Rayenne blushed furiously, but managed to smile at Riley.
She heard a small shout of fury come from behind her and Riley, and turned around to find Jehdin storming over to them.
"Jehdin? I thought you were going to visit Rowan?" asked Rayenne, confused.
"Do you know him? Could you introduce me?" asked Riley politely.
"Riley, this is Jehdin, I met him in Sunnyshore before he went to beat Cynthia. Jehdin, this is Riley, a really awesome person." she said.
"Congratulations on beating Cynthia, it is a pleasure to meet you." Riley said.
Jehdin looked like he was going to kill someone.

More!

"Thanks" Jehdin said with a forced smile " The pleasures all mine"
There was an awkward silence...
" So...What do you think of this city?" Asked Reyenne to Jehdin, trying to break the silence, but Jehdin just stood there, mesmerised by something.
Reyenne turned round, then it was obvious why he was standing so still. Behind them stood, angered was Regirock.

Sorry it's a short one, but i'm very busy

This is good. I can't wait to read what happens next.

"Run" whispered Riley to Reyenne " Me and Jehdin will fight him off" with that Reyenne slowly moved backwards towards the enterence of the city. Regirock started to advance.
" GO! TORTERRA!" shouted Jehin, throwing hisprize pokemon in the air
" Lucario, do your thing!" Lucario burst out of his pokeball, it wasn't until then Jehdin realised Riley and Lucario looked so similar.
"Lucario Aura sphere!" Lucario cupped his hands and a multi-colured ball grew to the size of his head in his hands and released it. It hit Regirock straight in the chest knocking him back a little bit.
"Torterra! Leaf storm" torterra started to glow an eery Yellow colour then leaf lept from the huge tree on torterra back and covered Regirock in a twister of Leaves, when the stor had subsided both Riley and Jehin were gone.

"Riley? Riley! Jehdin!" Rayenne cried, her eyes widening.
The Regirock turned and advanced towards her. She dashed away, hoping it would leave her alone. But, it didn't. It fired a hyper beam at her, which she scrambled away from just in time.
"Ralts! Help!" she cried, tossing out her female Ralts' pokeball in the air.
A little Ralts came out. It clapped its hands, and used a Confusion attack to send the remaining leaves from Torterra's Leaf Storm at the rock Pokemon.
The leaves surrounded Regirock, acting of their own accord, and fastened themselves around it, forcing it to the ground.
"Ralts! You are amazing!" cried Rayenne, hugging her pokemon.
It cooed, and then glowed a bright white. After a moment, a new pokemon stood in its place.
"Kirlia..." it said surprised.
Rayenne stood staring. She wasn't expecting her weakest pokemon to evolve.

A bright white light sudenly filled the enterence to the elite four. The light faded and in it's place were Lucian, Jehdin and Riley.
"Where's Reyenne!" Screamed Riley
Jehdin smiled. "I'm sure she'll be okay"
" How do you know, she could be dead for all we know!" this time Riley's Voice almost reaching an Ultra-sonic level.
" I know, because she's right behind you..."
Riley turned round but no-one was there.
" Wha-" he fell to the floor. Jehdin had hit him over the head with a rock. Lucain also lay there, Bertha right behind him. "Right lets go" said Bertha and with that they walked off into the darkness.

This is where MeagLatios_Slayer is meant to start writing, but i think he can't be bothered, anyone wanna take his place..You can choose difernt pokemon if you wish?

I'm always up for writing.

Edit: I'm up now! xD.
A tall man, who looked at be aged about twenty-eight, walked into the area where Riley and Lucia lay unconcious. "Drago, move these bodies away from here" Chris murmered, releasing his prized Dragonite.
"Drago!" his pokemon nodded and pulled the bodies of the two men away from the entrance to the elite Four.
"Good work, Drago. Now, return" he commanded, holding out a red and white pokeball.
He recalled his Dragonite and walked into the main league area, heading for where Bertha and Jehdin were.
Good enough entrance?

This message was edited by Bluepikky24 on May 29 2008.

Welcoming our new writer...Bluepikky24!

EDIT: Hell yeah, that is a good enternece!

This message was edited by Torterra93 on May 29 2008.

thank you, thank you. It's a honour to help with this fanfic. First section is on my second to last post, the one above yours.

" Hiiiyaaaaaa!" Bertha screamed jumping behind Chis about to hit him with her walking stick. But he was too quick for little old Bertha, he twisted round grabbed the sicked pushed it towards her impalinh Bertha againt the wall. Bertha was flailing and screaming in pain and all Jehdin do was smile beneath his dark blue hat.
"You took your time..." Jehdin mocked
"Well i wanted to make an enterence"
"You know, your pretty weak..considering were so alike" Jehdin and cgris now face to face.
" Well... I'm not as weak as you think, i can't be..after all..." there was a long pause "...We are twins."

Now that's a twist.

"Now that you mention it, I guess we do look similar. Ah, by the way, you might as well meet my pokemon" Chris said.
He pulled 5 pokeballs from his belt and threw them into the air. "Drago, Electa, Lava, Mile, Luke, come on out!" he yelled.
His Pikachu leapt down from it's place on his shoulder and stood beside him. "Pika!" it exclaimed proudly.
"This is Mile, my Milotic. Luke, my Lucario, Drago, my Dragonite, Electa, my Electabuzz, and Thunder, my Pikachu".

"Hahahaha! like i said...Pathetic!" he spat, with that he pulled 6 pokeballs from his belt" go pokemon!" Light filled the room as from the pokeballs emerged; Torterr,Draginite, Metaross,Lucario and Staraptor.
"Torterra leaf storm!" Leaves entwined theur way around Chris' Pokemon " Torterra use leaf st-" he was cut short...For in the doorway stood, horrified, bruised nd batterd was Reyenne.

"You know what, Jehdin? You're no different that when we last met. Arrogant. Impulsive. The list goes on" Chris said coldly.
"Yeah? Well, you aren't much better" spat Jehdin angrily.
"I'll show you! Mile, Ice Beam! Electa, ThunderPunch! Luke, Force Palm! Thunder, use Volt Tackle! Drago, use Hyper Beam! Lava, use Overheat!" Chris shouted.
Jehdin's Pokemon instantly fainted and Chris recalled his. "Don't waste my time, Jehdin. Especially after this" Chris snapped.