It's alright, not to sure about the text in a box, the stock should be a bit bigger but, it's ok.

It's too small. Make him much bigger than that, pl0x. Also make the piece a tad bit brighter overall, and just leave the light source intact, but make the dark places lighter too. It's alright, but those things I'm pointing out don't make it look good.

It's nice work Aina. In some of your work however the text doesn't blend in correctly, and distracts from the focal point; the stock. Over all nice job though

"Now for my cookie" xD

Thanks For The Comenths.




Header For, Zelda:Phantom Hourglass

maybe try something different to vector brushes in everything. you seem to use them in all your work now. they are good but only for certain things.

also the text in that banner is atrocious im afraid it looks horrible. For Zelda try the get a more flowy, fantasy-like font or even find the font used in the logo is you can.

Hmm. Can you find Me Good Text Then?

The Zelda font is available in dafont.com

Link to font

2nd attempt:

Too simple, not enough effort. Render looks blurry. It all kind of works well together, just needs to look more interesting and as I said, more effort.

Suggest playing around with the transparency effects, by leaving white part out. It makes the header more attractive and less bound to a rectangle. Because the background is white, you can take advantage of the white space, to bring out different shapes, like in your other header entry.

I Tried Like Crazy to make it like this.



This message was edited by growlitheking on Sep 24 2007.

Anime Forum Header Contest Entry!

to be honest mate, its a bit bland. to me the person doesnt stand out, the font isnt attractive and the background, although nicely made, is boring.

basically it needs more depth, more interest, an inproved font, and somehow make the girl the first thing you look at (at the moment its the font because it sticks out alot)

Don't Go Babbling On Text, The Person Requested It to be like This.

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