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Topic: Le Bleu Café : A Writers' Gathering Place
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Aug 21, 08 at 10:10pm
re: Le Bleu Café : A Writers' Gathering Place

Meh, doesn't really matter to me.



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Aug 22, 08 at 7:44pm
re: Le Bleu Café : A Writers' Gathering Place

I don't thing poems have to rhyme, necessarily. But they do have to have some sort of rhythm. Anyone ever read Shakespeare? Or study meter (prominent in Shakespeare)? As long as they flow, they do not have to rhyme. You know when sometimes something has too many syllables, and you have to say it too fast? It doesn't matter if it rhymes with the line before or not, it sounds choppy. Or if it doesn't have enough syllables and you have to draw it out.

Not that I'm against rhyming, but I don't think its necessary. Also, some times if something rhymes too much and its too obvious, it sounds sort of fake.

Poems can flow without rhyming, as long as they have rhythm. And I don't mean rhythm as in music. I can't really explain what exactly I mean, but...

I hope I didn't offend anyone, I just have strong opinions. And feel free to argue against me, I don't mind. Thats just my opinion. ^^

Oh, one last thing. I'm looking for comments on my first neo story, The Power to Choose. And I mean meaningful comments that can help me improve. Not just "this is awesome", or "keep writing". Thanks.



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Aug 23, 08 at 3:06am
re: Le Bleu Café : A Writers' Gathering Place

Is there anywhere that I can post a small piece that I wrote a while ago and ask for CC? It's a little under six hundred words.



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Aug 23, 08 at 6:57am
re: Le Bleu Café : A Writers' Gathering Place

May I ask how many words a novel is?

Just wondering. ;D



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Aug 23, 08 at 9:26pm
re: Le Bleu Café : A Writers' Gathering Place

I think 20,000-40,000.



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Aug 24, 08 at 7:08am
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Good. I see I'm on the verge of getting there. =D



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Aug 24, 08 at 3:22pm
re: Le Bleu Café : A Writers' Gathering Place

Surely a novel shouldn't have a limit of words. When I write, I just write. Some people (well, most) say I'm Gifted and Talented at writing, but I don't believe them. How can somebody autistic be good at English?

Anyways, I hope I'm allowed here...I'm not exactly well known. I just wanted to check it out. I like stories.



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Aug 24, 08 at 3:24pm
re: Le Bleu Café : A Writers' Gathering Place

I get told I'm gifted a lot too :D

I researched today and found out INO is gonna be a novella instead.

Thats a start.



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Aug 24, 08 at 3:29pm
re: Le Bleu Café : A Writers' Gathering Place

Mostly people tell me that when they read my stories and once, I wrote a 5 page History essay the night before it was due in and got the highest mark for it. My mum read it and then she read my sources (i.e. the textbook) and she said, 'You have a phenomenal gift here, Melissa. You have the gift of linguistics.'
Or something like that. I don't like being told I'm good at things, or being told I'm pretty. I wish I was a flea. What a happy life fleas must have...



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Aug 26, 08 at 7:17am
re: Le Bleu Café : A Writers' Gathering Place

Guys, I wanna do a joint story. With anyone. I want volunteers. Feel free to PM me.



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Aug 26, 08 at 11:53am
re: Le Bleu Café : A Writers' Gathering Place

quote bishty
Surely a novel shouldn't have a limit of words.
Well, novels don't really have a limit, but I looked it up and the answer said it has to be more than 20,000.



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Aug 26, 08 at 12:00pm
re: Le Bleu Café : A Writers' Gathering Place

So what's a book with less than 20000 words then?



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Aug 26, 08 at 12:17pm
re: Le Bleu Café : A Writers' Gathering Place

I read a pure novel was 50, 000 words. If your novel is under 50k, it's called a novella. My work, I'm Not Okay is now considered a novella, since I'm not planning on getting anywhere near 50k words.



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Aug 26, 08 at 11:57pm
re: Le Bleu Café : A Writers' Gathering Place

If anyone's interested, I'd love to do a joint story with someone. I've got a character already sorted out, all I need is a title and another character. If you want to do one with me, PM me.



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Aug 28, 08 at 7:00pm
re: Le Bleu Café : A Writers' Gathering Place

Ooohhh...a joint story sounds sort of fun. But I've only seen one or two, and heard about them a few times. Anyone care to explain a little? I may be interested, and may PM some of the people who asked. Or feel free to PM me, as well.



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