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Kokoro Eternal total posts: 27580 neopoints: 1028 GameGrep pts: 382 since: Jan 2004	Apr 22, 08 at 4:40am Kokoro's reviews
	I used to write reviews a lot, but I rarely write them anyone because I'm not very good at reviewing with this current system around. But anyway check these and tell me what you think: http://www.neoseeker.com/Games/Products/Wii/sonic_secret_rings/userreviews.html?reviewid=32195 http://www.neoseeker.com/Games/Products/Wii/super_mario_galaxy/userreviews.html?reviewid=32657 http://www.neoseeker.com/Games/Products/Wii/super_smash_bros_3/userreviews.html?reviewid=32794 ------------------- Tekken 6 Forum
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Offendr Limited activity threadnought total posts: 686 since: May 2006	Apr 22, 08 at 1:39pm re: Kokoro's reviews
	They're alright. But a bit too brief in most areas of the review (though I guess that's alright since you want people to buy the games and want them to experience it for themselves) and lots of grammatical errors and typos in areas. Example of one of your typos: quote Your Super Mario Galaxy Review But at least I still find out fun to fight him. What the hell does that mean? Keep it up, and watch out for them typos. ------------------- *REIGN IN PAIN MOTHERbleepERS!*
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King_X2 Just call my name Neo: Essential total posts: 11831 neopoints: 2028 GameGrep pts: 1062 since: Nov 2006	Apr 23, 08 at 12:29am re: Kokoro's reviews
	Yeah, just a little better description on your important points, and it's also crucial to have good grammar and spelling throughout your review. Other than that, your reviews look pretty easy enough to persuade viewers, so keep at it. =) ------------------- Somewhere Over That Mountain - my novel in the making
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Insanity Prevails (neocrs) (moderator) Site Contributor's Forum User Reviews Critiques and Help total posts: 14783 neopoints: 6979 GameGrep pts: 410 since: Feb 2003	Apr 23, 08 at 1:47am re: Kokoro's reviews
	You have a nice flow and good detail. I like the way you've put together intros to them too. A few errors with your grammar but nothing too major. My biggest gripe is that they could use some more detail, specifically on the literal gameplay mechanics. Take the Super Smash Brothers Brawl review as an example. I want to know how combat itself is done. Tell me about smash attacks, special techniques, aerial abiltiies, defensive moves, final smashes etc. ------------------- Featured Entity
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Kokoro Eternal total posts: 27580 neopoints: 1028 GameGrep pts: 382 since: Jan 2004	Apr 23, 08 at 1:54am re: Kokoro's reviews
	quote Offendr They're alright. But a bit too brief in most areas of the review (though I guess that's alright since you want people to buy the games and want them to experience it for themselves) and lots of grammatical errors and typos in areas. Example of one of your typos: quote Your Super Mario Galaxy Review But at least I still find out fun to fight him. What the hell does that mean? Keep it up, and watch out for them typos. Thanks for pointing that out. I'll go fix that and any another typos I might have made. And Insanity Prevails, I might edit my Brawl review to add some details about the attacks. Nice suggestion. ------------------- Tekken 6 Forum
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