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Zekira
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RP] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Trinity Limit 2. Part 1: Oblivious~ (FIXED THREAD)

This is the repost of the original thread, as a careless text limit has eventually pwned the post from the previous. The original thread can be found here (continue the storyline from there):

http://www.neoseeker.com/forums/36153/t1302745-rp-pok-eacute-mon-mystery-dungeon-trinity-limit-2-part-1-oblivious/

This is the last page of the previous post

...first off, I would like to rant on how sucky internet explorer was and gladly wiped out the entire message I was about to post... and it was so detailed too T_T

ANYWAY!

Here we are, the second of the 'series': Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Trinity Limit.

Oh yeah, about that "Title Pending" and "Subtitle Pending" part... well, obviously this RP needs a name. Since this is the second of the 'series', it would be appropriate to have a title for the series, and a subtitle would then be found for each thread that is made. The first one never had a title...

ANYWAY!

...damn you IE now I forgot what I typed after that!

We'll start with the standards of RPs... or rather, the standards of everything in general: rules and regulations. (list below -- credit goes to Hybrid Harpuia for the original)(obviously revised)

quote "R&R of the first series"
1.No god mod (don't talk for other people unless you have permission.)
2.no crude language (you can use substitutes such as @$$ or $h!t, but not the real words)
3.do NOT spam(put OOC if you want to talk about something related to this RP)
4.you may join other people in the RP (go as a group)
5.No flaming or arguing (basically, don't criticize others.)
6.No double posting (self-explanatory)
7: No legendaries until permitted to do so. This will be dictated by the progression of the story.
8: No killing unless appropriate! Story progression should tell of the right time. So killing will happen only on the RIGHT TIMES, but as much as possible please avoid.
Next, pl0t. The story plot was suggested before by Flippy/Limberheadpollen, and after much revision here is all the current summary will give:

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During the calm period of several years after the incident with arceus, peace slowly becomes more fragile as behind the scenes there were three forgotten entities: Uxie, Mesprit, and Azelf; who unknowingly was developing a sydnicate of Pokémon and other entities to take the world into an oblivion in their favor. Their station is somehow deceptively hidden well in such an obvious place that no one can seem to find -- hell no one even knows that a syndicate is being formed! Slowly as time passes, as long as their station isn't found, they continue to grow in number, until finally they can start pummeling Terra into oblivion. The events brought about by this will bring back memories and entities from the past, and carve new memories and present new beings as it goes by.
To disclaimer: sorry if it was changed too much... If you're one of those people who has known the exact plot, please then read the spoiler below:



If you're one of the people qualified to view the spoiler above (qualification requires being a member of the first series "Primal Invasion"), please state if you have any objections or suggestions.

...even with the random blabbering I've been doing right now, there are still things that need to be achieved:

Registration and character data
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Pretty much standard. Oh yeah, involving the characters... I have a special rule that's a lot more free-wavering than most limitations would offer:

You may have up to 25 characters, both sub and main, but please limit your 'main characters' to around 6-9 only. You may also have different groups as characters, and not just being one team -- but each character put in would count towards the character count... so that basically means you can't have 25 on 1 of your teams and 25 again on another :\ ...I stated this because I got carried away and already have around 20+ characters. :\ In order to register for the RP, you would have to PM me along with the complete set of characters and teams that you will be using. Beware though that I have a criteria for 'properness' and 'appropriateness', thus you MAY get rejected if you don't organize yourself. When you have been accepted, please reply to this thread with a simple "Membership has been approved and modded" or something -- those that have been accepted but fails to reply with the approval message after two weeks would then have to be on 'waitlist'. As long as the story is kept at its first thread (30 pages before thread is replaced), other members may still join in. As much as possible please follow the guide form below. If you wish to change something in your character descriptions, please notify me through an OOC in a reply and embed the addition in a Spoiler tag. Note that it would be appropriate to keep changing descriptions as the story progresses if the character is a round character, or is really holding a lot of secrets.

quote "Sample Registration Form"
[Group A Name]:

[Member A Name]
Species:
Gender:
Description:
(optionals)Signature Move/Battle Style/etc. (as long as it's related to the RP)

[Member B Name]
Species:
Gender:
Description:
(optional)Signature Move/Battle Style/etc. (as long as it's related to the RP)

[Member C Name]
Species:
Gender:
Description:
(optional)Signature Move/Battle Style/etc. (as long as it's related to the RP)

[Group A Name]:

[Member A Name]
Species:
Gender:
Description:
(optionals)Signature Move/Battle Style/etc. (as long as it's related to the RP)

[Member B Name]
Species:
Gender:
Description:
(optional)Signature Move/Battle Style/etc. (as long as it's related to the RP)

etc... Read the posts above in "Registration and Character Data" for quantities on the number of characters and limitations.


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re: RP] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Trinity Limit 2. Part 1: Oblivious~ (FIXED THREAD)

Terminologies and other terms/names:
Pokétei 13 -- A band of Pokémon split into 13 squads that are founded to be world-wide protectors. Each squad has their different aspects, with each squad's Captain usually having the strongest ability of that certain aspect -- examples would be Squad 11's strength in brute force fighting, Squad 4's specialty in healing, Squad 5's specialty in magic, Squad 6's guardian-instincts, Squad 2's stealth methods, and the like. Note that they may just appear suddenly in the scene of other people for assistance -- they weren't covered world-wide for nothing.
Trinity Inc. -- A sort of famous large company reigning in Neo Treasure Town. *more definition will be added as storyline progresses*
Dokon Dan -- a sort of newly found group with intent on taking over the town. *see General Characters for details*
Ouendan -- group of Pokémon with magical cheers and dances that affects the spirit of other Pokémon.

Members and their characters:

























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re: RP] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Trinity Limit 2. Part 1: Oblivious~ (FIXED THREAD)

OOC: I've made the new thread and revised a lot... and now I'm even going to post insanely. What's motivating me to do this?!

I'm changing Lighty's text color to Lime. I don't remember with whom I used it before (EDIT: Oh wait, I remember -- L.Lapras). If ever I used someone for lime, I'll transfer it to black instead...

At the Soul Shop...

"Osu!" "Go!" "Osu!"

These three voices came from outside. As Lighty heard this, he suddenly opens the door. Then entered three entities.

"You're finally here!"

Lighty greets the three entities excitingly. The entities that entered was 1 Milotic, 1 Plusle, and 1 Minun.

"Apollo! Update me!"

"Hah! You're truly outdated, my dear Lighty.

See? We already have a logo!

Our formal team name... Yuhi of the Wide Sea. More famously known as the Ouendan Yellow!

I am the commander, Apollo Maira!"


"I am the leader, Maya Ryuuta!" said the Minun.

"And I am Ouendan Yellow's Ace Rookie, Para Hajime!" said the Plusle.

"I'd infer that you haven't built up a group yourself, but I think you haven't lost your dance, now?"

"Of course I haven't! I've polished my Osu Magic for the past years that I've disappeared!"

"Heheh... but I've empowered the Osu Magic to both of these dancing prodigies. I promise you we have a very wide range of tracks compared to what we did last time, Lighty. Here: Banbina, Shounen Heart, Zenryoku Shounen, Glamorous Sky, Okoru Kotoba... you're kind of not getting the new genre of Osu music today!"

"...ugh! I hate to admit, but I haven't gotten myself polished with the new tracks lately!"

"Just for an example, would you like to have a mini-showdown in Ready Steady Go's chorus?"

Obviously Lighty accepts that -- Ready Steady Go was Apollo and Lighty's signature music when they were still on the same dance troupe. As a trial, the one who danced better would radiate a stronger spirit. In the end, Apollo even knocked Vanguachu off his chair, while Lighty only dragged Para and Maya to the wall.

"...ah!"

"Lighty Lighty...! Well, I guess we'll be leaving -- shout for help may be frequent! I trust that you would have your own improvement, Lighty! Osu! Move!"

"Go!" "Osu!"

The Ouendan Yellow leaves the Soul Shop.

"...

...! Apollo! That's it! I will take the name...! The name that will rival theirs...!

...Arahi of the Vast Sky! Ouendan Green!

Fabulous name, I must say! I WILL, and I Mean I WILL dance better!"


"...you're so determined on this Lighty, it's making me want to join!"

"I have very little criteria if you want to join -- just show me how you dance!"

"Alright, I'll cheer to one of your favorite tracks: Rirura Riruha!"

"...(honestly I made moves for the female on that one, but whatever, I wanna see this!)"

As the music played, Vanguachu showed a very strong way of cheering, basing his dance on martial arts and Japanese cheer style, which featured the spirit of fire. As the song progressed, Vanguachu was radiating a burning aura as he continued to do his cheer. This impressed Lighty so much that he already stopped the music.

"...! I never expected you to be so...! So...! Beatmaster-like! Vanguachu, I'd allow you to join me in this journey!"

"...yes! Osu! Tatakae! Ouendan Green, Go!"

"We'll start the new era of music for the town... no, for the world!"

From outside, an entity flew and knocked on the door. Lighty opened the door to find a Skarmory.

"Oh yes... I can't believe I'm actually doing this! Lighty Eon, I'm Skyras Shinta, and I've been considering you an idol for ever since the time of the Ouendan Red!" said the Skarmory excitingly, whose name was apparently Skyras.

"Ah! Yes, you! I've seen you many times during our cheers back then...! What reason would you be for being here?!"

"...I just overheard everything! It seems as if you've made Apollo you're rival, and both of you are of seperate ways. Now I understand that you want to form the other side of the Ouendan, which is the Ouendan Green. To match, it would appropriate if you had three members..." said Skyras, with an obvious intent.

"Hm! This seems to be interesting! If you truly want it, then show me!"

"Then I shall! Play the music... 'Pop Star'!"

As the very catchy song played, Skyras style was unusually that of a strong cheer of Japanese females -- her wings were naturally somehow formed so that it would wave like pompoms. And like most cheering agents, they radiated their aura from the dance. Skyras radiated a burning aura as well.

"...that's...! Oh so impressing! Then I have no doubts, you shall be the third member of the Arahi of the Vast Sky! Ouendan Green!"

"...yes! Thank you so much, Lighty!...

...I can call you by 'Commander' right now, right?"

"I'd prefer discreet formalities, but anyway!

Ouendan Green...! Yes!"


"Yeah, we'll start drawing the logo right here!"

"Oh, I must gather my things from outside! Please excuse me." said Skyras as she flies away. Lighty and Vanguachu begin drawing the logo for the Ouendan Green.


OOC: Part one, heh... my hands are too friggin' tired, I can't even type 1/10th of what I intend! Here's how I outlined it:



EDIT: Fine then, second part!

Near Tailwind base...

"...I sense it here. I might as well enter..."

Byakune enters Tailwind base without permission, finding Razen and Sparchu sleeping in the living room. He chose to sit there and wait.

Eventually both of them woke up simoltaneously. Peaceful sleep.


"Good morning... or, good afternoon?"

"...?! Wha... Byakune! What are you doing inside the base without permission?!"

"...it wasn't locked..."

"Anyway... yes, I think you came to see how I was doing? From your strong senses, you must have been worried about the disappearance of my spirit..."

"...can't say it better."

"...Byakune. It's time, but yes it's finally arrived. The primals have shown themselves again. Yes, in the form of hollows. I could say that hollow and primal are of the same definition right now..."

"...Ah, yes, I remember now... both of us were affected by a strange Flower that was radiating hollow energy."

"...?! Then... Pokétei 13 must be more aware now. The hollows must not dominate.

For now, we have to discuss everything we know about the primals. Sparchu... I trust you know something?"


"Of course I do! What do you think of me, you Skitty?!"

*ahem* "Anyway... let me then review both of you about the facts we know about the primals."

Somewhere in NTT, near Trinity Building.

"...I still couldn't get my suspicion off this building...

...nothing should be left unknown to my knwoledge. Nothing. Yet the interiors of this building is still concealed to me..."

The Ninetales named Roko (Squad 5 Captain) was still on guard outside of Trinity BUilding.

"Bad things can come from even the biggest of celebrities... I can't assume anything on anyone right now."

As Roko was still pondering on his thoughts, a sudden explosion was heard from near the location. This startled every citizen and ran for their lives. Roko stood up and was now in fighting position.

A lot of rogue Pokémon with identical uniforms of Red and Blue halved-Hakamas were seen. Out of all of them, 3 Pokémon stood out: A Glameow, an Blue Gardevoir, and a Porygon-Z. The Gardevoir then began to speak.


"Alright! We are here...! We obviously are attacking!

You Pokémon are being too comfortable, but this such town is without a meaning...

...not unless they are under our power! We are... the Dokon Dan!" cheered the Gardevoir. "Botan! Pleased to meet you twerps!" The Gardevoir continued, whose name was apparently Botan.

"Nya~ Nya~! Nyanki~, desu! Dokon Dan's cutest thing ever! Don't dare piss me off or you'll get it!" said the Glameow next, whose name was apparently Nyanki.

"And this is our delightful superior mecha -- Dorabot!" said Botan as he introduced their Porygon-Z named Dorabot.

Roko then approaches the large group of rogues.


"We don't care who you are... but you seem to be the troublemaker type. Leave if you don't want to be arrested." says Roko, who tries to drive away the Dokon Dan. Some guard Pokémon from inside Trinity Inc. went out of the building and was in position to fight the Dokon Dan.

"...is that all?! You shall never be able to win...! For we are the powerful Dokon Dan!" cheered the Gardevoir (Botan), as she suddenly radiated a very painful scream which immediately made all the Trinity Guards faint. Roko had to cover his ears tight as he heard this.

"Nya~ Nya~ haha! I recommend you just give up!" comments the Glameow (Nyanki).

"I won't allow this! Get ready!" says Roko, who raises his tails up and begins to chant the number of Pokédo that he wants to use.

Suddenly, from the sky, a medium-sized bird figure dived.


"Quetza Dive!" the figure shouted, as that bird figure dashed onto all of the members of the Dokon Dan who was incapacitated -- but the 3 Dokon leaders were able to endure somehow. "No one comes along the way of the town like that! Leave!" says the figure, who apparently was a Staraptor.

"...! It's... Akiha Tohno!" Roko suddenly realizes.

"Oh? You're not making us! Dorabot, take care of these two fools!" says Botan. The Porygon-Z named Dorabot suddenly went haywire and fired many beams at both Roko and Akiha.

"Pokédo number 96 -- Metal Burst." chants Roko, as the beams that were fired at him were absorbed on his 9 tails and fired back.

Akiha, on the other hand, dodged quickly with a fly and used a large Brave Bird hit on Botan and Nyanki, making them fall. Dorabot was then hit by the beams that were deflected.


"Y...you!" Botan complains. "We'll come back you see!" continues Botan, as Dorabot begins to power the large transport cargo that was carrying the entire Dokon Dan group, and that flying Dokon Ship disappears.

"...that's that... but. Akiha... Akiha Tohno."

(OOC: Can I use colons for this nexts one?)

Akiha: "It's been a while... Captain Kyukon."
Roko: "I didn't expect to see you in such a situation..."
A: "Well, let's just say that I've gotten more powerful... and I've lost much of my respect for the Pokétei.
R: "...but still, remember Akiha. You're still an outlaw for the Poketei. Anyone who would remember like me would try to banish you, but I wouldn't."
A: "Do not underestimate me, Roko."
R: "...I really shouldn't be talking to you."
A: "Same here! Goodbye!"

Akiha then flies off after a frustration with Roko.

"...that girl is just one of the attentions needed... but...

...there's still another thing that carries me away. Byakune, Razen, and Essie... no doubt those 3 are so close. They must be keeping a secret from everyone in the Pokétei... I must know what that is, if we want to form the world."


OOC: Ah, I'll continue some time after my hands rest.

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re: RP] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Trinity Limit 2. Part 1: Oblivious~ (FIXED THREAD)

OCC: First post that isn't made by Zekira! (Way to hog a whole three posts jk)

I haven't added to my story in ages, too busy. But now I'm finally able to!



The pattern of lines on one of the faces of Jake's box began to glow purple. Jake noticed this and leapt back onto his feet. Forgetting about his depression, he curiously moved the relic around. It glew brighter and dimmer deppending on where he moved it.
"That's strage." Jake pondered, "It looks like it's reacting with something."
Jake stared in the directiong that caused the box to brighten, "Maybe I should follow the signal..."




Meanwhile...




OCC: IE decided to gobble up my epic Battle of the Blurs, sorry.


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re: RP] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Trinity Limit 2. Part 1: Oblivious~ (FIXED THREAD)

OOC:

Back at Tailwind base...

"I think I'll catch up on some outside air..."

"...and I assume you haven't forgotten the Fresh Area?"

"...! Oh, delightful! It's still clean, yes?"

"It wouldn't be called the fresh area if I never cleaned it everyday! I remember us cleaning it like 3 times a day before!"

"...(What the hell are they talking about? Are they acquainted from before somehow?)"

"Heh, yeah. Well, I'll be going there for a while then."

Razen then went out to another part of the base.

"...a lot of things have been happening, eh?"

"...If you haven't been observant, then I'll answer with a 'yes'."

"...what?"

"You see... if you aren't aware of everything happening from around... more than a thousand miles away, there's something bad that will surely happen to you."

"A thousand miles! But that's a far range of sense!"

"I can sense that."

"Liar! What kind of Pokémon can even do that?!"

"...Pokémon like you."

"...what?"

"Tsk, seems as if... there's something limiting you from the actual world itself. Although as a commander I expected nothing less... I expected more of you because of the enormous power that you hold."

"...what power? All of my abilities... I got it from constant training from all these years! I'm the oldest member of Tailwind -- I think I've had enough of power increments."

"Hm. Indeed your humble nature does give a sign of power... but there's still something lacking.

Your spirit... I never felt it. Not just yet."


"Maybe that's because I haven't been going near you?"

"As I said, I sense things from more than a thousand miles away."

"I still don't believe you. It doesn't matter to me whether you're a Pokétei Captain -- you still don't have a right to judge my position."

"I don't... or am I saying it the wrong way? I'm just suggesting."

"You sound pretty braggy to me, anyway."

"...I apologize then."

"But that makes me curious -- indeed if you could sense things from a thousand miles away... then...

That's it. I can't take it anymore. Duel. Again."


"...*sweatdrop* If that was all that you wanted to say, you should've just said it directly."

"No rules, area is outside. Win condition: first to fall."

"...it's a challenge then."

Both Byakune and Sparchu then head outside.

They position themselves on Tailwind's training field.


"..."

"...(I'm assuming he's ready.)"

Again what happened last time. For a very lenghty amount of time, they just didn't move. Stared at ecah other.

"...(obviously he wants me to lose patience.)"

But as Sparchu was in this thought, Byakune took advantage of it by immediately initiating the same move (Senka) he frequently uses. When the spin was made, Sparchu was cut only mildly as the Pikachu was able to at least defend himself from the attack and evade a bit. It did damage to Sparchu, but not that significant.

Something odd happened, though. Byakune already was able to put up a Thunder Wave immediately after slashing, and it was directing towards Sparchu. Sparchu at least foresaw this and magically used his Focus Punch to decipitate the electric field, which at least surprised Byakune -- Sparchu developed perfectly the technique of blocking projectiles with Focus Punch.

Byakune used Assist, and what came out of his paws was an Earthquake. As the ground was then shaking, Sparchu is nearly losing his balance. Sparchu did a smart thing, though; he placed his Light Ball just directly under his feet and let the Light Ball regulate his balance, completely protecting him from the Earthquake. After the shakes though, Byakune was nowhere to be seen. But Sparchu was sure he could still feel him.


"...I'll wait all day, just come out."


OOC: I could've typed a lot more if I didn't meddle around with my DS while typing this D:


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re: RP] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Trinity Limit 2. Part 1: Oblivious~ (FIXED THREAD)

OCC: Kicking off from where Neo ate my post...
Ah yes. Note that this scene lasts about 35 seconds in real time (Mainly because of the rubble bit)

Meanwhile, in a distant world...



"Judgement! Earthquake! Roar of Time! Overheat!" - attacks shot out through the village of petrified civilians, the voice's bearer was nowhere to be seen. There was, however, a large, black blur racing around, tailed by a smaller, yellow blur darting towards it.
The yellow blur slammed into the black blur with intense force.
"Hyper Beam!" Yelled the black blur, shooting out a violent beam of energy at the yellow blur. The yellow blur was smashed through several houses, before loosing momentum and falling beneath a pile of rubble.
After a cold silence, from the rubble emerged the yellow blur, racing towards the black blur at an incredible velocity. It shot out a large yellow beam at the black blur, before crashing into each other. As the yellow blur raced back for more, the black blur braced itself; "Meteor Mash!" - BAM! The yellow blur was knocked back into the distance.
The two blurs then charged at each other at an even faster pace, but as the blurs collided, a ripple was sent through the air, followed by a blinding white flash. In less than a second, the blurs had vanished.


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re: RP] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Trinity Limit 2. Part 1: Oblivious~ (FIXED THREAD)

OOC: Beware, for yellow hurts the eyes.

"...(I could've sworn I sensed something happening in the town. Is my senses failing? I can't feel it right now.)"

"...I'm still waiting. Eternity is just a short time, you know."

"...

...

Pokédo #1..."


Byakune suddenly Flash Stepped behind Sparchu.

"...Focus Punch."

His magic enabled him to do a Focus Punch. The time that Sparchu wasn't looking was enough for Byakune to fully release it. As his paw was almost near, however, Sparchu countered up with his own Focus Punch. Remember that Sparchu almost doesn't need to charge up a Focus as he has mastered the Focus Punch. As the two paws clashed, Byakune was suddenly startled when he was pushed very much away by the large force exerted by Sparchu's Focus Punch.

Byakune hit the wall brutally, but after in a 3 second state of shock and unconsciousness, he still manages to stand up firm. As he stood up, Sparchu was already in mid-air, ready to hit Byakune with a Thunder Stream, as he already launched it.


"It's game over for you!"

"...tsk. Should I do it...?"

"...Byakune, this is a battle. It may just be merely a challenge, but it's still a battle. I will allow you." said the voice of his sword, Senbon.

"...then you leave me no choice, Kanpi."

As the Thunder Stream was near Byakune, Byakune whispered something to himself.

After the short whisper, an enormous amount of flower petals suddenly came out from his body and whirled around him.


"...?!"

As the petals slowly disappeared, Sparchu immediately sensed something at his back, but he was too late in looking. He got slashed with a large amount of spirit-enhanced slash delivered by Byakune. All that Sparchu remember seeing was the blood and wound that came out of Byakune's right paw...

Thus Sparchu fell to the ground, and Byakune landed back on. Sparchu tried his best to stand up, but his legs eventually gave up. It then lead him to losing the challenge.


"..."

"...yes, it's just a challenge anyway. Hold on, stay awake."

As the challenge was over, Byakune used Assist. Sparchu was still fortunately conscious. What came out from the Skitty's Assist was a move unique to only few Pokémon (OOC: Wait, that's ironic!). As Byakune slammed his right paw to the ground, white and soothing spirit waves flowed through the ground.

"...that's... refreshing... it's a powerful healing move."

Sparchu was able to stand up after 10 seconds of the spirit waves.

"Hope you're not too hurt."

Byakune then stops the wave.

"I'm feeling great. Thanks...

...!

...that can't be...?!"


Sparchu then realizes something.

"Was that...?!"


quote Flashback
"Ngh... I can't just leave them here. What would be my priority, then...?! Save myself...? Or at least try to help my team...

...the latter, of course. But what can I do...?

...even though it is weak, I will try my best, anyway.

...Assist -- help me... Healing Wave!"


...

...

"...I feel... rejuvenated, even a bit!"

"...this wave... it complements mine."

"...such a powerful healing move... I would like to know what it is..."

"...Hah... hah! Go time!"

"...That's nice..."

"...oh... you've at least learned to use it through an Assist, I see. Well done, little brother..."

"...Ugh... ow... my soul, it's back?"

"Is everyone alright? Find time to shelter yourselves... I'll take over from here."
"(...

...agh... memory of him still retains with me, no matter what. If indeed this is a Healing Wave...

...does Byakune know something about him...?)"


"...? Why are you suddenly blank?"

"(I never see any Pokémon with such a well-done Assist except maybe 'him'... oh...

...are you trying to give me signs...

Nekone...? Are you replying to all those letters I've been sending to you via balloons? Is this your response? Where are you, anyway?! Nekone...)


"...*pokes Sparchu with KuroSenbonzakura* ...Sparchu!"

"...wah! Oh, oh, yes I'm sorry! I just got lost in my own thoughts!"

"...don't be, you're beginning to frighten me."

"...*walks in* Hm, nice battle actually. Short, but had a lot of power to it."

"...Captain Faya... you've been watching."

"Ah? I never sensed someone was watching!"

"...! This is weird! Seriously! I sensed spirits coming from the town, but I can't even sense a spirit in the nearby area?!"

"...what are you talking about...?"

"...!

...well, maybe there's just a mistake in the netherworld, or something... ugh."


"...I hope it's just that. Anyway, it appears as if all of us are going to town anyway. We should go there now."


OOC: My hands are still tired.

Oh, and unrelated:MY DS TOUCHSCREEN IS FINALLY FIXED, AHAHA.


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re: RP] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Trinity Limit 2. Part 1: Oblivious~ (FIXED THREAD)

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When you have been accepted, please reply to this thread with a simple "Membership has been approved and modded" or something
I think that's would mean that your post was not spam.
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re: RP] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Trinity Limit 2. Part 1: Oblivious~ (FIXED THREAD)

If Kenzar was deadly without his Zanpaku-to, then he was fatal with his zanpaku-to. Sol was struggling to even block the attacks Kenzar was flowing to. He had already been cut numerous times, but now the injuries were coming in even faster, as Sol was getting exhausted. And throughout it all, Adren stood there, arms crossed, a scowl on his face.
If Kenzar is superior to Sol, he thought. Does that mean that he could have defeated the primal lords years ago? Thinking of this demoralized Adren.
They're stronger. If we make enemies out of them, how are we supposed to fight what is better?
By now, sweat was dripping down Sol's head, flowing down and hitting the floor as though it were raining. Kenzar sneered.
"You're no fun. Step it up. If you don't offer a good match, I'll kill you." He clashed with Sol one more time, then kicked off Sol's body, sending Sol sprawling across the sewer floor. As he struggled to get up, something broke inside Sol. It wasn't a bone, it wasn't a vein, it wasn't any part of his physical being. It was a hidden part of his brain. As soon as the chain was cast off, new energy revitalized Sol. He felt his scythe squirm like a dying snake. He felt his tail vibrate with new found energy.
"Alright Kenzar." He began, his voice confident. "If it's a true fight you want, it's one you'll never forget." Sol grinned, and his scythe and tail blade stabilized.


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OOC: I just noticed something...shouldn't the title be

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re: RP] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Trinity Limit 2. Part 1: Oblivious~ (FIXED THREAD)

There was a white flash. Jake's box stopped glowing as a body fell to the ground from the centre of the flash.
Jake knelt down to reveal that the Pokemon was a Raichu. It was badly hurt and looked as though it was almost dead."Jed! Are you okay!? What happened?"
Jed tried to get up, struggling to raise his head, "I... blur..."
- he collapsed and fell back to the ground.
"Jed? Jed!? JED!?"


OCC: Don't add Jed to my team, yet. He should be conscious first.


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re: RP] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Trinity Limit 2. Part 1: Oblivious~ (FIXED THREAD)

OOC: Oh damn. Oh just damn! As you know, I haven't been as active as I normally am. Why? This entire week is KEEPING ME BUSY with a lot of things! OMG. T_T

Let's see how I'll start off everything I want to say...

Right! First off, I apologize to the newcomer for not being able to put in your characters immediately. But I will after I post this thread, so go ahead and post already -- I already put your characters on the list.

Next, as you may know, it's been 3 insanely long posts for me and I HAVEN'T EVEN GONE THROUGH HALF OF MY PLAN FOR THE DAY. This is insane, but my next RP post, I will rush the current day... wait, I think me and Hybrid are still on the same timeline, haha... but still, my plan is still stuck for too long, and I will finish that in my next post... since hopefully my next free time would give me around more than 2 hours... grr. And after my next day, I PROMISE that I will make my RP days shorter... I'm getting carried away with too many characters!

On the current day that I'm in the RP, I actually still have to add 7 more characters (Botan, Nyanki, Dorabot, Apollo, Para, Maya, Skyras) and around 2-3 more terms (Dokon Dan, Ouendan Teams, Primal/Hollow, etc.) to the list , which I still cannot do (T_T)... Anyway, if you read one of my previous RP posts (I think it's the first one in this thread?), the Dokon Dan group will, although they're subs, play a significant role as an antagonist. Expect the Dokon Dan (usually the Dokon Trio) to show up often.

...so expect a big boom on my part on the next RP, haha.

Actually this OOC post was just too explain my idleness... and yet AGAIN I got carried away with typing too much. I don't know if I can control myself...

@DW1: I'll fix the title next time...

EDIT: Can someone find me a substitute color for Sparchu's text? Since the yellow is beginning to torture me as well... T_T I'd prefer a dark-yellow color. (yes, even if it means having to use hex.)

@Hybrid Harpuia: I like how you do Kenzar. Keep it up.

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re: RP] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Trinity Limit 2. Part 1: Oblivious~ (FIXED THREAD)

Ooc: Will this work? (FFD000)
How about this? (EBC017)

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Sol's scythe began to crack. Adren gasped, and Taeanthra squeaked in fear. However, Sol's scythe was not completely gone. Inside the black coating was something he did not even know about.
A Zanpaku-to.
His tail did a similar action, revealing a bright silver blade. His Zanpaku-to was similar to a Shikomizue. Kenzar seemed shocked, at first, then his face slowly set into a grin, which became a laugh. Sol grinned in response. The insane laughter echoed throughout the passage.
"Well, you sure are something. You're able to survive my attacks, and you even have a Zanpaku-to! However, that won't save you. Give me a good match, make me feel alive, even if it means gutting me with that fish hook!" Kenzar laughed, but he had underestimated Sol, for a few seconds later, the laughter ended, and a slash along Kenzar's left ribs. The blow seemed to have no effect besides ending Kenzar's laughter. He grinned, lowered his Zanpaku-to, and charged. He slashed at Sol crosswise, barely giving Sol enough time to dodge. The Zanpaku-to slashed a slim cut over Sol's face, slashing a shallow cut along his nose. Sol grimaced, then charged, clashing swords with Kenzar. Kenzar pushed Sol away, and leaped into the sky, kicking off of the ceiling, and driving his Zanpaku-to ahead of him, looking like an arrow with a large head. Sol backstepped out of the way, but Kenzar had been expecting that. As his Zanpaku-to buried itself in the ground, he released his grip on the hilt, spun his entire body through his palm, and kicked Sol with as much force as possible. The attack sent Sol sprawling through the air. He crashed into a wall, denting the hard material, and sending piles of it to come crashing down. The pile buried Sol, who was struggling to even move.
"C'mon, I thought you would be worth more than that!" Kenzar taunted. He pointed his Zanpaku-to towards Sol's face.
"Move. If you can't move, then you die, and I move on to your friends over there." He pointed towards Adren and Taeanthra.
"I... I won't let that happen..." Move, move! Moving was all Sol could think of. His body seemed paralyzed by the rubble. His tail began twitching, and suddenly, the rubble came free. Sol quickly lashed out at Kenzar, slashing in a fevered frenzy as much as possible. Kenzar blocked most of the blows, only receiving cuts on his arms, and occasionally, torso. As Kenzar was nearing a wall, he lashed back at Sol, the two remained rooted to the spot, crossing their blades and feeling the sparks emitting from the clash. Kenzar kicked off Sol, but as he did, he sliced Sol around his left foreleg. Blood seeped out of the wound, leaving a trail around where he once stood. Kenzar was on the opposite side of the room.
"You've been fun, but let's end this. I've had enough of your persistance. Now it's time for you to die!" Kenzar laughed, spread his legs, and gripped his Zanpaku-to with both hands. He charged forward. Sol ran at full speed, scythe lowered, read for a finishing slash. Kenzar lifted his Zanpaku-to, Sol, swung his head towards his injured leg, ready for an upward slash.
As they neared each other, one swung down, one swung up.
They stopped meters past each other. Kenzar and Sol made no move. One would fall, the other would leave.
Blood exploded and stained the floor and wall.
Sol collapsed to the ground, a deep wound across his neck. He lost consciousness before he hit the floor, a pool of blood flowing outwards. Kenzar hadn't suffered as much, merely a wide cut similar to Sol's. His spiritual pressure kept him alive.
"You couldn't win. No matter what. Become stronger, and when you do, come fight me again. You were interesting. I will not bother those around here again. You've satisfied my boredom." Kenzar sheathed his Zanpaku-to.
"Well, don't die now, you'll make me have to bother those here again!" Kenzar laughed, but as he did. Footsteps approached him. He took out his Zanpaku-to in time to see Sol slash at him, blocking the blow with inches to spare. Sol leaped backwards, and as he did, something overcame his body.
"Wave Slash!" Sol's scythe began glowing bright pink, enough to blind Adren, Kenzar, and Taeanthra momentarily.
Does unlocking a Zanpaku-to show this much power?! Adren wondered. He didn't have enough time to continue thinking, as countless blades of energy soared through the air, homing in on Kenzar. He used a Flash Step to escape, but the blades merely swerved around and homed in on him from all sides. He gripped his Zanpaku-to with both hands, and unleashed all the Spiritual energy he could. The blades were battered away, but more came. However, they did not home in on him at once. They formed into one large blade, heading at an even faster rate than before. Kenzar blocked it with his Zanpaku-to, but the wave split up again, circling around the Zanpaku-to, and striking at Kenzar, cutting him with many shallow cuts. The waves disappeared, and Sol once again fell unconscious. Kenzar now had multiple cuts, even more than when Sol had been conscious of what he was going.
"Interesting. Razen should know." (Ooc: As head of the R & D department, it seemed fitting to put this in here :3) Kenzar sheathed his Zanpaku-to once more, then left.
"He is worth keeping." He said to Adren and Taenanthra. "Keep him alive. He will become a powerful sparring partner as soon as he can control his power." He laughed one more time, then left in a quick flash step.
Adren and Taeanthra wasted no time. They picked Sol up, and began rushing him to the base to receive treatment.


Ooc: Holy crap, and this was on the spot. Except for the part about Sol unlocking his Zanpaku-to, the last attack between the two swords, and the unlocking of Wave Slash.


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