Frick soon regreted his choice of Aipom since it only had normal moves, all it could do is double team, but then it came to him
"Haunters use dark pulse" commander Morty
"Aipom jump infront of Squirtle and hit back the attacks with double hit"
Aipom did just that sending back two dark pulses each hit one Haunter, causing damage
"hmm now reflect this use shadow ball you guys"
The attacks went right through Aipom and hit Squirtle
"Squirtle no! get up buddy (he did get up), hmm i better end this before they do that again. Squirtle use withdraw, Aipom get behind him and hit him foward with double hit"
Aipom did just that sending a shell at the Haunters
"Now Squirtle use watergun while in your shell"
that made the direction of Squirtle's shell curve (like a boomerang) and it was about to hit both Haunters
"Haunters use Destiny bond now"
they bonded with Squirtle and Aipom, when Squirtle's shell his them and they fainted, Squirtle and Aipom also fainted
"Dang't, stupid ghosts, go Gligar"
"1 on 1 for the win, go Gengar"
Gligar and Gengar began to bash heads wing attack and shadowpunch
"Gengar deminosh his hp with curse"
Gilgar was cursed and was slowly losing hp and Frick could see he was going to faint very soon
"Gligar dont' give up stay strong buddy, hit him up with wing attack
Gligar did so but Gengar just stood his ground but began to look tired but Gligar looked as if he'd faint within 10 seconds
Frick got really worried now "all Gligar had was Headbutt and Wingattack but then Gligar used a new move, Faint Attack, hitting Gengar hard and it fainted, Gligar soon fainted too but Frick still had won the match and got his badge, he healed his pokemon then began to backtrack to Goldenrod

Yay go Frick! He's always finding a way out of things. Good on him!

OON: mhmm you know it, well that's probly all i have for now i need to get a start on my homework, i may be back later with the daycare scene and his 5th permanent pokemon

Oh ok, well homework does come before fun >.< Although it sucks. But be lookign forward to next part!

me too.. go Frick!!

OON: the new title has helped some, get more veiws at least, guess i'll start advertising, just a small post now since i don't have the next gym battle ready (in my head)

Frick went on towards goldenrod, he let out all his pokemon, even his Abra, they all looked really happy, Zubat did seem a little sad and left out, Frick tried to comfort him, saying he'll use him for the next gym. Soon he reached Goldenrod, first he stopped at the pokemon center and deposited Abra, then he went towards the daycare, the couple were old but seemed really nice, the three got to talking, Frick said he didn't have anypokemon to deposit, the couple said it was ok, as Frick was about to leave the old women gave Frick an egg and said
"the more steps you take the sooner the egg will hatch"
then Frick left the building, he wanted to know what was in the egg, the lady said the mroe steps he took the quicker the egg would hatch so he started running back and forth

it's good. maybe even better than my fanfic. JK.

OON: thanks guys, i'll start the next gym tommorrow i'll just end the nite with this

Frick kept running and running but the egg didn't hatch and he was exhausted, so he decided to keep going towards the next city and maybe the egg would hatch on the walk, he trained his pokemon as he walked, finally he made it to Olivine and loaded to the ferry to Cianwood, while waiting in his cabin the egg began to hatch

it's good. Once again, keep up the great work. Scratch that, I meant to say keep up the excellent work. And check my fanfic again. I've just updated it and it's got a flashback.

This is awesome Guitarman. Keep up the excellent stuff, can't wait to see what's in the egg.

yeah.. wonder what it is??

OON: i got really bored during 5th period so i drew an unfinished comic on Frick's battle vs Chuck, i'll see if i can get it on here (gotta take a pic of it with my cam), i can't drw so it looks bad but still, anyway back to the story, also i feel like titling the sections now

Frick Vs Chuck, 2vs2 Wrath and Bat
Frick was waiting for a pokemon to come out of the egg, but it was just a false alarm, but the egg was moving a lot now, it would hatch soon. The ferry had reached Cianwood, Frick got out and headed to the gym
"Chuck, i challenge you," spoke Frick
"Not many challegners recently, well let's go Poliwrath"
"I promised I'd use you, go Zubat"
"hmm a a first evolution, fall to the hands of a fully evolved, Poliwrath use Brick break"
Frick didn't expect Chuck to order his pokemon so quickly and was caught off gaurd and couldn't get a command off to Zubat, Poliwrath's first hit the bat sending it backwards.
"Zubat, come on buddy get up, fight moves shouldn't damage you that much"
"Poliwrath, trap him while he's down with whirlpool"
Poliwrath sent swirling water out of it's belly, trapping Zubat in the spinning waters, causing damage slowly
"Zubat, break out of there, come on buddy, you can do it"
Zubat tried to move, but the whirlpool had him immbolized, but the bat kept budging and wouldn't give in, finally it escaped the whirlpool.
"Good! now hit him quick with wing attack"
"How, how..did it escape, Poliwhirl watch out"
the command was too late Zubat had hit Poliwhirl and slammed it into the back wall.
Poliwhirl had quick recovory though and pulled itself out of the whole in the wall very quickly.
"Now jump up and do another brick break" yelled Chuck
Frick didn't say anything, Poliwhirl got closer and closer to Zubat
"Now Zubat fly under Poliwhirl and wing attack on it's back"
Zubat flew under the blue fighter and cut him straight in the back with a sharp wing, Poliwrath fainted on the spot
"Hmm, very good, but this fight isn't over, go Primape!"
"Zubat, let's attack first this time Wing Attack"
"Primape fight him off with Ice Punch"
Primape's punch got to Zubat before Zubat's attack got to Primape, Zubat was knocked back and frozen solid

OON: spoiler-Frick gets two new pokemon next post and i'll finish the fight next post

Thaqt was great! I can't wait for the next bit

Frick vs Chuck 2vs1 No More Zubat
"Come on Zubat, break out of the ice" said Frick trying to cheer on his pokemon
Zubat was frozen solid
"Kill the bat Primape with a focus punch"
Frick just stood and watch was the fist of the monkey came down on the block of ice with his bat inside. Primape punch the ice block with a powerful fist, shattering the ice and sending the bat flying into the wall. Both trainers thought that Zubat fainted but they both saw the bat was still flying in the air
"Does that bat ever die" asked Chuck
"Nope, now use another wing attack"
Zubat charged into Primape, cutting it was a sharp wing
"Fine but another ice Punch will kill it, right Primape?"
Primape nodded and preparred ice punch
"Counter with another Wing Attack Zubat"
Both attacks met and knocked back each pokemon and created a smoke of cloud. When the dust cleared Primape stood their tired and Zubat was no longer there, instead a Golbat was in it's place, but it looked even more exhausted. Golbat knew just what to do, it began to use wing attack because that's what Frick was going to command anyway. Golbat was faster than Zubat and got to Primape faster than Chuck expected and he didn't give out a command to Primape. Golbat was also stronger than Zubat and the attack was able to faint Primape.
Frick thanked Chuck, got his badge and left. He now had his very first sweep, but would he start to get too cocky. Frick didn't really think about much, he was just amazed at how Golbat stood up to all those attack, he was simply amazed. He went on the ferry, heading back to Olivine, while on the ferry his egg actually hatched and out came Magby!

Yes! I lvoe magmars, top choice! But yay Golbat. Eventually a crobat. I love both those pokemon. Awesome stuff. Great win by Frick