Fantastic results but its way too much to read, you should highlight something important in each paragraph such as who youve signed, and its all very cramped, this could be successful if you sort out the layout
but the results are gr8

Good results there. As Bcfc1875 said, shorten it abit and it could be a decent story.

Could you comment on my TNS story please.

Nice start, people prefer the one that get right into it...

Will keep reading

One question. Did you keep Sergio Peter?

Edit: Just seen you sold him to QPR - I think on the other Blackburn SOMS he got sold to the same club lol...

Just asked because I alwasy buy him and he always averages 7 & 8's for me, but everyone seems to sell him...

Good start there Zhao, first months was a bit iffy but I reckon you could possibly challenge the top four if you keep it up. I don't think it needs shortening but the layout could use perhaps a bit of a tweaking.

But overall good start, a few risky signings though? You seems to know what you're doing though.

October.

Before the month, Ben Thompson decided changes were needed. New signing Hosain Kaebi had been given his chance, but his performances were dropping in class rapidly, so the manager swapped Kaebi out of the team, replacing him with Dickson Choto. And the results were:

A great month for Blackburn overall, despite two small setbacks. The loss to Rennais away saw an abrupt and somewhat premature end to their European dreams for the season, and the 3-3 draw against Liverpool could easily have been a win, but nonetheless, Blackburn were starting to show true ability and class, just what Ben Thompson was looking for from the team.

Match of the Month:

Great performance from everyone involved, particularly the effervescent Fabrizio Miccoli, who made sure that he was becoming the first name on the team sheet almost every match with his current run of form, also cementing a potential hold on the Golden Boot for the season, already several goals clear of nearest rival, Afonso Alves.

Blackburn's good form continued throughout the whole of November, recording three good wins, in particular against two of the big four, albeit by one goal margins. The fans and board were starting to come together behind Thompson, despite the european defeat, and were enthralled by the football over the month.

Match of the month(2):

Manchester United were just inches away from dealing Blackburn their first defeat of the season, before Thompson went for broke, bringing on Jason Roberts, for his first match of the season, immediately allowing Miccoli to pounce in the 67th minute to equalise. Miccoli scored in the 80th minute, his second of the match, to bring the scores to 3-2 Blackburn, before Scholes scored a volley in the 86th minutes, leading to the tensest moment of the season, where Jason Roberts scored in injury time to claim the match...

&...


Arsenal also came close to achieving what must be considered the more probable result, but they also fell to the mighty Blackburn and their newfound form.. Despite going ahead thanks to a penalty early on, Arsenal capitulated and eventually were defeated thanks to a Gael Clichy own goal..

A great month for Blackburn saw them having defeated three of the top four within just over a month, leaving just Chelsea, who Blackburn conveniently drew in the league cup quarter final... The only drawback was the long term injury to David Bentley, which would leave him out for over a month, but Thompson was confident the team, significantly Bentley's replacement, Steven Reid, could cope.

A large month, full of important games at important times left Blackburn in the best position possible: Top. The league cup's thrashing of Chelsea was a clear sign that Blackburn weren't messing about this year, and the few remaining doubters were well and truly put to bed when they repeated the result in the leagues weeks later.

Match of the Month:

The late setbacks, in the form of the Ooijer sending off and the Nicolas Anelka last minute brace couldn't spoil the mood for a victorious Blackburn, who had done what no team had done for years. Defeated the top four of English football within half a season.

WOW, you beat all of the top 4. Your doing great, keep this up, it could turn into a really good SOMS.

Miccoli is cheating tbh, Middlesbrough will beat you next time you play them Ben.

Heh... Stupid Alves is stupid... How over-rated can you get?

He scored more than everyone cept Miccoli.. Imagine that.. A 'Boro player getting the Golden Boot.. Aaaah!

How the hell do you do it lol? Good update, where are you in the league? Must be top surely. Your strikers are scoring bucket loads, who's top scorer Miccoli?

Good read and youve spent really well

Great results against the top 4

KUTGW

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How the hell do you do it lol? Good update, where are you in the league? Must be top surely. Your strikers are scoring bucket loads, who's top scorer Miccoli?

Wow, you're doing very well. Some great results against the top 4 there.

If Micolli keeps up his rich vein of form, I expect to see the title back at Ewood Park for the first time in 13 years.

KUTGW, mate.