I've written one novel so far and my only problem is that the ending sucks and that while editing it I started to rewrite what was already written.

quote ILoveMoe

I have no idea what you guys are talking about, but something tells me it's something important...

Ah, that's right...sometimes people abuse them with something called a Mary-Sue

quote DragonOutlawKing

I've written one novel so far and my only problem is that the ending sucks and that while editing it I started to rewrite what was already written.

Not true. A lot of the times I get killer ideas and have great beginings, flawless endings, but just no depth to build around the filler. And a lot of the "good" endings I can create only work with a long and constructing plot, which a lot of the times I can't seem to keep at a level equal to the first and final segments.

I have written a book, about a world were there is a war between people and robots thats been going on for 200 years, and I showed my teached and she said it was pretty good and was surprised I actually wrote a book, I am 15.

Everytime I go to look at it, I always end up changing something or adding stuff, which I think is a good thing. I added like 3 more chapters than what my teacher had wrote. I actually want to get this published, anyone have any tips? Or if u want to know more about this, just ask me. lol

Oka. Well first... HI Everyone! On to business now.
I am really young, but I want to write a book. (If Chris Paolini can, so can I!) I want to write a fantasy book. I have characters that I like and know fairly well. My problem is I cannot decide on the setting. The size of the city where it akes place seems to change daily. Also, I'm a little lost on what to do with the plot, because It's not a quest story I'm scared it will seem boring. I just can't seem to get a few concrete details in my head. Any help? You can PM me if you want. I think my Muse needs a rude wake-up call!

PM me for help, if you need to, LittlestChocobo.

Im struggiling with the next chap of A Bittersweet World,
and my poems have suddenly turned rubbish

quote Asycath

Im struggiling with the next chap of A Bittersweet World,
and my poems have suddenly turned rubbish

I've just finished my first book in the writer's lounge. It isn't very long but...*shrugs*.
Anyways, I'm going to make a new trilogy. How do I set about making a second in the trilogy as for me it seems awkward...

quote Cheatergirl007

I've just finished my first book in the writer's lounge. It isn't very long but...*shrugs*.
Anyways, I'm going to make a new trilogy. How do I set about making a second in the trilogy as for me it seems awkward...

CG7, PM me and I'll help ya

This is the ending of my lastest chapter for A Bittersweet World.

quote Asycath

She stepped out into the storm and watched as lightning forked its tounge over the skies. She smiled, a cruel, unloving smile.
Then she noticed something in the distance, it looked like a animal, pottering around..A mansion?



Meanwhile, in the real world, it was stormy. A boy sat, playing his own DS. As he tapped away on the screen he suddenly felt dizzy, and the whole world seemed to slow down before going black.
He awoke on something hard, and looked around. It looked just like his ac:ww Mansion! But the boy smiled, it was going so perfectly to plan....

Asycath, I think your story is going great so far, and you just need to keep doing what you've been doing all along. I know it's your choice, but I feel that any outside help may end up taking away from the whole feel and flow of the story. Every writer has their own style, and bringing in another writer could potentially disrupt the style in which your story has been written so far. Could you imagine if Samuel Beckett wrote the latter half of The Great Gatsby? But if you can make it work in the end, then don't hesitate for help.