OON: this is probly all i have time for tonight, i may get to where Frick catches his fourth pokemon but battle first
"Zubat, wing attack now"
"Clefable defense curl"
The curl block the blow from wing attack
"Let's try sometihng different Zubat, fly around Clefable as fast you can"
"Keep a lock on it Clefable, don't let it out of your site"
Clefable followed Zubat, who was spinning in circles so Clefable had to spin in circles to keep it's eye on Zubat, but Clefable got dizzy and wobbled about, just what Frick wanted
"Hit it with another wing attack now, right on it's right side!"
That caused some damage and caused Clefable to spin even more, it kept spinning till it fell to the ground, fainted.
"Return Clefable" said Whitney "now go Miltank, you can do it girl, rollout"
"Zubat watch out"
but it was too late and Zubat was squashed, Miltank was still rolling and came around and ran over zubat again, getting stronger each time.
"Zubat! no!" yelled Frick
Miltank rolled over Zubat again and made the bat faint
Inside Frick's mind he thought about who to use, Gligar was stronger but weak to rollout and Aipom did do good last match, but could she pull through, Frick was torn on who to use

it's very, very good. Keep up the great work.

This is great! Frick will pull through somehow Go Frick!

Frcik knew he Aipom would work better since he could stand a rollout attack (he hoped)
"Aipom let's do this"
"hmm interesting choice, well Miltank stay in rollout and rollover Aipom"
"Aipom this will be hard but hit the rolling Miltank with double hit"
Aipom timed it just perfectly and knocked Miltank out of rollout but took some damage herself
"Now hit with swift before she can roll again"
The stars hit Miltank and Whitney was stunned how fast this battle turned and she couldn't get a command off to Miltank
"Finish this Aipom with Double Hit"
Aipom hit Miltank with two powerful strikes which made Miltank faint
Frick thanked Whitney, healed his pokemon and countinued on his journey, he knew Morty had four pokemon so he would need a fourth to face against Morty and he kept walking towards Ecruteak, looking for wild pokemon as he walked foward

Awesome! Heaps goo,d he'll need a ohyschic pokemon to take out the ghosts!

Frick was walking towards the 4th gym, then he remembered Oak wanted to see him, so he went back to Goldenrod and went up to the tower, Oak was waiting for him with three pokeballs
"So i've heard from Elm you're doing good in the trainer world, so i thought i'd help you out, here are the Kanto starters, choose one" said Oak
Frick looked over the pokeballs and went with the water pokemon Squirtle
"that's a good choice, you won't be dispointed, so you're going to challenge Morty next, i suggest an Abra, they're hard to train but will help you lots against Morty, you can ifnd them very commonly in the wild grass, well i'll see you later"
With that Frick left to go after Morty with his four pokemon, he didn't want to train up an Abra but just get his badge, but he knew he would need one, just for the gym at least. He saw one in the wild grass right outside Ecruteak and caught it, he did some wild battles with it and decided he was ready for Morty. Also in his mind he would want to go back to Goldenrod to check out the fabeled daycare

Very, very good. I see you changed the title. Keep up the excellent writing, GM.

oon: thanks ill do more tommorrow but i noticed i had little views so i changed the title to something more catchy

Well, it's good.

yeah this is cool keep up the great work

Its going great Gm, lookign forward to mmore

OON: here is more, might not be able to get much in today, starting to focus on homework a bit more since it's the end of the second six weeks on friday

Frick headed into the gym and saw Morty there, he didn't have to say anything, he just stared into his eyes and Morty knew what he wanted.
"go abra!"
"of course a psychic pokemon, go Gastly!" spoke the bym leader. "Now confuse it with confuse ray"
Gastly shot a swirling beam from it's head and it hit Abra, confusing it.
"Dang that's not good, oh well Abra we can pull through, use psybeam!"
Abra was confused and couldn't tell it's moves apart so instead used Teleport and teleported back into it's ball
"um i've never had that happen before, what does that do in a battle" asked Frick.
"Sorry kid but teleport automatically forfeits the pokemon" replied Morty "the match isn't over though you still have three others you can use since this is 4 on 4"
Frick didn't plan this to happen and was realyl worried, what should he do now

That sucks! But damn, why did it happen. Just had to be Abra =/.

OON: well cause Abra could rape Mort's pokemon but i didn't want that to happen, Frick boxes up Abra after this anyway it was just a one gym pokemon

Frick decided to test out his new pokemon
"Go squirtle, now Water Gun"
"Interesting choice, dodge and Gastly use another confuse ray"
Gastly dodged it and shot another ray from it's head
"Squirtle use withdraw to bounce the ray back and use another water gun"
Squirtle did so, reflected the ray off it's shell, confused Gastly, then used watergun, Gastly tried to dodge but ended up hurting itself, combined with the damage from water gun, made it faint
"Hmm ok i have a proposal for you, now we make it a double battle, once you kill my two then it goes back to single battle where you try to kill my last one, in the double battle only you can sub" said Morty
"hmm ok why not, Aipom come out and help Squirtle"
"Normal type, interesting, well let's do this Haunter and Haunter"

OON: i'll finish it next post

It's great, the double battle will be awesome! ^^.