OON: i would like to ask you to delete your post and never ever post in one of my threads again, unless you have something good to say
if you have nothing good to say don't say anything
The story focuses more on the battles than the descriptions and actually the battles are pretty well described, it seems like you judged this whole story of the first post

Frick didn't
want to let Pryce know he didn't have a third pokemon, he felt so stupid for forgetting to heal his pokemon. That show that he is far from perfect. But now he needed to focus on the battle.
"go Gligar" Frick shouted
Gligar jumped out with his tongue hanging, he was fully charged and ready to go.
"Very interesting choice, someone 4 time weak to ice, well nevertheless use icebeam!"
"Dodge it Gligar and hit back with wing attack"
Gligar smoothly dodged the attack and fired back at Piloswine with a sharp wing and hit it but Piloswine had a lot of stamina and wouldn't be taken down easily
"quickly fire another ice beam"
This attack came to fast and as too much of a suprise for Gligar to dodge and he was hit and frozen solid
OON: sorry for the shortness, i'll finish it up next post

Thats fine, but some of us know what this is about GM. Ignore that. Great stuff, loving the battles.

BUMP!!!!! WRITE MORE OR ELSE!!

Whens the next update! This is awesome Gm! Keep it going!

This is brilliant! More! More!

long story short comp is down with virus will update when comp is fixed thanks

OOC: ok i've found away past my compy's virus and will update tommorrow probably, unless a get a real life girlfriend(it's complicated) then I'll update maybe tommorrow but more likely thursday

Okay.

But Frick wouldn't give up just yet, he stared Pryce straight in the eyes and Pryce stared back. Frick wished he had healed his other pokemon but couldn't do anything about it now, he just really didn't want to lose.
"Gligar, falp your wings as fast as you can to try to break free." commanded Frick. The ice had stopped Gligar from flying so it was laying and the ground and still coudln't move, the fact Gligar was now on the ground gave Pryce the idea for his next move.
"Earthquake!" shouted Pryce. Usually this attack wouldn't work against a flyer but since Gligar was on the ground it worked and Gligar bounced up and down harshly, taking damage. But eventually the slamming motion against the ground, broke the ice and freed Gligar, but Gligar was exhausted.
"Gligar just don't give up, you can do it buddy" cheered Frick. The encouragement from his trainer gave Gligar strength. Gligar new just want to go, it swept in with a rampage of wing attacks, Piloswine being so slow couldn't do anything. Every icebeam it shot, Gligar dodged. Pryce was amzed on how quickly this battle changed. Gligars eyes began to glow and Frick's did to, not like scary glow, just a little shin. They were experiencing full syncro, the strongest bond between trainer and pokemon. Then something amazing happened, something that might never happen again.
"Attack!" Frick yelled, he didn't say what attack just attack. Gligar opened it's mouth, and it started to glow yellowish, then turned silver and the glkow became bigger, finally a big and powerful beam was released, Synchro Beam, Piloswine fainted on the spot. Pryce was so shocked he could barely move, but he gave Frick a badge and Frick left.
OOC: boys and girls I'm back. That whole synchro thing isn't going to happen everytime, maybe not at all anymore. Frick isn't going to become unbeatable, I just need something cool to end that batle with.

It's still good.

Frick was very proud of his pokemon, but he knew he had something he needed to do, he needed to go heal his pokemon. He ran to the center and gave Nurse Joy 6 pokeballs, which she put on the machine and handed the balls kindly back to Frick. While Frick was walking out he heard two men talking. They were talking about something going on in Blackthorn, an epic battle between the Champion and Gym Leader. This confused Frick a bit, how can the battle between a gym leader and league champion be any good. He was heading towards Blackthorn anyway to challenge the...Gym Leader, which was in a fight. Frick quickly picked up his pace, he may have the chance to see his opponet battle before he had to fight them.

OOC: sorry for the shortnes, just had to set this up

That's cool.

Gm this is great! Keep up the awesome work mate!

Lol. Indeed, this is awesome.