Okay it's been a day do you have time now?

Nope, I got this one, Jazz!

quote Charizard_2

Zard, to be frank, this isn't good. The green is too bright, and too predominant on the sprite. Plus, the colors are all too damn bright. I'm going to guess you used all stock colors. That's also a bad idea. You should have gotten colors off other Pokemon. Good luck next time, Zard.

Grade: D

quote bond007106

Bond, unfortunately, I don't see any shading on the shoes, the ears, or the shorts. Also, the rainbow looks more like it's in overlapping the hands, rather than originating from them. All that aside, you really did get into the spirit of this theme, congrats for that.

Grade: B+

quote Jazz

Jazz, albeit unoriginal (yes I'd seen the original before SL showed us), it isn't bad. The fact that you only colored the tail shows that you weren't trying to force the sprite, that's good. I'm glad you shaded the tails, but I do have one problem. The second to last tail, the light purple one, seems to have no shading.

Grade: A

quote Champ of all Games

Champ, unfortunately the only thing I see that was done well in this sprite was the leaves around it's neck. The two colors chosen for the skin color, do not go together at all. The color jump is too much for it to be considered shading. Also, the colored toes show that you were trying way to hard. Next time, you ought to put more thought into your sprite. Cheers.

Grade: D+

quote Squirrel Lord

Ah, the criticizer...Judging from the direction that I think the light is coming from, you seem to have missed a bit of shading on the second orange segment. Also, unless you did it on purpose, you missed adding scales to the sides of the red segments. On the tip of the tail it looks like you used too much black, and should have simply kept with the gray. Other than that, good work!

Grade: B+

quote bgg1996

Bgg. Your Cradily seems to have light coming at him from all directions! The shading of the frongs on his head suggest light from multiple sources. Also, the shading on the neck, where the silver bands are, is a bit off. Lastly, the silver bands are way too bright of a color to be mixing with the blue, it hurts my eyes to look at the sprite. However, the color you chose for the body was okay, but a little bright. *blinded*

Grade: C

quote Sempelata

Sempelata, unfortunately, your sprite doesn't suit the theme as well as the rest. I get that pots of gold are at the end of the rainbow and all, but leprechauns are more about clovers. Anyway, the shoes on his feet don't exactly cover his whole feet, so that's a bit odd. Also, you should define where the pants and shirt meet with some black instead of just a darker green. Lastly, the shading just under the hat, where there's a slight bit of bright color, doesn't belong there, it would be covered by the hat. Other than that, the sprite looks good, the beard isn't bad, although it matches the tongue a little too much.

Grade: C+

Is that the Platinum sprite? Because I haven't played platinum, so I wouldn't know.

Anyway, show me the original, and I'll fix my errors. And yes, I get to set the new theme, though I don't know what it will be.

How about a revamp round?

quote The Killing Light

quote bgg1996

Bgg. Your Cradily seems to have light coming at him from all directions! The shading of the frongs on his head suggest light from multiple sources. Also, the shading on the neck, where the silver bands are, is a bit off. Lastly, the silver bands are way too bright of a color to be mixing with the blue, it hurts my eyes to look at the sprite. However, the color you chose for the body was okay, but a little bright. *blinded*

Grade: C

I didn't change the shading at all.
Looks like SL has the same problem.

quote Squirrel Lord

quote The Killing Light

quote Squirrel Lord

Ah, the criticizer...Judging from the direction that I think the light is coming from, you seem to have missed a bit of shading on the second orange segment. Also, unless you did it on purpose, you missed adding scales to the sides of the red segments. On the tip of the tail it looks like you used too much black, and should have simply kept with the gray. Other than that, good work!

Grade: B+

Ok, I know I've been a dick, I just wanted to put some pressure on you xD Sorry though, probably not the best thing to do.

Anyway. I have a problem with your judging on mine. You marked me down for two things that I didnt change from the original sprite(highlighted in bold)
Have a look at Gyarados's original sprite, you'll see what I mean.

Oh and whats the new theme? You get to set it, dont you?

.:SL:.

quote The Killing Light

Is that the Platinum sprite? Because I haven't played platinum, so I wouldn't know.

Anyway, show me the original, and I'll fix my errors. And yes, I get to set the new theme, though I don't know what it will be.

You want originals? here.


You have C&C for the shading? Take it up with the people who get paid to do this.
You really should compare it to a platinum sprite on the computer, instead of just getting platinum, and hoping you've seen the sprite in-game.

As for the theme, I would suggest a scratch round.
In my opinion, it's one of the most difficult to do.
This contest needs to be a little harder.

quote RaichuRules777

How about a revamp round?

Yeah,A revamp round.It's been long since last I made a revamp!

Looks like I can't get in if it's a revamp round.

It may not be. But why?

Because I hate Making Revamps
I like to make new pokemon sprites not make a new pose for one or some thing do with a sprite that doesn't involve
Meshing,Recoloring,Shading,inverting,etc.

quote Charizard_2

Because I hate Making Revamps
I like to make new pokemon sprites not make a new pose for one or some thing do with a sprite that doesn't involve
Meshing,Recoloring,Shading,inverting,etc.

Don't you have to both recolor, and change the shading in a revamp?

btw, I bet no one can revamp a red/blue golbat.

Maybe a REPOSE round?It's better!