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Offendr
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Jak's (Offendr's) Review Place (Update: Guardian Heroes review) |
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Welcome to Jak's Review Thread, where you people can read my reviews without needing to go into my profile, and also where you can comment on my reviews. ![]() Adventures of Bayou Billy Ghostbusters Ghosts And Goblins Metal Storm The Legend of Kage ![]() None so far ![]() ![]() *includes Sega CD, 32X and CD32X games Sonic CD Buck Bumble Legend of Zelda: Majora's Mask Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time ![]() D Guardian Heroes ![]() None so far ![]() None so far ![]() God Hand Kingdom Hearts Lord of the Rings: The Third Age Ratchet: Deadlocked Shadow The Hedgehog None so far None so far ![]() Mario And Sonic At The Olympic Games Sonic and the Secret Rings Super Smash Brothers Brawl ![]() None so far ![]() None so far ![]() None so far ![]() None so far ![]() None so far ![]() None so far This message was edited by Offendr on Nov 16 2008. This message was edited by Offendr on Nov 19 2008. ------------------- ![]() REIGN IN PAIN MOTHER*bleep*ERS! | |
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re: Jak's (Offendr's) Review Place (Update: Guardian Heroes review) |
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I read through the Brawl review. I'm very impressed by it. It conveys a tremendous amount of information. You draw comparisons to previous versions and yet the review can stand on its own. Your opinions come across really well. The layout is excellent too. It was a great read. ------------------- | |
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re: Jak's (Offendr's) Review Place |
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For a reviewer who tends to break down his reviews into pieces, I thought that you did well with continuity between the sections as well as keeping people reading by staying away from more boring writing styles. ------------------- | |
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Offendr
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re: Jak's (Offendr's) Review Place |
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Added Mario And Sonic At The Olympic Games (WII) to the list. ------------------- ![]() REIGN IN PAIN MOTHER*bleep*ERS! | |
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Offendr
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re: Jak's (Offendr's) Review Place |
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Edit: Got my Metal Storm review accepted, it's in the index under the NES section. Would love people to read and critique it. ------------------- ![]() REIGN IN PAIN MOTHER*bleep*ERS! | |
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Galacticdramon
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re: Jak's (Offendr's) Review Place (Update: Metal Storm Review) |
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I've only seen two of your reviews, one of which I thought was very good and the other of which I thought was let down only by being a bit immature in places. The Mario & Sonic review did seem more mature than the Shadow review, which seemed to have parts which were great review material (the last line of the first paragraph of the "Graphics" section is great) and parts which weren't (in particular the bit where you use seven words and four of them are "s***"). That said, I do realise there was a gap of nearly two years between them. | |
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Offendr
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re: Jak's (Offendr's) Review Place (Update: Guardian Heroes review) |
quote GalacticdramonThe Shadow review was the first one I posted onto Neoseeker, which was when I really let loose with bad language. I'll edit out most of it, though I really can't be screwed editing the whole thing to look more mature. Another excuse was that I was like 12 or 13 when I wrote that up, so immaturity must've come naturally and, well, it got on there. Edit: OK, I edited out most of the bad language that was more than distasteful, as well as all the spelling errors I found while editing out the bad language. ------------------- ![]() REIGN IN PAIN MOTHER*bleep*ERS! | |
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Offendr
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re: Jak's (Offendr's) Review Place (Update: Buck Bumble Review) |
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Okay, the review for Buck Bumble is up. Any comments? ------------------- ![]() REIGN IN PAIN MOTHER*bleep*ERS! | |
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Offendr
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re: Jak's (Offendr's) Review Place (Update: Sonic and the Secret Rings Review) |
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Updated with Sonic And The Secret Rings review. ------------------- ![]() REIGN IN PAIN MOTHER*bleep*ERS! | |
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Offendr
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re: Jak's (Offendr's) Review Place (Update: Sonic and the Secret Rings Review) |
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...I guess I kinda broke my promise there but I've been busy with life, okay? ------------------- ![]() REIGN IN PAIN MOTHER*bleep*ERS! | |
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re: Jak's (Offendr's) Review Place (Update: Guardian Heroes review) |
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That is excellent. You went indepth on a lot of things and covered practically everything the game has to offer. I had expected a bit more on how the game saves (since it's so different from OOT in that you can't just save anywhere) but that's a little nitpick. ------------------- | |
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Offendr
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re: Jak's (Offendr's) Review Place (Update: Sonic and the Secret Rings Review) |
quote Insanity PrevailsOH *bleep* I FORGOT! Edited it in now. ------------------- ![]() REIGN IN PAIN MOTHER*bleep*ERS! | |
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re: Jak's (Offendr's) Review Place (Update: Legend of Zelda: Majora's Mask Review) |
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Ghosts and Goblins review posted now, go check it out! ------------------- ![]() REIGN IN PAIN MOTHER*bleep*ERS! | |
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re: Jak's (Offendr's) Review Place (Update: Guardian Heroes review) |
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I remember that game. I played it years ago and distinctly remember never getting past the second level. I so completely sucked at it. ------------------- | |
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Best Player Ever
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re: Jak's (Offendr's) Review Place (Update: Legend of Zelda: Majora's Mask Review) |
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I noticed that on your majoras mask review, under sound, you said that there is no zelda theme, but that is false, the termina field overworld theme is a remix of the original theme. ------------------- ![]() Team Cool Lightning Igniting Tigers Clan | |
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