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Mindgames
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Mindgames vs MNM*** |
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16 lines Non title 24 hour reply time I'll be back later to drop my spit. G' luck. ------------------- ![]() .: Don't F%^k With My Mind, I'm Strapped :. | |
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Mindgames
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re: Mindgames vs MNM*** |
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Ladies and Gentelman....
GET OFF THE INTERNET M! Like, for real stop typing and jog south Exercise with long routes, how you get perma banned and STILL not log out? Wow! M's that skinny dude with notions how he'll start diggin' the models In a empty room with a computer console and a lotion bottle with a wig on the nozzle Macho? Not! Yo, all you do is exhale shit so quit inhaling laxatives Only time you'd put someone in a casket quick is if you killed yourself on accident You packing hits? GOD NO! His odd flow sounds aw-ful and redundant it's... Like someone threw down a beat and told Bob Dole to run with it Punishing', how you always been the student.. Lupin said "Son I'll teach ya'" It's the truth I speak cause the only good tracks you wrote are the ones with features! Jesus! Haven't you had enough guy? I think we all agree you need a new life Too weak to do fights and got kicked out the KKK for being too white Ight, truth is I'm glad you're back in open mic we all need some laughter see I chuckle at this poser with halo posters that tells people to call em' Master Chief Actually I'll cut you some slack here's a compliment to tell guys you've been the best before... Congratulations, YOU'RE KIND OF A COOL GUY!!!!!!......... ...in a online message board. ------------------- ![]() .: Don't F%^k With My Mind, I'm Strapped :. | |
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M_N_M48060
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To battle or not bitch you made the choice wrong
Your little tricks won't work here this ain't a Geto Boys song* My skill is greater because I'm a true born innovator You bring nothing new bitch you're just a Fyrestorm imitator You're not Fyre, Kaotic shit...you're not even Felony That's telling me you're the worst middle champ there'll ever be Cat you try to fight with me and you'll be a gunned down kitten Roast your so quickly it'll turn into kung pow chicken The belt isn't on the line you should be glad the stakes aren't that because if it was the only strap you'd have is the one your daddy takes to ya back I read one of your spits and man I can't believe I got to see this You put more research in to one verse than a doctor's thesis (it's pathetic) You're from Kentucky a state known for inbreeding or blue grass I'll burn you then use your body's ashes as seeding for new grass I'll bend your eyes so you can see that I portend demise Your chance of living is slim like a red shirt on the Enterprise | |
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Dutch Samurai
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*Mindgames*
Lyrical Stabs [0-5]:3 Structure [0-5]:3.5 Originality [0-5]:4 Quotable [0-1]:1 Macho? Not! Yo, all you do is exhale shit so quit inhaling laxatives Only time you'd put someone in a casket quick is if you killed yourself on accident The Bob Dole line was my second choice. But there were so many good ones to choose from... This was like a verbal chocolate box. Final Assessment [0-10]:8 Critique and/or Improvement Curve: Very funny and clever spit. Your structure and rhyming were fantastic. The stabs were good to, but weren't as hard hitting as they could be. Sometimes putting too much emphasis on being witty can take a toll on the actual punch, but overall I think you you did admirably and achieved a nice balance. Total [0-26]:19.5 *MnM* Lyrical Stabs [0-5]:2.5 Structure [0-5]:2.5 Originality [0-5]:2.5 Quotable [0-1]: I read one of your spits and man I can't believe I got to see this You put more research in to one verse than a doctor's thesis (it's pathetic) Final Assessment [0-10]:5 Critique and/or Improvement Curve: This was pretty much a dead average spit to read, M, to keep it real. I think you came at him with way too basic disses. Hardly any creativity aside from a Chinese restaurant joke (Meow!) and a reference to Star Trek. You had some lackluster attempt at some personals. But overall, I felt like you weren't even trying in this battle. Total [0-26]:12.5 Winner: Mindgames ------------------- S'all about 'dat paper... Now with 50% more defness | |
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