"It was was years and years before anything happened, then everything seemed normal until things started to go wrong in space, all of the planets were fighting and slowly it became a war, every Jedi from across the galaxy tried to stop the war, but at the moment it has not gone successfully, will this war stop."


Main story " a brave jedi and other jedi are trying to defeat the evil sith empire, but when the main jedi sees the evil sith mistress something happens, he spairs her life, what will happen next?"

Neo-Name:
Name:
Age: (Has to be over 20)
Gender:
Race: (Are you a human or a Alein)
Good or Evil:
Apprence:
History:
LightSaber Colour:
Personality:
Family:
Other:


Neo-Name:ruki123
Name:Rozzie
Age:20)
Gender:male
Race: human
Good or Evil good
Apprence:Brown jedi robe, blue eyes and black hair
History: was taken by jedi at birth
LightSaber Colour: blue
Personality:happy, awkward, funny
Family:none
Other:



Neo-Name: Riku13
Name: Riku
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Good or Evil: Good
Apprence: Look at mine and Ruki's avatars
History: His two best friends were killed after he spent a couple years searching/protecting them. His family was killed at a young age and his friends were like his brother and sister. Now he goes around the galaxy protecting other people and searching for a purpose.
LightSaber Colour: Silver
Personality: Good do-er
Family: None
Other: Uses dark force powers even though he's good.


Neo-Name: SorasSister
Name: Rose or Dark Rose is her full name
Age: 20
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Good or Evil: Evil
Apprence:
History: Unknown
LightSaber Colour: Red
Personality: Mean, somtimes even kind, cocky, never serious
Family: None
Other: N/A



Neo-Name: Sniggit
Name: Drega
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Good or Evil: Good
Appearance: Short brown hair, wears black pants and an old worn brown cloak
History: His family was killed by outlaw aliens, he is a traveling mercenary.
LightSaber Colour: Green
Personality: Quiet and reserved. He is very loyal to friends.
Family: Deceased.
Other: Drega has a dark violent side that he rarely shows.



This message was edited by ruki123 on May 07 2008.

You should probably provide a little more backstory, a character sheet, and think about moving this to a more sensible forum like the General SW forum if you want this to be even remotely successful.

I will, after people join, this is the general idea.

Then follow my third tip and think about putting this in a different forum. It's not exactly a coincidence that we're the only two people to have posted here in the last 24 hours.

I will join:

Neo-Name: SorasSister
Name: Rose or Dark Rose is her full name
Age: 20
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Good or Evil: Evil
Apprence:
History: Unknown
LightSaber Colour: Red
Personality: Mean, somtimes even kind, cocky, never serious
Family: None
Other: N/A

Neo-Name: Sniggit
Name: Drega
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Good or Evil: Good
Appearance: Short brown hair, wears black pants and an old worn brown cloak
History: His family was killed by outlaw aliens, he is a traveling mercenary.
LightSaber Colour: Green
Personality: Quiet and reserved. He is very loyal to friends.
Family: Deceased.
Other: Drega has a dark violent side that he rarely shows.

LEt's start.
Rozzie's training with the younger jedi
Rozzie; Good, I'll train you more tomorrow.
Rozzie runs to the council
Rozzie; Yes, what is it?
Councel; Rozzie, we want you to go defeat the sith mistress Dark Rose.
Rozzie; YEs!
He runs to his star ship

Drega is walking towards the Jedi Training Ground to seek work. He is a traveling mercenary and is often hired to assist Jedi on dangerous missions. He sees a Jedi (Rozzie) running towards the Hangar.

Drega: You there! Can I speak to you for a moment?

Rozzie turns around
Rozzie; ( i sense some intentions around this man,)
Rozzie; What?\

Neo-Name: Riku13
Name: Riku
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Good or Evil: Good
Apprence: Look at mine and Ruki's avatars
History: His two best friends were killed after he spent a couple years searching/protecting them. His family was killed at a young age and his friends were like his brother and sister. Now he goes around the galaxy protecting other people and searching for a purpose.
LightSaber Colour: Silver
Personality: Good do-er
Family: None
Other: Uses dark force powers even though he's good.

OOc accepted

Drega: I was wondering if perhaps you would like to hire me. I am a traveling mercenary and am quite skilled with a lightsaber. I will work any mission, no matter the danger.

Rozzie; Sure

Hey I'm going to be talking in first person. And Riku does not act emo.

Riku - Tatooine - Mos Eisley

I was walking in Mos Eisley having travelled here multiple times. I seemed to automatically go to the darker side of town. Wearing my black cloak with my lightsaber dangling at my side, given to me at the Jedi Temple when I became a knight. Looking down a dark alley I noticed a gangster assaulting a civilian. I go down the alley approaching silently and ignite the silver blade of energy.

Drega: What is your name Jedi? What mission are we to complete?