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Topic: Serve in Heaven, Reign in Hell
kitty123
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Jul 16, 08 at 3:01pm
re: Serve in Heaven, Reign in Hell

Wow this is going along well

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Jul 17, 08 at 8:13am
re: Serve in Heaven, Reign in Hell

Heh hehe. Thankies!

Dajay's turn. *Prods repeatitively*
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Jul 17, 08 at 8:46am
re: Serve in Heaven, Reign in Hell

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Lux returned to Xenocrates' half-destroyed house with a sullen look on his face. Some of the other villagers had come outside to see what the fuss was about, then went back inside when they saw who's house it was, Xenocrates. The strange one in the village. No-one spoke to him, they just acknowledged that he was different. Xenocrates, who was used to this, had ignored them and now looked at the returning Lucario.
'I lost him. Izuri escaped with Adama.' This chilled Xenocrates. He had known that Izuri was uncomfortable with this new Adama... This better Adama. As Xenocrates was thinking about this, the dark aura snuck round behind him and crept up his leg from behind. Xenocrates' leghair prickled up. He shivered as it slid up his back, and fell to his knees as it reached his head, and absorbed itself in. Neither Lux nor Xenocrates noticed...
Xenocrates thought for a moment about what Izuri would do... presumably return Adama's aura. That's what he wanted to happen... He remembered that the Earthquake had happened in Nestor's cave... So that had a connection to Adama's ex-superior.
"It was P-"
"You'll interrupt my train of thought, tell me later." That means that it would be easiest for Izuri to go back and forth at the cave! "Lux, I'm off to Nestor's cave. Stay here."
"Why?"
"Because I told you to." Xenocrates snapped at Lux, then used his aura to fly off at incredibly fast speeds.


... (prod prod)


edit: okay, to mop up any confusion, this post happens before Boo's last one

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Jul 17, 08 at 1:08pm
re: Serve in Heaven, Reign in Hell

What?



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kitty123
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Jul 17, 08 at 2:12pm
re: Serve in Heaven, Reign in Hell

Uh oh what's going to happen to Lux

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Jul 23, 08 at 4:42am
re: Serve in Heaven, Reign in Hell

This is weird... when you reply, you see that I've edited it, but normally, you can't... This happened with the other thread too...


Fixed now



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Jul 24, 08 at 4:45pm
re: Serve in Heaven, Reign in Hell

The sharp bang shuddered as light poured into her eyes, she stirred as she propped herself up with her elbow, watching as Lux held back Izuri, and Xenocrates charged an aura. She wasn't sure what she was doing, but something drove her to do what she did. He thrust her hand towards the aurasphere, and a white shield spread around it, engulfing the room in an amazing light. She wasn't sure how she was doing it, nor could she control it. She sent the other three flying in different directions, she sucked in breathe, stopping the white psychic suddenly. It deteriorated into nothing, to see Izuri standing and smirking. "Don't touch me." She warned him, whipping her hand to create a psychic. Izuri laughed and smashed it with a dark pulse, forcing her to jump forward over it and into the hands of Izuri. Xenocrates recovered, and ran at them, but Izuri stopped him in his tracks with a poison jab. He collapsed to the ground as he gasped for air. Lux looked to all of them, then ran out to fetch an antidote, as it was the only way to save one of them. Adama wriggled as she called to Xenocrates, who wasn't responding in anyway. Izuri smirked; "You'll soon see my actions were right." Before repeating his previous actions and forcing her to absorb her aura. Taking her back to her evil ways. "Oh yes Izuri. I understand now." She smirked, throwing off the cape she was wearing, more powerful than ever before.

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Jul 25, 08 at 12:47am
re: Serve in Heaven, Reign in Hell

I lay on the floor, still feeling the effects of the poison... Adama's aura was back... She was bad again... I would have cried, but I just didn't have the energy. I tried to channel aura into my mind... it didn't work. I tried my hands... didn't work. I tried my feet... it didn't work. My aura was immobilized...
"Adama?" I croaked, my voice affected like the rest of my body... However, she still noticed me.
"Well lover-boy! It seems that you couldn't stop a pokemon. Doesn't that make you feel strong?" I wanted to be angry... This Adama I hated. This Adama was the one I had to take down. The one I had to stop.
She smiled sardonically at my enfeebled body. Then, she laughed. She started to charge an aura sphere against my head. When it reached full capacity, it was practically touching me. She raised her arm to strike.
"Well, I guess this is goodbye!" She shouted, and plunged down her arm. It embedded itself in the floor. I wasn't there anymore. The arm had gone through 'me' and hit the floor. From the cave mouth, I laughed. I was holding an empty bottle of antidote in my hand, and Lux having returned by my side.
"You're losing your touch! Couldn't you notice a substitute?" I joked, then shot two aura spheres larger than the one she had made, instantaneously at her and Izuri. They fell short, hit the ground, and split it open. They fell through cracks in the ground. Having dealt with them, I flew off, Lux by my side.


Yes, I know I wrote this one in First Person, but it feels better that way...

Oh, and I'm off to Yorkshire for a week and probably won't be able to write D:



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Jul 26, 08 at 11:58am
re: Serve in Heaven, Reign in Hell

I hate writing in first person, so you won't catch me doing it. Oh and have a nice time!

They both pressed their palms into the rocks, protecting them with aura as they dragged through, fighting gravitational forces. She looked up to the top in anger, then teleported her and Izuri up to the top. They appeared above the crack, quickly stepping either side of it. She glared to the exit, which seemed to be too long for her liking, especially in this rage. She smashed through the wall closest to her with ease, crumbling Nestor's precious home, leaving him to preserve in a wreckage. "We won't have to wait long." She smirked, but Izuri knelt on his knee in front of her. "I want to apologise for all of my doings while you were taken." He said deeply in his gruff voice. She smirked; "Well I do have pains, but I will recover, you did the right thing." He looked up to her happily, in his evil way, and he stood up straight. "I can teach you a move I worked out how to use while we wait Miss?"
She nodded, looking around for anyone coming, Izuri closed his eyes, then held an aura sphere in his palm, he then used his psychic powers to create a psycho cut with it. Adam laughed; "Lucario can't learn that though." But Izuri smirked back, "I'm not like every other Lucario though. I'm with you."
He grabbed her hand and pulled it to the way he held his aura sphere, and she closed her eyes, concentrating severely. She then opened her eyes, light pouring out towards her hand, and the sphere turned into a boomerang shaped sword. Izuri thrusted his towards her, and she blocked it with hers; "Oh this is good..." She cackled, blocking and attacking Izuri as practice. "And now with the old man out of the way, there's only one way he can learn, and he's a pathetic excuse for a Lucario." Izuri agreed, but stopped fighting when he sensed someone close by. She ran up to the wall of a house to hide, sensing a human walking her way. She swung her sword out as she heard a blood curdling yelp. She looked to Izuri who's eyes widened excitedly. He ran around carefully, in case of Lux being around, but only to sigh in disappointment. "We killed another one..." She walked around to see a dead boy lay on the floor with his throat slit deeply. She looked at the blood pour out and was nearly sick, she rubbed her neck as Izuri stared down at it hungrily. She clicked her fingers as she turned away, giving Izuri the permission to eat the body. To take her mind away from the grumbling behind her, she closed her eyes and searched for Xenocrates, how he had slipped away from her again, luck was on his side frequently, but she knew she had to get him this time because he had nothing to stay here for now. She clicked her tongue to Izuri sharply, alerting him as she smirked. She took her time by creating an aura sphere and threw it behing her to block the one being fireed at Izuri. She turned to see Xenocrates stood on the roof above her, and Lux jumped down at amazing speed, catching Izuri off guard and pinning him to the floor. She charged up another sphere, aiming it carefully at Lux, but it disappeared as she was pounced on too. He smiled over her vicoriously, but she just smirked back, "poof." She whispered, as she vanished instantly. "I'm not the only one losing my touch then am I?"
"Apparently so." He laughed, knowing exactly what she'd do while she was behind him. He clashed an aura sphere into hers, and pulled back on it, the way she did to him. She stuck her feet into the ground stubbornly; "No! You won't take it away from me!" She yelled, pulling back as he resisted. He continued to yank her, making her jolt continuously, "can't you see what you're doing!? Just wake up!" He yelled at her, but she smirked. "I can see perfectly, even when blinded."
He stopped pulling for a second, giving her the time to create a psycho cut, as he watched her worriedly. She lifted the sword above her, then sliced through her aura, not realising what she had done, as she was sent into half life. Xeoncrates' aura sucked in, with part of Adama's attatched as he collapsed in exhaustion, not realising that evil had entered him, and soon to reign over his aura's will...


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Jul 26, 08 at 3:04pm
re: Serve in Heaven, Reign in Hell

Brain wave!

She awoke in the place she had fainted, and she raised her head to see Izuri, Lux and Xenocrates in same state. She smirked at this, and pulled herself up to walk over to the boy, this was her chance. She powered up her psycho cut, but Xenocrates woke up quickly, grabbing her hand and pushing it away from him. He suddenly looked away from her, and behind her, gasping at whatever it was, she didn't take her eyes off him, but used her aura and sensed something big. Something she once served for. It raised it's arm as she turned to press the psycho cut up at it, and their powers clashed. Izuri and Lux grabbed hold of its arm, pulling it away as her legs buckled. Xenocrates took hold of her sword and pushed too, but she just glared at him. "What are you doing!? Get off!"
"You're not going to do this alone, so let me help or all of us die!"
She continued to glare until an overwhelming power knocked them over, disintegrating the sword into nothing. It raised it's arm, throwing off the Lucario, and swung it towards them, she automatically pushed a shield against it, and Xenocrates fired a large aura sphere, sending it backwards. They had time to get up, both panting heavily. The Lucario fired a Dragon pulse each, and it yelped in agony, but it continued on it's rampage, running towards the humans and swinging it's tail, sending them into a rocky wall. They lay there, exhausted, as they looked to each other angrily, checking that either wasn't plotting against them. The Pokemon picked Adama up, scanning her as she wriggled helplessly. With some of her aura gone, there was nothing to grab, it roared angrily. "You have weakened! There is nothing more worthless than you now! I'm through with you!" It yelled at her, throwing her back into the wall,, she grunted in agony as she slid back down the wall. She felt blood trickle down her back as she gasped in pain. Watching as the thing set the place alight and disappear into it's own realm. Izuri appeared in front of her, boosting her energy levels by sharing his aura. She stood up robotically, and Izuri started running before the exit was blocked with flames. She began to run, but her conscience stopped her and made her look back, which she had been trained not to do.
"Miss!" Izuri yelled, backing away from the fire. "Miss we have to go!"
She hesitated, looking at the body lay on the floor beside where she was, her body was fighting her aura, she could feel them pounding away at each other, but her brain suddenly clicked to escape mode, as her aura overruled and sent her back to her evil ways. She teleported her and Izuri out, but a wave of guilt overwhelmed her aura, she ran towards the fire; "What are you doing Miss!?" He yelled, grabbing her and holding her back; "Get off me!" She said angrily, throwing him back with psychic. She ran through the flames, her body reflecting it with her angered aura. There was a small patch where the flames hadn't engulfed yet, and Xenocrates was nearly dead. She yanked on his body, lifting him under his arms and closing her eyes, concentrating on outside. Which she opened to see, before being tossed to the ground with a psycho cut by her throat; "You listen to me, Miss Adama. You're to go back to your old ways, the real you. Understand!?" She sat under him with widened eyes, her mouth open but unable to talk, she nodded helplessly, there was no way she could overpower the pokemon that taught her everything. Which made her wonder who owned who. Her mind juggled with possibilities, clashing with her aura's thoughts, she switched from good to bad uncontrollably, as she fought herself to become normal. Which she didn't know what normal was any longer.


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Jul 29, 08 at 12:31am
re: Serve in Heaven, Reign in Hell

Sih, RiH is a sticky?
Yay! Dajay! Woooooop!
Well In celebration, I shall write more.


She sat up, Izuri eying her as she walked over to Xenocrates. She tilted her head and smirked, thinking of her chances; "I only got him out for one reason Izuri, to kill him myself." She snorted, before creating a psycho cut herself, and stabbing it into the ground, creating masses of dust clouding the area. "And if you ever touch me again Izuri, I swear you'll pay a price that noone should be forced upon." She blocked a sword being swung at her; "Let's not forget what drew you to me as a Riolu shall we?" She mumbled into his ear, smirking when his face flickered with fear. She had forgotton about Xenocrates at that moment, which he took as his chance as he grabbed he leg and pulled to fall on the ground. Her sword slid down Izuri uncontrollably, as she was twisted around on her back and threatened with an aurasphere to her neck. She looked away and witheld her laughter; "Go on then, nows your chance." She glared at him, "What's stopping you? Is it because I'm not fighting back?"
He hesitated, but she continued to talk to him; "You're so used to me overpowering you, and nows your chance you're too coward to kill me." She laughed, but he pressed the sphere harder in her neck, she gasped as her air became limited, but still remained calm, which she could see was frustrating him. "Don't tempt me." He growled, "Why is it you want to die so much?"
She turned her head; "Let me ask you a question, Peace or war?"
He raised an eyebrow in confusion, "Peace obviously." She smirked and continued "Well you're fighting for it, what do you think I'm fighting for? And which do I prefer?"
He didn't answer her, unable to unriddle her question. She smiled and touched his hand gently, pushing it away slowly. She glanced at him before looking away, playing him like harp. He leaned down to kiss her, which she didn't reject. Izuri stood immobilized at their act, but Lux was still unconscious. She looked to one side out of the corner of her eyes, then clicked her fingers as a command. Izuri shot at Xenocrates, and he flew off her, curling up in pain. "I'll let you live this one time." She laughed, wiping her mouth with the back of her hand, then turned to Izuri and ran away, cackling in content.


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Jul 29, 08 at 1:12am
re: Serve in Heaven, Reign in Hell

YAY! XD

Well done Boo and Dajay. You guys deserve it.


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Aug 01, 08 at 10:16pm
re: Serve in Heaven, Reign in Hell

Update! It's been about 5 days. I'm addicted, please Update soon Dayjay, Boo or whoever.



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re: Serve in Heaven, Reign in Hell

Update please guys! I want more. Pwease?



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Aug 04, 08 at 8:17am
re: Serve in Heaven, Reign in Hell

Okay Okay, I was waiting for Dajay to appear, but it doesn't seem to be happening so I'll give you a little more.

"Our old Master appears to be more powerful, was it like this when you obtained my aura?" She inquired as she sped through the shadows stealthily. Izuri shook his head; "No Miss, he was fairly easy for me alone to take on, but with four powerfully charged creatures unable to hold him back now, we have to be very cautious of our actions."
Adama nodded; "It is true that we appear to be it's target, but I wonder what it meant by my weakening..." She thought deeply, but Izuri understood what it had spoke about. "I believe that in your attempt to escape Xenocrate's clutches, you smashed your aura in an act of desperation."
She glared at Izuri, who flinched as she did so, "I'm no Damsel in distress, but if he has some of my Aura we shall go back to get it at dawn."
She turned and stormed off in a different direction, Izuri hurrying after her; "Miss, this means he would have time to heal, but you however, will be unable to expand your Aura to his level of skill in less than 24 hours."
She stopped, smirking as she thought; "Perhaps you are right Izuri, but perhaps I am stronger without that part, for I feel nothing but anger, so no emotions will hold me back when I kill him. So we shall rest, and be ready to attack whilst he sleeps. Besides, Lux will not recover as quick, and you will be rid of him ready to help me. Understand?"
Izuri nodded nervously, for he felt like he had been pushed into line, even after his loyalty he owed her a lot more, and so he bowed to her, then ran after her into a cave not even Xenocrates, now the most knowledgeable being around, had heard of.



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