Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of Darkness Review

I made this review a while ago, and just now was looking at it to see if it needed to be improved. This is my second Review ever.

It could be improved. I can see quite a few spelling errors and there are some borderline spoilers. One thing that really threw me off was this:

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What really amazed me in this game were the items. New items were every where! Such as the Violent Seed and the Foe-Fear(Or Seal, I can't remember correctly) that were exclusive to Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of Darkness.

I'm trying to confirm it as we speak.

With the Good and Bad sections, I prefer seeing them listed by a bullet point or something of the like. It's not much fun trying to read a paragraph list, it's much nicer to be able to skim down through your points. This also makes it easier for when you include them in a summary, so people can pinpoint a bit they'd like to read.

Which is something you need to start doing. For example you said you don't like having to fill the belly on a regular basis yet you did not put that in the bad section. Likewise, I was expecting to read something about the storyline after you mentioned it in good but I received nothing.

Only other thing would be to start expanding, making the reviews longer which you'll be able to once you start covering the points properly.

Can someone explain Twilight to me?