Rayenne sighed in relief.
She took off for the gym. When she reached it, she walked straight in, and bumped straight into the head guy himself.
"Rayenne? Is that you?" he asked.
"I'm sorry Volkner! I didn't mean to bump into you!" Rayenne stuttered.
"No big deal!" he laughed. "So, how is my best friend's little sister?" he asked.
"I'm good! Just came to visit you. How are you?" she smiled.
"I'm doing good thanks. It's nice to see you again, haven't seen you in about two years, and my have you grown." he replied.
"You sound like a parent you know that. Actually, you sound like Lucian." Rayenne said suspiciously.
"Ha, you are like the little sister I never had Rayenne." Volkner replied, smiling down at her.
"Thanks Volkner!" Rayenne said, hugging him.

"Staraptor! GO!" Shouted Jehdin as he threw his pokeball in the air.
"Staraptor use fly and take us to Sandgem town to see Rowan!"
Staraptor flaped his huge wings and lifted to the sky with Jehdin and Oak on his back as he gracefully flew away.
"Wooohooo!" shaouted Oak, highly out of the ordinary for him but i decided to let him have his fun "nomatter how many times i o this i'm always taken back to my first day of my trainer-hood!" the wind combing his grey hair, but the cold turning his lips a light shade of blue, 1 hour later, we touched down infront of Rowans laboratory.

Compared to Raikou's Revenge, this is far superior. But compared with my finished fanfic, Destruction of Darkness, it's still good.

Thanks, and we havent even got to the tip of the iceberg, and nothing can be more suerior than your fanfic, Destruction of darkness

Rayenne and VOlkner had decided to go to a cafe.
"Onee-san!" she said happily.
Her brother Lucian had come to join them.
"Hey Rayenne, hey Volkner." he said smiling.
Rayenne ran to her brother and hugged him.
Lucian hugged her back, smiling down at her.
"So, Rayenne, how is your training going?" asked Lucian, sitting down at the table.
"It's ok, I prefer to be friends with my pokemon. But I did beat Roark." Rayenne said, sipping her drink.
Volkner and Lucian smiled. They both knew Roark, the little rock gym leader.
"Speaking of which, I have to go visit Riley tomorrow, anyone up for joining me?" asked Lucian, looking at the two.
"I can't, gym training." groaned Volkner.
"I'll go onee-san!" Rayenne said, sprakles in her eyes.
"Then I won't have to go alone," laughed Lucian, smiling at her.


NOTE: Rayenne can speak Japanese. 'Onee-san' mean brother.

As Jehdin walked through the doors of the rowans laboratory a boy, no older than 13 walked out if the doors in such a hurry that it almost knocked Oak over
"Sorry" he said shyly, his head facing the floor, nd ran off.
"What was that all about?" asked Jehdin with a frown upon his face.
"I don't know, but by the looks of things he was a new trainer"
"how do you know that?"
"Many reasons...
1)He had only 1 pokéball i his belt
2)He came tunning out of the laboratory, no one is allowed in there unless they are a trainer
and 3)I know him, he a friend of Rowans daughter."
"Oak! My old friend how are you?" A voice bellows from inside, a man, no older than Oak stepped out of the doors. It was Rowan.

There just might be a sequel to Destruction of Darkness to look forward to.

YES! although you shouldn't advertise that here.... Makes my FF look bad

"Rowan!" boomed Oak with a beaming face of joy, which i have never seen before.
"I'll erm leave you two to catch up...It was nothing importent anyways, it can wait"
"oh..Okay, Oak, please do come in, i have something that may interest you..."
And with that Oak and Rowan dissapperead into th laboratory, leaving Jehdin on his own.
After a few minutes of wondering around Sandgem he came across a new trainer in distress, well he seemed new, he had one of the sinnoh starter pokemon, Turtwig.
"Go Torterra!" shouted Jehdin throwing his starter pokemon into the air and landing to the ground without even a tremor.
"Torterra! Leaf storm!" Torterra started to glow an eery Yellow/green colour when suddenly leaves erupted from the tree on it's back and clouded the foe -bidoof- in a tornado of leaves, when the leaf storm has subsided bidoof ley there, Fainted.

Rayenne and Lucian were on their way to Iron Island.
"Ralts, teleport!" Rayenne said, tossing out a pokeball.
A little Ralts appeared, and with a nod of its head, Lucian, Rayenne, and itself disappeared in a flash of light.
A few seconds later, they reappeared on an island, filled with miners, and steel type trainers.
"Riley should be over here..." Lucian said, walking off in a direction.
Rayenne followed, and they stopped behind a finely dressed guy about the age of 17.
"Riley, my friend!" Lucian said.
The man turned around and smiled.
"Lucian! How good to see you." he smiled. "And Rayenne, every meeting is not only a pleasure, but a treat to be with someone as lovely as you."
Rayenne blushed twenty shades of pink, but managed a shy smile.
"So, how are you two?" Riley asked.
"I'm doing good, here on some buisness." Lucian said.
"I'm fine, and you?" Rayenne asked.
"Life is wonderful, as always, but with you around, it's even better." Riley said to the two of them.
Lucian smiled, and looked at his watch.
"I have to go, I'm meeting Bertha, she has something to tell me, but I'll pick you up in about an hour or so Rayenne. Good bye!" Lucian said.
Riley and Rayenne waved. Riley turned to Rayenne.
"I actually have something to show you. Are you willing to follow me?" he asked.
"Always!" Rayenne said, beaming.
Riley and Rayenne walked into the giant cave, going deeper and deeper, until they reached a sort of underground city.
"This is my new project, I've discovered it here." Riley said.
Rayenne was speechless, it was amazing. Pokemon moved to and fro, looking for fossils, and other things.
"Do you like it?" he asked.
"I love it." Rayenne said.

"What the hell do you think you are doing!"Shouted the Trainer
"It looked like you were in trouble"
"Well i wasn't, i have traveled all the way through Kanto Johto and Hoenn i think i can handle myself!"
"Really? wow! umm who are you?" asked Jehdin felling stupid for making such a stupid mistake.
"Ash, Ash ketchum, you?" Jehdin just stood there, amazed, he has heard of a strong trainer walking through the different countries of the pokemon world.
"i'm ummm..." studdard jehdin, rubing the back of his head"...Jehdin, Jehdin Clayton, i'm the new Pokemon league champion, just today"
"Woah, really, so this is what I'll be up against" Ash took his eyes turned around looking for Jehdin, but he had gone, all that was left of his existence there was a note that floated down to the ground saying 'sorry had to leave, hope we meet again soon' And Ash looked up, and saw him flying off into the sunset.

This message was edited by Torterra93 on May 16 2008.

Ninetales_team can you please add some more to the FF, please?

Thanks ^^

Ok, I'll add.

Rayenne sighed and lookd around her. The city was truly magnificent.
Rayenne turned around, and saw pokemon carrying rocks, fossils, and many other things. They were all working so peacefully, and happily.
Then of course, Rayenne slipped, and almost fell into a large hole. But, to her relief, Riley caught her.
"Thank you!" Rayenne said, when she regaind her balance.
"I couldn't let anything happen to a precious gem like you. You're a rare find, and quite a special one." Riley replied, smiling down at her.

staraptor touched down at the enternece to Iron island.
"Reyenne!?Rayenne?!" shouted Jehin
He heard a distant scream and ran following the sound, he came to the enternene to a cavern and inside was a maginifcent City. The scream had came from Rayenne and he saw Riley pulling her up from a hole.
"I couldn't let anything happen to a precious gem like you. You're a rare find, and quite a special one." Said Riley. Jehdin clenched his fists, gritted his teeth and walked towards his rival-Riley

Sorry it's rubbish but i didn't have much time

Add please! ninetales_team