sry for the lack of length, and the greatness, ive been busy with finals and wrote a little of my idea of part 6, part 7 will contain what i didnt have time to put in part 6 and the full length of part 7

omg i can't wait to see wat is next. I wonder why Torterra hit Kyle and Chris. I have to read whats next.

i did say the new part was coming today, i apologize, but it wont b til tomorrow cuz i was busy today, ill do part 7 in the morning

Wow ....You Should Turn This Into A Book And Publish It! I'm Sure A Lot Will Like It And I Sure Know I'll Get A Copy!

I'm thinking that I can't wait to read part 7.

hey brown who did ur banner

as promised...

Part 7


Torterra was running very fast towards Christina. (Keep in mind that hes not really moving that fast because he is big and heavy, but very fast for a large pokemon) Torterra's eyes were blood red, and he had a psychic glow around him. Torterra hit Christina hard! Tears appeard in Kyle's eyes, as it hit and Kyle threw a pokeball. Charmeleon appeared.
"Charmeleon Flamethrower on Torterra!" Kyle yelled as he ran to Christina "Are you ok Christina?"
"No, it hurts!" She screamed!
"MUHAHAHAHAHA" a female voice mysteriously laughed!
"Who's there?" Kyle and Christina said simultaneously.
"You don't need to no" she said, and leaped out of the tree, and she ran away. Torterra was laying on the ground, because Charmeleon knocked it out and its psychic glow was gone. Kyle picked up Christina and put her up against a tree. a Pokeball fell out of the tree. Kyle threw the pokeball, and a Alakazam came out. The pokemon sparkled as it came out, and was a darker yellow, and a faint purple where it should be brown. Kyle liked the alakazam, but new it was somebody elses, so he returned it and put it in the bag. The pokeball was wierd, it was the same colors as Alakazam, and had a "TS" sticker on the top.
"TS, what could 'TS' mean?" Kyle was wondering
"A trainer's name and last name?" she asked.
Kyle threw a pokeball at Torterra, and it didnt catch, so it wasn't his. They headed in the direction that the Team Space grunt ran. They came to a City. A sign above the pokemon center read...

"Platinum City Pokemon Center"

"Let's go in" Kyle said.
"Yeah, and we could use some rest"
Kyle and Christina walked in and saw Nurse Joy with a smile on her face.
"Hello" Nurse Joy said.
"Hi, can we stay here the night?" They both asked?
"Yes, heres a key to the room" she said to them.
"We found this pokeball, It here it is" ** Kyle handed the pokeball to Nurse Joy **
"Thank you1" She said.
"Do you no what the TS stands for" Christina said?
"Yes, it is 'Team Space'"
** Nurse Joy hands it back **
"Keep the pokemon, you will be a better trainer, and rip the sticker off" Nurse Joy said.
"Isn't that stealing?" Kyle asked?
"Technically yes, but we can keep this a secret" she said.
Kyle stuck the pokeball on his belt, and as he did that, a Space Grunt walked in the door and put up a wanted poster.... the grunt left, and Kyle walked over to the poster. He read it out loud....

"Wanted: Alakazam, appearece slighty different thant normal Alakazams" .........

i hoped every1 likes Part 7

quote teampokepimps

hey brown who did ur banner

wow part 7 was great. I hope kyle keeps the pokemon. i knew the torterra wasn't his. wow it takes a real villian to walt up to a pc

Wowz,fantastic,amazing,hawt,hot,sexy,oh yeah.
I love it
PART 8 PART 8 PART 8 PART 8!

quote jets15

Wowz,fantastic,amazing,hawt,hot,sexy,oh yeah.
I love it
PART 8 PART 8 PART 8 PART 8!

quote cromerowelch

wow part 7 was great. I hope kyle keeps the pokemon. i knew the torterra wasn't his. wow it takes a real villian to walt up to a pc

yah it was awesome

I wonder if Kyle will ever see his torterra

Heh, turns out you're a 2-for-1 deal: a good spriter and a good writer..A few grammatical errors, nothing much, but I get the full grasp of the story. I like it so far. Keep up the terrific work!

quote brownsrock43

"Keep the pokemon, you will be a better trainer, and rip the sticker off" Nurse Joy said.
"Isn't that stealing?" Kyle asked?
"Technically yes, but we can keep this a secret" she said.

quote cromerowelch

I wonder if Kyle will ever see his torterra

quote Duckloaf312

lawl. Gimmie Part 8!