three problems!

i complete critic quest and get thank you email but no money in mailbox.

completed hub net for mitnick but cannot find him in nos lair afterward.

hotel screenplay quest i must have scared the clerk as he wont talk to me he just screams and runs away

Check your other havens' mailboxes.

I'm not sure if you need to see Mitnick once the quest is finished.

That particular quest may be fubared if you scared away the clerk.

well then if the hotel clerk doesnt give you the script, just kill him, and its possible he might drop it.

i would but i was told not to kill hatter and this might cause some problems with the quest. so i guess i will just do a pass on this one.