Topic: Kingdom Hearts: Unchained Memories: Complete (Please close)
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Patton10Welcome to reality folks...ultra seeker    total posts: 1540 since: Jan 2007
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 Jun 23, 07 at 6:49am
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ooc: i'll post the final post tonight or the next, it'll end this weekend anyway. IF you can't think of how to cement you character but want him to appear in the next thread pm me and tell me. I'll add in the final post that your character survived somehow and went on their onw path.
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oblivion_crazycustom title loading...79% completethreadnought    total posts: 651 since: Nov 2006
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 Jun 23, 07 at 6:58am
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welll my char goes to a world i made called kuneer and lives there in till the next rp which is like 2 years in the future.
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zero the quickFear Little Girl Grimhigh on "N"    total posts: 779 since: Jun 2005
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 Jun 23, 07 at 1:56pm
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My character goes on a quest to find the guy he saw in his dreams.
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ruki123
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 Jun 23, 07 at 3:18pm
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And like the PM I sent patton my three character goes to live in Hollow Bastion.
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darkmaster322001Expect the UnexpectedHooked on Neo     total posts: 4023 since: Aug 2004
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 Jun 25, 07 at 7:34am
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(Okay, I guess I do not have anything more to add as Organization XIII... Saix will be off doing whatever he did at this time, Someone else can take Xigbar if they want...
And Patton10, since I doubt I will be on for this final leg of the RP, please come up with some kind of heroic way for Morxin to die. I do so hate to leave a loose end like that...)
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Patton10Welcome to reality folks...ultra seeker    total posts: 1540 since: Jan 2007
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 Jun 25, 07 at 11:45am
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“Some people spend their lives waiting for an opportune moment, others seize it immediately upon birth. Maybe this is why my time came to be. My name is Jack Patton and this is the tale of my death.”
Racing through bleach white corridors in pursuit of the unknown. Heart pounding and head throbbing closing in on my target, the organisation known as Ecwonox, their leader Xenon. At long last a bright light emitted at the end of one of the longer corridors. I brought my feet to a stop at the entrance of a large oval room with high ceilings and at the far end a flight of steps ascending to a white throne with the symbol of the a heart residing at the top.
“Xenon!” I beckoned upon seeing no sight of my adversary.
Seconds, that dragged on for hours, past by as I awaited a reply. Then from the corner of my eye I spotted him, dashing towards me grinding his sword along he path. He struck hard and toppled me into the air. I glided effortlessly across the room before finding the strength to balance myself and land of the wall with both feet, I launched off and made a counter-attack. Xenon reacted quickly and blocked. Now standing face to face he began to speak.
“You’ve grown so much from the last time I saw you.” As he spoke I detected regret in his voice, but was to blind with anger to acknowledge it. The struggle ended and we forced ourselves back, only to spring off our feet towards one another again. We crossed paths and our words found no use, so our weapons did the talking. Each might strike rang out through-out the room, like an echo from the mountains, and returned swiftly for us to hear.
Minutes passed. The battle raged on. No winner to be seen. Xenon growing more and more forceful as time past. “I have to end this soon!” I thought as Xenon’s blade narrowly missed my chest as I dived to avoid his attack. His power continued to soar. He rammed his sword into the ground and used both hands to summon an immense ball of flame that surged across the floor towards me. I took the keyblade in both hands and stood me ground desperately. Try as I could, I couldn’t endure the heat so I redirected it to the ceiling. With an almighty BANG the ceiling collapsed and began to descend rapidly to the floor. But not just the ceiling, the walls and floor began to cave in and, like the ceiling, crashed down upon us. Somehow I managed to avoid all the debris, except for one. It pinned me to the ground but it wasn’t large enough to hold me. I struggled free and made for the exit, limping each step of the way. I reached the exit to be met by Riena who was chasing after me to help.
“Jack! Are you ok?” She asked in a concerned tone as she embraced me as I began to collapse from exhaustion. “Fine, just tired. Where’s the others?”. She looked back down the corridor and began to help me down the corridor. Even though I was out of the room, my mind still remained there wondering what happened to Xenon. “Did the destruction claim him?”.
Back in the lobby of the fortress, Weiss & Bojax was giving the others a hard time. Sotino, Jet, Chase and the rest of the gang where unlikely to win. “You should just give up!” Weiss bellowed as he closed in on Jet once again at top speed. Jet blocked one attack but was caught off-guard by his second sword which sliced viciously into his chest and sent him airborne. Weiss gave chase and followed him up. HE readied to strike when Chase intercepted and the two duelled mid-air, with Weiss the clear victor knocking Chase crashing into the ground below. Jet regained balance and charged for a second attempt, Weiss was caught off-guard and suffered a large amount of damage and was sent barrelling across the floor. Jet & Chase stood side by side pointing there Keyblades toward their foe and summoned the power of the Keyblades. I white blade appeared and pierced Weiss’s chest. “No, please not now…I…don’t…” Weiss was unable to finish as he vanished fro this world, never to return.
Sotino, meanwhile, was busy with Bojax. After suffering a massive amount of damage he looked ready to quit. Bojax approached with a smug look on his face, ready to finish him off when Sotino stood up with renewed strength. He opened his eyes to see the power of Kingdom Hearts indulge and evolve him. With one mighty blast he ended the battle, leaving Bojax fatally wounded but not dead. Bojax stood with a disgusted look on his face, he bid no farewell and disappeared into the abyss.
Then, myself and Riena came crashing through the doors, well me at least. Riena helped me up as I stood before my friends as the entire castle began to shake violently. “We need to leave, now!” I yelled as clouds of dust began surging through the corridors towards us. Jet nodded and began to make a portal. It opened in time and I ushered everyone in. Then there was only myself, Reina, Sotino & Jet remaining. “You’re next Sotino!” I said as I pushed him through. Jet went ahead soon after leaving me & Riena behind. Then I sensed the chilling energy that had been haunting me since arriving in the castle, I turned slowly to see the three armour clad warriors, the tetra paladins. “Reina, go on ahead…” Riena looked at me in shock, resilient to my order. “No way! If you think I’m leaving you behind. Think again.” Riena stomped her feet and stood beside me. Thinking fast I through my arms around her and held her close. “I’ll come back to you, I swear.” I kissed her on the cheek before pushing her into the portal and shutting it closed on my side. “Foolish or brave?” The red paladin asked his colleagues. “I thought it was sweet.” Replied another as they drew their weapons on me. I smiled faintly as I charged in, I knew these being could not leave to haunt other worlds or chaos would rule. “You could use a hand.” A voice said, as Morxin appeared by my side. “Thank you…” My voice felt damp, likely from the recent high levels of combat. The battle began. Morxin and I fought & likely died until the castle collapsed, sealing all life within.
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Two weeks later in Hallow Bastion, the group has gone there separate ways. Jessie & Rossie now reside in Hallow Bastion. Sotino & Chase are helping Leon and co with there revalidation projects while Jet has vanished into the night. Saix, & co. retuned to XIII.
Riena sat in a chair gazing out a window in Merlin’s house with Sotino & Chase whispering behind her. “Maybe we should talk to her?” Chase asked. “Hell no! You really think she’d be over it by now? I’m still sore about Jack can you imagine her?” Sotino replied, to loud for Chase’s liking. Riena stood up and stormed out the house, tears dripping from her cheeks. She climber up the cavern to the highest point she could find and continued to gaze out to the stars. “You promised, don’t go back on your word.” There was serene silence, a presence filled the air but it wasn’t physical. Reina closed her eyes and opened them shortly after with renewed hope.
“I’ll be waiting, so try not to take to long ok?”
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oblivion_crazycustom title loading...79% completethreadnought    total posts: 651 since: Nov 2006
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 Jun 25, 07 at 5:15pm
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ooc: This is the hidden part of my story.
Ic: A man wearing dessert rags is walking in dessert sandstorm . He keeps walking for hours on end. the man approaches a huge dessert sand doom and whips some sand off of it. a door is reviled and he finds the handle amd opens the door and goes in. He closes the door and looks around. "Library 13....i have finally gotten here" the man said before collapsing.
( after the time skip)
A man reading a book on a desk wearing dessert rags and clothing and all the clothing is covering his face and body. "Well i think its time to leave" the man said as he stood up.
Oc: The man is my new character who is related to unchain of memories, and those who don't know Patton is making a sequel which is rate after xemnas is destroyed.
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Patton10Welcome to reality folks...ultra seeker    total posts: 1540 since: Jan 2007
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 Jun 26, 07 at 1:53am
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Not for defs, but i'm thinking about it.
You can leave feedback on the thread and what you enjoyed, did you like the ending and so on. Until the mods close it!.
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ruki123
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 Jun 26, 07 at 6:27am
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oblivion_crazycustom title loading...79% completethreadnought    total posts: 651 since: Nov 2006
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 Jun 26, 07 at 8:21am
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it is ok i could of been better but its good.
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Mar1uxia1Gracefull Assassinsubmission happy    total posts: 105 since: May 2007
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 Jun 26, 07 at 5:12pm
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hey!if its not to late can Nero stay in? sorry 4 b-ing late,my computer crashed again.
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ruki123
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 Jun 26, 07 at 5:46pm
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I can put him with my dudes before the time skip here
Nero appears out of a portal
Nick: Hey.
Jessie: Hello, nero.
Rozzie: Welcome back.
He sits on the lats
Nero: Hey.
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Mar1uxia1Gracefull Assassinsubmission happy    total posts: 105 since: May 2007
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 Jun 26, 07 at 7:25pm
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Hell Fire
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 Jun 27, 07 at 7:40am
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I'm closing this thread due to the page limit. Feel free to start a new one if needed. Thanks.
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