent to a little whore like you anything!" My grandfather yelled

"Now now Larry don't be so cruel! she's are guest! cant you show one bit of respect?" My grandmother yelled.
I had enough of this. I opened the door and didn't look at anyone. I only went to my room.

"NOW LOOK AT WHAT YOU DID! HE'S ALREADY SUISIDLE! YOU DONT NEED TO PUSH THE LIMIT KANA!" I heard my Grandfather yell.
Everything else was mumble out.

It was true that my father is dead and my mother has been missing for years, it had been so long many people have given up looking for her. My mother was very kind to everyone. She never cried around me she always appear happy to everyone. But I knew that once I knew about my father that she was very depressed. The last Night that I saw her before she went missing she gave me a toy car that was very old. She didn't say a word to me that night. and then I never saw her again. That was around when I was 6,
When family members Talk about me and pity me they always say that my parents my fault for causing me pain but I was always okay with that. Some family members say that I was forced to grow up faster than other children because of those hardships.


I was picked to stay with my grandparents because of they're first son. They're first son died when he was 3 and My grandparents refused to have anymore children until a few years later.
They're has been a lot of talk that my Grandfather will be dieing soon, so many of my aunts and uncles have been coming by so they can find out who gets the money. But no one knows were the Will is though.
Francly I think that they're all a bunch of cheap Bastards! I've been living with my grandparents since my mother went missing and they never visited this often. We have about 3 family members coming by every week. I only have so many family members!! One came by the other day saying that he was my grandfathers Father and he was dressed as Dark Vader.

I decided to go to sleep because it was so late. Goodnight.


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Awsome story.



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Chapter 3 is very well-written. =]
But watch out for that caps key!

I can't wait to see what else your going to write. ^^


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Damn it! Caps are my worst habbit -_-'



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That maybe true, but you are getting better at them. Keep going.



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CHAPTER *bleep*ING FOUR!
FINALLY CHAPTER FOUR!


I woke up the sounds of pots and pans coming from the kitchen that nearly gave me a heart attack. I walked out to the kitchen to find my Grandfather smoking a cigarette and reading the paper and my Grandmother going though all of the Cabinets

"THERES NO FOOD IN THIS HOUSE!!" She yelled
I slowly walked away

"OH NO! YOUR GOING FOOD SHOPPIND TODAY VICTOR!" My grandmother yelled throwing a wooden spoon at my head

"Why?! WHY CANT WE JUST ORDER OUT FOR ONCE?!" I yelled

"Because then we'd all get fat and die" My grandfather replied

"NOW GET OUT OF THE DAMN HOUSE AND BUY SOME FOOD OR YOU HAVE TOO..." my grandmother yelled then she smiled

"You have to give your Grandfather a spongebath" She laughed
I looked at grandfather

"THATS CRUEL AND UNUSUAL PUNISMENT!" I yelled

"THEN GET THE *bleep* OUT OF THE HOUSE AND GO BUY SOME FOOD!" She yelled

"FINE! BUT IF MORE OF FAMILY MEMBERS COME BY KEEP YOUR BIG MOUTH SHUT! JUST BECAUSE I'M ORPHAN DOESN'T MEAN I DONT CARE ABOUT YOU TELLING PEOPLE ABOUT MY PARENTS YOU FAT OLD WOMAN!" I yelled storming out the door and then slamming it so hard that the picture next to the door fell down as I walked to the supermarket.

I sighed
It was so early in the morning who goes to the supermarket this early?
I stopped walking at looked at the clouds

"AGH! GET OUT OF THE WAY THE BREAKS FELL OFF! AND I CANT STOP THIS THING!!" Someone yelled from behind I turned around and saw a bike going down the hill faster than a sports car

"AHH!!" I screamed
I jumped into the bush next to me as the bike went right where i was just standing.
Then I saw the brown braid and knew who that was.
"ROBIN! HOLY CRAP!! HOLD ON ROBIN!!" I yelled running down the street trying to help her.
I was almost fast enough to catch up but not to much I could barely reach her, and I knew that there was a busy inner section that was always busy in the morning coming up. She would be ran over if I didn't do anything soon. I grabbed onto her white sweater and pulled her off the bike. I fell back. Her body had turned and faced me. I gulped I closed my eyes and when I opened them I was laying on the grass of someones lawn with Robin on top of me passed out.

"Robin?...Robin...?" I asked poking her head. I sighed, I picked her up and carried her I knew where her apartment was it was an hour walk but I need some time to think anyway. Robin had a dark white sweater that was probably a hand-me-down and a long black skirt on today and she had some old boots on too.
Robin was really light it might be because she's so thin and small.
She seemed shy and Exticable from what I knew about her so far.
But I feel a little odd around her too...
I cant really explain it though. After about half an hour I think she woke up. Then when I felt her body jump I knew that she was awake. I let her down. She was blushing so much her face practically turned scarlet.

"V-Victor...Did you carry me?" She asked

"Well yeah, you passed out when you fell on me hey anyway what the hell was wrong with your bike?" I asked

"It was my sisters its very old though, plus she might have messed with it just so I could get hurt" She told me not looking me in the eye.

"Thats horrible do you and your sister hate each other?" I asked

"We are Rivals, but she pretty much do whatever she wants since she's the favorite because she's older" Robin told me.
It sounded like life for robin wasn't very nice for her.

Then Robin fell on the floor laughing her ass off
"WERE YOU LYING?!" I yelled

Robin just laughed at me
"Its nothing, I just laugh at things at random is all" Robin laughed

I saw tears coming out of her eyes
"Hey are you okay?" I asked Kneeling on the floor.
she stopped for a second but her face was practically on the ground

"Laugh when you need to cry or smile when you need to cry and you can hind your depression..."I heard robin mumble under her breath. She looked up and smiled at me.
"Dont worry about me too much okay Victor?" She told me

"Alright..." I replied I looked at her clothes and saw that they were all dirty and muddy
"Hey your a mess" I told her

"UGH! I HAVE TO GET THE WASH HOUSE! IF I GO HOME LOOKING LIKE THIS MY SISTER WILL MAKE SOMETHING UP TO MAKE MY MOM AND DAD ANGRY AT ME WHEN I DIDN'T DO ANYTHING! I WAS JUST GOING TO THE SUPERMARKET TO GET MILK FOR GODS SAKE!" Robin Yelled Freaking out.

"My house isn't to far from here you can wash up there, we have a washer and a dryer so you can clean your clothes too and they will only take 30 minutes, my grandfather probably already left the house and my Grandmother disappears to random places after 8:00 its 7:30 it take 30 minutes on foot to get to my house from here think your parents will notice your gone?" I told her

"My dad works as a photographer so he might have already left to the photo shoot or to go look at camera's in shop windows then he goes to work, my mom had to go to her office this morning at 6 and my sister went off to god knows where, and I know that my dad comes home at 8:30 PM for dinner same for my mom and my sister comes at 6:30 to demand food right when she gets home" Robin told me
So we walked to my house my grandmother's car and my Grandfathers car were both gone so I went inside with her.
and I showed her to the laundry room.
I went to the fridge to find lots of left overs
"Why didn't they just eat this for breakfast damn old people" i sighed.

"Victor!" I heard robin call me

"I DONT HAVE ANYTHING TO WEAR! BUT MY BRA AND UNDERWEAR!" She yelled

my face turned super red and covered my mouth and shivered.
"Can I borrow some of your clothes or your parents clothes?" Robin asked hiding herself behind the door.
I shook my head yes and ran to my grandmothers room.
and the only thing I could find was a dress that was purple and was nearly see though. I grave it to robin and in a few minutes she came out wearing it.

"Is it to big on me?" she asked

"N...No its fits you fine" I told her under my breath.
"I'M A LIAR! I'M A DIRTY LIAR! PERVARTED THOUGHTS GET OUT OF MY MIND! I HAVE SOILED MY LAST OUNCE OF HONOR WITH THAT LAST SENTACEI SAID TO ROBIN! WHAT THE HELL IS THE MATTER WITH ME?! I JUST MET THIS GIRL AND I'M ALREADY BEING PERVARTED IN MY MIND!!" I thought to myself wanting to hit myself because i knew that if I did tell her that it was too big on her she'd think I was a pervert.

"Do you know when my clothes will be dry?" She asked

"T-Ten Minutes...The Dryer T-Takes twenty minutes though" I replied.
"So what should we do while we wait?" She asked
UGH! A HORRIBLE THOUGH FLASHED THOUGH MY HEAD THAT I WAS ABOUT TO SAY! SO PERVARTED I CANT EVEN MENTCHEN THAT!! SO I HAD TO SAY SOMETHING ELSE! NO MATTER HOW STUPID THE NEXT COMMENT CAME OUT.

"LETS FEED MY PET SNAIL GARY!" I yelled
I was that stupid...Really I had to say the first thing that came to mind after that perverted thought

"You have a pet...Snail?" She asked

"NO! I LIED! THE DRESS I GAVE YOU IS NEARLY SEE THOUGH! ITS TO BIG ON YOU! BUT ITS NOT MY FAULT! THATS THE ONLY THING MY GRANDMOTHER HAD! AND YOU ME AND MY GRANDFATHER WEAR REALLY BIG CLOTHES SO THAT WOULD ALSO BE BAD BUT THEN YOUR BOOBS WOULDN'T SHOW AND THEN MY PERVARTED THOUGHTS WOULD GO AWAY AND THEN WE WOULDN'T BE HAVING THIS STUPID MOUMENT! BUT YOU KNOW WHAT?! I'M A TEENAGE BOY! I HAVE PERVARTED THOUGHTS AROUND THIS AGE!!!!!" I yelled

Robin looked like she was going to faint and like she wasn't listing to anything I said.
then she fell forward I caught her and sat on the ground with her in my hands again. I sighed
"well at least i got my thoughts out..." I sighed in relief. then I heard someone coming, I gasped I tried to pick up robin but all of a sudden she was heavy, then the door opened my hands on her waist, my head on her stomach, and my aunt Shannon standing in the door way smiling with her mouth opened.

"Oh dear and your one year younger than I was when I did this" My aunt laughed

"AHHHH!! ITS NOT WHAT IT LOOKS LIKE!!" I screamed.


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DAMN IT! WRITTERS BLOCK!! Hell I'll just wing it

Chapter Four
Hmm...?


I let go of Robin and let her fall on the floor and shut the door on my aunt then I ran over to Robin
"ROBIN! WAKE UP! YOU NEED TO GET THE HELL UP!!" I screamed
She wasn't waking up, I ran over to the sink and put water in a glass then I ran over to robin and threw the water on her face. She woke up
"WHY DO YOU PASS OUT SO MUCH?!" I screamed in my head I wanted to ask her that but I knew it would be rude to ask her that.

"You should go check on your clothes I just got a call from my Grandmother she said that she's coming home really quick she left her cellphone here and I'm supposed to be at the supermarket" I told her
"Okay, thanks for letting me use your washing machine again" Robin told me
I didn't reply. When she got out she was wearing the clothes she was wearing before but they were clean now.

"Okay, have a nice day it was nice seeing you again Robin" I said pushing her towards the door.
She made me stop pushing her
"Your a real Friend Thanks Victor" Robin smiled. Then she walked out the door but My grandmother was at the door.
I MADE UP HER COMING HOME REAL QUICK!! WHY DOES THE UNIVERSE HATE ME?!

"Hello Ma'am" Robin said to my grandmother she must not have thought that that was my grandmother...
My Grandmother walked into the house smiling as Robin walked away happily.

"Victor, who was that?" My grandmother asked
I was silent

"Victor" My Grandmother asked
only one thing that would get me out of this mess.

"I'M A HORMONAL TEEN WITH NEEDS WOMAN! I DONT EVEN KNOW HOW TO TALK WITH GIRLS! WHY DO YOU ALWAYS HAVE TO CRUSH MY SPIRET WHEN I THINK I'M GETTING SOMEWHERE WITH MY LIFE?!" I yelled then I ran out of the house.

I was still curious about Robin, she cried, and she faints a lot. she did say I was her "Friend" now, so friends should be curious about other friends.
I ran after her and caught up to her.
"Hello Robin" She greeted

"do you need something?" She asked

"Well, I'm worried about you" I told her

"Really How?" She asked

"Well You cry a lot, and you've fainted 2 times in the last day" I replied

"Do you I really have to tell you?" I asked

"You called me your friend, and as a friend I want to make sure your okay" I told her
She stopped walking

"You wouldn't understand me Victor" She told me
I walked over to her

"I will" I replied. She turned over to me
She sighed

"I don't know how to explain..." She sighed
She grabbed my arm and wrote something down

"Visit this Adress at 10 and say you want to work for the day, don't say your a my friend or anything just say you want to work for one day and one day only" She told me.

"I have to go now though" I told her then she ran away.

I looked at my arm. And I started walking to the address. It was in a shopping Plaza. the place that she sent me too was already open I looked at my watch it was 11.
"How did I lose track of time?" I asked myself. I walked in and something beeped and it startled me a little bit. I was in something that was a like a lobby, but it was very calming. There was a small window with curtains and a white door.

then a young looking woman popped out of the Door and greeted me
"HELLO! and welcome to my Health wellness center! Arent I pretty?" She asked
I didn't Answer

"ANYWAY ISN'T MY PLACE JUST FAABULOUS! I BET YOUR WONDERING HOW OLD I AM BECAUSE I'M SO PRETTY!" She laughed
No words out of my my mouth

"Well I'm 3 years old!" She told me

"OH AHAHAHA! I'M ONLY JOKING! NO NEED TO OVER REACT!" She laughed

"Can I work here for a day?" I asked
She stopped smiling.

"Sure the worthless cleaning lady is down the hall just ask her what to do its the only power she'll get in her hole life" The woman told me walking away.

"should I take my shoes off or what?" I asked but she ignored me then A girl wearing glasses and her hair in a ponytail walked up to me. She was wearing a green bandanna, A white shirt with a white apron over it and yoga jeans she was holding a Broom in her hand.

"You did come" She whispered smiling

"Robin?" I asked she nodded. We walked down the hall way. the place was pretty small but it was a very nice place. when we got to the end of the hall there were to bath rooms and a lot of shoji screens. Robin moved one of the Shoji screens and handed me a swifer.

"Now remember your not my friend" she whispered. She started sweeping down the hall and I followed as I swiffered with the swiffer broom.

"Huh? why are the lights off in this room during business hours?" Robin asked poking her head in the.
Then she screamed and jumped out of the room and fell on the floor. Then another young looking girl came out she had long black hair that covered one of her eyes and she wore a dark shirt and Ripped jeans. She was kinda fat to be honest too. she had a skull looking mask in her hands she was laughing at Robin

"Haha! Your so stupid Robin how are we related?" She laughed

"Yeah how are we related" Robin sighed

"WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT?! THIS IS A PEACEFUL PLACE! IF THEY'RE IS SCREAMING ITS NOT PEACEFULL!" The woman who greeted me before yelled

The girl that scared robin grabbed robin handed her the mask and the girl sat down on the ground and licked her eye linger and made it look like she was crying and screamed.
Then the woman came to see what was happening she ran over to the girl

"Robin! How dare you scare your sister! and your boss! This is coming out of your pay check!" The woman yelled helping pick up the girl. after they left Robin sighed and looked sad

"That was my Sister and my mom, My mom always takes my sisters side, she forced me to work here when I was 10 and I only got a pay check once she's taken so much money out of my pay that I don't even get pained anymore, and its because of my damn sister" Robin sighed

"...Your sister looked kinda pretty from where I was standing but she's really ugly up front" I replied

"I know, Its because I'm the youngest that my mother and sister don't care about me" Robin told me

"Life for me is like a picture, there were to many people in the photo and I was faded out of the photo, I get forgotten a lot sometimes I wish I could be saved" Robin continued

"So why don't you quit?" I asked

"Because it wont end Victor, I still have to go home and deal with it too" she sighed
I sighed too. I grabbed her arm and went over to the where the robins mom and sister were.

"Listen I quit, Robin Quits, Your both Lazy bastards if you cant even pay attached to Robin then why have a second child?" I yelled then I lead Robin out

"Why did you do that?" Robin asked

"Because you were to scared to do it yourself" I told her
Robin was Silant

"T...Thank you Victor" Robin told me

"I wanted to let you know when school started but I thought since I called you friend today then I should just let you know" she told me

"I get why you cry but why do you faint now? surely you can tell me that now" I asked her

"Remember when I told you about being faded out a of a picture before, well I don't get to eat a lot because no one leaves anything for me to really eat so I faint from hunger, that's why I never miss a day of school because I at there" Robin told me

"...What the hell kind of family do you live in?" I asked her. Robin's eyes got watery and tears started falling from her cheek.
I hugged her.


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Aug 17, 09 at 9:18am
re: Locket [14+ C&C welcome]

sorry I haven't posted for a little bit I've been Busy.
BUT I WANT MORE COMMENTS D:> also my eyes have been itchy as hell! I've been trying everything to stop it from itching SO IF YOU KNOW HOW TO GET RID OF MY ICHY EYE BALLS DO TELL!!

Chapter Five
"Buy me some smokes kid"


It had been a few days since I last saw Robin and it was my grandfathers day off so I stayed with him at the house that day. He liked to sit on the kitchen counter and read the news paper while smoking. I didn't really do anything with my grandfather we didn't have much in common. when I was a kid he never liked me he always insulted me when I was a kid. now that I lived with him he just ordered me around.
so today I just decided to lay down on the couch and read Fever (a book released a few years ago about a girl who tries to escape yellow fever in Philadelphia, one of Animegurl's favorite books that aren't manga which is very rare)


"Hey grandfather do you ever read books?" I asked

"Why the hell would I want to read books? its all lies, the newspaper is pure truth" My grandfather replied

"Not all of them are, some of them can be autobiography of people of it can be about important events some students use them for reports" I told him

"But do they ever get a passing grade? No" he replied.
I cant argue with this man he can make some of the most ridiculous stuff sound real.

I heard my grandfather shake a box and sigh
"Hey Go buy me some smokes kid make yourself useful" My grandfather said throwing a box of empty cigarettes at my head.

"I cant buy these! I'm under age! They would never sell it to me!" I yelled

"Dont make me get the grits out boy!" My grandfather yelled

"you watch 'the secret life of bee's' to much" I sighed

"Ah shut the *bleep* up! I'll just go with you to prove you wrong" My grandfather said letting his cigarettes fall on the ground and then he crushed it.

We walked to Quickstop and my grandfather complained the hole way there.

"MARTY!" My grandfather yelled at the Cashire

"Hey Vic! here for some Cigs?" Marty yelled back

"yeah kinda I'm here to prove my good for nothing grandson that he's wrong!" My grandfather yelled back Hitting me in my back.

"What are you trying to prove him wrong?" Asked Marty

"THAT HE CAN IN FACT BUY CIGATTETS" My grandfather yelled back

"Sorry he cant, but here's a pack on the house to help you ease the pain of you being wrong" Marty yelled throwing a pack of Cigarrets at my Grandfather

"You know I was only kidding but thanks for the free Cigarrets ya fat bastard!" My grandfather laughed walking out of the store.

"...Dont call the cops man because I already know about the tape" I told Marty then I ran out.

My grandfather was already smoking again.
"You really shouldn't smoke" I told my grandfather as we walked down the sidewalk

"I don't care" my grandfather told me

"Of course you don't" I sighed

"But really your old no offence so smoking only makes it worse for you I mean I could understand smoking maybe at 21 but god you could go any minute because of those things" I told my grandfather

I heard him cough
He was clutching his left arm
"I-It..." My grandfather mumbled, then he fell on the floor

"GRANDFATHER!" I screamed
I kneeled down to see if he was okay I checked his pulse it was fatal

"Shit a heart attack" I whispered
I called 911 Quickly.

"Victor!" I heard a soft voice from behind it was Robin running towards me.

"GO AWAY ROBIN!" I yelled

"What happened to that senior?!" She screamed in shock

"I think he had a heart attack! So shut up I'm trying to think of what to do to help him!" I yelled

"Move out of the way! I'm certified in CPR" Robin yelled giving me her wallet and then pushing me Aside

I found a small certified in the place were the drivers licence is supposed to go in robin's Wallet that said "Ms.[u]Robin Maria, Tealia[u] is certified by the school of RPA school of medical training to do Adult CPR, Child CPR, Animal CPR, and Infant CPR"

"Tealia?" I asked myself in my mind
I looked over at robin she really was giving my old crusty grandfather CPR she gave him two quick breaths and then checked his pulse she did this three times then the ambulance came and put my grandfather in a stretcher.
Me and robin jumped in the back of the Ambulance car. we got to the hospital and waited in two chairs next to the door to room my grandfather was in. I was eager and scared of what would happen. Robin put her hand on my mine

"He'll be okay" Robin told me
I smiled for her and then went back to worrying. Then the doctor came out and me and robin stood up
"Is he okay?!" I yelled

"He'll be fine it was a false alarm but did one of you do CPR?" The doctor told us

"Yeah Robin did it" I told him

"Well your lucky that your friend did CPR so quickly without her then it would have been to late before we could came" The doctor told us smiling and walking away.

"Thank you Robin" I told her
Robin smiled at me the way that she did all the time that made me feel fuzzy on the inside.


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Aug 18, 09 at 2:40am
re: Locket [14+ C&C welcome]

If eyedrops don't work then try just summerging your eyes in water. I really couldn't tell you much cuase my eyes itch only if my contacts are in too long. Do you wear contacts?

The story is going great, you are still having the capital trouble but nothing much than that.


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