Topic: Mystery of Torterra
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brownsrockIch wähle dich! Glumanda!Neo or Bust wiki contributorpokemon    total posts: 7455 since: Mar 2008
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 May 26, 08 at 9:59pm
re: Mystery of Torterra
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im sry no part 8, part 8 will be posted early tomorrow afternoon, and part 9 will be posted later on after
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Bluepikky24Author extraordinaireNeolithic     total posts: 6217 since: Jun 2007
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 May 26, 08 at 10:35pm
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brownsrockIch wähle dich! Glumanda!Neo or Bust wiki contributorpokemon    total posts: 7455 since: Mar 2008
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 May 27, 08 at 8:16pm
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heres part 8, sry for the delay, i finally got some time to post
Part 8
Kyle saw the poster, knowing the wanted Alakazam was the Space Grunt's missing pokemon. "That's the same guy who keeps messing with us, and we have ahold his rare pokemon what should we do?" he asked. "I think we should keep ahold of it for at least a while, at least until we get your Torterra or your Weavile" she said back. Kyle put the sticker on an empty pokeball, and when up to the grunt... "Do you no who this belongs to? Kyle said. "..." thinking "Give me that!!!" the grunt said and ran out of the building. The grunt didnt even care to notice the ball was empty. "Wow Kyle said" as he was still shocked. "Ok Kyle, what did you just do here?" Christina asked, sounding confused. "I put the 'TS' sticker on top of an empty pokeball and gave it to him, he ran out before even checking it" "Ohhh..." she understood now, "thats funny" Kyle and Christina got going, and they were walking, and it was uphill. They finally got to a cave. Kyle let Charmeleon out for light in the cave. Chrameleon couldnt light it up much at all, so Kyle returned him. They walked in, and walked what appeared as forever in the dark forever, but it was about a quarter mile. Kyle and Christina held eachother close in the dark, unsure of what could happen next.They got towards the end of the cave, and there was a lighted room, and there were 4 cages in the middle of the room, varrying in size by the pokemon in it, and there was lights on the ceiling, and a laptop computer with a picture of Torterra, Weavile, Arcanine, and Golduck on it. Kyle ran up to the cage with Torterra in it. "Torterra!! I've finally found you!!" "Torterra-Torterra!" it said back as it was trying to break down the metal cage door to get to Kyle. Christina was also happy to see her Weavile. Weavile also was excited like Torterra. "Charmeleon, come out!" Kyle yelled as he released a pokeball. "Char-Char" it said, like always, as it appeared. "Charmeleon, use ur flamethrower against the cage door" Kyle ordered. Charmeleon did as ordered, but as it it, the cage became surrounded by a force field, and had no effect. "What?" Kyle said, confused. "Thats impossible" Christina said, wanting to cry. An Abra appeared on the of the cages, and nothing was getting through. "Charmeleon, use Flamethrower on Abra!!" Kyle yelled. "Char-Char" it said as it released a powerful Flamethrower. Abra didnt take an damage still. "Charmeleon, body slam it!!" Kyle yelled. "Char-Char!!!" and it slammed Abra. Abra lost power of the forcefield, and was returend into a pokeball. Charmeleon Flamethrowerd the cages with Torterra and Weavile in them. Weavile was released from the cage, and ran to Christina, but it was strange, Torterra's cage was un harmed. The cage began to rattle, and the cage fell through the floor, and was gone, the whole filled bac up with a fake peice of ground. "Yay! Weavile is back!" Christina said excitedly as Kyle sat down on the gound. Christina quickly noticed he was depressed, and sat next to him on the ground. "Yes, we got my Weavile back, and I'm happy, but We can't give up on Torterra" she said. "Yeah, I no, but everytime we get within distance of one, it turned out to not be mine, and we finally found mine, and it was taken, right in front of me, again" he said, he was very sad. "We will never give up, Kyle! We will get Torterra back no matter what!!" "Thankyou Christina" he smiled as he said it, and he hugged her. The passage that Torterra fell though, opened, and Kyle and Christina wanted to explore to see what lies ahead of them.......
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brownsrockIch wähle dich! Glumanda!Neo or Bust wiki contributorpokemon    total posts: 7455 since: Mar 2008
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 May 27, 08 at 8:16pm
re: Mystery of Torterra
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thank you everyone for waiting patiently for part, sry for the lack of length, but i couldnt seem to make it any longer, and I have been very busy, with school and a few other things, and just got around to posting this, i hope you all like it!
ill post part 9 tomorrow!
coming friday and beyond, ill be able to post more often cuz school is out!
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Bluepikky24Author extraordinaireNeolithic     total posts: 6217 since: Jun 2007
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 May 27, 08 at 8:55pm
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Yay! Still very epic, can't wait to see more!
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iRock93forum native     total posts: 193 since: May 2008
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 May 28, 08 at 4:14pm
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brownsrockIch wähle dich! Glumanda!Neo or Bust wiki contributorpokemon    total posts: 7455 since: Mar 2008
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 May 30, 08 at 10:50pm
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i started part 9, but i dont have enough to post, so i will finish writing in the morning and post it
i apologize for the lack of parts, ive been busy latly and am not on alot anymore
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brownsrockIch wähle dich! Glumanda!Neo or Bust wiki contributorpokemon    total posts: 7455 since: Mar 2008
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 Jun 01, 08 at 4:43pm
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im finishing part 9 and it will b posted tomorrow, sry ive been busy
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Bluepikky24Author extraordinaireNeolithic     total posts: 6217 since: Jun 2007
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 Jun 01, 08 at 9:22pm
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No prob. That's cool. And the thing about the Team Peace RP? Well, I'm going to add some more spaces to it, so more people can join. Meaning you can, like you wanted to before.
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brownsrockIch wähle dich! Glumanda!Neo or Bust wiki contributorpokemon    total posts: 7455 since: Mar 2008
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 Jun 01, 08 at 10:20pm
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quote Bluepikky24
No prob. That's cool. And the thing about the Team Peace RP? Well, I'm going to add some more spaces to it, so more people can join. Meaning you can, like you wanted to before. alright cool
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Bluepikky24Author extraordinaireNeolithic     total posts: 6217 since: Jun 2007
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 Jun 01, 08 at 10:34pm
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Emmanuel Agullana101Let's Brawl!submission happy   total posts: 135 since: May 2008
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 Jun 02, 08 at 3:47am
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Mothman123Vote Leprachaun 08ultra seeker    total posts: 1253 since: May 2008
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 Jun 03, 08 at 3:01pm
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U should include more symbolism, and imagery.Ima writer XD
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brownsrockIch wähle dich! Glumanda!Neo or Bust wiki contributorpokemon    total posts: 7455 since: Mar 2008
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 Jun 03, 08 at 7:31pm
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sry, delayed by the thunder storms they r constant so i can only b on the comp for like a few hours at a time, which isnt really enough time for a good story, cuz i could put something together in about 10 mins, but i want it to be good!
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U should include more symbolism, and imagery.Ima writer XD alright, ill try to  and have u read the first 8? if so, how did u like them?
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brownsrockIch wähle dich! Glumanda!Neo or Bust wiki contributorpokemon    total posts: 7455 since: Mar 2008
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 Aug 10, 08 at 12:30am
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this this topic is pinned mine as well say it
read the story if your bored, tell me what you think
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