Frick was getting tired but kept running, the distance between the dogs kept getting greater, Frick could have to choose one dog to follow pretty soon. He decided to follow Entei, Entei kept going more right so Frick went right as well, Raikou was gone somewhere left of Frick. Entei wasn't getting tired, it just kept running and was getting ahead of Frick, to bad he didn't have a pokemon big enough to carry him. Entei brown beauty was getting away and soon was just a dot in the distance, Frick was upset he wanted the dog but there was nothing to do about it. He started walking back to the route, he was just exhausted. He was to tired to keep going to the next town, he got back on his route and found a big tree, he leaned back against the tree and feel asleep. He woke up a few hours later to see a big suprise. Raikou was there right infront of him and he spoke to Frick.
"I sense something in you, the power a good trainer, i don't want to leave me home but i want to assist you, so I shall be with you until you leave this land" spoke the dog and with that it went inside Frick's empty pokeball

OMG!! He got Raikou... He's soo lucky, he's my favorite dog

Wow, what a way to earn himself a Raikou. That's awesome!

OON: now the interesting stuff

Frick was amazed he actually had Raikou, he was shocked, but soon got over the shock and got up. He continued his journey to take on Pryce, He kept walking and started to see a whole bunch of BlackCoats to show up. Frick was getting suspicous. All the people wer staring at him, more and more and more started to show up. Frick noticed they all had a big red R on their shirts. Frick was getting nervous now to, he kept walking and then 'SLAM!'. Frick fell down a deep whole, all the black cloaks started climbing down a ladder on the side of the hole. There was a tunnel to the left of the hole. Frick started running down the tunnel, the blackcloaks were following him.
"Give us Raikou" they shouted. Frick kept running and running, he saw the end of the tunnel and a ladder leading up. But the Black coats had surrounded him, there were six of them and they let out 6 weezings. Frick let out all his pokemon except Raikou.
"Self destruct" the black coats commanded their Weezings.

This is awesome! Can't wait to see the next bit.

OON: well he needed an Elec pokeon and i needed a subplot, it all worked out. But as Raikou said he will accompony Frick until Frick leaves Johto

Frick quickly climbed the stairs the explosion boosted him up through the hole, as his pokemon except Gligar and Raikou (in it's ball) were fainted, the blackcloaks were following Frick up the hole now, so Frick recalled his pokemon and booked it out of there, he kept running and saw civiliazation, "a town!" he exclaimed in his mind. But the blackcloaks were still following him, so he ran towards the town, by the time he got in the town, the black cloaks had went another way, it seemed like they wanted no buisness in Mahogony town. Frick was so lost, confused and just shocked. The explosion had startled all his senses, he was stumbling around and then he saw the gym. That started his memory and he remembered that that's what he came here for. So he walked into the gym.
"....Pau.....no no...Prince...no Pryce, I challenge you for your gym badge"
"hmm ok, you just looked like you got in a fight boy, oh well go Seel!"
Frick reached for his belt and pulled out a regular pokeball "go Raikou" he exclaimed.
"ooh one of the legendary dogs, very powerful pokemon, but it takes a powerful trainer to control a powerful pokemon, are you that trainer?" asked Pryce.
"Yes" replied Frick "now thunderbolt!"

OON: http://neoseeker.com/forums/38223/t1146502-lightscapes-clash/
my new story, i'll still right this one but check my other one out

This message was edited by GuitarMan91 on Apr 29 2008.

This battle should be great! It's awesome stuff Gm!

OON: there is something about this battle that no one caught

Raikou was mroe powerful than Frick thought and Seel died on the spot.
"Hmm very nice, well try this out for size go Dewgong"
"Hit him with another thunderbolt Raikou"
"of course" replied the dog
"Wow it talks, amazing, well Dewgong hit him with an ice beam" said Pryce
The attacks hit both pokemon, Dewgong was barely holding on, Raikou was barely scratched
"Repeat!" commanded Frick and Pryce at the same time
That was it for Dewgong, Pryce was stunned on how easily his pokemon were dying
"Fine now try this go Piloswine"
"Hmm Raikou just use another thunderbolt"
"Earthquake now Piloswine"
The thunderbolt had no effect on Piloswine and Raikou was shaken about by the earthquake
"what how" asked Frick
"Ground is resists Electric attacks" responded Raikou
"You're puppy is right, now use another earthquake"
Raikou couldn't take the supereffectivness of the earthquake and fainted
"well that's no trouble go Sq....."
Frick reached for Squirtle's ball but it was lifeless, then he remember that the self destruct Koffing's fainted all his pokemon, this wasn't good for Frick, but he still had one more left

That he's going to lose?

OON:that some of his pokemon were fainted and he didn't heal them, but he may lose he may win, i'll do mroe tommorrow, sorry for not updating very much recently

Oh. And no problem for the updating thing.

It's fine, this stuff is awesome Guitarman, keep up the awesomenss!

Aiden, could you check out my new fanfic? It's called Raikou's Revenge. But this is great. I'm really happy that Frick got Raikou, that's my fave legendary. Keep up the excellent work.

This message was edited by Bluepikky24 on May 01 2008.

If this is your attempt to write a fan fic, or even a story, it's a VERY poor attempt, my AVP:Genesis story is better then this, you need to be more descriptive and not be vague and say "he pulled a pokeball from his bag" is hould be something like..."Prof. Elm reached into his red, cool bag only to find he had one pokéball left, not sure of what it was, he gave it to Frick only to find, to his bemused amazement, A gligar!" or something along those lines that was critisism not being an asshole hope i helped..a bit, sorry if it seemed i was being rude