Didn't the confrontation between Rozz and Rose happen too quickly?

Riku

The gangster attempted to shoot me with his blaster even though I simply deflected it with my lightsaber. The stupidity of these Tatooine gangsters never ceased to amaze me. He then tried running away only to be violently pulled back by the force. I then stabed him through the heart and let his body fall onto the floor. Searching through his pockets I found the credits he had on him and took them as this was one of my only sources of income, I gave half to the victim and walked away without saying a word. Before headed back to my current place of residence I stopped at a shop to buy some more grappling cable and a hologram projector. Heading back to my speeder bike I zoomed across the desert into a cliffy section overlooking the city where I killed a criminal and then bought his house. My Jedi Starship was also parked on the roof which I occasionaly flew to and from Courascant when the Jedi called on me which was actually quite frequently for some reason. Tomorrow I would finally leave this planet and go back to live at the Jedi Temple.

OOC; There's going to be more, we were both sent to kill each other

I'm just saying it came too quickly without very much development.

OOC: 'Kay I'll join.

Neoname: 00100100

Name: Ryuk

Gender: Male.

Age: 29.

Race: Shinnigami [PM me to know what a Shinnigami is]

Appearance: Pale white skin with long black hair. [PM me for image]

Allegiance: Evil

Lightsaber Color: Black

Personality: Cold hearted

Family: None

Other: Knows every pressure point in the human body.

*A small ship flies with surprising silence down into Korriban's atmosphere, and, still eerily silent, lands in the ruins of the old Sith Academy.

A lightly armored man bristling with exotic weapons steps out and quietly begins to move towards a landed ship bearing a Jedi insignia. The man slips inside the ship, and moments later, muffled sounds can be heard, and then silence. The man exits as quietly as he entered, and he begins to move towards the sound of fighting nearby*

Bram: Looks like this might be a easy capture. That ship won't be lifting off for a while, and I sabotaged the ships in the Sith hangar too. I just hope it isn't too easy....



This message was edited by Viperlord on May 23 2008.

Ryuk sits upon jedi corpses in a dark forest in Korriban
sent to explore the old Sith academy.

Ryuk: .... That was pointless, barely anyone comes out to
play anymore. Soon I shall eradicate the Jedi scum of the
whole universe.

He hears rattling in the bushes.

Ryuk: Well, seems another jedi's come to play.

Dark Rose just smiles and uses force push on him which made him go flying backwards, she then put her foot on his chest and pointed the lightsaer at his face, suddenly her eyes turned ice blue, her apprence changed compeltely, she was turning back to her good side, she fell to the floor out cold
"She has a split personalty???" said Rozzie

OOC: This is what her good side looks like:

Rozzie's mouth is wide opened.
Rozzie; What?

Rose smiled sweetly
"Da...Dark Rose?" said Rozzie
"Nah...For this form it is just Rose!" smiled Rose, she was beautiful
"But how?" said Rozzie
"I was born half-evil half-good, this is what happens when i change, i only have 4 hours, then you will have to be ready, and i am sorry!" said Rose
"Rozzie smiled, he dicied to charm her
"You're pretty!" smirked Rozzie
Rose giggled.

Rozzie thought for a second
Rozzie; Forget that.

OOC: Since my post was ignored, I will relocate it.

*The silent man, who has been creeping ever closer to the fight, stops in puzzlement*

Bram: This is something I haven't seen before..... *Silence*

Bram: But it makes no difference. That Jedi is mine.

*Silently, the man pulls out several grenades, and arming them, he throws them in between Rozzie and the mysterious Sith ahead. Green gas bursts out and envelops the group*

Bram: Jedi powers won't work against skin contact gas.. he's mine. *Bram pulls out a odd looking gun and fires. The cartridge that flies from the gun separates into 5 darts, each one with a stun chemical powerful enough to take down a bantha. The darts strike Rozzie, and Bram grabs him, and begins to drag him back to his ship*

Bram: Too easy...

Sidenote: Jedi powers do work against skin contact gas to a degree, but it leaves them vulnerable to other forms of attack.

Ryuk looks in dissapointment.

Ryuk: Damn, the bounty hunter stole my prey.

He quickly runs into the cargo hatch.

Ryuk: Mabey if I team up with this guy, I can play with more jedi. Muhahahaha

Bram: *Shoves Rozzie into a tiny cage that he can neither sit down or stand up in, and puts stun cuffs on him that periodically electrocute him, preventing him from concentrating enough to use his Force powers. As a added refinement, he activates a torture field around the cage, so if Rozzie moves at all, he will be electrocuted back into unconsciousness*

Bram: That should deal with that... *Takes off, but after he leaves the atmosphere, he hears noise in the back. Bram walks back there with a sonic rifle at the ready, only to bump into Ryuk*

Bram: What the... *Aims rifle* Who the heck are you, and why are you on my ship?

Ryuk: I'm not surprized if you're scared. Not many humans
get to see a Shinnigami. So you live to hunt jedi's? To
avenge your family lost? DOn't be alarmed, I see your past
in your eyes. I just kill them for the fun of it, so, what
do you say, partners?

He extends his hand twords him.

Bram: Ehhhh... That's a idea! Partners.. *Begins to shake Ryuk's hand, but suddenly whips a dart out of his pocket and jabs Ryuk with it, before hurling him to the floor*

Bram: Or not. *Crouches over Ryuk* That dart would have killed any normal human in about 5 seconds, but you survived, and your still semi-conscious. Incredible. If you can hear me, I'll think I'll just drop you off here. *Shoves Ryuk in a escape pod and fires it off towards Korriban*

Bram: Now to deliver my cargo... *Jumps into hyperspace*