Topic: MFOMT - Stories and Comics!
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Country Girl
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 Aug 04, 07 at 7:01pm
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Hey everyone. It's time to start sending in your votes for the contest. The deadline is tomorrow at 8:00pm Eastern time.
I have zero so far .
~Ashleigh~
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Soraya Lillithpostee  total posts: 44 since: Jul 2007
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 Aug 05, 07 at 11:05am
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Chapter One
Thurizas Farm was silent. The animals were asleep and so were the farmers. All to be heard was the wind blowing through the leaves on the honey tree and the trickle of the stream passing by. The crops were just springing into life and were dancing in the wind. The sun was rising in the east over the hill tops, painting the sky a bright red.
The sun came in through the crack in Eleanor’s curtains and shone on to her face waking her up. Eleanor got up quietly and avoiding the squeaky floor boards headed to the bathroom. She turned on the taps and splashed her face with cold water. She brushed her teeth and plaited her golden hair, then once again avoiding the squeaky floor boards went back to her room. She dressed in her blue overalls with her green t-shirt on underneath. She picked up her bag basket and work boots and snuck down the stairs.
Eleanor walked into the kitchen and took a peek at the old grandfather clock that had been in her family for years. 5:30 sharp it said. She walked across the cold stone floor to the table and placed her things on the floor next to the chair she always sat on. Eleanor went into the fridge and got out some tea leaves, butter and bread. Quickly and quietly she made herself some relax tea and toast. She walked back to the table and sat down. She ate her toast whilst putting on her work boots and then she quickly drank her tea. She cleared up after herself and then slung her bag over her shoulder. She picked up her basket and wandered to the front door. Eleanor walked out of the house shutting the door quietly behind her.
Once she was outside she was quickly greeted by her cute brown dog, Sigel. He barked at her and ran around her feet until she bent down and patted his head. She bent down and he licked her face. Eleanor got up again and headed over to where the chickens were fenced in. By this time all of the chickens were awake and clucking around for their breakfast. She counted them to make sure they were all there, when she had double checked they were all there she began collecting eggs and placing them into her basket. Once she had eight she went into the barn and made four of them into mayonnaise. She placed the mayonnaise bottles in her basket being careful not to crack any of the eggs.
She headed up near to the barn where the cows and sheep were fenced in. She counted them just as she had counted the chickens to make sure one of them wasn’t missing. None of them were so she milked the cows and checked the sheep to see if any of them needed shearing. Two did, so she sheared them and placed the wool and milk in her basket. She brushed the cows and sheep and then went into the barn. She changed one of the wools into yarn and four of the milks into cheese.
She went into the stable and brought out Fehu, her beautiful black foal. She let him wander the farm and eat the weeds. It would be a matter of days efore he was old enough to ride.
Once she had finished sorting out the animals she went over to the large old honey tree and gathered the honey from it placing that also into her basket. After this Eleanor left the farm and headed to the forest to forage. Once she was at the lake she put the bamboo shoot into her basket and then heading off to find other things.
She finished forraging and headed out of Summer Hills toward Mineral Town. Once she reached Mineral Town she went to Ellen's house and gave her the yarn. Ellen gave her thanks as she left. Next stop for Eleanor was the inn. Eleanor wandered into the quiet inn. She went through the door at the back behind the counter and found Doug as usual pacing his room. She poked her head around the door.
"Hey Doug, I've got you eggs, mayonnaise, milk and cheese here," she said cheerfully.
"Okay will you just put it on the kitchen side for me," he replied. Eleanor nodded. She walked into the kitchen and it was a disaster area. She sighed placing her basket down. She stcked the plates and crockery by the sink and wiped down the sides. She did the washing up, dried it and put it all away. Then before she left she placed two bottles of milk, two cheeses, four eggs and two bottles of mayonnaise on the side.
"Goodbye Doug," she shouted as she left.
"Thanks Eleanor," He replied.
Eleanor walked to the clinic and traded two bottles of milk for some medicene. She then walked to Poultry farm and gave Lillia the medicene. Popuri gave Eleanor a flower as thanks and Eleanor left for Yodel farm. She walked in ad said Hello to Barley and gave him a cheese and a bottle of mayonnaise. She saw May and gave her the flower she had. She then said goodbye to them and headed back to Summer Hills.
Reaching Thurizas Farm she waved to her mum and dad through the upstairs window of the house. She then shipped the three bamboo shoots, honey, the three herbs, the last bottle of mayonnaise, and the last cheese. Fehu was happily running arouns with Sigel. Convinced she had done everything else she had needed to do for the morning she got the watering can and watered the plants. As she watered them she watched them dance in the wind in delight. She smiled and once she had finshed took a seat under the honey tree to play her mouth - organ.
First she ran up the scale, then she broke into a tune that was as merry as thrush's song in spring. The summer sun made the farm look even more gorgeous than it was in other seasons. Eleanor's mum and dad had set off for work leaving the farm in Eleanor's hands. She continued to play her mouth - organ as she got up and started prancing around the farm playing for the animals.
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isa_12ur' burnin' bridges baby!!!threadnought     total posts: 649 since: May 2007
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 Aug 05, 07 at 11:58pm
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wow,beginning of the story is great lillith!
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Soraya Lillithpostee  total posts: 44 since: Jul 2007
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 Aug 06, 07 at 12:05am
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Thanks Isa. I just have to think of my next chapter now.
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GhulaM Mustafaunwashed heathen (guest)
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 Aug 06, 07 at 3:20am
re: MFOMT - Stories and Comics! {Very very interesting Stories} i like it very much
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((nice avii and banner Ashleigh, you like Harry Potter too? I've been reading them since I was five and I still love 'em.)) Character: Sarah Type: Story...? For the contest~_<
Sarah walked down the grey pavement of the new town she was in. She was lost, she was cold and she was tired. She stuck her hands inside her bright red jacket to protect them from the cold. She only walked a little further before she slumped to the ground. Standing above her was a boy with dark brown hair plaited hair and muddy eyes. She tried to muster a word but she couldn't. It all went black and the next thing she knew she was lying in a warm cozy hospital bed. She turned over and she saw a doctor, nurse and the boy she had seen earlier's faces light up with joy. She shot up and headed for the door. "huh? Wai-" she heard behind her as she slammed the door. Now that she was feeling better she ran onto a mountains peak and stretched it out. She felt a warm hand on her shoulder. She looked back and he was standing there. "My...pant...name...wheeze...is C-cliff, what's yours?" he asked out of breath from chasing her all the way up here. She blinked twice wondering if this was really happening but then said with an eyeroll, "I'm Sarah. It's a pleasure to meet you Cliff." "What brings you to this town?" he asked. "I am seeking a cure for my illness." she said angrily shaking her shoulder free of his grip. "Illness?" he said worridly. " like you care." she said standing up. "I do care. Is there anyway I can help?" he asked. "Yes, actually. Could you point me in the direction of the erm...Harvest Goddess?" "You want to see the Harvest Goddess? She's just a myth!" he said with a slight giggle. She got up and repeated her question only this time in more of a command, "Point me in the direction of the Harvest Goddess." "Come with me." he said putting his hand out. Sarah gave a half smile which quickly returned to a grim look and gladly took it. They soon arrived at a pond of some sort and Sarah knew where to go from there. She took a small coin from her bag that was some sort of foreign currency and dropped it in. The Harvest Goddess apeared with a "Taadaaa!" "Eeep!" Cliff said jumping back. Sakura moved back a little out of surprise and said, "I have an illness your goddessness and I need to be relived of it. "Ok, by the way, thank you for the offering I really liked it." the Harvestt Goddess said, "What exactly do you have?" "Erm..." she muttered uncomfortably, "The JacktheRipper desease." "Oh my!" said the goddess for she knew that it was named after the infamous serial killer because it had killed many people in the past, "I can't help you, the only cure is..." The rest she whispered into Sarah's ear. She sighed and looked at Cliff uncomfortably. The Goddess had whispered, "For you to find pure bliss." Cliff blushed and Sarah wondered what he ment by that but thought it was best she forget about it. She had more important things to think about, like the fact that she was going to perish in less then 4 hours unless she was cured. "Come on Cliff. Let's go do something fun." she said. "?" She dragged him to the beach and they went inside the water. She sat there sourly but then was splashed in the face. "EXCUSE ME!" she yelled splashing him back and within minutes they were playing like small school children. She was beginning to feel like if anyone was going to cure her it would be him and felt happy. Suddenly she felt a sharp pain in her gut and threw up coughing blood. "SARAH!" yelled Cliff grabbing her and getting her out of the water. A tear rushed down her cheek. She didn't want it to end like this. She looked at Cliff and touched the side of his face. "Hey." she said angrily. "What's wrong?" he asked. "Don't look so...cough...worried! Because if you are happy then I guess I AM TOO!" she yelled. He smiled and then suddenly the pain in her gut vanished. She was happy. She was the most happy she'd ever been. She flung her arms over Cliff and tears gushed down from her eyes. "I am so happy." she said, "I want to live in this town forever." Cliff held her too and they sun set on the horizon that day as she had found pure bliss. With the one she loved. ~The end~ very interesting and very nice written stories master minded person
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isa_12ur' burnin' bridges baby!!!threadnought     total posts: 649 since: May 2007
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 Aug 06, 07 at 4:13am
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wow,nice comment and cool story sarah
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Country Girl
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 Aug 06, 07 at 10:42am
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The winners for this week have been posted in the Contest thread. It's on the second post of the first page.
For the next week, stories and comics posted AFTER this post will be eligable for voting.
Congratulations to all the winners.
~Ashleigh~
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isa_12ur' burnin' bridges baby!!!threadnought     total posts: 649 since: May 2007
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 Aug 07, 07 at 8:39pm
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Home rick:hey!stop going out with my sister!
kai:why?is that my choice only? rick:why,you!.. poppuri:stop it rick!im sorry kai..but im going home now
------------- im the morning... rick:poppuri?where do you think your going? poppuri:oh,i haven;t told you that yet,im going to the valley where kai lives.. rick:oh,no you dont!mom!
poppuri:..mom knows it.. rick:but are you just gotta leave us here?..how about..?sbout the chickens?!its your resonsibility and you liked it!
poppuri:its yours now,bye..(going downstairs) mom:(crying)you take care now,ok? rick:= poppuri:dont worry,im keep going back every summer ok, rick:im sorry.. poppuri:no,its ok,i knew you protected me..im sorry too.. mom:well youre gonna be late dear..keep going now.. poppuri:bye mom...bye rick....
~~the end~~
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Soraya Lillithpostee  total posts: 44 since: Jul 2007
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 Aug 08, 07 at 1:23am
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Chapter Two
Eleanor finished playing her mouth-organ. It was now late afternoon and Wyrd was due round. The moment she thought to herself where he could be he turned up. She ran to meet him. He didn’t look to happy which made Eleanor wonder.
“Wyrd!” she shouted as he approached. He shuffled over to her looking at his feet. “What’s up?”
He sighed and put a hand on her shoulder. “Eleanor… I-I’m going away,” he managed to mutter. He didn’t look up at her.
“What- What do you mean?” she stuttered. There was a look of shock on her face.
“I have to move to the city for a while,” he explained. “My aunt is having trouble sorting out my cousin and she can’t cope with work and him.”
“Then I’ll come with you and help out,” Eleanor insisted. Wyrd just shook his head.
“No you concentrate on helping your mum and dad with the farm. You won’t like it in the city,” he said taking his hand off he shoulder and looking around the beautiful farm.
“My parents can handle the farm without me…” she began. Wyrd just shook his head more.
“Eleanor, please don’t argue just stay here and carry on with your work on the Thurizas Farm. I’ll be back some day, sooner rather and later,” he said and he turned around and started to leave the farm. Eleanor grabbed him.
“But…” she started but she then realised it would be no use. “Okay… have a safe journey and hurry back.”
“I will,” he said and left the farm. Eleanor watched him go, not believing what she just did. Once he disappeared out of sight she realised she still hadn’t told him what she had wanted to tell him. She ran off the farm and up into Summer Hills. She headed straight for the dock dodging townspeople left, right and centre. She reached the dock just in time.
“Wyrd! Wait!” she yelled. He stopped dead and turned around.
“Eleanor…” he said. She ran up to him.
“I just want to - to say - say…” she started. Wyrd looked at her then smiled realising what she was trying to say.
“And I you Eleanor…” he said and then left her standing there on the dock on her own to swallow what he had just said. The boat left and Eleanor almost cried. She probably would have if her mum hadn’t been at the end of the dock fishing. She left the dock and went back to the farm. Sigel and Fehu came to comfort her.
“I’m a big girl now and big girls don’t cry,” she said to them fighting back her tears. She went into the house and checked what the weather was going to be like the next day.
“Tomorrow it will be raining all day non stop…” the telly said. She switched it off and walked outside. The afternoon became evening and Eleanor started to put all the chickens in the chicken coop and the cows and sheep in the barn. Her dad came back from mining and went to start dinner. Eleanor put Fehu in the stable and then brought Sigel indoors. Eleanor’s mum finally came back from fishing and they all sat down to a dinner of curry rice.
Once they finished dinner Eleanor cleaned and washed up whilst he parents sat in front of the telly. She finished that and went upstairs to the bathroom where she washed and changed into her night clothes. After cleaning her teeth and washing out he clothes she retired to her bed. She fell asleep quite quickly.
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Hagalaznewseeker  total posts: 15 since: Aug 2007
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 Aug 08, 07 at 1:29am
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Stacey and Epsilon - Chapter 1
Epsilon got up the minute the sun came in through her curtains. She climbed quickly out of bed and straight to the bathroom. After washing and dressing in her farmers overalls she went back into their room, made her bed tied her brown hair up into a pony tail. She left the room to go and make a request for toast and tea for breakfast.
Stacey woke up and scowled at her sister’s empty bed that was already made. She stretched and yawned. Getting sleepily out of bed she walked to the bathroom. Once she was in there she locked the door. Sitting in front of the mirror she washed her face and her hair before getting dressed into a denim skirt that just reached down to her knees and a floaty blue t-shirt. She then got out her make up bag and put some on. Stacey then put up her blonde hair into a nice clip. She was now dressed up far too smart and flouncy for farming.
Epsilon came back up the stairs and into their room. She sat at the end of her bed in padmasana and shut her eyes. The sun shone onto her face and made her feel warm and read for the days work. She continued to do this until Stacey came out of the bathroom.
An hour later Stacey came out of the bathroom. Walking back into her and Epsilon’s room she saw her sister sitting on the floor at the end of her bed with her eyes closed. Scowling, she roughly made her bed and went downstairs for some breakfast.
In the kitchen her mum was busy making tea and toast for everybody. Tea was something Stacey hated and so was toast. She went to the fridge and got out a ginger beer and some fruit. She then took the most comfortable seat at the table and ate. Her other did not look at all pleased.
“Stacey Simmons! Why must you have something different to everyone else for breakfast?” her mother asked with her hands on her hips tapping her foot.
“Toast is not good for my figure and tea is the most disgusting thing on the planet!” Stacey retorted. Her mother simply turned to finish making everyone else’s breakfast, muttering to herself angrily.
Epsilon came into the kitchen at that moment. She went straight out again through the front door but came back minutes later with their dad’s paper and some letters. She handed them out to the right people before helping their mother finish the breakfast. Once everything was done she took some toast and tea to her dad who was now reading the paper and then took her own breakfast to sit opposite Stacey at the table.
“You and your ginger beer for breakfast,” Epsilon said before taking a mouthful of toast.
“At least I’m not looking like you!” Stacey retorted.
“Enough Stacey! There is nothing wrong with the way your sister looks!” her mother shouted coming to sit down at the table with her own breakfast.
“What you eat for breakfast isn’t very good for you Stacey,” Epsilon remarked.
Stacey just stuck her nose up at her. Epsilon sighed and finished her breakfast in scilence. Once Stacey finished she went straight out he door with no goodbye and she didn’t tidy up her mess from breakfast. Epsilon on finishing her breakfast sorted out her own mess and Stacey’s mess before getting to work on the farm.
Stacey on the other hand hated working and so she wslked to Mineral Town somewhere Stacey was all too popular for her own good and because Epsilon had never beento Mineral town there was no hope of her tunring up to spoil everything. She found Karen and they went drinking and to attract a lot of attention.
Epsilon had finished most of her work by early afternoon but she noticed they were running low n animal medicene and as a precauion went to see her mum about it.
“Mum we have only one bottle of medicene left shall I go and get some more?” she asked.
“Yes, But you’ll have to go to Mineral Town to get it because all of the shops are shut here today beause it’s sunday,” her mother replied.
“I’ll have to go and see Barley because Lillia’s will be closed today as well, right?”Epsilon said as she took some money out of the money jar. Despite the fact she had never been to Mineral tonw she knew a lot about the place from what her father had told her.
“Yeah that’s right,” her dad replied looking up form his paper.Epsilon left and for the first time she was going to Mineral Town. On reaching Mineral Town a lot of the townspeople started looking at her as she walked through town. Some of them started whispering and talking but Epsilon ignored it.
She walked into Yodel Farm and got the medicene she needed. When she walked out of the farm she instantly walked into a crowd of people. She pushed her way through but they followed her slitghtly.
‘You’d think they’d never seen a girl before’ Epsilon thought.
Stacey was walking around the town when she spotted the crowd of people.
“What’s all the commotion?” she asked pucishing her way through the crowd. Being as popular as she was she did it easily as ost people just moved out of the way.
“Who’s that do ya reckon Stacey?” someone asked her. Stacey now bright red scowled and walked after the girl who she knew as her sister. She grabbed Epsilon’s wrist.
“What do you think your doing here raining on my parade!?” she asked.
“I was only getting some animal medicene,” Epsilon replied innocently.
“So who is she Stace!?” the townspeople shouted.
“Only Epsilon no one special,” she shouted back.
“No one special…” some of them shouted back. “She looks like an angel!”
Stacey’s jaw dropped at this remark. Epsilon had turned up and she had lost her popularity in the spae of a few seconds. Stacey turned to Epsilon and looked her up and down.
“She’s no angel… “ she began.
“Why thank you,” Epsilon interupted Stacey. Epsilon walked back up to the crowd. “But really, I’m no angel and I’m not pretty.”
“That’s right,” Stacey scowled. “No angel and look at her she’s not pretty.”
Epsilon not wanting to waste any more of her sisters percious time turned and left the town…
Epsilon reahed the farm and put away the medicene in the right place and put the change back in the money jar. Epsilon wasn’t a stranger to being put down by her sister. She wasn’t bothered nor did she care what her sister thought of her. She was pleased someone thought she was an angel though. This put an even brighter smile on her face than she had that morning.
Stacey smiled as Epsilon went away but then when she turned back to the crowd they were all gone. Stacey hated her sister for that. Everytime she turned up Stacey would loose her popularity. Stacey wanted to know how she did it. So Stacey scrapped the rest of her day and headed back to the farm to find her sister.
On finding Epsilon she lookd her up and down.
“So tell me Epsilon, How do you do it?” Stacey asked looking like her mother had that morning when Stacey had had something different to eat for breakfast.
“Do what?” Epsilon replied.
“Don’t play dumb with me!” Stacey shouted. “Get them to call you an angel even when your not! Your not pretty or anything so what do they see in you?!”
Epsilon shrugged as dumbfound as her sister but she knew she wasn’t going to get away with it that easily her sister would persist until she got an answer. “Maybe you where too much make up?” she suggested.
Stacey looked horrified. “My make up is fine thank you very much!” she retorted. “Okay so then maybe it is your dress sense?” Epsilon suggested.
Stacey frowned in Stacey’s book it was Epsilon’s dress sense that was wrong. “Hm Look at yourself!” She shouted.
“Well I give up why don’t you go ask them yourself!” Epsilon retorted shovin her way past Stacey to continue finsihing off her chores. Stacey on the other hand wanted to get to he bottom of it and so she tok epsilon’s advice and went back to Mineral town to ask them why they thought Epsilon was an angel.
She went around and asked everybody that had said Epsilon was an angel. They all said do some comparing. Epsilon might have been right was the only thought that ht her over and over again. She ran home to find Epsilon again. On finding her again in the bar with the animals. Stacey admitted that she may have been right but put emphasis on the might.
“So now want you to teach me how to be you,” Stacey explained.
“You are nuts.. You could never be me,” Epsilon retorted.
“I could,” Stacey said.
Eleanor shook her head. “Prove it,” She said blankly. “Put some animal fodder down for the cows.”
Stacey hesitated and then finally managed it. But Epsilon burst out laughing. "You don't know the first thing about farming what a waste!"
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isa_12ur' burnin' bridges baby!!!threadnought     total posts: 649 since: May 2007
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 Aug 08, 07 at 5:49am
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christina2010PM me for graphics requeststrue seeker (2K Remix)     total posts: 2481 since: Jun 2007
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 Aug 08, 07 at 12:21pm
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I'll enter!! At Poultry Farm Dana walks in, wondering what exactly is going on. She sees Rick, Popuri, Lillia, and Sasha all gathered around a letter. Dana questions, "Who is that from?" Rick responds, "It's from the national board of medicine, my mom qualifies for the new medicine found for her disease!" "Oh my goodness", Dana exclaims. "That's so great!" "Yeah, I know", says Popuri, "It's just too bad that she has to go away for a year to do it. Otherwise, they won't be able to know what exactly she needs to improve." "Oh", Dana says. "Well, when does she leave?" "Tomorrow at six am," Sasha says sadly. "But, when she comes back, the doctors say she will have made a full recovery." "Well, I guess I should go upstairs and pack," Lillia replies. "I wonder what this big city will look like? I've never been to a big city, I've been here my whole life." The next day, at six am, Dana goes to the beach to see Lillia off. "You'll be ok, I promise to help Popuri and Rick take car of the farm while you're gone," Dana says. Lillia walks onto the boat, waves everyone goodbye, and the boat starts to turn away. "You know, all this has gotten me thinking," Rick says. "I know now how much it means to live every moment, like my mom going to this hospital, and my dad going to find medicine for my mom. Dana, can we talk later?" Dana, completely bewildered by what Rick will have to say, replies, "sure, let's meet at the spring in two hours." Two hours later, Dana sees Rick come into view. The flowers at the spring are in full bloom, and the spring looks beautiful. Rick is blushing as he walks in. Rick than says to Dana, "You know, ever since I first met you, I knew you would be a good person." Dana replies, "Well, that is sweet. What is it that you wanted to talk to me about." Rick, "Well, I've been thinking, and since my mom has left, I don't want to waste anytime snagging the ones I love. Dana, will you marry me?" Dana, shocked at first, smiles, "I knew that it must be something big. I never told you this, but from the moment I met you, I knew you were the one for me. You are the nicest person I know, Rick, and of course, I will marry you." Rick, beaming, exclaims, "That's great! You know, I think we should get married tomorrow, i know that my mom would want that. You know, we weren't being truthful when we told you where my mom was going yesterday. She isn't coming back. The doctors say that she can't come back, at least not unless she miraculously improves. You see, she's gotten worse over the last few months, and Doctor and Elli think that she won't get better, as a matter of fact, we sent her to that hospital so she could see all the sights while she was still alive. I will miss her, but as long as your by my side, I know that I will move on." Dana, saddened by this thought, merely replies, "Rick, you are the bravest man I know, and that's why I love you."
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fbhdbhunwashed heathen (guest)
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 Aug 08, 07 at 7:13pm
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Maria walked to Mineral Beach on a Wensday evening. She saw Karen so they said hello to each other. "Don't you love the ocean?", asked Karen. "Yeah", said Maria, holding a silver fishing rod, "It's also a great fishing spot!" She walked to the warf and casted her line. There was a bite in no time! Karen ran over to help. When they finally pulled it out, they realized thet they didn't catch a fish-they caught a mermaid! "Put me in the water!", she cried, "Quickly!" So, of course, Maria dropped her in the water imeadiantly. "Thanks!", said the mermaid, "My name is Leia. What's yours?" The girls gasped but managed to speak. "Karen." "Maria." "Could you help me with something?", asked Leia, "You see, there was a big huracane one day, and I got washed up on the shore of Forget-Me-Not Valley. So a scientist named Daryl tooked me to his house so I could live in a tub in his basement. I was very greatful for that. But, a few months later, another good friend of mine showed me a message in a bottle that he had fished up. It was from my mother, asking me to go home. But I can't seem to find my way..." "We'll help", said Maria, who was always happy to help others. So she and Karen changed into their swimsuits and borrowed 2 life jakets from the boat thet docked at the beach. They swam out in search of Leia's parents. They took a few breaks along the way. Finally, they saw some "fish" in the distance... But they looked too big to be fish... "Mom! Dad!", called Leia. She swam up to her parents, "Karen and Maria showed me the way home." "Thank you, girls", said Leia's mom, "I can't reward you myself, but I'm sure something good will happen to you one day. It's karma.
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 Aug 09, 07 at 6:12am
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Caliegh walked down the soggy stoned path to the supermarket. It had been raining so much Caliegh had began to think that the angles above in Heaven had been crying.
She finally arrived at the supermarket, she sayed hello to the few villagers that were in the building. " Oh,my..." Sasha said, putting her hand to her mouth." I forgot to send you a letter saying we got a blue feather, but I'm afriad someone already took it...I'm so sorry!" Sasha excliamed. " It's okay..." Caliegh whispered.
Caliegh ran back to the farm, crying. She had found out Ann had bought the feather, to marry Cliff! " Hey whats wrong?!?" Said a male voice behind her. " Ann bought the feather to marry Cliff..." Caliegh said, turning around while wiping her tears. She saw Cliff standing there in front of her, smiling.
The day ended with Cliff and Caliegh heading off to the Inn to eat dinner together, while a jealous Ann watched them in envy...
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 Aug 09, 07 at 6:13am
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my story is going to stink
my guys name is Lucas
*---------------LIBRARY----------------* Lucas:*walks up to Mary* You are pretty will you marry me! Mary: SAY WHAT!!!!????? Lucas: Will you??? Mary: NO!!!!!!!!!!!! Now Leave!*takes out Legend of zelda sword* GO!!!!! Lucas: *crying* Good-bye! *runs out of library*
*----------------BEACH------------------* Lucas: *sitting on warf* Im so stupit *hears a faint voice coming from water* faint voice: No you aren't Lucas: *jumps up in fright* who's there? faint voice: me...... Lucas: Who? *girl head pops out of water revealing beatiful green eyes and long beatiful sea green eyes girl:Hi Lucas: w-w-w-who are you??? Girl: *pulls herself up out of the water and onto the warf revealing a sparkling fin* Leia.... Lucas: Woah *stares at her in wonder*...your beautiful Leia: *giggles* thanks  Lucas:Its getting late do you want to...hang out or something tomorrow? Leia: YES!!!!!!!!!!!! Lucas:bye *runs home* *---------------2 years later at warf--------------* carter: you may now kiss the bride Lucas: *leans down to kiss leia* i love you leia: I love you to ---------THEN---------- Mary: *jumps out from behind sea side shack with the legend of Zelda sword* NEVER:#!!!!!!!!!!! *kills leia* MUAHAHAHA! lucas: You...You Killed Leia......I-I-I have to.....GET A BURGER!!! Want to come Mary??? mary: OKAY!.....one second * picks up Zelda sword and stabs Gray* I never really liked him *Mary and Lucas hold hands and head to Minerl Burger!*
THE END!!!!!
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