Decided to send in that version of the review. Wanted to get it sent in before my baseball game.

I am just curious, if you PM a review to yourself, does that show how many characters it is?
Edit: It does.

Just to inform anyone who cares, I started what I plan to be a rather large review of Super Smash Bros. Brawl. It's at 1203 words right now, I'd say I am like 3/5s done.

[size=1][color=#666666]This message was edited by Jesh on May 13 2008.

Finished up two more reviews, Metroid Prime Hunters, and Super Smash Bros. Brawl. Also had To Kill a Mockingbird accepted. Offer constructive criticism please!

Oh, and which review do you guys think is better, Brawl or Advance Wars Day of Ruin?

Hey guys, I am really looking on feedback for my recent reviews, mostly Monster Hunter Freedom 2, Advance Wars, and Super Smash Bros. Brawl.

I went through your Brawl review and I am very impressed. You provided a lot of detail while avoiding nonsical filler. It was good that you effectively covered all the major points like the SSE, online, controls etc. I would definitely like to see more of that caliber in the future.

I read your Pokemon Diamond review Jesh and it was pretty good, especially seeing as it was quite short. You briefly covered everything someone would want to know but you still gave in enough detail which was spot on.

The Super Smash Bros. Brawl review is also good. I'll be honest and say I didn't like how you spilt up the review with subtitles but the actual content of your review was interesting to read and kept me hook. Try spreading out the screenshots a little more (I think that has been said) would be my only piece of advice. Other than that, impressive work.

Well, guys, now that I have a computer with a good word processor again, I'm getting back to it. I'm going to be churning them out more often now.

Also, I'd recommend open office to any of you looking for a good word processor. It has a character counter .

Just thought I'd announce that my latest review was submitted, and I plan to get another one within the next few days. This one was on Crisis Core, and I'll post it when it goes through. (Unless it gets denied.)

And my next one is The World Ends With End.

http://neoseeker.com/Games/Products/PSP/final_fantasy_vii_crisis_core/userreviews.html?reviewid=33258

[size=1][color=#666666]This message was edited by Jesh on Oct 07 2008.

http://www.neoseeker.com/Games/Products/DS/the_world_ends_with_you/

http://www.neoseeker.com/Games/Products/Wii/mario_kart_wii/

Two newest and probably my best reviews to date.

Your Mario Kart Wii review is definitely amazing. A lot of detail and it's all well written. You seem to have covered all the bases very well and it's sectioned out nicely. It was nice to read through.

However, I'm not at all as keen on your The World Ends With You review. It's also well written and you went all out discussing the presentation of it all. What irks me is that you've missed so much gameplay content out of it.

You've missed some stuff out of battles, like chaining battles, fusion attacks, top screen autoplay, trends, types of enemies, adjustable difficulty, adjustable health gauge, what the top screen fighting is like (the card system basically). It's fine enough though, but the problem is the rest of the gameplay. Exploration of Shibuya? Equipping items and their effects? Scanning the field for thoughts and Noise? Eating food? Levelling and evolving pins? Shopping for items? Tin Pin Slammer?

I'd hate to sound so critical, but it really seems like the review is only partway finished. Perhaps this is because I've played the game to death already, but you really do seem like you're only covering half of the content there.