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il Diavolo
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Woaft, some proper RAGE detected there. xD
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SecretLegend
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I thought that was a very impressive size, the German was something different and interesting (although I actually thought that first sentence was Werden Bremens letter to you) and yeah, IMO take the job and get your name back on the managing scene
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arwelt
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good update i would apply for the job and if any more come round then reject the werder job and take the other job
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Amutt14
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i like ze german
edit: why not take the Werder job? doesn't seem like such a bad one to have after managing the Galaxy | |
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Dec
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Cheers guys, glad you liked the German in it, I thought it would be a nice addition and a bit of originality.
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quote DecTouché you tw*t. | |
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Dec
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Touche indeed
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1pinky1
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very nice dec, dont go wender bremen though, go for a BSP club and work your way up!
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123 Tyron
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Again, I am loving the use of non-consistent football, but many topical ideas, the German language for the Werder Bremen part was a very nice touch as well Dec, lucky for me I can understand straight up, doing German in school and all. Another wonderful update, and I would absolutely love this to carry on. Well done Dec.
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Dec
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Religion Hi God, it is me again, where else can I turn? I have no guidance, I want to take the Werder Bremen job but should I? Why are you punishing me like this? I thought you loved me, you gifted me with the knowledge of your beloved sport and the angel of Hayden but this is like Hell. Did I deserve this? I just need a sign, please, I am begging you to help me, your my last chance before it is too late, my life is in your hands, don't play me like a puppet, please don't. The desperation turns into a tear running down my face without a clue how hard it's presence is, the wet covers my hard skin making it gleam a pale white, everything seems so unbelonging in this room - my study which I have been in for years but it is unfamiliar, the lamp glows a subtle shade of yellow but the burning smell is unwanted by my nose at this time, the books on the shelf seem pointless, every one about Football and each I have studied quite a lot, yet now they seem a memory in the distance. All the thoughts mix up in my head, it becomes a jungle until my brain freezes and I stop, alone. Crying about the future, worried and stressed, reverting to a religion and God that isn't real but I know he is punishing me for something, but what? Tears drip onto the surface of the table but quickly fade into the wood, no sound is present, everything is quiet like in a silent movie, no monologue scripted, no props used. Everything is so painful it has to be made up, directed and planned, I am an actor in the movie of my life but the pain I suffer is deeper than wounds, it is past my rotten flesh and into my unstable bones, it cuts my heart turning it black like coal, I can't feel anything. I'm emotionless. The draw next to my quivering knee is in an arm's reach, the little walls look so uncomfortable it is inviting but my arm reaches into the space and out of the darkness I pull a silver shine out, a knife. The black handle fits perfectly into my palm, the hand I have it in shakes it around so much it is unsafe, the worry can be taken away, my wrist slowly untucks from my jumper and at an acute angle I hold it out for the merciless blade to cut it's something pattern into marks. The pull going backwards relaxes me from my state, the phone rings, I try to ignore it but I drop the knife as I was startled by the first noise I have encountered for some time, I pick it up and try to calm my voice down to a normal tone, I wipe the tear from my eye and brace myself for the son of a bitch on the other end. To my surprise I hear a familiar accent, English but I miss his sentence figuring this out, I caught two words though, "Director" and "Football", whom can this be? Who wants me? I steadily ask him what he wants in a tone so ill-mannered I was afraid of putting him off but this bastard world takes mercy on no one and if this fucker doesn't want me then so be it. My views change quite quickly as my ear perks up from it's sleep "Chelsea Football Club", this has to be a wind up? I am just a little twat, it can't be real? Surely they have someone better than little old me with the knife in my hand and spots of dark red on my wrist which the blood has died, my voice is silenced, stunned and shocked I try to force words out but I can't, half of my brain expects me to re awake but I don't, how can this be true? I am good for nothing bastard myself and this one says he wants me to be Chelsea FC's manager, there has to be a downside, surely? I am taking no risk, if I fall then so be it, the blood on the knife will be back like it is now, I will lose everything but life can be lived once, mistakes are not payed for by Mother Earth, Mother Earth doesn't give a fuck, so I shouldn't too, the marks on my arm become more visible the more I look at them, Football is a matter of life and death but only for the saddos in the world, Football is about me, I punch the air in triumph, happy for the first time but careful not to step on the cursed blade on the wooden floor as the blood drips off it, one by one leaving a mark deeper and deeper each time till the pile grows and my blood is spread out, but I don't need to worry now as this little twat is going to be manager of Chelsea. I start to pray again, I have my break and my faith must be real, I couldn't have hoped for anything better. Thank you God. [size=1][color=#666666]This message was edited by Dec on Nov 06 2009. | |
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Dec
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Guys I am at a party tomorrow so that would have been my update and I will do another one on Sunday.
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il Diavolo
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Another twist with a very dark element to it, definitely highlights the highs and lows of the Footballing World. Brilliant mate, the depth of your work becomes better every time.
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CurriEBoI111
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Enjoy the party for starts
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killer iPod
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Great update there Deco.
Great to see another SOMS from you man. Keep it up. | |
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EricF
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The sign was a good one. Really good work Declan, it felt like I was actually reading from a horror book. Good anticipation, keep it up man.
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